Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa

[obsidian pegasus]

Ok, as feedback, it looks like the TLer does what I do and thinks in japanese as they write in english, so a good english editor should run through and correct the phraseology and grammar behind the text to it makes sense in english. Also....sad only some parts are done, I LOVE the premise behind this, it sounds like a TON of fun, so THANK you very much TLer's and please keep up the good work! (I would totally help you if I didn't already have 4 projects on the burner... it seems that good).

[obsidian pegasus]

You guys are doing great! I re-read the story tl-ed so far twice already and am checking for your updates every day. Thanks, this story rocks and you guys are doing a great job of it.

[Irina Akashira]

Hello

I just want to say thanks for this fantastic novel

[wolfkin_1]

Hiya guys, just wanted to let you know that i've read through the prologue and 1st chapter, and editted a few things to make more sense in english. I think this'll be a great addition to the line up here at BT, and hope to see more translated soon as well as it getting voted in as a regular project.

[Rohan123]

Hiya guys, just wanted to let you know that i've read through the prologue and 1st chapter, and editted a few things to make more sense in english. I think this'll be a great addition to the line up here at BT, and hope to see more translated soon as well as it getting voted in as a regular project.

It doesn't have to be "voted in" to become a full project(be added to the wiki sidebar), it just has to be approved by a wiki sysop(mostly Oni).

[Baekrusk]

Just to note for the TL. As I was reading v1ch1, I noticed this.

Zonmi is a ghoul, not a zombie. Seems to despise being compared to it. But further through, she even refers to here race as Zombie race. Is this a TL error?

[cramped]

Just to note for the TL. As I was reading v1ch1, I noticed this.

Zonmi is a ghoul, not a zombie. Seems to despise being compared to it. But further through, she even refers to here race as Zombie race. Is this a TL error?

I did a shitty job on this one so a lot of errors I concur. And which part is this so I can go check it?

[Baelrusk]

“Tamer’s selection——when I heard that Chiharu chose a zombie, we leapt in joy. Some seemed to have even ascended to heaven.”

Around there and a bit after. It's while she's introducing the situation to him just a bit before she turns the TV on to show the Octopus rampaging to be brought down by a Minotaur.

Not sure how much it continues that way though, haven't had the time yet to read through it much more.

[cramped]

“Tamer’s selection——when I heard that Chiharu chose a zombie, we leapt in joy. Some seemed to have even ascended to heaven.”

Around there and a bit after. It's while she's introducing the situation to him just a bit before she turns the TV on to show the Octopus rampaging to be brought down by a Minotaur.

Not sure how much it continues that way though, haven't had the time yet to read through it much more.

I think I used ghoul for that one. Maybe somebody changed it?

[Guest]

I think I used ghoul for that one. Maybe somebody changed it?

Just glorious. They really should pay attention to the story then.
Well, at least now I know why it seemed off.

[Reaper_Phoenix]

Monster Harem! (repeat 1000 times)
Seriously. Great work on the translation. I enjoyed what I read so far. I hope this gets updated as a full project.

BTW I think the little sister is more monstrous than the real monsters. She has serious BROCON issues.

[MyGawd]

hmmm just a question in chapter 1 zonmi doesn't want to be called a zombie cuz she's a ghoul but later she refered herself and her kind as zombies. is it the same as the book?

Spoiler! :

“Tamer’s selection——when I heard that Chiharu chose a zombie, we leapt in joy. Some seemed to have even ascended to heaven.”
“It is as you hear Chiharu, this is not life threatening at all. If you don’t accept it, a war will break out between the zombie and human race. Please consider it.”

[cramped]

hmmm just a question in chapter 1 zonmi doesn't want to be called a zombie cuz she's a ghoul but later she refered herself and her kind as zombies. is it the same as the book?

Spoiler! :

“Tamer’s selection——when I heard that Chiharu chose a zombie, we leapt in joy. Some seemed to have even ascended to heaven.”
“It is as you hear Chiharu, this is not life threatening at all. If you don’t accept it, a war will break out between the zombie and human race. Please consider it.”

Pls refer to the post above, but to be exact in the CH TL they use undead. Still there's one part that stated that pls don't compare me to those kind of lowly zombies (sth. like that).

[GetInDaZone222]

Great job finishing up Vol. 1! Ive held off on reading it until it was done so Im pretty excited, cant wait to get started. Official project status time?!
I hope there is more to come! Maybe you'll get some more translator help when its made official.

[Darklor]

Uhm, why is this thread in the teaser feedback section?