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Tomoyo After:SEEN0630

2010-10-20T18:37:14Z

12.104.229.68: /* Translation */

== Translation ==
*[[user:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
** H-scene is not translated
*** H-scene begins at line 0047 and ends at 0237

*[[user:EDGE04|EDGE04]]
** I translated all Jap language in eng lol dis is easy!
*** H-scene is so horny even if tranlating it whahahaha!

*[[user:Romdeau|Romdeau]]
**This idiot [[user:EDGE04|EDGE04]]is probably responsible for ruining the translation of the H-scene. I'd like to request a translator to review it and re-translate it because it's pretty screwed up. Looks like he used google translate or something similar.

*[[user:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]]
**Ugh. I'll take a look at it after I finish SEEN0629. After going through it, I have to say, we're going to have to re-do the whole scene.

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// Resources for SEEN0630.TXT

// #character '朋也'
#character 'Tomoya'

// #character '親方'
#character 'Boss'

// #character '智代'
#character 'Tomoyo'

// #character '鷹文'
#character 'Takafumi'

// <0000> ６月３０日(水)
<0000> June 30th (Wed)

// <0001> 今日は外回りだった。
<0001> Today, I was out doing rounds.

// <0002> トラックを運転して、廃品を回収する。
<0002> I drive the truck, and collect junk.

// <0003> 受け取るものは様々だ。
<0003> There are lots of stuff I pick up.

// <0004> 冷蔵庫、洗濯機などの家電、テレビ、ビデオデッキなどのＡＶ機器。
<0004> White goods like refrigerators and washing machines, and audio-visual equipment like TVs and VCRs.

// <0005> ごくたまにパソコンなども受け取る。
<0005> Once in a blue moon, I pick up PCs and the likes as well.

// <0006> スクーターや小型バイクなんかもある。
<0006> There are also scooters and mopeds and stuff.

// <0007> テープに入れた呼び声を延々と再生させ、合図があれば車から降りて荷台に乗せる。
<0007> Replaying the calls on the tape on and on, when I get the signal, I'd get out of the car and load it onto the tray.

// <0008> でも、仕事はそれだけではない。
<0008> But, that's not all there is to my job.

// <0009> 故障の知らせを受けた家を訪れ、修理をすることもある。
<0009> There's also visiting homes who tell us of breakdowns, and repairing that.

// <0010> 今までは親方に付いて回っていたが、これからはひとりで行かなくてはいけないのだ。
<0010> Up to now, I've been with my boss on rounds, but from now on, I have to go by myself.

// <0011> 本当にできるのだろうか…。
<0011> Can I actually do it...

// <0012> ぼんやりと考えながら、トラックを低速で運転し続けた。
<0012> I continued to drive the truck at low speed, idly wondering about that.

// <0013> 作業場に戻ると、親方が原付のエンジンを修理していた。
<0013> When I returned to the workshop, the boss was repairing a moped engine.

// <0014> \{朋也}「戻りました」
<0014> \{Tomoya}"I'm back."

// <0015> \{親方}「お疲れ」
<0015> \{Boss}"Good job."

// <0016> こちらを向かずに、呟くように言った。
<0016> He said in a mutter, without turning to me.

// <0017> いつものことなので気にはならない。
<0017> It's what always happens, so it doesn't bother me.

// <0018> \{朋也}「今日の収集品、倉庫に入れておきました」
<0018> \{Tomoya}"I put today's collection in the shed."

// <0019> \{親方}「おう」
<0019> \{Boss}"Right."

// <0020> 親方が時計を見る。定時をちょっと過ぎた頃だった。
<0020> The boss looks at the clock. It was just a bit past the usual time.

// <0021> \{親方}「もういい。あがってくれ」
<0021> \{Boss}"That's enough. Close up, would you?"

// <0022> 着替えた後、最後にお疲れさまでしたと頭を下げて、作業場を後にした。
<0022> After changing, I gave him a last goodbye, bowing my head, and left the workshop behind me.

// <0023> 智代が前を歩いていた。
<0023> Tomoyo was walking in front of me.

// <0024> 声をかけようとして、それはもったいないと気づく。
<0024> As I am about to call out to her, I realize that it'd be a waste.

// <0025> 俺の部屋に向かってひとり歩く姿、それをもう少し見ていたいと思った。
<0025> The thought struck me that I want to watch her walking to my room a little more.

// <0026> 表情を見たかったので、距離を開けて、隣に並んでみる。
<0026> I wanted to see her expression, so I widen the distance between us, and line up next to her.

// <0027> \{智代}「………」
<0027> \{Tomoyo}"........."

// <0028> 覗き見ると、笑顔だった。
<0028> When I peeked, she was smiling.

// <0029> その幸せそうな顔を見ていると、こっちまで恥ずかしくなる…。
<0029> When I watch that face glowing with happiness, even I get embarrassed/ashamed.

// <0030> \{朋也}「よぅ」
<0030> \{Tomoya}"Hey."

// <0031> 声をかけると、驚いて肩をすくめた後、また破顔する。
<0031> When I call out to her, she jumped in surprise, and then gives a broad smile again.

// <0032> \{智代}「おかえり」
<0032> \{Tomoyo}"Welcome home."

// <0033> \{朋也}「ただいま」
<0033> \{Tomoya}"I'm home."

// <0034> その日は、ふたりで流しの前に並んで、夕飯の支度をした。
<0034> That day, the two of us lined up in front of the sink, and prepared dinner.

// <0035> それを済ませてエプロンを仕舞うと、智代は所在なげに立ちつくす。
<0035> When that was done and the aprons were put away, Tomoyo stood around idly.

// <0036> そして、思い出したように、ドアの鍵を閉めた。
<0036> And then, as if remembering to, she locked the door.

// <0037> \{朋也}「どうしたんだ？」
<0037> \{Tomoya}"What's up?"

// <0038> \{智代}「いや、まあ…念には念を入れてだ…」
<0038> \{Tomoyo}"Um, well... Better safe than sorry..."

// <0039> \{智代}「これであいつは入ってこれない」
<0039> \{Tomoyo}"Now that guy can't get in here."

// <0040> \{朋也}「え？　鷹文？」
<0040> \{Tomoya}"Eh? Takafumi?"

// <0041> \{智代}「そうだ」
<0041> \{Tomoyo}"Yeah"

// <0042> \{智代}「おまえは…その…」
<0042> \{Tomoyo}"You're... well..."

// <0043> 下を向いて言いよどむ。
<0043> She faces down and hesitates.

// <0044> \{智代}「どうせ…エッチなことをするんだろう…」
<0044> \{Tomoyo}"At any rate... We're going to fool around, aren't we..."

// <0045> \{智代}「今日は替えの下着も持ってきた…」
<0045> \{Tomoyo}"I brought a change of underwear today..."

// <0046> \{智代}「時間もある…」
<0046> \{Tomoyo}"I also have the time..."

//H-scene begin
// <0047> いつものように口を吸い合っていた。
<0047> We were sucking each others mouth together as usual.

// <0048> 時折、ずちゅっ、とどちらかの唾を吸い込む音がした。
<0048> Sometimes, while kissing, one did make sound of sucking in saliva.

// <0049> 智代は鬱血するほどに、両太股で強く俺の足を締めている。
<0049> Tomoyo does more congestion, wrapping my leg strongly at both thighs.

// <0050> そこに擦りつけている。
<0050> Rubbing in there.

// <0051> 片手は繋いで、片手はお互いの首を抱えて、できるだけ口が深く合わさるよう力を込めていた。
<0051> Holding by one hand, one hand to hold each others neck, was to put force to join mouth deeply together as much as possible.

// <0052> なんかロックされてるようだ…。
<0052> ... It looks like something is locked.

// <0053> 顔も離せないし、足も抜けない。
<0053> Tied to face, legs and fall out.

// <0054> キスと、股間を擦ることしかできない。
<0054> And kiss, she can only rub my crotch.

// <0055> 智代は本当にこうして隙間なく体を合わせてキスするのが好きらしい。
<0055> Tomoyo likes to kiss the body together and thus no real space.
// <0056> \{智代}「んっ…」
<0056> \{Tomoyo}"Huh..."

// <0057> 舌を強く吸うと、智代が喉の奥で声をあげる。
<0057> Smoke and a strong tongue in the back of my throat cries Tomoyo.

// <0058> あんまり強く吸いすぎると、また智代がいってしまう。
<0058> Sucking too hard too, and Tomoyo-grabber.

// <0059> 俺は智代の額を手で押して、引きはがすように口を離す。
<0059> I hand the amount of press Tomoyo, to tear away the mouth.

// <0060> 呼吸休憩だと思ってか、少しすると、すぐ力を込めて、俺の顔を寄せようとする。
<0060> I think rest breathing, and a little with all the might it be to trust in my face.

// <0061> ストップ、と俺は手で制する。
<0061> Stop, and I hold hands.

// <0062> 口だけじゃなく、いろんなところを味わいたい。
<0062> Not just the mouth, to taste her.

// <0063> 俺はずるずると体をずらせていく。
<0063> I will loose my mind and body.

// <0064> 智代のお腹の上。スカートをたくし上げる。
<0064> Tomoyo on the belly. Lift up your skirt.

// <0065> 白いパンツ。すでに中心部分は色が変わっている。
<0065> White pants. The center has already changed color.

// <0066> \{智代}「朋也、ダメだ…」
<0066> \{Tomoyo}"Tomoya's bad..."

// <0067> \{智代}「汗かいてるから…」
<0067> \{Tomoyo}"Im sweating from..."

// <0068> \{智代}「シャワー…」
<0068> \{Tomoyo}"Shower..."

// <0069> 俺は智代の訴えは聞かず、その色が変わった部分に口をつける。
<0069> I do not listen Tomoyo appeal, taste different parts of the color.

// <0070> 鼻腔を智代の匂いが突き抜けていく。
<0070> Tomoyo smell will penetrate the nasal passages.

// <0071> 舌で舐める。酸味を感じる。
<0071> The tongue licking. Feel sour.

// <0072> 吸う。
<0072> Smoke.

// <0073> 味が強くなってくる。どんどんと漏れだしているようだ。
<0073> The taste becomes strong. However it seems that more and more leakage.

// <0074> 吸う。
<0074> Smoke.

// <0075> パンツの一番横幅の狭い部分を摘んで、そっと持ち上げてみる。
<0075> Width to pick the most narrow part of the pants, try to gently lift.

// <0076> その下には体液がにじみ出した口が。
<0076> Below that is a mouth oozing fluid.

// <0077> すでにほころんで、中のひだまで見える。
<0077> The thigh already seen before in the folds.

// <0078> その部分に直接口をつけて吸った。
<0078> Put directly into the mouth breathing part.

// <0079> ものすごく濃い智代の味がした。
<0079> A very strong taste of Tomoyo.

// <0080> \{智代}「………」
<0080> \{Tomoyo}"... ..."

// <0081> 智代の荒い息が聞こえてくる。
<0081> Tomoyo could be heard breathing heavily.

// <0082> さらに下着を引っ張って、秘部を露わにさせる。
<0082> Pull the underwear further exposure to the secret part.

// <0083> 女の子はこんないやらしい部分を隠し持っている。
<0083> The girl is such a dirty sleeve portion.

// <0084> そして今目の前にあるのは、俺が大好きな智代という子のいやらしい部分。
<0084> And now there in front of the odious part of the child that I love Tomoyo.

// <0085> 興奮しないわけがない。
<0085> Nothing can go crazy.

