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How do you find reading Shinmai Maou no Keiyakusha?

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I did 11 pages for TsukiTsuki earlier and I got through them way faster than these two pages, sigh...

…Still, they’re cute.
Not the appearance alone, but their aura and casual behaviour made him excited. Specially Mio, who apparently was also a first year in high school just like Basara, albeit with a later birthday. In other words, right now, where their parents hadn’t remarried yet, she simply was a girl of the same age as him. Of course that accelerated his heartbeat. Then,
“---But, I’m glad that you’re a nice person, Basara-san.”
Maria, sitting diagonally opposite to him, faced him and laughed with “Ehehe”. She looked very young for a girl only one year younger than Basara and Mio and in her third year of middle school. Her cuteness stimulated a boy’s protection instincts gravely.
“As a boy of your age, I was worried about what to do when you were a guy sharp like a knife.”
“Ha, Haha…”
An age where you were sharp like a knife, just what kind of age was that? The one of a national reaction entertainer? [Note: Tetsurō Degawa is a reaction entertainer and says that he was a ‘sharp knife’ in his youth.]
“No need to worry. I mean, he seems to fancy a cute little sister.”
“Seems so. I mean, he came into the toilet occupied by a girl.”
On Jin’s light joke, Mio in front sent off a cold glare.
“I said, that was a misunderstanding, an accident. How often do---”
“Hmp, still making excuses?”
When Basara declared with a sigh, Mio bended slightly forward.
A distance that made his heart skip a beat unmeant. She looked at him with superb upturned eyes that emphasised their height difference.
“…..I’m sorry.”
So weak. When Basara, unable to endure her destructive force, apologized, Mio nodded “Mm, I forgive you” satisfied and finally brightened up her expression. Basara made a sigh of relief.
“Oh right…ehm, excuse me, there’s something I want to ask.”
There Basara suddenly spoke out a simple question.
“Where’s your mother? Will she come later?”
The prospect of getting a little sister, and even two this cute ones, had surprised him.
But well. Jin never had said that it would only be one.
However, their mother, who Jin was going to marry, was absent, which made this meeting pointless.
“Yeah, reminds me, I didn’t tell you…”
Jin said.
“Their mother--- Chihaya-san is currently overseas for her work.”
“……………Huh?”
Wait a moment. What did his father said just now? As bad as it sounded, the marriage partner was currently overseas?
“…. Aw… Dad, lend me your ear for a sec.”
15/21 Pages.
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Thanks for your great work Prozess, it's almost complete too. :lol:
Also, there is no need to separate your translated parts into different quotes based on pages I think.
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Well, I'm going to create a teaser page for it, and separing the pages in quotes makes the work easier if I need to post the teaser :D
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Here's the rest of the prologue:
Grabbing Jin’s arm, Basara moved to a place where their voices wouldn’t reach Mio and Maria--- to the corner of the passage.
“…Sorry, but can you say that again?”
Basara crossed his arms and tapped with the index finger of his right hand on his left upper arm.
“Mh? ‘Hey---You said, that you wanted a little sister, right?’ That one?”
“How far are you going back! I meant about the stuff about your marriage partner being overseas!”
“So you heard it after all. So, what about it?”
“It’s weird! That on a meeting for a remarriage, she herself wouldn’t show up!”
Even more so, when they were the ones that wanted to meet as soon as possible. He wasn’t going to blame her about going on a business trip, but a meeting without her was pointless. Actually,
“I hope I’m wrong, but… you’re not getting tricked, are you?”
