https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=188.74.119.102 2026-05-07T09:09:50Z User contributions MediaWiki 1.43.1 https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Campione!:Volume_1_Chapter1&diff=123917 2011-12-03T16:25:03Z

<p>188.74.119.102: </p> <hr /> <div>Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting!<br /> <br /> If you think there is anything wrong with my edits please let me know.<br /> <br /> Some suggestions I have:<br /> <br /> For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san.<br /> For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis. <br /> Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.--Diss<br /> <br /> --------<br /> Thanks! I thought that no one would care editing a sole teaser project. I really appreciate your help.<br /> <br /> [Old Lady] can be trasnlated in [Rokifujin], but not obaa-san or such (at least what I got from Google Translate. I'm translating from Chinese.)<br /> <br /> As for [Female Wolf], from my little knowledge of kanas, it is read as [めろう]。I&lt;m not sure though. [[User:Kira0802|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802|Talk]]) 20:24, 1 August 2011 (UCT)<br /> <br /> And for [Capital of lilies] I put it like this because there is '都', which means, literally, 'capital'.<br /> <br /> == Diavolo Rosso ==<br /> <br /> While surfing JCafe, I saw that Dark red Devil could be 'italianized' as 'Diavolo Rosso'. What do you guys think? - [[User:Kira0802|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802|Talk]]) 17:02, 3 August 2011 (UCT)<br /> <br /> I like it! I'm all for Italianizing stuff. Maybe you should just put a footnote the first time you refer to Erika as 'Diavolo Rosso' saying that it means Dark Red Devil in Italian.--Diss<br /> <br /> --------<br /> <br /> There's several missing &quot; in dialogues. Is it intentional? [[User:Castor212|Castor212]] 09:38, 19 August 2011 (CDT)<br /> <br /> ==Grammar==<br /> Honestly, does anyone actually edit for grammar? I can understand that the translator might not have great grammar (I'm referring more to punctuation than word order and such), but this is really sub-par. It's on the level of mediocre fanfiction. Someone should take the time to edit it. There's a large number of errors regarding commas and quotation marks. Also, thoughts should be italicized. [[Special:Contributions/188.74.119.102|188.74.119.102]] 10:25, 3 December 2011 (CST)</div>

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