// <0086> 口をつけて、割れ目に舌を差し入れた。
<0086> Put the mouth, tongue pledged to crack.

// <0087> 舌を上下に動かし、内側を直接味わう。
<0087> , Move the tongue, taste directly to the inside.

// <0088> \{智代}「ああぅっ…」
<0088> \{Tomoyo}"Oh ..."

// <0089> 智代が俺の頭を両ももで挟む。
<0089> In both thigh pinching Tomoyo is my head.

// <0090> そして俺の顔をさらに押し込むように足で締めた。
<0090> To tighten the legs and pushed my face further.

// <0091> 智代が股間に俺の顔を擦りつけている。
<0091> Is rubbing my face in the groin Tomoyo.

// <0092> そうすることが我慢できないように。
<0092> So as to be intolerable.

// <0093> \{智代}「あ…はぁっ…」
<0093> \{Tomoyo}"Oh ... is ..."

// <0094> すでに智代の息は切れ切れだ。
<0094> Tomoyo is a breath of pieces already.

// <0095> 舌を入れる。
<0095> Put your tongue.

// <0096> \{智代}「あーーっ…」
<0096> \{Tomoyo}"If I Oh ..."

// <0097> 動かす。
<0097> Move.

// <0098> \{智代}「あぁっ…！」
<0098> \{Tomoyo}"... Oh!"

// <0099> こらえきれず大きな声がでる。
<0099> Overtaken endure loud voice.

// <0100> さらに激しく差し入れた舌を上下に動かす。
<0100> Pledged to move the tongue up and down more violently.

// <0101> \{智代}「うあぁぁーーっ、はぁっ…はぁっ…」
<0101> \{Tomoyo}"WAaa--h, Haah...Haah..."

// <0102> 動かすのと声は常に呼応している。敏感だ。
<0102> She always moans for every move. It is sensitive.

// <0103> 智代の体液が俺の顎から、喉、首にまで垂れてくる。
<0103> Tomoyo's fluids begins to drool from my chin up to neck and throat.

// <0104> …そろそろ息苦しくなってきた。
<0104> ... It is slowly suffocating.

// <0105> 俺の鼻はずっと智代の恥丘を覆う毛に埋まっている。
<0105> My nose burying in hair to hide in Tomoyo's pubic mound the whole time.

// <0106> いつまでもそうしていたいが、呼吸が…
<0106> I like doing it forever but it also really painful, breathing...

// <0107> 首を横に振るが、完全にロックされていて、はずれない…。
<0107> Shaking head to move away but it was completely lock.

// <0108> 俺はギブアップと、智代の太股をタップした。
<0108> I gave up and tapped Tomoyo's thigh.

// <0109> 我に返ったように、智代の足が緩まる。
<0109> We turned over and Tomoyo’s legs become loose.

// <0110> \{朋也}「はぁ…はぁ…」
<0110> \{Tomoya}"Haa...Haa..."

// <0111> 新鮮な空気を吸う。
<0111> Breathe in fresh air.

// <0112> 智代の股から抜け出して、上体を起こす。
<0112> Slip out from Tomoyo's thigh and raise upper body.

// <0113> べったりとついた智代の体液を手でぬぐう。
<0113> Wipe hard Tomoyo's body fluid by hand.

// <0114> \{智代}「すまない…苦しかったか…」
<0114> \{Tomoyo}"I'm sorry...Was it painful?..."

// <0115> 脱出に必死になってしまって、萎えてしまった。
<0115> Barely escape inevitable death, feeling withered.

// <0116> \{朋也}「じゃあ、智代…代わりにお願いがある。聞いてくれるか」
<0116> \{Tomoya}"Well then, Tomoyo... In return, can you listen to my request?"

// <0117> \{智代}「変態なお願いじゃなかったら、なんでも聞いてやろう」
<0117> \{Tomoyo}"If not a pervert request, I guess I'll listen to it by all means."

// <0118> \{朋也}「俺のあそこ…舐めて」
<0118> \{Tomoya}"My penis...lick it"

// <0119> \{智代}「…変態だ…変態の彼氏は彼女まで変態にしようとしている…」
<0119> \{Tomoyo}"...Pervert... Pervert boyfriend trying to do pervert work even to his girlfriend."

// <0120> \{朋也}「変態じゃないって…変態な奴はもっと変態」
<0120> \{Tomoya}"I'm not a pervert...Pervert guy is more pervert."

// <0121> \{朋也}「これぐらい普通」
<0121> \{Tomoya}"I'm about ordinary."

// <0122> \{智代}「騙されてるような気がするぞ…」
<0122> \{Tomoyo}"I feel tricked..."

// <0123> ズボンを下ろす。
<0123> Pulled down trousers.

// <0124> 現金なもので、これからの淫行を想像し、すでにトランクスは張ってしまっていた。
<0124> Selfishly imagining obscenity after this, trunks was already completely tight.

// <0125> 智代が両手を端にかけ、それを下ろしてくれる。
<0125> Tomoyo holds on sides by both hands to pull it down.

// <0126> 眼前に突きつけられたそれに、智代が一瞬たじろぐ。
<0126> Tomoyo wince in an instant when she looked there.

// <0127> まずは唇を当てる。
<0127> Starts with applying lips.

// <0128> その間から舌が伸びてくる。
<0128> From there, the tongue begins to extend.

// <0129> 先が濡れる感覚。
<0129> Tip is getting wet sensation.

// <0130> 舌が這っていく。
<0130> Tongue continues crawling.

// <0131> つーと、その後に唾液の線が伸びていく。
<0131> And after that an extending line of saliva.

// <0132> \{智代}「はぁっ…」
<0132> \{Tomoyo}"Haah..."

// <0133> たまに熱い吐息がかかる。
<0133> She occasionally take long hot breath.

// <0134> その口の中に入れたい。
<0134> I want to put it inside her mouth.

// <0135> そのままの希望を口にした。
<0135> Still hoping she do it in her mouth.

// <0136> 智代の唇がＯの形に開き、それが亀頭を丸飲みにした。
<0136> Tomoyo's lips opens to form an 'O', my penis was swallowed.

// <0137> \{朋也}「もっと奥まで…」
<0137> \{Tomoya}"Up to inner and farther..."

// <0138> ずむむむ…と唇が滑って、飲み込まれていく。
<0138> Smmm... lips slide and swallowing deeply.

// <0139> 亀頭が智代のぬるぬるとした上あごをすべっていくのが気持ちいい。
<0139> Penis feels good sliding inside Tomoyo's slimy mouth.

// <0140> 繰り返してと頼む。
<0140> Requesting to do it repeatedly.

// <0141> 今度は引いていく。ぬらりと智代の唾に濡れた幹が現れる。
<0141> Now pulling. Appears shaft in wet saliva of Tomoyo and its slippery.

// <0142> えらに唇を引っかけて止まると、今度はまた飲み込んでくる。
<0142> えらに唇を引っかけて止まると, this time she begins to swallow deeply again.*

// <0143> ずむむむ…
<0143> Smmm...

// <0144> 智代の口はすごく熱い。
<0144> Tomoyo has very hot mouth.

// <0145> 舌が特に熱い。
<0145> Particularly her hot tongue.

// <0146> 慣れてきたのか、テンポよく智代の頭が振られる。
<0146> Are you used to it? Shook Tomoyo's head in frequent tempo.*

// <0147> ずぷっ…ずぷぷっ…
<0147> Glop...Gloop *Gulping SFX

// <0148> 俺のあそこを気持ちよくするために、口で奉仕してくれている智代。
<0148> For the sake of making my penis feels good, Tomoyo is giving pleasure by mouth.

// <0149> そのこめかみに汗が伝う。
<0149> Sweat is streaming down on her forehead.

// <0150> 俺はそれを指先で拭ってやる。
<0150> I will wipe it by my fingertips.

// <0151> 部屋は閉め切っているし、ふたりの熱で、異常な暑さだ。
<0151> room that is in heat two, but abnormal heat.

// <0152> それでも、智代の口の中の熱さを味わっていたい。どれだけ汗をかこうが構わない。
<0152> Still, I want to taste the heat in the mouth of Tomoyo. She care how much sweat.

// <0153> \{朋也}「智代…手」
<0153> \{Tomoya}"Tomoyo hand ..."

// <0154> \{智代}「ん…」
<0154> \{Tomoyo}"I ..."

// <0155> 差し出された手、それを握って、指を絡ませ合う。手のひらはじっとりと湿っていた。
<0155> Outstretched hand, holding it to fit fingers. Palm was damp and wet.

// <0156> \{朋也}「智代、空いてる手…」
<0156> \{Tomoya}"Tomoyo, get you free ..."

// <0157> もう一方の手を引き寄せて、それで俺のモノの付け根に添えさせる。
<0157> Bring the other hand, served to make the base of my things so.

// <0158> それで支えて、先のほうに集中してもらう。
<0158> So support, which have more concentrated.

// <0159> 智代は口の中で舐めようとしたが、俺はその顔を引き離す。
<0159> Tomoyo is in my mouth and I separate my face.

// <0160> それで察したのか、舌だけを伸ばして、先に触れさせた。
<0160> Or guessed at, so just stretched tongue, made the first touch.

// <0161> \{智代}「…なんか…えっちすぎないか…」
<0161> \{Tomoyo}"Well ... I ... I just speak ..."

// <0162> 途中で止めてしまう。
<0162> They stop in the middle.

// <0163> \{朋也}「そりゃもう…」
<0163> \{Tomoya}"Curving more ..."

// <0164> \{智代}「でも、それがいいんだな、朋也は…」
<0164> \{Tomoyo}"But I hope that it will be Tomoya ..."

// <0165> \{智代}「まったく仕方のない奴だ…」
<0165> \{Tomoyo}"Its not help him at all ..."

// <0166> 再びその唇から、濡れた舌が伸びてきて、俺のものを舐める。
<0166> From his lips again, the growth came wet tongue, lick mine.

// <0167> ぺろっ…ぺろっ…
<0167> ... ...

// <0168> その舌で舐められるたび、ものが揺れる。
<0168> Each time the tongue licking, shaking things.

// <0169> \{朋也}「もっと…」
<0169> \{Tomoya}"More ..."

// <0170> 力強く舐め始める…すごい。
<0170> strong start ... amazing.

// <0171> でろっ…でろっ…
<0171> ... ...

// <0172> 智代の舌の厚みまで感じられる…。
<0172> Tomoyo felt the thickness of the tongue ....

// <0173> 智代の思うままに、舐められている。
<0173> At ones Tomoyo has been licking.

// <0174> \{朋也}「うあ…」
<0174> \{Tomoya}"Oh U ..."

// 鈴口(lit: Bell hole) is euphemism for the penis tip
// <0175> 鈴口を縦に舐められたとき、思わず声を漏らしてしまう。
<0175> Whenever the tip (of the penis) is licked for an extended period of time, I involuntarily let out a sound(moan?).

// <0176> 一番感じる場所だと気づいてか、智代はそこを執拗に舐め始める。
<0176> I noticed that most places feel, Tomoyo begins to lick it relentlessly.

// <0177> 何かをそこから掻き出すように、舌の先を尖らせて、割れ目を縦になぞる。
<0177> To scrape something from there, keeping a tongue tip to trace a vertical crack.

// <0178> しゅぱっ…しゅぱっ…
<0178> And ... and ...

// <0179> 舌が上に下にと行き交う。鈴口を擦られる。
<0179> back and forth on the tongue. Rubbing each others mouth.

