Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

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Yeah, seems like a good series, gotta thank everyone working on these projects so thank you guys!
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The 8th vol to be released on 24th August..wow :D
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chancs wrote:The 8th vol to be released on 24th August..wow :D
/me now too lazy to read a single LN.

Someone must take me to the psychologue. :lol:
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Kira0802 wrote:
chancs wrote:The 8th vol to be released on 24th August..wow :D
/me now too lazy to read a single LN.

Someone must take me to the psychologue. :lol:
And, I'm too lazy to work(translate)...
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I would help out with this (I've been reading the originals, the script is rather easy, and it's right up my alley as an action/fantasy), but I've already got Campione.

Maybe next next next year :P
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florza wrote:I would help out with this (I've been reading the originals, the script is rather easy, and it's right up my alley as an action/fantasy), but I've already got Campione.

Maybe next next next year :P
You can always do it to relax when you're overloaded with Campione :D
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Yeah florza, you can translate stnbd when you're too shy to translate the intense kissing scenes of campione, kissing in stnbd isn't so bad, just a simple smooch. Haha
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True. I havent see a tongue kissing in this series yet.
Its mostly ecchi cosplay type things.
But thats whats good about this LN. You want to get away from too much ecchi series at times :roll: .
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Overwhelmed by the sheer amount of 「oppai」?

Campione just has the occasional 25kb kissing scene.
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florza wrote:Overwhelmed by the sheer amount of 「oppai」?

Campione just has the occasional 25kb kissing scene.
The word 'Oppai' not only got stuck on my writting but also in my speech.
I fricken said 'Oppai' out of the blue when I was hanging out with my Japanese mates. It's even worse because most of them are girls. Imagine how they looked at me? So I had to make up a lie and convince them I was joking and harassing them on purpose.


25kb of kissing scene.......
Dont tell me they have every little detail from putting the tongue inside their, mouth, wrapping tongue around their tongue, sucking their tongue, and then sticking their tongue inside the other persons throat and such..... Man, if a single kiss details exceeds 3 pages I would actually be shocked. Even DxD doesnt have such a long kiss scene for a single kiss..... Probably like a line for a simple kiss to not more than 5 lines for a detailed kiss.



Thats why Serei-Tsukai is a good refreshment since it's more like a 'sweet' type one.
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Caampione's kissing scene is like an essay, they get into the mood, they kiss, hug each other tightly, tongue action, stop and chat awhile while kissing face or playing with girl's ears maybe biting it sometimes, says sweet and cheesy lines, back to kissing and deep kissings and after that the girl shows a face that seems to want to continue on more and a tinge if dissapointment.
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Code-Zero wrote:
florza wrote:Overwhelmed by the sheer amount of 「oppai」?

Campione just has the occasional 25kb kissing scene.
The word 'Oppai' not only got stuck on my writting but also in my speech.
I fricken said 'Oppai' out of the blue when I was hanging out with my Japanese mates. It's even worse because most of them are girls. Imagine how they looked at me? So I had to make up a lie and convince them I was joking and harassing them on purpose.


25kb of kissing scene.......
Dont tell me they have every little detail from putting the tongue inside their, mouth, wrapping tongue around their tongue, sucking their tongue, and then sticking their tongue inside the other persons throat and such..... Man, if a single kiss details exceeds 3 pages I would actually be shocked. Even DxD doesnt have such a long kiss scene for a single kiss..... Probably like a line for a simple kiss to not more than 5 lines for a detailed kiss.



Thats why Serei-Tsukai is a good refreshment since it's more like a 'sweet' type one.
You could become the Oppai-dragon IRL?

And you left out 'exchange of body fluids', 'changes in facial expressions and the look in their eyes' and 'whispering of sweet nothings' in the kissing scene.

It's not a single kiss, more like over and over and over. They need to catch their breath after all.

Edit: In order to not derail the thread, my favourite character happens to be Ellis. It seems Knightly types are my favourite (Think I could never let go of that since Saber from FSN).
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Code-Zero wrote:25kb of kissing scene.......
Dont tell me they have every little detail from putting the tongue inside their, mouth, wrapping tongue around their tongue, sucking their tongue, and then sticking their tongue inside the other persons throat and such..... Man, if a single kiss details exceeds 3 pages I would actually be shocked. Even DxD doesnt have such a long kiss scene for a single kiss..... Probably like a line for a simple kiss to not more than 5 lines for a detailed kiss.