“Haha. No, don’t worry. Besides, do you really think I could be tricked?”
Certainly. If anything, he was the type to trick. This phony father.
“But--- then we could just have done the meeting once she came back….”
“I’m afraid there’s a reason as to why we better hurry up.”
Jin changed his expression from a smile into a serious one.
“Basara… Now that you saw these two, what do you think?”
“What you ask… Well, cute, I guess.”
At any rate, he thought they were some kind of idols when he saw them first. So
…A reason as to why to hurry up, huh…
Judging by the conversation, Basara finally came to understand that reason. The prospect of remarriage meant that they were a family of just mother and daughters. And that mother was currently overseas on a long time business trip.
“I’m sure, a parent would worry, if these two are all left by themselves… Is that why?”
“Yeah. Actually, the two of them seem to be under the attack of some suspicious person. To begin with, when I first met them at the city, a weird guy was picking on them. Besides, there also seems to be a persistent stalker.”
“For real…”
The world sure was dangerous, but to think there were actual casualties. It certainly was a pressing matter. The police didn’t interfere with personal matters. They wouldn’t move unless something happened, which would be too late then.
“I heard that Maria-chan stopped going to school, because of that stalker. Those who want to go to school should just do so, but for someone who can’t, it’s painful. Even if she’s smiling so brightly right now.”
Jin said.
“Well, for these reasons, I would like us to start living together already, if you have no objections. They also say a remarriage is more likely to work out if you know each other better beforehand.”
“You mean to temporarily take care of them and see if it’s possible to live together as a family?”
“This is some kind of destiny. If we can protect them, then you would like to, right?”
On Jin’s words, Basara fell silent. It was a silence of affirmation. And
…Mh?
Suddenly he made eye-contact with Mio on the other side. Just like the earlier forceful attitude had been a lie, she had a worried expression. Basara narrowed his eyes and asked Jin besides him.
“---For how long?”
“For starters, a year. It might turn out we’re totally unsuited to live together or reach a conclusion about the remarriage, but--- They will only get back to living alone, once a certain level of their safety is guaranteed. After hearing all this, I wouldn’t be able to sleep anymore later when I know that something happened to them.”
He had a point. When their mother comes back in a year and it was time to decide about the remarriage, it would all fall apart if something had happened to Mio or Maira.
More importantly--- Basara himself didn’t want Mio or Maria to suffer.
“But were are we going to live? Our house doesn’t have any rooms to spare.”
“We’ll rent a suitable one. I already have my eyes on one. We should create an environment as close as possible to a family, since we’re trying to find out if we’re compatible. And it’ll quicken things if we actually do get married.”
“…Do these two know about the living together?”
“Yeah. They would gladly do so, if you agree.”
On Jin’s words, Basara stayed quiet for a while. But, soon enough he mumbled slowly.
“……Okay. It’s something you decided, Dad. So I’m fine with it.”
He wasn’t really casual about it. It were his true feelings.
“I see. Sorry for not telling you anything and proceeding on my own.”
“It’s fine. You must have your reasons for doing so.”
He should just tell him everything once he was able to.
He and Jin were blood-related child and father, but their trust in each other was far beyond just that.
Every since the time when Basara had caused that problem--- the time when he threw away everything to protect him.
“Let’s get back, Dad…Or they will worry.”
Saying so, Basara returned to their table with Jin. When they said down on their seats,
“…Uh- Uhm,”

