Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

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Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Mystes » Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:17 am

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Original Title: 精霊使いの剣舞 (Seirei Tsukai no Kenbu for the kanjis, but the furiganas use 'Blade Dance'.)
Author:Shimizu Yuu
Illustrator:Sakura Hanpen
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Only a pure maiden can have a privilege to contract with spirit. In here, Areishia spirit acadamy, trained maiden in the noble family were gathered, and gave them an elite education to become a spirit contractor. A boy Kamito, by an accident he peeped into a girl, Claire taking a bath, and he even made a contract with spirit that she wanted. Yes, Kamito was an irregular boy spirit contractor that is impossible to exist. "You stole...my spirit...you have to take a responsibility for it!" "Huh?" "You have to become my contracted spirit" What will Kamito's destiny leads to?


Wanted to try translating a bit during my free time. Heard that it was popular over the Chinese LN community, and got recommendation. Though I haven't read the first volume yet...

EDIT: Started it. After looking through the illustrations, I think good kids shouldn't read this.
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Kadi » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:37 am

Why? There's more fanservice in anime out there... it's not like they have sex, right?

By the way, this looks like a mix of ZnT (story-wise) and HnA (char-design-wise)... and now I should better stop myself.
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Mystes » Sat Oct 08, 2011 2:43 pm

Kadi wrote:By the way, this looks like a mix of ZnT (story-wise) and HnA (char-design-wise)

Exactly what I thought. :lol: Especially HnA, concening the age thing. Well, I plan to do at least the first chapter, and I'll see after.

...BTW, first chapter probably won't be completed at the rate I'm doing it before Christmas...2012. :lol:

EDIT: Teaser added.
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Darklor » Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:40 pm

Do you want a feedback thread?
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Assassin » Wed Oct 12, 2011 7:43 am

Only a pure maiden can have a privilege to contract with spirit...


... Yes, Kamito was an irregular boy spirit contractor that is impossible to exist...


Now I'm getting some deja vu. IS-- *cough* *cough* Oops, looks like I choked on my fried rice. :roll:

That aside, I'm thinking that the character on the novel's cover illustration you put up there is the girl who lost her would-be spirit to the main dude. Or is she the Claire you wrote in the synopsis?
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Mystes » Wed Oct 12, 2011 2:58 pm

Assassin wrote:That aside, I'm thinking that the character on the novel's cover illustration you put up there is the girl who lost her would-be spirit to the main dude. Or is she the Claire you wrote in the synopsis?

Possibly...but I haven't eaven finished reading chapter one yet.
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Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Darklor » Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:12 pm

This is the feed back thread for Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance at http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index ... lade_Dance
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Lawrence Craft » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:39 pm

It looks pretty good to read...
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Darklor » Tue Oct 25, 2011 12:15 pm

Has now also a own feedback thread: viewtopic.php?f=23&t=4633
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Random Light Novel Lover » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:39 pm

Cute girl so... DO IT! If someone, anyone really, does this I will kiss you if you ask me to.
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby lchigo93 » Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:40 pm

Spoiler! :
mixture of IS and ZnT


Still nice though
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Mystes » Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:22 pm

I wouldn't insist on IS though. IMO, Claire=Louise, but other characters seem more...

...OK, yeah, IS could be a way to put it.
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby lchigo93 » Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:44 pm

well the only reason i relate it to IS is because of the setting that, "Kamito is the only male Seirei Tsukai". Other than the devil king Solomon who's already dead of course. But maybe the harem concept is somewhat similar to IS too. 3-4 girls seek his attention and want to make him theirs...
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby Mystes » Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:45 pm

No one's enough tsun as Claire though.
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Re: Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

Postby lchigo93 » Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:50 pm

Yeah, they all get shy easily, plus Claire cry's easily... bully her a lil and tears start to form around her eyes.
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