Kadi wrote:Verzeihung, mein Herr. (Is this correct?)
Also... FIXED!
Rohan: I basically I'm just standing on the sidelines, watching and waiting for the trainwreck, doing nothing... I think usually such behavior is not considered good? And basically it's just as Nura says anyway... (wait, why does something tell me that's nothing to be happy about)
It is correct, though I'm no fan of my own native language
Also, standing at the side doing
nothing is still better than complaining about release paces.
At least I would like to consider no reactions as favorable
Anyway, back to the actual translation.
Don't know if anyone actual gives a poke about it, but
But Basara didn’t stop. It was evening. If they went now, they should arrive at a perfect time.
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The place Basara took Mio to was a park, proud of it’s broad ground.
This page had a blank line, which wasn't copied over to the page. Just saying.
Also, the plothole (or at least what I considered to be a plothole) gets cleared up:
“Waah…!”
Mio, looking down on the cityscape, raised a voice of surprised and delight. Just like Basara had predicted, they had arrived hat the perfect timing. The world was equivalent coloured in a gentle madder red, a spanning sunset scenery.
“So pretty… But you just moved her, so how did you know of this place?”
“When my dad decided on the house, I was with him and I heard that the park was famous, so I came here alone while dad signed the contract. And then I found this place by chance.”
Basara lined up besides Mio.
“Quite the splendid view, isn’t it.”
“Yeah. I never knew… that there was a place like this here.”
“Let’s come at night next time. The night scenery at the park is famous as well. I’m sure it’ll be pretty from here as well.”
He suggested a little promise for the future. Upon that,
“Yeah… You’re right. …Next time then.”
Suddenly Mio’s expression clouded. From their position they could see the earlier supermarket as well. She might have remembered about the quarrel with the guys. Basara scratched his cheek with his finger and an “Ehm”.
“Today… This morning, you came to wake me up.”
On these words, Mio looked at him. So, Basara spoke with a slow tone.
“A family, you see--- is probably something where any troubles or bothers for each other can be forgiven.”
“Eh…?”
“To you, I’m a somewhat favourable existence, on the level of coming to wake me up, right now, correct? Of course it’s not completely settled yet if our parents will marry… But we’re going to live together anyway. By helping each other out with trivial things and acknowledging each other, I believe we’re slowly becoming a family.”
Because
“At least, I think that what I did at the supermarket was a natural thing to do. I‘m sure, it’s the same for my dad. If you or Maria-chan should get into that kind of trouble again, my dad or I are going to help you anytime. But, that’s not something you have to worry or feel reluctant about. I mean, it’s the same natural thing as coming to wake me up in the morning.”
For now, he had tried to somehow put his feelings into words.
“……..”
However, Mio shut her mouth and stayed quiet. Maybe he was too roundabout?
…I’m not good with words after all.
At times like this, Jin would have been able to convey it with more plain and simple words, but to his regret, Basara couldn’t speak as confident as his father.
“Ehm, what I mean is.”
Dropping his gaze to the ground, he tried to somehow consolidate his words, whereupon,
“…So cheeky.”
Mio suddenly mumbled, to which Basara raised his head. Besides him, Mio wore a smile.
“Right now, you might have a been a bit like a big brother.”
“…Really?”
“Yeah. Just a bit though.”
Ohh. Kind of a good mood.
“Then how about we forgive and forget the incidents at---” “Not yet.”
Said coldly, Mio’s voice was yet bright. The earlier tense atmosphere seemed like a lie. So Basara thought. Their way to becoming a real family might still be long though.
But right now, Mio and he might have shortened the distance by a step. Therefore,
“Now then, about time we go back. I’m getting hungry anyways.”
Back to the same house--- like a family. Basara turned on his heels and headed for the parked bicycle.
“…Yeah. Maria and Jin-san are also waiting.”
He heard Mio’s calm voice from behind, then her footsteps followed.
Their two shadows slowly advanced in the same direction.
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---But,
“------”
With his back to her and only seeing her shadow, Basara couldn’t see Mio’s expression at that time.
Mio’s bitter expression that was filled with an ever greater sadness than before.
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4
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A week had passed, since they started to live together.
All the same, they still hadn’t got away from the “More than acquaintances, less than family” stage.
Still, compared to the beginning, a lot of the awkwardness had disappeared--- At that time,
“---It turns out I’m going overseas for work for a while tomorrow.”
“Eh…?”
Upon coming home, Basara inadvertently asked in return on Jin’s sudden words at the front door.
^dat page has a blank lines as well. Just saying.
28/52 Pages.