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Post by Chaoswind »

O.o

can someone check and see If I missed something?

and I don't understand this part

Enraiha------ The demon slaying holy blade bestowed by the Lord of Fire Spirits. The devastating flames that bursts out from the blade will burn all the youma in sight into a crisp.


why not remove Will?
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Chaoswind wrote:O.o

can someone check and see If I missed something?

and I don't understand this part

Enraiha------ The demon slaying holy blade bestowed by the Lord of Fire Spirits. The devastating flames that bursts out from the blade will burn all the youma in sight into a crisp.


why not remove Will?
Instead I changed it by simplifying the grammar: "The devastating flame that burst out from the blade burned all the youma into a crisp."
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Wonder why i didnt reply to the first post? Sorry about that.

And very sorry, yes the "will" can be removed, or rather, should i say it SHOULD be removed. I am guessing I was thinking that the youma is not burnt yet, but they are according to the text. Sorry for the mistake, thank you for pointing it out!
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hehe :)

I will try to do the c3-4 tonight, Morgen be sure to check after wards!!
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Slow down, slow down, please...

ShadowZeroHeart <=== Brother went to camp and going overseas for some time, sleeping timings vary so greatly that he can hardly stay awake and patient to translate... So please slow down? >"<
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as you can see I wasn't able to even read the 3-4 >_< damn Xmas and the problems that come with it
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LOLz, there arent many that curse Xmas the way you do
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Huh a lot of people do, but not openly...

just think about it... it gets colder, things get busy anywhere you go (workplace, stores, etc) and if you happen to have your birthday in this week, a lot of people will remember it, but that doesn't mean you get extra presents o.o
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Chaoswind wrote:Huh a lot of people do, but not openly...

just think about it... it gets colder, things get busy anywhere you go (workplace, stores, etc) and if you happen to have your birthday in this week, a lot of people will remember it, but that doesn't mean you get extra presents o.o
LOLz, no wonder the difference. I stay at home. It is just another simple day to me LOLz!
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