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// Resources for SEEN0720.TXT

// #character '朋也'
#character 'Tomoya'

// #character '子供'
#character 'Child'

// #character '河南子'
#character 'Kanako'

// #character '鷹文'
#character 'Takafumi'

// #character '智代'
#character 'Tomoyo'

// <0000> ７月２０日(火)
<0000> July 20th (Tue)

// <0001> 炎天下。
<0001> Under the blazing heat,

// <0002> 陽射しは厳しく、じりじりと肌を焦がす。
<0002> The sunshine relentlessly and slowly burns through my skin.

// <0003> \{朋也}「…あっちー」
<0003> \{Tomoya}"...Damn, it's hot."

// <0004> 止めどなく流れ落ちる汗を、首に巻いたタオルで顔を拭う。
<0004> As the sweat kept on flooding, I wiped it off with the towel that was wrapped around my neck.

// <0005> 野積みしてある回収品を整理する仕事は、盛夏には最も辛い作業だ。
<0005> Sorting out the stacks of recyclable items is the hardest work to do in the mid-summer.

// <0006> 蝉の鳴き声に混じって甲高い声が響く。
<0006> I hear a high-pitched voice along with the chirps of the cicadas.

// <0007> \{朋也}「またか」
<0007> \{Tomoya} "Not again..."

// <0008> \{朋也}「ほらほら、危ないから入っちゃ駄目だぞ」
<0008> \{Tomoya} "Hey kids, it's dangerous to play around here!"

// <0009> 声のする方へ向けて言い放つ。
<0009> I yell towards the voice.

// <0010> \{子供}「うわー、にげろー」
<0010> \{Child} "Oh no, he found us!"

// <0011> 一目散に逃げていく。
<0011> The kids scattered as they ran away.

// <0012> ゴミの山は面白いのか、時々子供が入り込んでは遊び場にしている。
<0012> For some reason kids find the pile of dump interesting. Sometimes, they go in there and make a playground out of it.
<0012> For some reason, kids seem to find the pile of trash interesting. Sometimes, they go in there and make it into a playground.

// <0013> 見つけては追い出しているのだが、後を絶つことはなかった。
<0013> I kick them out every time I see them playing, but that never seems to stop them.

// <0014> 戻ろうとして、ふと足を止めた。
<0014> I stopped to think before I continued to work.

// <0015> 時刻は昼前、曜日は平日。
<0015> Right now, it's noon on a weekday.

// <0016> こんな時間に小学生が遊んでいるわけは…
<0016> There's no way that students would be playing at a time like this...

// <0017> \{朋也}（あ…そうか）
<0017> \{Tomoya}（Oh... right.）

// <0018> …夏休みなんだ。
<0018> ...They are on summer break.

// <0019> ぐうたらと過ごしていた昔を思い出す。
<0019> Reminds me of the times that I spend doing nothing.

// <0020> 戻りたいとは思わなかった。
<0020> Never in my mind that I wanted to go back to those times.

// <0021> 今がそれほど悪いわけじゃない。
<0021> It's not so bad right now.

// <0022> 慎ましく、小さくても、がんばって生きていたから。
<0022> No matter how small the effort was, I kept on living strong.

// <0023> \{河南子}「よし、いざダンジョンへっ」
<0023> \{Kanako} "All right. To the Dungeon!"

// <0024> 河南子が唐突に切り出す。
<0024> Kanako suddenly brings up a subject.

// <0025> \{朋也}「は？」
<0025> \{Tomoya} "Huh?"

// <0026> \{河南子}「夏休みだよっ、ダンジョンにいかなくて他に何すんだよっ」
<0026> \{Kanako} "It's summer break. What else can we do other than venturing into the Dungeon!"

// <0027> \{朋也}「ダンジョンってなんだよ」
<0027> \{Tomoya} "What do you mean 'Dungeon'?"

// <0028> \{河南子}「ロールプレイングゲームの舞台」
<0028> \{Kanako} "A setting for our Role Playing Game."

// <0029> \{朋也}「どこにあんだよ」
<0029> \{Tomoya} "Well, where is it?"

// <0030> \{河南子}「そのパソコンの中に」
<0030> \{Kanako} "Inside the computer."

// <0031> 鷹文のパソコンを指さす河南子。
<0031> Kanako points at Takafumi's computer.

// <0032> \{鷹文}「えぇっ？」
<0032> \{Takafumi} "Whaaat?"

