https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=BEE 2026-04-09T21:48:51Z User contributions MediaWiki 1.43.1 https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Toradora!:Volume10_Chapter3&diff=186856 2012-09-08T21:03:16Z

<p>BEE: Awkward wording in the first sentence, don&#039;t know what the original meaning was.</p> <hr /> <div>The first line is very awkward, but I am not sure what the original meant. The current text is &quot;&lt;i&gt;There were still a little bit of snow ..., but they were already stained ...&lt;/i&gt;&quot;<br /> I can see two possible rewrites:&lt;br&gt;<br /> There were &lt;i&gt;still little bits of snow&lt;/i&gt;..., but they were already stained...&lt;br&gt;<br /> The second is:&lt;br&gt;<br /> There was &lt;i&gt;still a little bit of snow&lt;/i&gt;..., but &lt;i&gt;it was&lt;/i&gt; already stained...&lt;br&gt;</div>

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