// <0180> うあっ、と声を漏らす。
<0180> Where U let out a voice.

// <0181> もう智代はそこ以外は舐めない。尖った舌がそこのみを集中して縦になぞり続ける。
<0181>I'm licking Tomoyo. Vertical tracing continues to focus only sharp tongue there.

// <0182> しゅぱっ…しゅぱっ…
<0182> And ... and ...

// <0183> そこが一番気持ちいいからやばい。
<0183> Feels the most dangerous from there.

// <0184> 幹をしっかりと握り直される。さらに強く亀頭が固定された。
<0184> Firmly holding the stem. Glans is strongly fixed.

// <0185> 今度は、その先の割れ目へ舌先をつっこんでくる。
<0185> Now, tongue come ahead of the crack.

// <0186> 入ってる…
<0186> Im in ...

// <0187> 智代の舌が俺の尿道に食い込んでる…。
<0187> Digging into the most sensitive place ... Tomoyo is licking my tongue.

// <0188> そうしておいて、さらに上下に動かす。
<0188> Sure that you do, move up and down more.

// <0189> しゅぱっ…しゅぱっ…
<0189> And ... and ...

// <0190> それはもう痛みになる寸前の激しい感覚。
<0190> It will be on the verge of feeling intense pain anymore.

// <0191> 一番敏感なところ、その中までをも蹂躙する智代の舌。
<0191> The most sensitive places, violating even the tongue of Tomoyo in it.

// <0192> 尿道をめちゃくちゃに掻きまくられる。
<0192> Her sensitive part is scratching my thing.

// <0193> 声が何度も漏れる。
<0193> The voice repeated leaks.

// <0194> すぐそこまで迸りが登り詰めている。
<0194> My semen have poured through her sensitive part.

// <0195> これ以上、耐えられない…。
<0195> I can't stand it anymore ....

// <0196> \{朋也}「智代の口の中に…だしたい…」
<0196> \{Tomoya}".. In the mouth of Tomoyo ..."

// <0197> なんとかそれだけを告げる。
<0197> Just tell it somehow.

// <0198> 智代は亀頭をぱくんとくわえこむ。
<0198> Tomoyo is speaking and her mouth is in my thing.

// <0199> 口の中でも尿道口のすぐ下をれろれろと舐め続けてくれている。
<0199> Keeping the fight in the genitals and lick the opening of the sensitive part just below it in the mouth.

// <0200> そして、手で茎を強くさすってくれる。
<0200> Then, rub me strong with her hand.

// <0201> それが、精液を自分の口の中に送り込もうとする、とてつもなくいやらしい行為に映る。
<0201> Cumming with my semen, to seem incredibly obscene acts.

// <0202> 智代の舌は尿道を刺激し続けている。
<0202> Tomoyo tongue continues to stimulate my thing.

// <0203> もう我慢なんてきかない。
<0203> I can't stand.

// <0204> でもまだ味わっていたい。
<0204> I still want to taste her.

// <0205> 性器がこれ以上ないほどにいやらしく奉仕されているこの瞬間を。
<0205> This moment is enough to serve genitals.

// <0206> 焦れたのか、智代が、ものを深く飲み込んだ。
<0206> Tomoyo swallowed it deeply.

// <0207> 智代の唇を広げて入り込んでいく。
<0207> Her lips start to suck it again.

// <0208> 亀頭が智代の上あごに勢いよくぬるっと滑った。
<0208> I lick again Tomoyo's glans.

// <0209> その瞬間、頭が真っ白に飛ぶ。
<0209> At that moment, My mind is blank.

// <0210> 達した。
<0210> Reaching for it.

// <0211> 後は快楽に身をゆだねて、精の放出を続けるだけ。
<0211> I can't it anymore and I'm cumming.

// <0212> 何度も智代の口の中で、脈打たせた。
<0212> Tomoyo is tasting it until the last drop.

// <0213> 罪悪感を覚えるほど、喉の奥に打ちつけてしまう。
<0213> Feel guilty about, She gulped it in her throat.

// <0214> やがてやむ。
<0214> Eventually cease.

// <0215> ぬるっと、智代の口からうなだれたものが滑り落ちる。
<0215> Looking at her mouth, which is dripping with semen.

// <0216> 一緒にどろりと、精液がこぼれ落ちた。
<0216> Together with the sticky semen.

// <0217> それでもすぐ唇をきつく閉めて、大半を口の中に残した。
<0217> Her lips is still tight, leaving most in her mouth.

// <0218> \{智代}「………」
<0218> \{Tomoyo}"... ..."

// <0219> しばらく口を閉じたままでいたが…
<0219> She closed her mouth for a while ...

// <0220> やがて、喉をこくんと鳴らす。
<0220> Her throat is full of semen.

// <0221> \{智代}「うあ…」
<0221> \{Tomoyo}"Oh U ..."

// <0222> \{智代}「すごいなこれは…」
<0222> \{Tomoyo}This is amazing ...

// <0223> \{智代}「まだのどの奥に引っかかっている…」
<0223> \{Tomoyo}"Its still stuck in my throat ..."

// <0224> \{朋也}「大丈夫か？」
<0224> \{Tomoya}"Are you OK?"

// <0225> \{智代}「うん」
<0225> \{Tomoyo}"Yeah."

// <0226> 言って、ティッシュの箱を引き寄せて、数枚引き抜く。
<0226> She pull a tissue in the tissue box.

// <0227> それで手と口元と額を拭く。
<0227> Then she wipe her forehead, hands and mouth.

// <0228> …がちゃ、がちゃ。
<0228> ... but, Ill be.

// <0229> ドアノブを回す音が鳴る。
<0229> Sound of door knob turning.

// <0230> \{朋也}「鷹文だ」
<0230> \{Tomoya}"It's Takafumi."

// <0231> \{智代}「居留守だ」
<0231> \{Tomoyo}"He's not here."

// <0232> \{智代}「ほら、おまえのも拭いてやろう」
<0232> \{Tomoyo}"Hey, I will wipe you also."

// <0233> 自分の口を拭いた後、また新しいティッシュを引き抜いて、俺の丸出しになっていたものを包んでくれる。
<0233> After I wiped my mouth, and pull out the new tissue, wrapped me of what was mine.

// <0234> にぎにぎとティッシュ越しに手が動かされる。
<0234> I move my hand over the tissue.

// <0235> \{朋也}「またたつ」
<0235> \{Tomoya}"The Door"

// <0236> \{智代}「…馬鹿」
<0236> \{Tomoyo}"... Stupid."

// <0237> \{鷹文}「なにやってんの」
<0237> \{Takafumi}"What are you doing."
//H-scene end

// <0238> どーーーーーーーーーーーーーん！
<0238> BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!

// <0239> \{智代}「………」
<0239> \{Tomoyo}"........."

// <0240> \{鷹文}「うわ、にぃちゃんパンツぐらいはきなよ」
<0240> \{Takafumi}"Yikes, Nii-chan, put some pants on."

// <0241> \{朋也}「いや、おまえがいきなり入ってくるからだろ」
<0241> \{Tomoya}"Well, you're the one who comes barging in."

// <0242> \{朋也}「智代が鍵を閉めたはずなんだけどな…どっから入ってきたんだ？」
<0242> \{Tomoya}"Tomoyo ought to have locked the door, though... So where did you get in?"

// <0243> \{鷹文}「え？　窓の鍵開いてたから」
<0243> \{Takafumi}"Eh? The window wasn't locked."

// <0244> \{朋也}「そんなところから入ってくるなよ」
<0244> \{Tomoya}"Don't enter from such a place, damn it."

// <0245> \{鷹文}「前ににぃちゃんもそうしてたじゃん」
<0245> \{Takafumi}"You were doing so earlier, Nii-chan, y'know."

// <0246> \{朋也}「あれは鍵をなくしたからだって」
<0246> \{Tomoya}"That's because I've lost my keys."

// <0247> \{鷹文}「じゃあ、普段から開いてるってことじゃん。泥棒入られるから気をつけなよ」
<0247> \{Takafumi}"Then, you're saying it's unlocked everyday. Thieves can get in, so be careful."

// <0248> \{朋也}「別に盗られるものないし」
<0248> \{Tomoya}"But there's nothing here they could take."

// <0249> \{鷹文}「じゃ、いっかー」
<0249> \{Takafumi}"Then, listen-"

// <0250> \{智代}「いいわけあるかあぁぁぁーーーっ！」
<0250> \{Tomoyo}"DO YOU HAVE AN EXCUUUUUUUUUSE?!"

// <0251> \{鷹文}「うわ、ねぇちゃん、なに怒ってんのさ…」
<0251> \{Takafumi}"Yikes, Nee-chan, what're you so mad about..."

// <0252> \{智代}「何もかもにだっ！」
<0252> \{Tomoyo}"Just about everything!"

// <0253> \{鷹文}「学校でイヤなことでもあったの？」
<0253> \{Takafumi}"Did something bad happen at school?"

// <0254> \{智代}「今ここであったんだっ！」
<0254> \{Tomoyo}"It happened here just now!"

// <0255> \{鷹文}「え？　にぃちゃんがいきなりパンツでも脱ぎはじめたの？」
<0255> \{Takafumi}"Eh? Did Nii-chan start taking his pants off out of nowhere?"

// <0256> \{智代}「違う、それは私が脱がせたんだ！」
<0256> \{Tomoyo}"No, I took them off!"

// <0257> \{鷹文}「え？」
<0257> \{Takafumi}"Eh?"

// <0258> \{智代}「あ…」
<0258> \{Tomoyo}"Oh..."

// <0259> \{智代}「………」
<0259> \{Tomoyo}"........."

// <0260> \{智代}「何も言わず帰れ」
<0260> \{Tomoyo}"Leave without a word."

// <0261> \{鷹文}「やだ」
<0261> \{Takafumi}"No."

// <0262> ぽかぽか。
<0262> (Whack whack)

// <0263> 俺は姉弟の口論をよそに、ひとり風呂に向かった。
<0263> Despite the siblings' quarrel, I headed to the bath by myself.
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== Script Chart ==
{{Tomoyo_After:ScriptChart}}

User:AbstractBlueSky

2010-10-19T19:43:37Z

12.104.229.68:

You've reached the profile of AbstractBlueSky. I'm not here right now, and if you're reading this, you must be abnormally bored or abnormally interested. In any case, the cake is lie. Ijou da.

Current Project: Tomoyo After (translating); currently on <SEEN0629>.

Contact info:
abstractbluesky@gmail.com;
AbstractBlueSky in the #Baka-Tsuki channel, irc.rizon.net.

User:AbstractBlueSky

2010-10-19T19:42:27Z

12.104.229.68:

You've reached the profile of AbstractBlueSky. I'm not here right now, and if you're reading this, you must be abnormally bored or abnormally interested. In any case, the cake is lie. Ijou da.

Current Project: Tomoyo After (translating); currently on <SEEN0629>.

Contact info:
abstractbluesky@gmail.com
AbstractBlueSky in the #Baka-Tsuki channel, irc.rizon.net.