// <0033> \{河南子}「ＲＰＧっぽいの動かしてただろ、はい、河南見ました」
<0033> \{Kanako} "You were working on something like an RPG. I've seen you do it."

// <0034> \{鷹文}「あれは、こういうこともできるっていうプレゼン用で、遊ぶためのものじゃないし…」
<0034> \{Takafumi} "That's just a prototype to show what it can do. It's not for actual playing..."

// <0035> \{鷹文}「キャラもＡＩでしか動かないし…」
<0035> \{Takafumi} "Also, the characters can only be controlled by the AI..."

// <0036> \{河南子}「え？　遊べないの？」
<0036> \{Kanako} "What? It's unplayable?"

// <0037> \{鷹文}「動くっちゃ、動くけど…中身がないんだよ、ストーリーとか」
<0037> \{Takafumi} "I mean sure it works... but it has nothing like a plot in it."

// <0038> \{河南子}「ストーリー…シナリオってこと？」
<0038> \{Kanako} "A plot... you mean like a scenario?"

// <0039> \{鷹文}「すでに嫌な予感がするよ」
<0039> \{Takafumi} "I already have bad feeling about this..."

// <0040> \{河南子}「あたしをシナリオライターとして雇え」
<0040> \{Kanako} "Hire me as a scenario writer."

// <0041> \{鷹文}「金取るのかよっ」
<0041> \{Takafumi} "I have to pay you!?"

// <0042> \{河南子}「ぜってー面白くするからさっ、売れるよ、ドラクエなんて目じゃないからっ」
<0042> \{Kanako} "I swear I'll make it interesting. It'll sell a lot. You won't be able to compare with Dragon Quest."

// <0043> \{鷹文}「絶対内輪受けしかしない、わけわかんないの書くような気がするよ…」
<0043> \{Takafumi} "I have a feeling she will write a ridiculous story full of inside jokes."

// <0044> \{河南子}「そんなことないよ、メジャーなの書くからさ、しかも泣けるのっ、四国中の人たちが泣いた！って銘打てるぐらいのっ」
<0044> \{Kanako} "No way. I'll write something big. One that'll make you cry. It'll be remembered for making the whole Shikoku region cry!"

// <0045> \{鷹文}「なんでそんな局地的なんだよ…」
<0045> \{Takafumi} "Why that region..."

// <0046> \{河南子}「ね、ＲＰＧ～」
<0046> \{Kanako} "Come on. Let's do it."

// <0047> \{鷹文}「う～ん…」
<0047> \{Takafumi} "Hmmmm..."

// <0048> \{河南子}「あんたもしたいよね？」
<0048> \{Kanako} "You wanna play it too, right?"

// <0049> 俺も味方につけようと、輝かせた顔をこちらに向ける。
<0049> Her face lights up, as she tries to get me on her side."

// <0050> したい
<0050> Want to Play

// <0051> したくない
<0051> Don't want to Play

// <0052> \{朋也}「したい」
<0052> \{Tomoya} "Yeah, I want to play."

// <0053> \{河南子}「ほら、みろー！！　みんなしたいんだよ、このばーーーかっ！！」
<0053> \{Kanako} "See, I told you!! Everyone wants to play, you stupid idiot!!"

// <0054> \{鷹文}「なんでそこまでくそみそに言われるのかよくわかんないけど、にぃちゃんまでしたいって言うんなら、仕方ないね…」
<0054> \{Takafumi} "I don't know why I gotta be insulted, but if you want to play it then I guess I have no choice..."

// <0055> \{河南子}「よし、いざ、ダンジョンへ！」
<0055> \{Kanako} "Right! To the Dungeon!"

// <0056> \{鷹文}「いや、まだ準備できてないから」
<0056> \{Takafumi} "No, I mean it's still not ready yet..."

// <0057> \{朋也}「したくない」
<0057> \{Tomoya} "No, I don't want to play."

// <0058> \{河南子}「なんでだよー、ＲＰＧいいじゃん、ＲＰＧー」
<0058> \{Kanako} "Why? Come on, it's an RPG! R~P~G~"

// <0059> \{朋也}「なんでそんなにＲＰＧにこだわるんだ、こいつ」
<0059> \{Tomoya} "Why she is so into RPGs?"

// <0060> 鷹文に訊いてみる。
<0060> I asked Takafumi.