with a timidly tone, Maria tried to confirm their state of affairs.
“Ah, sorry… Just some talk amongst men.”
“He made such a serious face that I wondered what it’s going to be about, but then he said ‘These two are so cute that I can’t suppress my arousal’. Geez, boys in their puberty sure are horny.”
“Hahaha. Dad, that will have an afterpiece.”
An afterpiece about fists at night. Just with him and his father.
And then, to Mio, who looked as just worried as Maria,
“I was surprised by all the stuff I heard yesterday…But, it’s all right now.”
Basara said.
“Until your mother gets back and even though we still don’t know if the remarriage will work out… I think it’s a good idea to try out living together as a family before instead of just suddenly remarrying. Let’s slowly get to know more about each other.”
“…Really?”
Mio asked worried, whereupon Basara nodded a “Yeah”.
“We’re a men’s household, so having girls around really helps… Right, Dad?”
“Right. Besides, I always wanted a cute daughter. Basara also pestered me forever about wanting a little sister. So don’t show any reservation, you two.”

“Thank you.” “Yay, please take good care of us.”
Mio and Maria quickly lowered her heads. And then
“Well then, take care of me, Basara-kun.”
Raising her head, Mio gave him a smirking smiling face.
“But--- if you happened to come into the toilet again, I’ll kill you a hundred times then.”
“……Yes.”
Her eyes were serious. When Basara’s expression stiffened up, Jin said summing up.
“Okay then…. let’s get along as family from now on.”
This declaration made with a smile, was the beginning of a new life-style.
“There might arise issues, but--- let’s become happy together.”

Therefore--- even though prospects for a grim future hang somewhat in the air, it still felt peaceful.
Same for Toujou Basara’s every day life----and for the world.


21/21 pages. Prolgoue complete.
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Great work, thanks a lot Prozess! :D
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PROzess wrote:From what I see in vol 03, this can easily become my favourite novel of all time :o
I might drop my Shinanai Otoko project and start this one.... Not sure yet. Should I?
Isn't Shinanai Otoko completed in Japan? plus that's a really good series, can you put it on Baka Tsuki do you work with Unlimited Novel Failures? if so, then you should finish the series, cause it's completed anyways while Shinmai Maou isn't.......

Shinanai Otoko is really good and it'd be a shame to lose 1 good series for another, esspecially since a little over 14% of the other good series is already complete (just 6 more volumes to go)
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Well, I said that I will NOT pick up Shinmai because of some recent posts that I read (not here).
Shinanai Otoko will remain in my lineup, but on hiatus for a while longer.

Anyway, onto chapter 01, first page:
Chapter 01: The way to conquer your little stepsister

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---Again a dream about that time.
With just his consciousness floating in the scenery of the past, Basara realized that he was dreaming. Deep crimson. The crazy eyes with that colour had looked down on Basara in the past.
The angry voices of a large crowd. The crying voice of a precious friend in the background.
Amidst that, a black silhouette slowly came closer.
“------”
Oblivious of all around. He had to do something--- that was all he thought.
But Basara’s mind neared it’s limit on this tragedy happening before his eyes.
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PROzess wrote:Well, I said that I will NOT pick up Shinmai because of some recent posts that I read (not here).
Shinanai Otoko will remain in my lineup, but on hiatus for a while longer.
well, I can't wait for the next volume; I do hope some someone will pick up Shinmai though and put Shinanai Otoko on Baka Tsuki......
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Okay, teaser page created. It's lacking information. Please fill the "?" :(

and since I don't know if you have a wiki account, I used your forum name D:

I posted the Prologue, refering your name on the translation :D

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Just one thing, you forgot to add the picture after the 8th page.


So finished 20 pages of TsukiTsuki, so I'm throwing in another page of Shinmai:
And in the next moment--- Basara’s vision was coloured white.
His consciousness slowly faded away. He didn’t know if he was saved or not.
Just--- Basara had heard someone’s shout at the end.
Toujou Basara hadn’t forgotten these words even now. The crying shout of a female repeated endlessly. Just like a curse--- It said, please give back that child.

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“---! Hah…. Hah….---”
Basara opened his eyes and at the same time made a rough breathing. In a situation, where he looked up to the ceiling, he realized that he had woken up. Taking a deep breath, he calmed down his chaotic heartbeat.
…No matter how often I see that dream, I just can’t get used to it…
Laying on his bed face up, Basara stared at his own right hand that he had brought up to his face.
“…Huh? Somehow, it’s still hard to breathe…”
Even though he woke up from his dream, he still couldn’t breath properly. There,
“Ah---You’re finally awake.”
Is it okay if I keep posting here? Or should I move over to the teaser topic?
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PROzess wrote:
Is it okay if I keep posting here? Or should I move over to the teaser topic?
Yea, you should probably move to the teaser topic.
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So PROzess, know for his speedy translations, took this on.
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Shinmai is being published by Sneaker Bunko and so far there are only 3 volumes out.
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Thank you for starting up translation of this series. All your( Prozess and future translators) work to come is appreciated a lot!
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