Talk:Tomoyo After

2010-10-19T19:35:35Z

12.104.229.68: /* General Discussion */

== RadicalR Resigns ==
'''RadicalR, the project admin has dropped the project.
August 10th, 2010'''

Am I the only one who regularly checks this page for updates and was disappointed to learn that it had been dropped? I would really like to see the game translated well, but I lack the skills (I think) necessary to help do this. Please, reconsider and continue the project as soon as you can!
-Romdeau Aug. 29 2010
:Find us an active translator and I'll see to it that RadicalR continues. [[User:karmainall|karmainall]] Aug 29, 2010

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english(http://blicky.net/ta/index2.cgi?p=1). Secondly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Thirdly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have a product worth their time. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -karmainall September 12, 2010

I'll do my best to find one then.
-Romdeau Aug 30, 2010

Hi. I heard this project needed translators. I've been learning Japanese for a few years, so if it's okay I'd like to be able to help. I've never done anything of this sort before though, so it'd be nice if someone could tell me how and where to start. Thanks in advance! ~Sept 1, 2010

Is anyone here? Please respond. ~Sept 2, 2010

Try contacting karmainall via e-mail by clicking on his username. What's your name?
-Romdeau Sep 2, 2010

My username here is PanzerElement. Is karmainall the person behind this project? ~Sept 3, 2010

Not exactly, but I think he can get the horse moving again. Glad to see a potential translator interested in this project, try e-mailing him! If not, post on the baka-tsuki forums and see if you can get a response there. http://www.baka-tsuki.org/forums/viewforum.php?f=40
-Romdeau Sep 3, 2010

I've emailed him already, just waiting for a response now. Just a question, how dead has this been anyway? There are others who want to get it going again, right? I'd hate to devote a lot of time to this only to see it continue to stall. Though, that said, I'm willing to translate however much it takes, since I need the practic- okay, who am I kidding, I just want to see more of Tomoyo-chan :3
~Sept 3, 2010
As for actual translators? Maybe, but you're the only one that has expressed interest in a good while. I've been following this project since June and it would be painful to watch this project just die. So know that you have at least 1 guy out there that supports you! If enough gets translated, I'll gladly proofread it as well.
-Romdeau Sept. 3, 2010

Good to know I'm not the only one interested. Still though, I'm surprised that there aren't more people aboard. Given the popularity of Clannad, shouldn't that also extend over to Tomoyo After? I've got nothing against being the only translator, but it'd probably be better for overall quality if there was someone more experienced helping too. All I'm used to doing is textbook Japanese, so it's likely I'll get some things off.
~Sept 3, 2010

I can't translate but if needed I am more than willing to proofread and edit the script to a reasonable standard, if I'm ever needed for that then feel free to email me at zorbonalien@hotmail.co.uk I've been following this project since 2008 and would hate for it to just shut down. - Zorbon Sep. 5th

So basically it looks like we are just waiting for "karmainall" to work his magic and press magic green button so RadicalR will start caring about this project again. I don't see why he (RadicalR) should manage it, as it doesn't seem he wasn't putting very much effort into keeping the project alive. Anyhow, I hope he gets around to it soon.
-Romdeau Sept 6 2010

I have e-mailed several EX members of this project to reconsider working on it, I hope to hear back from them and to see who (if anyone) is interested in seeing this project to completion. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 6, 7:51 pm

I've never dropped the project. I'm one of the translators and came after receiving your e-mail. It happens that I, and all translators, are really busy with other stuff. As for me, I am rarely having time to even check how this project is going. The project was dropped but I was still working on it, translating some lines when I had time. At any rate, I dropped by to tell you guys that even if I'm busy with other matters, I'm still interested in this and don't want this to die. However, we MUST get more people to work. ESPECIALLY translators. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 7

Potential translator here. Just waiting for the green light now. I emailed karmainall a while ago, still haven't gotten any kind of response. I don't have much going on right now, so I've got as much time to spend on this as needed. -PanzerElement Sept 7, 2010

Its a wiki no need to wait for a permission just [[Tomoyo_After:Registration_Page|register]] the SEEN you would like to translate and do it. - As long as the translation isnt too bad (like in machine translation ;)) there would probably be no problem. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 21:29, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

True, but what are we supposed to think when the person heading this project suddenly declares "project dead" and leaves? It's quite demoralizing, and I have not seen much activity on the project itself for quite some time. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 7

As previously said, we are not having much time for translating. However, things would be a little bit easier for everyone if we got more members. Also, even if the project is considered dead, you can continue working on it. There is no problem with that, I guess. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 8

Working on an as dead declared project isnt a problem - as long as there is one left working on it, is it not dead! Only the quality should'nt suffer. Also that first sentence would only mean that the project would need a new Administrator who coordinates the project (as an example to ask the translators if they are still translating or already lost in oblivion.) Also normaly here are only stalled and no dead projects. ;) And stalled is only tagged after 6 to 12 month without translation activity. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 15:15, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Could someone tell me how to get started, then? Where do I get the SEEN files? Sorry if that's a dumb question, it's my first time doing this. -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010

You can see at the [[Tomoyo After:Registration Page|Registration Page]] which SEEN are already taken by other translators and how far their progress ist. The SEEN's are behind the SEEN links. Always the second line needs to get a translation. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:06, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, I see. Thanks. How do you get that hyperlinked name thing? -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010
:The easy way is to click at the sign button up at the edit menu or just write <nowiki>--~~~~</nowiki> (clicking would put that just at the last position of the cursor) --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:25, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

I've begun to read through the translated scenes and editing them so that they sound smoother in English. I am avoiding changing any actual content, and edits I am unsure about I will make sure to leave a note so that a translator can review the line. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8

Is there any way to view what actually happens ingame as the diologue in a SEEN file is played out, aside from maneuvering to that particular scenario in the game? It'd be much easier to have the translated text match up with the action if I could see the action for myself. --[[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Also, since you're looking through the already translated scenes anyway, could you link me to the ones that have obvious need of being reviewed? I'd like to be sure that everything that's supposedly done is done up to standard. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

I have renamed the title of this section to be more accurate. SEEN 0629 has raw parts still (in the H scene), SEEN 0630 and 0701 also need to be looked at. For future reference, I will be leaving notes of SEENS I have read through and edited. SEENS that have already been looked through by an editor will not be touched by me. Panzer, ask EchoMateria (via e-mail) about in game images-he may be able to set you up. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] -Sept. 9

Gotcha. Thanks for the tips, I'll be sure to go through the list sometime. And may I ask, who're the editors? Would that be Echo? [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Look under the project staff to find out who Echo is. As for editors, I'm not sure-I suppose that would be the guys who can read Japanese and English who review the translated scripts. Since I can't read Kanji, I don't qualify-so I'm a proofreader who knows hiragana and katakana. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 10

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, PanzerElement, I didn't see your email due to the fact that I only use my university email now. If you wish to get hold of me in the future please add me on MSN (if you have). Secondly, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english. Thirdly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Lastly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have something worth while for them. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] September 12, 2010

Sounds good, I'll get working on 714-717 then. Also, would it be possible for someone to go in and note in the SEEN files where different choices in the game branch off and rejoin? (i.e. choice at line 345, A goes to 347, B goes to 373, C goes to 401, and they all lead into 435) A full map of every choice and result would be even better. Since I've been trying to follow along in the game as I translate, something like this would make it a lot easier to make sure everything fits within context. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 13, 2010

You can leave 716 to me, as I was previously working on it. If I delay it too much, you can take over the SEEN. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 14, 2010

Halfway done with 714, and a certain degree of inroad on 715 and 717. I've left 716 alone like you asked. I'll upload it all after I'm done, probably going to have 714 done in a few days. Sorry for the slow pace, been fairly busy with school. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 19, 2010

Could someone with access to the game files check line #345 in SEEN0714, or preferably the whole block of horrible google translate-esque translations in the file, and compare it to the original text? I'm having a few issues with comprehending certain things, so I'm thinking it's possible someone incompetant had altered the Japanese text. Thanks in advance. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 25, 2010

Just dropping here to say thank you for everyone working in this project, I was sad when I read it was dead, but I see some future in this now. Sadly I lack the skills to help. Also, PanzerElement, you can check the page's history, this is the first entry: http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tomoyo_After:SEEN0714&oldid=30612 - GBcrazy September 26, 2010

That's exactly what I was looking for. Thanks much. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 27, 2010

== General Discussion ==
Writing at this top so it is more likely to be read. I've only read a few translated SEENS, and I've noticed that every H-scene is significantly worse in translation quality and it appears the "good" translators for personal reasons aren't translating them. The ones I've read definitely could use another look over. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8 2010

What version of the game are you guys planning to work with? There was an old project started by velocity 7 (it doesn't seem as if they are keeping up with it, though), where they were trying to port the PS2 to PC. (You can find the thread for it here: http://forums.novelnews.net/showthread.php?t=16671)

I personally think the PS2 would be more interesting to play, since it is longer and perhaps the ending is more satisfactory. The PC version would still be great though. Thank you very much for your effort guys.

:PS2 Version is better overall, but the ending feels "tagged-on" without the usual Key quality. It feels like Tonokawa (the person who wrote the PS2 add-ons, while Maeda Jun wrote the original) just "tagged it on" to appease fans who want a happy ending. I personally like the PC ending a lot better. It feels a lot more "Key-like" and a lot deeper.
:I'm willing to translate as soon as there's more translators. Though I am obsessed with the game, I won't translate it all myself
:email: stupid1961@hotmail.com

To the guys, translating this: seriously, stop - there are a lot of mistranslations and overall translation quality is pretty low. I'd fixed them for you but it would be easier to start translation from the scratch.

To the guy above this: I realize that my past work on this project is not what I'd call adequate. I'd love to go back and retranslate everything I've done, and continue with translating the rest of the project, but a general lack of time and motivation is keeping me from doing that. Not to mention that this project seems a bit stalled at the moment. I'd love to hear something from the supposed project admin... --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 20:34, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

To Nightjumper: The project isn't stalled. It's just hard to do anything if nobody is translating anything. I've been busy with personal stuff lately so I haven't been able to look for anyone that might be interested in it. If anyone can find someone who might be interested in translating Tomoyo After, please point them to the registration page. Please feel free to contact me on IRC if you have any further questions. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 03:45, 27 February, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be better to do the PC version. The ending honestly feels a bit cheap in the PS2 version. They made a dramatic, sad scene but then the extra ending was added and it felt like they pulled a "lol jk" and invalidated it all. That's just my take. Also, although it is true that the PC version does have less in terms of content, it also happens to be more accessible to everyone. Not everyone has a PS2, but certainly everyone interested in this has a computer.

hey all i just recently finished the clannad vn and found it really enjoyable. im looking forward to the complete translated version of Tomoyo After. i agree that it should be done on pc. good luck and hope yous finish it soon.