// <0061> \{鷹文}「別にこだわってるわけじゃないでしょ。遊びたいだけで、マインスイーパでもいいんじゃない？」
<0061> \{Takafumi} "It's not like she's into it. She just wants to play. Shouldn't minesweeper be good enough?"

// <0062> \{河南子}「マインスイーパか、それもいいなっ！　わっしゃしゃしゃしゃっ」
<0062> \{Kanako} "Minesweeper, huh? That sounds good! Wahahahaha."

// <0063> \{河南子}「よし、いざ海へっ」
<0063> \{Kanako} "To the beach!"

// <0064> 河南子が唐突に切り出す。
<0064> Kanako suddenly brings up the subject.

// <0065> 鷹文と俺が同時に『は？』と河南子を見る。
<0065> Both Takafumi and I look at Kanako with a puzzled faces.

// <0066> \{河南子}「夏休みだよっ、海にいかなくて他に何すんだよっ」
<0066> \{Kanako} "It's summer break. What else can we do other than going to the beach!"

// <0067> \{朋也}「いや、いくらでもあるだろ」
<0067> \{Tomoya} "Seriously, I can come up with many more things to do."

// <0068> \{河南子}「なんでだよー、海いいじゃん、海ー」
<0068> \{Kanako} "Why? What's wrong with going to the beach! Come on!"

// <0069> \{朋也}「なんでそんなに海にこだわるんだ、こいつ」
<0069> \{Tomoya} "Why does she want to go to the beach so badly?"

// <0070> 鷹文に訊いてみる。
<0070> I asked Takafumi.

// <0071> \{鷹文}「別にこだわってるわけじゃないでしょ。どっかに行って遊びたいだけで、山でもいいんじゃない？」
<0071> \{Takafumi} "It's not like it has to be a beach. She just wants to go out and play. Shouldn't hiking in the forest be good enough?"

// <0072> \{河南子}「山か、それもいいなっ！　わっしゃっしゃっしゃっしゃ」
<0072> \{Kanako} "Forest! That sounds good! Wahahaha."

// <0073> \{鷹文}「ほらね」
<0073> \{Takafumi} "See, I told you."

// <0074> \{朋也}「ようは遊びたいだけかよ…」
<0074> \{Tomoya} "You just wanted to play..."

// <0075> \{河南子}「あんただって遊びたいだろ？　長い夏休みなにして過ごす気だ？　んー？」
<0075> \{Kanako} "You want to play too, don't you? What are you going to do during this long break anyway, hmmm?"

// <0076> \{朋也}「普通に仕事して過ごすけどさ」
<0076> \{Tomoya} "I'll just work like usual."

// <0077> \{河南子}「えー、バイトかよー、欲しいもんでもあんの？」
<0077> \{Kanako} "Whaaat? A part time job? Is there something you want?"

// <0078> \{朋也}「いや、社員だけどさ」
<0078> \{Tomoya} "No, I'm an official staff member."

// <0079> \{河南子}「え…？」
<0079> \{Kanako} "Wha...?"

// <0080> \{河南子}「うわぁ！　おまえ社会人だったのかよっ！！」
<0080> \{Kanako} "What! You were part of the company!?"
<0080> \{Kanako} "What! You work for a company!?"

// <0081> \{朋也}「それを知らなかったおまえに驚くよ」
<0081> \{Tomoya} "I'm surprised you didn't know that"

// <0082> \{河南子}「そーか、なんだー、みんな今日から休みってわけじゃないんだね」
<0082> \{Kanako} "Oh, I see. It's not like everyone is on break tomorrow."

// <0083> そんなセリフを一応寂しそうに言ってくれるので、なんとなくうれしい。
<0083> I was somewhat happy to hear her say it in a lonely tone.

// <0084> \{河南子}「あーあ、働いてて楽しい？」
<0084> \{Kanako} "So, is it fun working?"

// <0085> \{朋也}「そんなに楽しいもんじゃないけど、充実感があっていいぞ」
<0085> \{Tomoya} "It's not like it's fun or anything, but it gives a feeling of satisfaction."

// <0086> \{朋也}「おまえこそ、そんな怠惰にしてて楽しいか？」
<0086> \{Tomoya} "Is slacking off any fun for you?"

// <0087> \{鷹文}「そうそ。時間あるんだから、河南子こそ働けよ。バイト探せよ」
<0087> \{Takafumi} "Yeah. If you have the time, why don't you work? Go find a part-time job."