Thats why Serei-Tsukai is a good refreshment since it's more like a 'sweet' type one.
Well, High School DxD Volume 9's closet groping + undressing scene was around 15 pages long, though with dialogue interspersed.

I wish you luck with Volume 10's sauna seduction and group healing scenes.
florza wrote:And you left out 'exchange of body fluids', 'changes in facial expressions and the look in their eyes' and 'whispering of sweet nothings' in the kissing scene.

It's not a single kiss, more like over and over and over. They need to catch their breath after all.
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zzhk wrote:
Code-Zero wrote:25kb of kissing scene.......
Dont tell me they have every little detail from putting the tongue inside their, mouth, wrapping tongue around their tongue, sucking their tongue, and then sticking their tongue inside the other persons throat and such..... Man, if a single kiss details exceeds 3 pages I would actually be shocked. Even DxD doesnt have such a long kiss scene for a single kiss..... Probably like a line for a simple kiss to not more than 5 lines for a detailed kiss.

Thats why Serei-Tsukai is a good refreshment since it's more like a 'sweet' type one.
Well, High School DxD Volume 9's closet groping + undressing scene was around 15 pages long, though with dialogue interspersed.

I wish you luck with Volume 10's sauna seduction and group healing scenes.
florza wrote:And you left out 'exchange of body fluids', 'changes in facial expressions and the look in their eyes' and 'whispering of sweet nothings' in the kissing scene.

It's not a single kiss, more like over and over and over. They need to catch their breath after all.
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If you want to know more about the kissing scenes...ask our above two Campione's translators.. :lol: :lol: :lol:
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If anyone is interested in giving translating this a shot, I've got 2 pages from chp7 of vol3.

I'll take a look at it and comment before 4th Sept. The text may be inaccurate.
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夕刻。学院都市の広場は大勢の人々でにぎわっていた。
鼻孔をくすぐる甘い匂い。祭殿にはおいしそうな焼菓子が山のように積まれ、学院から派遣された姫巫女が精霊を楽しませる剣舞を披露している。
「しかし、どこにいったんだ、あいつは?」
クレアの投げつけてきたチョコレートに目を落としながら―
カミトはやれやれとため息をついた。
エリスと二人でクレアを追いかけていたのだが、途中で警備の交代時間がきてしまったため、彼女を追うのはあきらめ、<風>区画の巡回警備をしているのだ。
「……」
横を歩くエリスは複雑な表情で、カミトの持つチョコレートを見つめていた。
「どうした、エリス?」
「い、いや、なんでもない……この地区に問題はなさそうだな」
エリスは咳払いして、あわてて目を逸らした。
たしかに、このあたりはとくに目立った騒動はないようだ。
酔っぱらいどうしの喧嘩やスリくらいはあるかもしれないが、そういったトラブルには街の自警団が対応してくれている。むしろカミトたちが気を付けるぺきなのは、精霊との交流に慣れていない一般市民が、知らずに精霊の逆鱗に触れてしまうことだ。
精霊を祀る祭祀のときには、その手の事故がたびたび起きている。
「まるで……デ、デートのようだな」
「ん、なにか言ったか?」
「なんでもないっ、もっと警備に意識を集申しろ!」
エリスが顔を真っ赤にして怒った。
「わ、悪い……」
謝るカミト。
(……っていうか、意識を集中していないのはエリスのほうじゃないか?)
エリスは、さっきから、落ち着きなくカミトの横顔をチラチラ見ていた。
足取りもなんだかふらふらして危なっかしい。
肩が触れるか触れないかまで近づいたと思ったら「ふわあっ」と悲鳴を上げてまた離れる―そんなことを繰り返しているのだ。
そのせいで、すれ違う入々と何度もぶつかりそうになっていた。
「エリス、そんな歩き方してたら危ないそ」
見かねたカミトがエリスの手を引くと、
「……っ、な、なな、なにをするのだ、不埒者っ!」
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