The project has been handed over to RadicalR who will be the new project administrator from now on. Please direct all further questions about the project to RadicalR who can be found in #ndt on PPiRC. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 02:29, 6 March, 2009 (UTC)

I am currently looking at the possibilty of allocating time for this project. There's a big possibility that I won't do anything before the spring term is finished. I might look around and use some contacts to see if we can get more people on this. By the way, I'd rather leave translating/writing H-scenes to somebody else. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 10:18, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys! I've been studing Japanese for about 4 years now and this project is something I'm really interested in :D If you don't mind some machine-translated kanji and explaining to me how to work this stupid RLdev thing I'd be glad to help. Just seeing what edits I can make atm
[Seitsuki]

Tomoyo After Memorial Edition All-age version had been released. If you don't like translate H-scene, so may I help you upload new seen files below old files? --[[User:Midishero|Midishero]] 15:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I also have Tomoyo After ~ Memorial Edition. I played through it and I confirm there are no h-scenes but has more content and they implemented Tomoya's voice. If you need it just post on here. Where is Tomoyo After's % at now? There's like almost no news about this game. Do you guys need help with anything? Voice out so I can carry the words over. The game is very small compared to Clannad VN. 8.27.09

A quick question, do I have to add punctuation marks in lines with these squarish brackets? 「____」 I've been finding a lot of these and I am not sure what to do about it. -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]]
:To answer your question, guidelines like those in the [[Clannad:Guidelines|Clannad project]] haven't been established yet. I suppose some of it should be agreed on in the near future. Personally, I change hook(Japanese) brackets to double quotation marks, and I usually end the text inside them with a full stop, comma, question mark, exclamation mark or three full stops in a row(ellipses), as I think without any of that, it would be poor English. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 16:20, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

How many translators do we have? (Besides Gman.) -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] March 18
:Well, not many, that's for sure. Basically two - There's this Gman you mentioned, and me, and I work rather slow. [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] seems to have been semi-active recently, but I don't know if he's done any real translation work. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] is someone who popped up a month ago or so, but it doesn't look like he's done much translation work the last few weeks. Edit: Forgot my signature. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:16, 19 March 2010 (UTC)

I referred [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]], he works at a slow pace however very accurate translation and requires little corrections. There is another translator I stole from another project(MUHHAHAHHA), however he/she won't begin any translation work until beginning/middle of April.
By the way Nightjumper, if possible, could you drop whatever SEEN you are currently translating and do seen 0712 instead? I don't know if you heard from RR yet, but our goal right now is to release a partial patch of seens up to 0808 to regain supporters. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 19 March 2010
:I finished 0711 just yesterday, and I was looking at doing 0712 next. So, yes, I will do that one next. By the by, as you can see on my [[User:Nightjumper|userpage]], I usually hang out in #ndt@irc.ppirc.net if you wish to contact me through other means than this talk page. Edit: Keep forgetting my signature.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 14:10, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey! I think Mr4eyeguy is back. Well, judging from the fact that he put his name next to SEEN0810 he's either got some time to kill or no longer MIA. In any case if you read this Mr4eyeguy, welcome back! --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] April 3rd, 2010

I apologize for not being able to translate much until now, but as I told [[User:Karmainall|karmainall]], I am not having much free time and I have to deal with loads of other things. I will try to work as much as I can, but I can assure that I won't lose interest in the project that easily. --[[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] 12 April, 2010

Can I say a word? Is this project still alive? And will all of you translate the 10th Memorial Edition of this visual novel? - BonaQuack Sep 21, 2010
No worries, it's definitely still alive. Rather short-handed at the moment though, as far as I can tell I'm one of the only two translators here. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm thinking that given how long this is taking, it might be a while before we even get to consider the 10th Memorial edition. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 24, 2010
:BonaQuack, Key memorial box contain a unique never before encountered cryptic "key". To my knowledge no hacker has yet cracked the lock or is interested enough to attempt it. If you find a hacker who has the ability then we will consider it. Otherwise, do not hope the impossible. Panzer, thanks for your hard work. ---[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] September 24, 2010

Unfortunately, I don't know anyone who good at hacking. But, about the project, how many percent have you translated till now? -Bonaquack Sep 26th, 2010

The project, just based on what I've gone through on the registration page, looks to be around 30-40% done, so it'll be awhile. I'm currently trying to continue translating, but I am by no means an expert, so I'm going to need a dedicated QC'er to help out. The H-scenes are more difficult to translate partly due to the emotions being needed to convey during them, and the wording they use to explain their actions differ from normal activity. I'll take a shot at it, but going to need someone to go through it for correspondence, to make sure it's translated correctly and/or conveys the right idea. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] 19 October 2010

== Looking for translators? ==

Gents, where do I send potential supporters/fans patiently waiting for this game to be translated? I know all of you are doing this on your own free time and I'd like to post or write my support for you somewhere. Or perhaps, this is the way to do it? Anyhow I don't want to get too spammy with this post, but guys-thanks and keep going! Tomoyo is my favorite heroine from the Clannad VN and I'm looking forward to reading this story. I'd help if I could, but I only know elementary Japanese and I doubt it's sufficient to take on a project such as this.
-[[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] July 17 2010

Is the project still looking for translators? I'm willing to help out if it is. I can read Japanese fairly well and although I have not played Tomoyo After, I have played Clannad. [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]] 14:38, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Watching this page, no real translation effort has been done in months, and to my knowledge no translator is actively working on this at the minute, so yes, and work that you would like to do would be greatly welcomed.

If you are still looking for translators ill gladly help im fluent in Japanese and English so i would love to join you guys in this effort so let me know what you think and i would love to help Kyoske-username

Kyoske. drop into the IRC chat room irc.ppirc.net in room #ndt look for Nightjumper or RadicalR. talk to them and they should provide you with more information...

sorry to sound dumb but when i go there theres just a big 9. -kyoske

irc://irc.ppirc.net/ndt - try that. - SirShadow
(also lol the 9 is because Cirno is all over the server...)
:You don't need our permission to translate. This is an open wiki project, after all. Although, we haven't set any translation guidelines as of yet. But feel free to drop in and ask any questions you may have.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:50, 28 March 2010 (UTC)

== Project status? ==

Is this project still alive or are there other people that translated this VN themselves?

... Seemingly, this project has died --[[Special:Contributions/82.168.72.39|82.168.72.39]] 05:52, 21 December 2009 (UTC)

The project is not dead; It's just stalled at the moment. I've just gone through the progress so far, and quite a large chunk of the first translation work is done(I'd say about 30-40%). --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 17:10, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
:I'm really looking forward to playing. I wish my Japanese was better and I could help. --[[Special:Contributions/67.170.35.129|67.170.35.129]] 20:15, 26 January 2010 (UTC)

It seems like it's been stalled for quite some time...like half a year or more. Hope someone comes along and revives this. I'd help if i could, but i don't know one word of japanese, so yea...[[Special:Contributions/211.30.198.99|211.30.198.99]] 08:54, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
:''Been'' is the keyword here. It's not stalled at the moment, although it's progressing slowly for the time being.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 15:27, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

Looks like things are moving again! I look forward to playing this game. --[[Special:Contributions/71.227.233.247|71.227.233.247]] 12:24, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey.. if you guys need a proof-reader to check the scripts for Typo's and grammatical errors that have occurred when translating from Japanese to English. feel free to contact me, I'm usually sitting around in the chatroom under SirShadow (give or take an s on the end)...I don't know a drop of Japanese and what japanese i have picked up is from novels and anime etc. however my english is pretty good. and i can usually fix up sentences that have errors when translated into English. like missing commas or typo's. it might be a small contribution but every little bit helps right?
:Add me on MSN if you have (karmainall@NOSPAM hotmail DOT NOSPAM com) -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] March 28th

So, this patch will be for the PS2 or for the PC version?
Thanks for the work guys
:I believe this will be for the PC version - [[Special:Contributions/195.241.232.78|195.241.232.78]] 19:21, 29 April 2010 (UTC)

I feel so useless I can't tranlsate anything but I really want this project to finish. How many tranlsators total are there, and if given an estimate how long would this take to finish if no other translators join?

I can't translate whatsoever but I'm very good in english grammar and sentence structure so if you need a proff reader I open. I'd just need instructions on how to do so because I'm new to this. -Kikyo423

Honestly, it looks like the project is around 30-40% completed, so it looks to be awhile. Lots of QC needed. I'm currently trying to continue translating starting from the beginning (QC'ing SEEN0628) and moving up. Currently on SEEN0629. Those H-scenes are a pain, lol. Need someone to QC for what's been translated so far. I'll try to get the SEEN completed by tonight. Anyone that would like to correspond with me (it'd help a lot), contact me at abstractbluesky@gmail.com or msg me in the #Baka-Tsuki irc channel if I'm there. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] 09:40, 19 October 2010 (HST)

Talk:Tomoyo After

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== RadicalR Resigns ==
'''RadicalR, the project admin has dropped the project.
August 10th, 2010'''

Am I the only one who regularly checks this page for updates and was disappointed to learn that it had been dropped? I would really like to see the game translated well, but I lack the skills (I think) necessary to help do this. Please, reconsider and continue the project as soon as you can!
-Romdeau Aug. 29 2010
:Find us an active translator and I'll see to it that RadicalR continues. [[User:karmainall|karmainall]] Aug 29, 2010

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english(http://blicky.net/ta/index2.cgi?p=1). Secondly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Thirdly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have a product worth their time. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -karmainall September 12, 2010

I'll do my best to find one then.
-Romdeau Aug 30, 2010

Hi. I heard this project needed translators. I've been learning Japanese for a few years, so if it's okay I'd like to be able to help. I've never done anything of this sort before though, so it'd be nice if someone could tell me how and where to start. Thanks in advance! ~Sept 1, 2010

Is anyone here? Please respond. ~Sept 2, 2010

Try contacting karmainall via e-mail by clicking on his username. What's your name?
-Romdeau Sep 2, 2010

My username here is PanzerElement. Is karmainall the person behind this project? ~Sept 3, 2010

Not exactly, but I think he can get the horse moving again. Glad to see a potential translator interested in this project, try e-mailing him! If not, post on the baka-tsuki forums and see if you can get a response there. http://www.baka-tsuki.org/forums/viewforum.php?f=40
-Romdeau Sep 3, 2010

I've emailed him already, just waiting for a response now. Just a question, how dead has this been anyway? There are others who want to get it going again, right? I'd hate to devote a lot of time to this only to see it continue to stall. Though, that said, I'm willing to translate however much it takes, since I need the practic- okay, who am I kidding, I just want to see more of Tomoyo-chan :3
~Sept 3, 2010
As for actual translators? Maybe, but you're the only one that has expressed interest in a good while. I've been following this project since June and it would be painful to watch this project just die. So know that you have at least 1 guy out there that supports you! If enough gets translated, I'll gladly proofread it as well.
-Romdeau Sept. 3, 2010

Good to know I'm not the only one interested. Still though, I'm surprised that there aren't more people aboard. Given the popularity of Clannad, shouldn't that also extend over to Tomoyo After? I've got nothing against being the only translator, but it'd probably be better for overall quality if there was someone more experienced helping too. All I'm used to doing is textbook Japanese, so it's likely I'll get some things off.
~Sept 3, 2010

I can't translate but if needed I am more than willing to proofread and edit the script to a reasonable standard, if I'm ever needed for that then feel free to email me at zorbonalien@hotmail.co.uk I've been following this project since 2008 and would hate for it to just shut down. - Zorbon Sep. 5th

So basically it looks like we are just waiting for "karmainall" to work his magic and press magic green button so RadicalR will start caring about this project again. I don't see why he (RadicalR) should manage it, as it doesn't seem he wasn't putting very much effort into keeping the project alive. Anyhow, I hope he gets around to it soon.
-Romdeau Sept 6 2010

I have e-mailed several EX members of this project to reconsider working on it, I hope to hear back from them and to see who (if anyone) is interested in seeing this project to completion. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 6, 7:51 pm

I've never dropped the project. I'm one of the translators and came after receiving your e-mail. It happens that I, and all translators, are really busy with other stuff. As for me, I am rarely having time to even check how this project is going. The project was dropped but I was still working on it, translating some lines when I had time. At any rate, I dropped by to tell you guys that even if I'm busy with other matters, I'm still interested in this and don't want this to die. However, we MUST get more people to work. ESPECIALLY translators. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 7

Potential translator here. Just waiting for the green light now. I emailed karmainall a while ago, still haven't gotten any kind of response. I don't have much going on right now, so I've got as much time to spend on this as needed. -PanzerElement Sept 7, 2010