// <0088> \{河南子}「そういうてめぇは働いてんのかよっ」
<0088> \{Kanako} "Well, are YOU working?"

// <0089> \{鷹文}「休みに入る前からバイトも入れてるよ。ＳＥの仕事だから、ここでできるけどね」
<0089> \{Takafumi} "I already started working part-time before entering the summer break. I can work here since it's SE related."

// <0090> \{河南子}「なにそれ、ラクそうでいいじゃん。あたしにもできる？」
<0090> \{Kanako} "What is it? Sounds simple enough. Do you think I could do it?"

// <0091> \{鷹文}「無理」
<0091> \{Takafumi} "No."

// <0092> \{河南子}「そんなもん頼まれてもやるかーっっ！」
<0092> \{Kanako} "LIKE I WOULD WORK FOR THEM EVEN IF THEY OFFERED ME!!"
<0092> \{Kanako} "Like I would work for them even if they offered!"

// <0093> \{朋也}「どんな仕事がいいんだよ」
<0093> \{Tomoya} "What kind of job do you want?"

// <0094> \{河南子}「ＳＥ」
<0094> \{Kanako} "SE."

// <0095> \{鷹文}「なんの略か知ってるの？」
<0095> \{Takafumi} "Do you even know what it stands for?"

// <0096> \{河南子}「ス…スーパー…エレクトリック…」
<0096> \{Kanako} "S...Super...E...Electric..."

// <0097> \{鷹文}「え…続くの？　もう頭文字ないけど」
<0097> \{Takafumi} "What... There's more? You're already out of initials."

// <0098> \{河南子}「続かない」
<0098> \{Kanako} "No, That's it."

// <0099> \{河南子}「スーパーエレクトリック」
<0099> \{Kanako} "Super Electric."

// <0100> \{鷹文}「ぶー」
<0100> \{Takafumi} " *Buzz* Wrong!"

// <0101> \{河南子}「そんなもんこっちから願いさげじゃーっっ！」
<0101> \{Kanako} "WELL I WAS GOING TO TURN IT DOWN ANYWAY!"
<0101> \{Kanako} "Well I was going to turn it down anyway!"

// <0102> \{智代}「おまえたち、外まで聞こえてるぞ」
<0102> \{Tomoyo} "Guys, I can hear you from outside."

// <0103> 戸口に智代とともが買い物袋を持って立っていた。
<0103> Tomoyo and Tomo were holding groceries at the doorway.

// <0104> \{鷹文}「主に河南子ね」
<0104> \{Takafumi} "Mainly Kanako."

// <0105> \{朋也}「夏休みになって、異様にテンション上がってんだよ、こいつ」
<0105> \{Tomoya} "She's oddly high-tensioned since the break started."
<0105> \{Tomoya} "She's unusually high strung since break started."

// <0106> \{河南子}「子供みたいに言うな」
<0106> \{Kanako} "Don't treat me like a child."

// <0107> \{朋也}「子供だろ。毎日遊んでるくせに」
<0107> \{Tomoya} "You are child. Playing everyday."

// <0108> \{河南子}「社会人とばれた途端、大きくでやがって、くそぅっ」
<0108> \{Kanako} "You act all big just because I found out that you're a working man. Damn it."

// <0109> \{朋也}「いや、隠してないから」
<0109> \{Tomoya} "It's not like I was hiding it or anything."

// <0110> \{智代}「河南子、私からも言いたかったんだ」
<0110> \{Tomoyo} "Kanako, I've wanted to say something also."

// <0111> 智代が河南子の正面に座る。
<0111> Tomoyo sits right in front of Kanako.

// <0112> \{河南子}「ほへ？」
<0112> \{Kanako} "Huh?"

// <0113> \{智代}「河南子」
<0113> \{Tomoyo} "Kanako."

// <0114> 改めて名を呼んで、向き合う。
<0114> Again she calls her name, facing her.

// <0115> \{智代}「だらだら過ごしていても、何も変わらない」
<0115> \{Tomoyo} "Nothing changes by simply passing time."

// <0116> \{智代}「よくしていくこと、それが大事なんじゃないか？」
<0116> \{Tomoyo} "To make things better. Isn't that more important?"

// <0117> \{河南子}「よくしていくこと？」
<0117> \{Kanako} "To make things better?"

