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<p>24.212.218.143: /* Editing */</p> <hr /> <div>===Editing===<br /> <br /> Just a few questions.<br /> <br /> I think &quot;sharp-tongued response&quot; is pretty awkward. If possible, changing them to something else would be preferable. Does anyone have any ideas? It's along the lines of a snarky reply or a sarcastic jab, right?<br /> <br /> As well, the usage of 'companion'. It feels a bit strange in the text. I feel &quot;friend&quot; would generally suffice. Is it a translation of &quot;nakama&quot; into Chinese back into English? --[[User:Michpig|Michpig]] ([[User talk:Michpig|talk]]) 10:07, 18 September 2012 (CDT)<br /> <br /> Also, I was wondering whether the original had the narrator (Taichi) skipping back and forth between third and first person. The inconsistency is somewhat glaring and I reaaaally want to correct it. - edit - apparently the author is just inconsistent.<br /> <br /> Also, like Chapter 7, I'm gonna do a run through of the entire chapter. I feel somewhat bad doing so, so I suppose I'll upload the big changes onto this discussion page as well once I get the chance. --[[User:Michpig|Michpig]] ([[User talk:Michpig|talk]]) 11:18, 19 September 2012 (CDT)<br /> <br /> I don't have permission to edit, but you should know that in the first paragraph after the page break symbol, &quot;the days past&quot; should be &quot;the days passed&quot;. -Anonymous</div>

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