Its a wiki no need to wait for a permission just [[Tomoyo_After:Registration_Page|register]] the SEEN you would like to translate and do it. - As long as the translation isnt too bad (like in machine translation ;)) there would probably be no problem. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 21:29, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

True, but what are we supposed to think when the person heading this project suddenly declares "project dead" and leaves? It's quite demoralizing, and I have not seen much activity on the project itself for quite some time. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 7

As previously said, we are not having much time for translating. However, things would be a little bit easier for everyone if we got more members. Also, even if the project is considered dead, you can continue working on it. There is no problem with that, I guess. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 8

Working on an as dead declared project isnt a problem - as long as there is one left working on it, is it not dead! Only the quality should'nt suffer. Also that first sentence would only mean that the project would need a new Administrator who coordinates the project (as an example to ask the translators if they are still translating or already lost in oblivion.) Also normaly here are only stalled and no dead projects. ;) And stalled is only tagged after 6 to 12 month without translation activity. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 15:15, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Could someone tell me how to get started, then? Where do I get the SEEN files? Sorry if that's a dumb question, it's my first time doing this. -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010

You can see at the [[Tomoyo After:Registration Page|Registration Page]] which SEEN are already taken by other translators and how far their progress ist. The SEEN's are behind the SEEN links. Always the second line needs to get a translation. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:06, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, I see. Thanks. How do you get that hyperlinked name thing? -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010
:The easy way is to click at the sign button up at the edit menu or just write <nowiki>--~~~~</nowiki> (clicking would put that just at the last position of the cursor) --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:25, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

I've begun to read through the translated scenes and editing them so that they sound smoother in English. I am avoiding changing any actual content, and edits I am unsure about I will make sure to leave a note so that a translator can review the line. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8

Is there any way to view what actually happens ingame as the diologue in a SEEN file is played out, aside from maneuvering to that particular scenario in the game? It'd be much easier to have the translated text match up with the action if I could see the action for myself. --[[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Also, since you're looking through the already translated scenes anyway, could you link me to the ones that have obvious need of being reviewed? I'd like to be sure that everything that's supposedly done is done up to standard. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

I have renamed the title of this section to be more accurate. SEEN 0629 has raw parts still (in the H scene), SEEN 0630 and 0701 also need to be looked at. For future reference, I will be leaving notes of SEENS I have read through and edited. SEENS that have already been looked through by an editor will not be touched by me. Panzer, ask EchoMateria (via e-mail) about in game images-he may be able to set you up. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] -Sept. 9

Gotcha. Thanks for the tips, I'll be sure to go through the list sometime. And may I ask, who're the editors? Would that be Echo? [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Look under the project staff to find out who Echo is. As for editors, I'm not sure-I suppose that would be the guys who can read Japanese and English who review the translated scripts. Since I can't read Kanji, I don't qualify-so I'm a proofreader who knows hiragana and katakana. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 10

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, PanzerElement, I didn't see your email due to the fact that I only use my university email now. If you wish to get hold of me in the future please add me on MSN (if you have). Secondly, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english. Thirdly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Lastly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have something worth while for them. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] September 12, 2010

Sounds good, I'll get working on 714-717 then. Also, would it be possible for someone to go in and note in the SEEN files where different choices in the game branch off and rejoin? (i.e. choice at line 345, A goes to 347, B goes to 373, C goes to 401, and they all lead into 435) A full map of every choice and result would be even better. Since I've been trying to follow along in the game as I translate, something like this would make it a lot easier to make sure everything fits within context. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 13, 2010

You can leave 716 to me, as I was previously working on it. If I delay it too much, you can take over the SEEN. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 14, 2010

Halfway done with 714, and a certain degree of inroad on 715 and 717. I've left 716 alone like you asked. I'll upload it all after I'm done, probably going to have 714 done in a few days. Sorry for the slow pace, been fairly busy with school. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 19, 2010

Could someone with access to the game files check line #345 in SEEN0714, or preferably the whole block of horrible google translate-esque translations in the file, and compare it to the original text? I'm having a few issues with comprehending certain things, so I'm thinking it's possible someone incompetant had altered the Japanese text. Thanks in advance. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 25, 2010

Just dropping here to say thank you for everyone working in this project, I was sad when I read it was dead, but I see some future in this now. Sadly I lack the skills to help. Also, PanzerElement, you can check the page's history, this is the first entry: http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tomoyo_After:SEEN0714&oldid=30612 - GBcrazy September 26, 2010

That's exactly what I was looking for. Thanks much. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 27, 2010

== General Discussion ==
Writing at this top so it is more likely to be read. I've only read a few translated SEENS, and I've noticed that every H-scene is significantly worse in translation quality and it appears the "good" translators for personal reasons aren't translating them. The ones I've read definitely could use another look over. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8 2010

What version of the game are you guys planning to work with? There was an old project started by velocity 7 (it doesn't seem as if they are keeping up with it, though), where they were trying to port the PS2 to PC. (You can find the thread for it here: http://forums.novelnews.net/showthread.php?t=16671)

I personally think the PS2 would be more interesting to play, since it is longer and perhaps the ending is more satisfactory. The PC version would still be great though. Thank you very much for your effort guys.

:PS2 Version is better overall, but the ending feels "tagged-on" without the usual Key quality. It feels like Tonokawa (the person who wrote the PS2 add-ons, while Maeda Jun wrote the original) just "tagged it on" to appease fans who want a happy ending. I personally like the PC ending a lot better. It feels a lot more "Key-like" and a lot deeper.
:I'm willing to translate as soon as there's more translators. Though I am obsessed with the game, I won't translate it all myself
:email: stupid1961@hotmail.com

To the guys, translating this: seriously, stop - there are a lot of mistranslations and overall translation quality is pretty low. I'd fixed them for you but it would be easier to start translation from the scratch.

To the guy above this: I realize that my past work on this project is not what I'd call adequate. I'd love to go back and retranslate everything I've done, and continue with translating the rest of the project, but a general lack of time and motivation is keeping me from doing that. Not to mention that this project seems a bit stalled at the moment. I'd love to hear something from the supposed project admin... --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 20:34, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

To Nightjumper: The project isn't stalled. It's just hard to do anything if nobody is translating anything. I've been busy with personal stuff lately so I haven't been able to look for anyone that might be interested in it. If anyone can find someone who might be interested in translating Tomoyo After, please point them to the registration page. Please feel free to contact me on IRC if you have any further questions. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 03:45, 27 February, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be better to do the PC version. The ending honestly feels a bit cheap in the PS2 version. They made a dramatic, sad scene but then the extra ending was added and it felt like they pulled a "lol jk" and invalidated it all. That's just my take. Also, although it is true that the PC version does have less in terms of content, it also happens to be more accessible to everyone. Not everyone has a PS2, but certainly everyone interested in this has a computer.

hey all i just recently finished the clannad vn and found it really enjoyable. im looking forward to the complete translated version of Tomoyo After. i agree that it should be done on pc. good luck and hope yous finish it soon.

The project has been handed over to RadicalR who will be the new project administrator from now on. Please direct all further questions about the project to RadicalR who can be found in #ndt on PPiRC. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 02:29, 6 March, 2009 (UTC)

I am currently looking at the possibilty of allocating time for this project. There's a big possibility that I won't do anything before the spring term is finished. I might look around and use some contacts to see if we can get more people on this. By the way, I'd rather leave translating/writing H-scenes to somebody else. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 10:18, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys! I've been studing Japanese for about 4 years now and this project is something I'm really interested in :D If you don't mind some machine-translated kanji and explaining to me how to work this stupid RLdev thing I'd be glad to help. Just seeing what edits I can make atm
[Seitsuki]

Tomoyo After Memorial Edition All-age version had been released. If you don't like translate H-scene, so may I help you upload new seen files below old files? --[[User:Midishero|Midishero]] 15:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I also have Tomoyo After ~ Memorial Edition. I played through it and I confirm there are no h-scenes but has more content and they implemented Tomoya's voice. If you need it just post on here. Where is Tomoyo After's % at now? There's like almost no news about this game. Do you guys need help with anything? Voice out so I can carry the words over. The game is very small compared to Clannad VN. 8.27.09

A quick question, do I have to add punctuation marks in lines with these squarish brackets? 「____」 I've been finding a lot of these and I am not sure what to do about it. -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]]
:To answer your question, guidelines like those in the [[Clannad:Guidelines|Clannad project]] haven't been established yet. I suppose some of it should be agreed on in the near future. Personally, I change hook(Japanese) brackets to double quotation marks, and I usually end the text inside them with a full stop, comma, question mark, exclamation mark or three full stops in a row(ellipses), as I think without any of that, it would be poor English. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 16:20, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

How many translators do we have? (Besides Gman.) -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] March 18
:Well, not many, that's for sure. Basically two - There's this Gman you mentioned, and me, and I work rather slow. [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] seems to have been semi-active recently, but I don't know if he's done any real translation work. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] is someone who popped up a month ago or so, but it doesn't look like he's done much translation work the last few weeks. Edit: Forgot my signature. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:16, 19 March 2010 (UTC)

I referred [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]], he works at a slow pace however very accurate translation and requires little corrections. There is another translator I stole from another project(MUHHAHAHHA), however he/she won't begin any translation work until beginning/middle of April.
By the way Nightjumper, if possible, could you drop whatever SEEN you are currently translating and do seen 0712 instead? I don't know if you heard from RR yet, but our goal right now is to release a partial patch of seens up to 0808 to regain supporters. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 19 March 2010
:I finished 0711 just yesterday, and I was looking at doing 0712 next. So, yes, I will do that one next. By the by, as you can see on my [[User:Nightjumper|userpage]], I usually hang out in #ndt@irc.ppirc.net if you wish to contact me through other means than this talk page. Edit: Keep forgetting my signature.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 14:10, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey! I think Mr4eyeguy is back. Well, judging from the fact that he put his name next to SEEN0810 he's either got some time to kill or no longer MIA. In any case if you read this Mr4eyeguy, welcome back! --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] April 3rd, 2010

I apologize for not being able to translate much until now, but as I told [[User:Karmainall|karmainall]], I am not having much free time and I have to deal with loads of other things. I will try to work as much as I can, but I can assure that I won't lose interest in the project that easily. --[[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] 12 April, 2010

Can I say a word? Is this project still alive? And will all of you translate the 10th Memorial Edition of this visual novel? - BonaQuack Sep 21, 2010
No worries, it's definitely still alive. Rather short-handed at the moment though, as far as I can tell I'm one of the only two translators here. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm thinking that given how long this is taking, it might be a while before we even get to consider the 10th Memorial edition. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 24, 2010
:BonaQuack, Key memorial box contain a unique never before encountered cryptic "key". To my knowledge no hacker has yet cracked the lock or is interested enough to attempt it. If you find a hacker who has the ability then we will consider it. Otherwise, do not hope the impossible. Panzer, thanks for your hard work. ---[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] September 24, 2010

Unfortunately, I don't know anyone who good at hacking. But, about the project, how many percent have you translated till now? -Bonaquack Sep 26th, 2010

== Looking for translators? ==

Gents, where do I send potential supporters/fans patiently waiting for this game to be translated? I know all of you are doing this on your own free time and I'd like to post or write my support for you somewhere. Or perhaps, this is the way to do it? Anyhow I don't want to get too spammy with this post, but guys-thanks and keep going! Tomoyo is my favorite heroine from the Clannad VN and I'm looking forward to reading this story. I'd help if I could, but I only know elementary Japanese and I doubt it's sufficient to take on a project such as this.
-[[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] July 17 2010

Is the project still looking for translators? I'm willing to help out if it is. I can read Japanese fairly well and although I have not played Tomoyo After, I have played Clannad. [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]] 14:38, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Watching this page, no real translation effort has been done in months, and to my knowledge no translator is actively working on this at the minute, so yes, and work that you would like to do would be greatly welcomed.

