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Talk:The Longing Of Shiina Ryo:Volume1 Chapter 1: Ryo

2010-10-07T09:31:05Z

99.60.103.180: YES! MORE!

This story is very good. Please continue it into a published novel!

There are some noun/verb agreement errors here and there, but overall there are few errors.

More Kouma!

Talk:Sekai no Kiki Hamekurumeku!:Volume 1 Chapter 1

2010-09-25T19:58:57Z

99.60.103.180: amusing title

Hmm, is anyone going to continue this? It seems amusing.

Talk:Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume6 Chapter6

2010-06-15T23:15:51Z

99.60.103.180: check

“By talks? But would they not eat us and listen to us? They’re hungry.”

Should probably be "By talks? But would they not eat us rather than listen to us? They’re hungry."

Talk:Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume6 Chapter5

2010-06-15T22:46:28Z

99.60.103.180: check please

"It might bring misfortunate to my city sometime, but this is different"

"It might bring misfortune to my city" sounds better.

I do not have novel, so I am not certain if "...to my city sometime" should be "...to my city at some time" as in a point in the future. Or if "...to my city sometime" should be "...to my city sometimes".

Talk:Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume6 Chapter3

2010-06-15T22:12:27Z

99.60.103.180: missing an article in sentence

"I have good grasp of the current situation.”

should be

"I have a good grasp of the current situation.”