Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
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- dragonst
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Ahem, spelling error, Mr. Editor o_O
彼らの任務は一つ。
友軍のために死ぬこと。
誰にも知られることなく、散っていく命がありました。
決して語られることのない戦いがありました。
明日さえも見えない絶望の中で、今日を生きる権利すら奪われた戦士たち。
守るべき祖国から捨てられ、戦争の大義も、勝利の栄光も、自らの名前さえも奪われた戦士たち。
そして、理想を追い求め、自らの手を血に染める戦士たち。
戦場という絶望の中で、彼らが見た希望とは何だったのでしょうか?
そして、彼らが守り抜いたものとは、何だったでしょうか?
死か、それとも解放か?
これは、歴史を変えた名もなき戦士たちの物語。
-戦場のヴァルキュリア3-
友軍のために死ぬこと。
誰にも知られることなく、散っていく命がありました。
決して語られることのない戦いがありました。
明日さえも見えない絶望の中で、今日を生きる権利すら奪われた戦士たち。
守るべき祖国から捨てられ、戦争の大義も、勝利の栄光も、自らの名前さえも奪われた戦士たち。
そして、理想を追い求め、自らの手を血に染める戦士たち。
戦場という絶望の中で、彼らが見た希望とは何だったのでしょうか?
そして、彼らが守り抜いたものとは、何だったでしょうか?
死か、それとも解放か?
これは、歴史を変えた名もなき戦士たちの物語。
-戦場のヴァルキュリア3-
- Teh_ping
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Could be a Miss.
At the rate we're going here, we might as well have an interview and selection test. How about a 150-word summary?
At the rate we're going here, we might as well have an interview and selection test. How about a 150-word summary?
- Darklor
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
With lots of errors which needs to be corrected...
Please don't mind my bad english since I'm german.
Darklor
Out of the dark, into the dark.
Darklor
Out of the dark, into the dark.
- Teh_ping
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Okay, I'll be lenient, 15 marks for content, 5 marks for language, and 5 marks for use of original words. Total score is 25.
And here's the text:
And here's the text:
Spoiler! :
- Wolfpup
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
That is if we, the project editors feel it is needed.dragonst wrote:Don't mind the 'contact the translators thing', it's only intended for the project editors who work more closely with the translators. Casual editors can just edit however they want. Of course, if you edit something wrongly then someone will edit it back.
Always on the hunt for good Anime and their associated Light Novels, Manga.
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- Kyonist
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Well, this is a trifle embarrassing. I never even noticed I was at the bottom of the page--no wonder there were no more responses to my post :p. And yes, I did mispell, but if it counts for anything I noticed it and corrected it before reading your post. And yes, it would be a 'Mr.'
Here's my crack at it:
Here's my crack at it:
Spoiler! :
- Teh_ping
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Well, I was only trying to see who'll be crazy enough to do that, and since you actually bothered to do it--you're hired. (Forget about the score, it's almost impossible to do a 150 word summary anyway.)Starkiller4299 wrote:Well, this is a trifle embarrassing. I never even noticed I was at the bottom of the page--no wonder there were no more responses to my post :p. And yes, I did mispell, but if it counts for anything I noticed it and corrected it before reading your post. And yes, it would be a 'Mr.'
Most of the changes were in the first and fifth paragraphs, for tense and singular/plural usage respectively.
First assignment will be Baka Test (and please edit the text to past tense)
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- Kyonist
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Ha! You did almost get me with that first section--it took me about 5 minutes to scroll down and see just what I was getting myself into before I caught on :p.
I'll start at the beginning then, and work my way on through.
I'll start at the beginning then, and work my way on through.
- Darklor
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
But the first part was from a current project...
Please don't mind my bad english since I'm german.
Darklor
Out of the dark, into the dark.
Darklor
Out of the dark, into the dark.
- larethian
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Eh, so Starkiller4299 is a dedicated editor? then, shouldn't he (or she) have a bit more rights on the wiki? to bypass the arithmetic and patrol pages, etc.
btw, what does "project wide" mean?
btw, what does "project wide" mean?
- dragonst
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Now that you mention it, it does sound a little weird. Perhaps just 'Dedicated Project Editors' would be better, since the 'wide' doesn't change the original meaning in any way.
彼らの任務は一つ。
友軍のために死ぬこと。
誰にも知られることなく、散っていく命がありました。
決して語られることのない戦いがありました。
明日さえも見えない絶望の中で、今日を生きる権利すら奪われた戦士たち。
守るべき祖国から捨てられ、戦争の大義も、勝利の栄光も、自らの名前さえも奪われた戦士たち。
そして、理想を追い求め、自らの手を血に染める戦士たち。
戦場という絶望の中で、彼らが見た希望とは何だったのでしょうか?
そして、彼らが守り抜いたものとは、何だったでしょうか?
死か、それとも解放か?
これは、歴史を変えた名もなき戦士たちの物語。
-戦場のヴァルキュリア3-
友軍のために死ぬこと。
誰にも知られることなく、散っていく命がありました。
決して語られることのない戦いがありました。
明日さえも見えない絶望の中で、今日を生きる権利すら奪われた戦士たち。
守るべき祖国から捨てられ、戦争の大義も、勝利の栄光も、自らの名前さえも奪われた戦士たち。
そして、理想を追い求め、自らの手を血に染める戦士たち。
戦場という絶望の中で、彼らが見た希望とは何だったのでしょうか?
そして、彼らが守り抜いたものとは、何だったでしょうか?
死か、それとも解放か?
これは、歴史を変えた名もなき戦士たちの物語。
-戦場のヴァルキュリア3-
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- Astral Realm
Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
hello...
i willingly to do the job...my user name on wiki is black rook...tq
i willingly to do the job...my user name on wiki is black rook...tq
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- Astral Realm
Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
I could look over a few things as a wandering editor
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- Kyonist
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Say, any chance of getting 'editor' privileges in the future? That 'are you human' test is getting old :p.
- Darklor
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Re: Enlistment! Dedicated Project wide Editors wanted.
Probably not we have already engough spammers as it is
Please don't mind my bad english since I'm german.
Darklor
Out of the dark, into the dark.
Darklor
Out of the dark, into the dark.