If you are still looking for translators ill gladly help im fluent in Japanese and English so i would love to join you guys in this effort so let me know what you think and i would love to help Kyoske-username

Kyoske. drop into the IRC chat room irc.ppirc.net in room #ndt look for Nightjumper or RadicalR. talk to them and they should provide you with more information...

sorry to sound dumb but when i go there theres just a big 9. -kyoske

irc://irc.ppirc.net/ndt - try that. - SirShadow
(also lol the 9 is because Cirno is all over the server...)
:You don't need our permission to translate. This is an open wiki project, after all. Although, we haven't set any translation guidelines as of yet. But feel free to drop in and ask any questions you may have.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:50, 28 March 2010 (UTC)

== Project status? ==

Is this project still alive or are there other people that translated this VN themselves?

... Seemingly, this project has died --[[Special:Contributions/82.168.72.39|82.168.72.39]] 05:52, 21 December 2009 (UTC)

The project is not dead; It's just stalled at the moment. I've just gone through the progress so far, and quite a large chunk of the first translation work is done(I'd say about 30-40%). --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 17:10, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
:I'm really looking forward to playing. I wish my Japanese was better and I could help. --[[Special:Contributions/67.170.35.129|67.170.35.129]] 20:15, 26 January 2010 (UTC)

It seems like it's been stalled for quite some time...like half a year or more. Hope someone comes along and revives this. I'd help if i could, but i don't know one word of japanese, so yea...[[Special:Contributions/211.30.198.99|211.30.198.99]] 08:54, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
:''Been'' is the keyword here. It's not stalled at the moment, although it's progressing slowly for the time being.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 15:27, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

Looks like things are moving again! I look forward to playing this game. --[[Special:Contributions/71.227.233.247|71.227.233.247]] 12:24, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey.. if you guys need a proof-reader to check the scripts for Typo's and grammatical errors that have occurred when translating from Japanese to English. feel free to contact me, I'm usually sitting around in the chatroom under SirShadow (give or take an s on the end)...I don't know a drop of Japanese and what japanese i have picked up is from novels and anime etc. however my english is pretty good. and i can usually fix up sentences that have errors when translated into English. like missing commas or typo's. it might be a small contribution but every little bit helps right?
:Add me on MSN if you have (karmainall@NOSPAM hotmail DOT NOSPAM com) -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] March 28th

So, this patch will be for the PS2 or for the PC version?
Thanks for the work guys
:I believe this will be for the PC version - [[Special:Contributions/195.241.232.78|195.241.232.78]] 19:21, 29 April 2010 (UTC)

I feel so useless I can't tranlsate anything but I really want this project to finish. How many tranlsators total are there, and if given an estimate how long would this take to finish if no other translators join?

I can't translate whatsoever but I'm very good in english grammar and sentence structure so if you need a proff reader I open. I'd just need instructions on how to do so because I'm new to this. -Kikyo423

Honestly, it looks like the project is around 30-40% completed, so it looks to be awhile. Lots of QC needed. I'm currently trying to continue translating starting from the beginning (QC'ing SEEN0628) and moving up. Currently on SEEN0629. Those H-scenes are a pain, lol. Need someone to QC for what's been translated so far. I'll try to get the SEEN completed by tonight. Anyone that would like to correspond with me (it'd help a lot), contact me at abstractbluesky@gmail.com or msg me in the #Baka-Tsuki irc channel if I'm there. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] 09:40, 19 October 2010 (HST)

Talk:Tomoyo After

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== RadicalR Resigns ==
'''RadicalR, the project admin has dropped the project.
August 10th, 2010'''

Am I the only one who regularly checks this page for updates and was disappointed to learn that it had been dropped? I would really like to see the game translated well, but I lack the skills (I think) necessary to help do this. Please, reconsider and continue the project as soon as you can!
-Romdeau Aug. 29 2010
:Find us an active translator and I'll see to it that RadicalR continues. [[User:karmainall|karmainall]] Aug 29, 2010

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english(http://blicky.net/ta/index2.cgi?p=1). Secondly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Thirdly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have a product worth their time. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -karmainall September 12, 2010

I'll do my best to find one then.
-Romdeau Aug 30, 2010

Hi. I heard this project needed translators. I've been learning Japanese for a few years, so if it's okay I'd like to be able to help. I've never done anything of this sort before though, so it'd be nice if someone could tell me how and where to start. Thanks in advance! ~Sept 1, 2010

Is anyone here? Please respond. ~Sept 2, 2010

Try contacting karmainall via e-mail by clicking on his username. What's your name?
-Romdeau Sep 2, 2010

My username here is PanzerElement. Is karmainall the person behind this project? ~Sept 3, 2010

Not exactly, but I think he can get the horse moving again. Glad to see a potential translator interested in this project, try e-mailing him! If not, post on the baka-tsuki forums and see if you can get a response there. http://www.baka-tsuki.org/forums/viewforum.php?f=40
-Romdeau Sep 3, 2010

I've emailed him already, just waiting for a response now. Just a question, how dead has this been anyway? There are others who want to get it going again, right? I'd hate to devote a lot of time to this only to see it continue to stall. Though, that said, I'm willing to translate however much it takes, since I need the practic- okay, who am I kidding, I just want to see more of Tomoyo-chan :3
~Sept 3, 2010
As for actual translators? Maybe, but you're the only one that has expressed interest in a good while. I've been following this project since June and it would be painful to watch this project just die. So know that you have at least 1 guy out there that supports you! If enough gets translated, I'll gladly proofread it as well.
-Romdeau Sept. 3, 2010

Good to know I'm not the only one interested. Still though, I'm surprised that there aren't more people aboard. Given the popularity of Clannad, shouldn't that also extend over to Tomoyo After? I've got nothing against being the only translator, but it'd probably be better for overall quality if there was someone more experienced helping too. All I'm used to doing is textbook Japanese, so it's likely I'll get some things off.
~Sept 3, 2010

I can't translate but if needed I am more than willing to proofread and edit the script to a reasonable standard, if I'm ever needed for that then feel free to email me at zorbonalien@hotmail.co.uk I've been following this project since 2008 and would hate for it to just shut down. - Zorbon Sep. 5th

So basically it looks like we are just waiting for "karmainall" to work his magic and press magic green button so RadicalR will start caring about this project again. I don't see why he (RadicalR) should manage it, as it doesn't seem he wasn't putting very much effort into keeping the project alive. Anyhow, I hope he gets around to it soon.
-Romdeau Sept 6 2010

I have e-mailed several EX members of this project to reconsider working on it, I hope to hear back from them and to see who (if anyone) is interested in seeing this project to completion. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 6, 7:51 pm

I've never dropped the project. I'm one of the translators and came after receiving your e-mail. It happens that I, and all translators, are really busy with other stuff. As for me, I am rarely having time to even check how this project is going. The project was dropped but I was still working on it, translating some lines when I had time. At any rate, I dropped by to tell you guys that even if I'm busy with other matters, I'm still interested in this and don't want this to die. However, we MUST get more people to work. ESPECIALLY translators. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 7

Potential translator here. Just waiting for the green light now. I emailed karmainall a while ago, still haven't gotten any kind of response. I don't have much going on right now, so I've got as much time to spend on this as needed. -PanzerElement Sept 7, 2010

Its a wiki no need to wait for a permission just [[Tomoyo_After:Registration_Page|register]] the SEEN you would like to translate and do it. - As long as the translation isnt too bad (like in machine translation ;)) there would probably be no problem. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 21:29, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

True, but what are we supposed to think when the person heading this project suddenly declares "project dead" and leaves? It's quite demoralizing, and I have not seen much activity on the project itself for quite some time. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 7

As previously said, we are not having much time for translating. However, things would be a little bit easier for everyone if we got more members. Also, even if the project is considered dead, you can continue working on it. There is no problem with that, I guess. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 8

Working on an as dead declared project isnt a problem - as long as there is one left working on it, is it not dead! Only the quality should'nt suffer. Also that first sentence would only mean that the project would need a new Administrator who coordinates the project (as an example to ask the translators if they are still translating or already lost in oblivion.) Also normaly here are only stalled and no dead projects. ;) And stalled is only tagged after 6 to 12 month without translation activity. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 15:15, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Could someone tell me how to get started, then? Where do I get the SEEN files? Sorry if that's a dumb question, it's my first time doing this. -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010

You can see at the [[Tomoyo After:Registration Page|Registration Page]] which SEEN are already taken by other translators and how far their progress ist. The SEEN's are behind the SEEN links. Always the second line needs to get a translation. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:06, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, I see. Thanks. How do you get that hyperlinked name thing? -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010
:The easy way is to click at the sign button up at the edit menu or just write <nowiki>--~~~~</nowiki> (clicking would put that just at the last position of the cursor) --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:25, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

I've begun to read through the translated scenes and editing them so that they sound smoother in English. I am avoiding changing any actual content, and edits I am unsure about I will make sure to leave a note so that a translator can review the line. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8

Is there any way to view what actually happens ingame as the diologue in a SEEN file is played out, aside from maneuvering to that particular scenario in the game? It'd be much easier to have the translated text match up with the action if I could see the action for myself. --[[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Also, since you're looking through the already translated scenes anyway, could you link me to the ones that have obvious need of being reviewed? I'd like to be sure that everything that's supposedly done is done up to standard. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

I have renamed the title of this section to be more accurate. SEEN 0629 has raw parts still (in the H scene), SEEN 0630 and 0701 also need to be looked at. For future reference, I will be leaving notes of SEENS I have read through and edited. SEENS that have already been looked through by an editor will not be touched by me. Panzer, ask EchoMateria (via e-mail) about in game images-he may be able to set you up. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] -Sept. 9

Gotcha. Thanks for the tips, I'll be sure to go through the list sometime. And may I ask, who're the editors? Would that be Echo? [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Look under the project staff to find out who Echo is. As for editors, I'm not sure-I suppose that would be the guys who can read Japanese and English who review the translated scripts. Since I can't read Kanji, I don't qualify-so I'm a proofreader who knows hiragana and katakana. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 10

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, PanzerElement, I didn't see your email due to the fact that I only use my university email now. If you wish to get hold of me in the future please add me on MSN (if you have). Secondly, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english. Thirdly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Lastly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have something worth while for them. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] September 12, 2010

Sounds good, I'll get working on 714-717 then. Also, would it be possible for someone to go in and note in the SEEN files where different choices in the game branch off and rejoin? (i.e. choice at line 345, A goes to 347, B goes to 373, C goes to 401, and they all lead into 435) A full map of every choice and result would be even better. Since I've been trying to follow along in the game as I translate, something like this would make it a lot easier to make sure everything fits within context. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 13, 2010

You can leave 716 to me, as I was previously working on it. If I delay it too much, you can take over the SEEN. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 14, 2010

Halfway done with 714, and a certain degree of inroad on 715 and 717. I've left 716 alone like you asked. I'll upload it all after I'm done, probably going to have 714 done in a few days. Sorry for the slow pace, been fairly busy with school. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 19, 2010

Could someone with access to the game files check line #345 in SEEN0714, or preferably the whole block of horrible google translate-esque translations in the file, and compare it to the original text? I'm having a few issues with comprehending certain things, so I'm thinking it's possible someone incompetant had altered the Japanese text. Thanks in advance. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 25, 2010

Just dropping here to say thank you for everyone working in this project, I was sad when I read it was dead, but I see some future in this now. Sadly I lack the skills to help. Also, PanzerElement, you can check the page's history, this is the first entry: http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tomoyo_After:SEEN0714&oldid=30612 - GBcrazy September 26, 2010

That's exactly what I was looking for. Thanks much. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 27, 2010

== General Discussion ==
Writing at this top so it is more likely to be read. I've only read a few translated SEENS, and I've noticed that every H-scene is significantly worse in translation quality and it appears the "good" translators for personal reasons aren't translating them. The ones I've read definitely could use another look over. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8 2010

What version of the game are you guys planning to work with? There was an old project started by velocity 7 (it doesn't seem as if they are keeping up with it, though), where they were trying to port the PS2 to PC. (You can find the thread for it here: http://forums.novelnews.net/showthread.php?t=16671)

I personally think the PS2 would be more interesting to play, since it is longer and perhaps the ending is more satisfactory. The PC version would still be great though. Thank you very much for your effort guys.

