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Talk:Campione!:Volume 1 Chapter2

2011-10-05T06:46:09Z

67.174.216.108: Created page with "Medusa was defeated by Perseus, not Hercules! I hate it when authors mess up on their facts. The author needs to take a page out of Tom Clancy and his multipage explanations that..."

Medusa was defeated by Perseus, not Hercules! I hate it when authors mess up on their facts. The author needs to take a page out of Tom Clancy and his multipage explanations that are factually correct or hypothetically plausible.

User talk:Desodus

2011-04-27T00:27:32Z

67.174.216.108:

Thanks for all your work! We really appreciate it!

Zero no Tsukaima:Volume13 Chapter3

2011-04-03T17:59:36Z

67.174.216.108: Fixed glaring spelling an capitalization errors

===Chapter 13: Aboard the Ostland===

"This is an opportunity to recover our honor..." yelled Guiche as he ordered the members of the Water Spirit corps to line up.

"Uohhhhh!..." the ten boys raised a scream.

"Our honor has been injured by a sad incident.... but! God has not forgotten about us, her highness the princes has given us a chance to restore our honor"

Cheers boiled up loudly again

Next to a kind of with that was inspired and exhausted said "Then Captain, please tell everybody about this grand mission"

Two nights ago, Reynal had brought a direct order from her highness

"E...ejm......e.... today is a shiny day and the sun blesses us in this starting journey..."

"forget about the greetings and tell us the princess orders already"

nervous from Saito´s statement Guiche continued,

"Well then I'll speak. Mr. Guiche d´ Gramont and Mr. Saito chevalier d´ Hiraga. Please escort Her Majesty the Princess's court lady, Miss Louise d´la Valiere and magic academy´s miss Tifannia Westwood to Romalia to make use of the empire union force at the double."

"Listen! We are to protect theese ladys even at the cost of our lives, understood?!"

said Guiche in an imperative tone, and the members of the knight corps looking at the sky cried out loud overjoyed .

Leaning against the wall, Louise looked from afar at the scene with Mr Colbert who was trying to move the Ostland with Kirche glued to him. A little blue haired girl, Tabitha, who saw them as well.

"They tell you what to do but they don't tell you how.." said Kirche in a shocked voice.

"They woldn´t stand a chance whithout the ostland would they?"

Dai Densetsu no Yūsha no Densetsu:Volume 1 Intro

2011-02-26T01:35:12Z

67.174.216.108: /* Kiefer Knolles */

==Character Introduction==

====Ryner Lute====
Possesses a special type of cursed eyes known as the '''Alpha Stigma''', capable of wielding strong magic. Basically a lethargic, unmotivated individual.

====Ferris Eris====
Ryner's partner. An expert swordswoman with unparallel beauty. Loves [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dango dango], a believer of the God of Dango.

===Roland Empire===

====Sion Astal====
Originally a prince born of a commoner mistress, the hero who spearheaded a revolution, and the current King of Roland who is well-liked by his people.

====Lucile Eris====
Ferris's elder brother, the head of the Eris family that for generations has been tasked to serve as personal guard to the King of Roland.

====Miran Froaude====
Sion's close aide. Works in the shadows, undertakes covert missions and any dark deeds.

====Claugh Klom====
Grand Field Marshal overseeing the whole of Roland's army.

====Noa Ehn====
Princess of Estabul which has merged with Roland.

====Milk Callad====
Ryner's childhood friend, employed in the military.

====Kiefer Knolles====
Former spy for Estabul. Friend of Ryner at the military academy. Currently confined in Gastark.

====Riura Luteluu====
Self-proclaimed to be the father of Ryner. True identity unknown.

===Gastark Empire===

====Refal Edia====
Single-eyed King of the fast expanding Gastark Empire.

====Lir Orla, Sui Orla, Kuu Orla====
Agents of Gastark. Ryner and company had encountered them before.

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Talk:Monogatari Series:Kizumonogatari/Koyomi Vamp 002

2011-02-20T03:13:41Z

67.174.216.108:

Maybe some errors in the translation here?

She was in her '''school uniform'''.
It hasn't changed at all. Her skirt was '''ten centimeters''' long.

and there too: The front part of Hanekawa's '''slightly long, ten-centimeter''' pleated skirt had blown over.

Maybe it's just me beeing prude or something but ten centimeters is pretty damn short! Anyway, nice job with the translation. I like it alot. Thanks

there is no way the skirt is 10 cm. that wouldn't even cover a person's underware. it's like 3, 4 inches.