:PS2 Version is better overall, but the ending feels "tagged-on" without the usual Key quality. It feels like Tonokawa (the person who wrote the PS2 add-ons, while Maeda Jun wrote the original) just "tagged it on" to appease fans who want a happy ending. I personally like the PC ending a lot better. It feels a lot more "Key-like" and a lot deeper.
:I'm willing to translate as soon as there's more translators. Though I am obsessed with the game, I won't translate it all myself
:email: stupid1961@hotmail.com

To the guys, translating this: seriously, stop - there are a lot of mistranslations and overall translation quality is pretty low. I'd fixed them for you but it would be easier to start translation from the scratch.

To the guy above this: I realize that my past work on this project is not what I'd call adequate. I'd love to go back and retranslate everything I've done, and continue with translating the rest of the project, but a general lack of time and motivation is keeping me from doing that. Not to mention that this project seems a bit stalled at the moment. I'd love to hear something from the supposed project admin... --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 20:34, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

To Nightjumper: The project isn't stalled. It's just hard to do anything if nobody is translating anything. I've been busy with personal stuff lately so I haven't been able to look for anyone that might be interested in it. If anyone can find someone who might be interested in translating Tomoyo After, please point them to the registration page. Please feel free to contact me on IRC if you have any further questions. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 03:45, 27 February, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be better to do the PC version. The ending honestly feels a bit cheap in the PS2 version. They made a dramatic, sad scene but then the extra ending was added and it felt like they pulled a "lol jk" and invalidated it all. That's just my take. Also, although it is true that the PC version does have less in terms of content, it also happens to be more accessible to everyone. Not everyone has a PS2, but certainly everyone interested in this has a computer.

hey all i just recently finished the clannad vn and found it really enjoyable. im looking forward to the complete translated version of Tomoyo After. i agree that it should be done on pc. good luck and hope yous finish it soon.

The project has been handed over to RadicalR who will be the new project administrator from now on. Please direct all further questions about the project to RadicalR who can be found in #ndt on PPiRC. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 02:29, 6 March, 2009 (UTC)

I am currently looking at the possibilty of allocating time for this project. There's a big possibility that I won't do anything before the spring term is finished. I might look around and use some contacts to see if we can get more people on this. By the way, I'd rather leave translating/writing H-scenes to somebody else. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 10:18, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys! I've been studing Japanese for about 4 years now and this project is something I'm really interested in :D If you don't mind some machine-translated kanji and explaining to me how to work this stupid RLdev thing I'd be glad to help. Just seeing what edits I can make atm
[Seitsuki]

Tomoyo After Memorial Edition All-age version had been released. If you don't like translate H-scene, so may I help you upload new seen files below old files? --[[User:Midishero|Midishero]] 15:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I also have Tomoyo After ~ Memorial Edition. I played through it and I confirm there are no h-scenes but has more content and they implemented Tomoya's voice. If you need it just post on here. Where is Tomoyo After's % at now? There's like almost no news about this game. Do you guys need help with anything? Voice out so I can carry the words over. The game is very small compared to Clannad VN. 8.27.09

A quick question, do I have to add punctuation marks in lines with these squarish brackets? 「____」 I've been finding a lot of these and I am not sure what to do about it. -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]]
:To answer your question, guidelines like those in the [[Clannad:Guidelines|Clannad project]] haven't been established yet. I suppose some of it should be agreed on in the near future. Personally, I change hook(Japanese) brackets to double quotation marks, and I usually end the text inside them with a full stop, comma, question mark, exclamation mark or three full stops in a row(ellipses), as I think without any of that, it would be poor English. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 16:20, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

How many translators do we have? (Besides Gman.) -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] March 18
:Well, not many, that's for sure. Basically two - There's this Gman you mentioned, and me, and I work rather slow. [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] seems to have been semi-active recently, but I don't know if he's done any real translation work. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] is someone who popped up a month ago or so, but it doesn't look like he's done much translation work the last few weeks. Edit: Forgot my signature. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:16, 19 March 2010 (UTC)

I referred [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]], he works at a slow pace however very accurate translation and requires little corrections. There is another translator I stole from another project(MUHHAHAHHA), however he/she won't begin any translation work until beginning/middle of April.
By the way Nightjumper, if possible, could you drop whatever SEEN you are currently translating and do seen 0712 instead? I don't know if you heard from RR yet, but our goal right now is to release a partial patch of seens up to 0808 to regain supporters. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 19 March 2010
:I finished 0711 just yesterday, and I was looking at doing 0712 next. So, yes, I will do that one next. By the by, as you can see on my [[User:Nightjumper|userpage]], I usually hang out in #ndt@irc.ppirc.net if you wish to contact me through other means than this talk page. Edit: Keep forgetting my signature.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 14:10, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey! I think Mr4eyeguy is back. Well, judging from the fact that he put his name next to SEEN0810 he's either got some time to kill or no longer MIA. In any case if you read this Mr4eyeguy, welcome back! --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] April 3rd, 2010

I apologize for not being able to translate much until now, but as I told [[User:Karmainall|karmainall]], I am not having much free time and I have to deal with loads of other things. I will try to work as much as I can, but I can assure that I won't lose interest in the project that easily. --[[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] 12 April, 2010

Can I say a word? Is this project still alive? And will all of you translate the 10th Memorial Edition of this visual novel? - BonaQuack Sep 21, 2010
No worries, it's definitely still alive. Rather short-handed at the moment though, as far as I can tell I'm one of the only two translators here. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm thinking that given how long this is taking, it might be a while before we even get to consider the 10th Memorial edition. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 24, 2010
:BonaQuack, Key memorial box contain a unique never before encountered cryptic "key". To my knowledge no hacker has yet cracked the lock or is interested enough to attempt it. If you find a hacker who has the ability then we will consider it. Otherwise, do not hope the impossible. Panzer, thanks for your hard work. ---[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] September 24, 2010

Unfortunately, I don't know anyone who good at hacking. But, about the project, how many percent have you translated till now? -Bonaquack Sep 26th, 2010

== Looking for translators? ==

Gents, where do I send potential supporters/fans patiently waiting for this game to be translated? I know all of you are doing this on your own free time and I'd like to post or write my support for you somewhere. Or perhaps, this is the way to do it? Anyhow I don't want to get too spammy with this post, but guys-thanks and keep going! Tomoyo is my favorite heroine from the Clannad VN and I'm looking forward to reading this story. I'd help if I could, but I only know elementary Japanese and I doubt it's sufficient to take on a project such as this.
-[[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] July 17 2010

Is the project still looking for translators? I'm willing to help out if it is. I can read Japanese fairly well and although I have not played Tomoyo After, I have played Clannad. [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]] 14:38, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Watching this page, no real translation effort has been done in months, and to my knowledge no translator is actively working on this at the minute, so yes, and work that you would like to do would be greatly welcomed.

If you are still looking for translators ill gladly help im fluent in Japanese and English so i would love to join you guys in this effort so let me know what you think and i would love to help Kyoske-username

Kyoske. drop into the IRC chat room irc.ppirc.net in room #ndt look for Nightjumper or RadicalR. talk to them and they should provide you with more information...

sorry to sound dumb but when i go there theres just a big 9. -kyoske

irc://irc.ppirc.net/ndt - try that. - SirShadow
(also lol the 9 is because Cirno is all over the server...)
:You don't need our permission to translate. This is an open wiki project, after all. Although, we haven't set any translation guidelines as of yet. But feel free to drop in and ask any questions you may have.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:50, 28 March 2010 (UTC)

== Project status? ==

Is this project still alive or are there other people that translated this VN themselves?

... Seemingly, this project has died --[[Special:Contributions/82.168.72.39|82.168.72.39]] 05:52, 21 December 2009 (UTC)

The project is not dead; It's just stalled at the moment. I've just gone through the progress so far, and quite a large chunk of the first translation work is done(I'd say about 30-40%). --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 17:10, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
:I'm really looking forward to playing. I wish my Japanese was better and I could help. --[[Special:Contributions/67.170.35.129|67.170.35.129]] 20:15, 26 January 2010 (UTC)

It seems like it's been stalled for quite some time...like half a year or more. Hope someone comes along and revives this. I'd help if i could, but i don't know one word of japanese, so yea...[[Special:Contributions/211.30.198.99|211.30.198.99]] 08:54, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
:''Been'' is the keyword here. It's not stalled at the moment, although it's progressing slowly for the time being.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 15:27, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

Looks like things are moving again! I look forward to playing this game. --[[Special:Contributions/71.227.233.247|71.227.233.247]] 12:24, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey.. if you guys need a proof-reader to check the scripts for Typo's and grammatical errors that have occurred when translating from Japanese to English. feel free to contact me, I'm usually sitting around in the chatroom under SirShadow (give or take an s on the end)...I don't know a drop of Japanese and what japanese i have picked up is from novels and anime etc. however my english is pretty good. and i can usually fix up sentences that have errors when translated into English. like missing commas or typo's. it might be a small contribution but every little bit helps right?
:Add me on MSN if you have (karmainall@NOSPAM hotmail DOT NOSPAM com) -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] March 28th

So, this patch will be for the PS2 or for the PC version?
Thanks for the work guys
:I believe this will be for the PC version - [[Special:Contributions/195.241.232.78|195.241.232.78]] 19:21, 29 April 2010 (UTC)

I feel so useless I can't tranlsate anything but I really want this project to finish. How many tranlsators total are there, and if given an estimate how long would this take to finish if no other translators join?

I can't translate whatsoever but I'm very good in english grammar and sentence structure so if you need a proff reader I open. I'd just need instructions on how to do so because I'm new to this. -Kikyo423

Honestly, it looks like the project is around 30-40% completed, so it looks to be awhile. Lots of QC needed. I'm currently trying to continue translating starting from the beginning (QC'ing SEEN0628) and moving up. Currently on SEEN0629. Those H-scenes are a pain, lol. Need someone to QC for what's been translated so far. I'll try to get the SEEN completed by tonight. Anyone that would like to correspond with me (it'd help a lot), contact me at abstractbluesky@gmail.com or msg me in the #Baka-Tsuki irc channel if I'm there.