// <0118> \{河南子}「んーじゃあ、母親を説得して再婚止めてくれますか」
<0118> \{Kanako} "Hmm, then can you convince my mom to stop the remarriage?"

// <0119> そう。忘れかけていたが、河南子がここに居着く発端は、母親の再婚話だった。
<0119> Right. I almost forgot that reason why Kanako is here is because of the arguement over her mother's remarriage."

// <0120> \{智代}「いや…それは私が口出しできることじゃない」
<0120> \{Tomoyo} "No, that's not something I can interfere with."

// <0121> \{智代}「でも、話し合って、お互いの気持ちをもっと知れば、よくなると思う」
<0121> \{Tomoyo} "But, I believe things will be better if you would talk over and understand the feeling for each other."
<0121> \{Tomoyo} "But, I believe things will get better if you talk things over and understand each other's feelings more."

// <0122> \{河南子}「うわ、教科書通りの説得だぁ」
<0122> \{Kanako} "Wow. A textbook-style persuasion."

// <0123> \{朋也}「おまえ、そんなに母親の再婚嫌なの」
<0123> \{Tomoya} "You really don't want her to remarry, do you?"

// <0124> \{河南子}「嫌」
<0124> \{Kanako} "No."

// <0125> \{朋也}「言いにくいけどさ…」
<0125> \{Tomoya} "It's hard for me to say this but..."

// <0126> \{朋也}「なくなった父親のことが引っかかってんのか」
<0126> \{Tomoya} "Is the passing of your father related in any of this?"

// <0127> \{河南子}「もちろんそれもあるよ」
<0127> \{Kanako} "Of course there's that."

// <0128> \{河南子}「でも、それはさ…象徴なんだよね」
<0128> \{Kanako} "But that... is just a symbol."

// <0129> \{河南子}「その人が信じてる、ずっと続いていく愛なんかないっていうさ」
<0129> \{Kanako} "A symbol which proves that there's no such thing as everlasting love."

// <0130> \{智代}「………」
<0130> \{Tomoyo} "....."

// <0131> \{河南子}「そんなものがなかったらさ…」
<0131> \{Kanako} "If there's no such thing to start with..."

// <0132> \{河南子}「楽しく生きたもん勝ちじゃん」
<0132> \{Kanako} "Then you might as well choose to live a fun life."

// <0133> \{河南子}「あたしはさ、ここでだらだら暮らしているのが好きなんだ」
<0133> \{Kanako} "I... I just love spending time in this place."

// <0134> \{河南子}「楽しいから」
<0134> \{Kanako} "Because it's fun."

// <0135> \{河南子}「苦しいこともないしさ」
<0135> \{Kanako} "There's nothing that pains me."

// <0136> その言葉があまりに切実に聞こえて、何も返せなくなる。
<0136> Because of her serious words, I didn't know what to say in return.

// <0137> それは智代も同じようで、黙り込んだままでいた。
<0137> Same with Tomoyo, she just kept still.

// <0138> ともだけが不思議そうに、そんな皆の顔を無遠慮にきょろきょろと見回していた。
<0138> Only Tomo was looking around, staring at our faces without any care.

// <0139> \{河南子}「あーあ、夏休みだってのにテンション下がっちった…」
<0139> \{Kanako} "Aw, summer break just started and tension went down already."

// <0140> \{河南子}「アイス買ってくんね」
<0140> \{Kanako} "I'll just go buy some popsicles."

// <0141> \{朋也}「やっぱ夏休みだから、テンション上がってたんじゃないかよ…」
<0141> \{Tomoya} "So you were high strung because of summer break after all."

// <0142> 河南子ひとり立ち上がり、部屋を出ていく。
<0142> Kanako stands up to leave the room.

// <0143> \{智代}「河南子は…」
<0143> \{Tomoyo} "Kanako..."

// <0144> ドアが閉まる音を聞いてから、智代がその名を口にする。
<0144> After the door is shut, Tomoyo says her name."

// <0145> \{智代}「ああはいうが、苦しいんじゃないだろうか」
<0145> \{Tomoyo} "said all that, but isn't she hurting emotionally?"

// <0146> \{智代}「なんだか…救いを求めてるように見えた」
<0146> \{Tomoyo} "She sounded like... like she was looking for help."

// <0147> \{朋也}「えー？　そうか？」
<0147> \{Tomoya} "What? You think so?"

// <0148> \{智代}「なんだ…朋也にはそうは見えなかったのか…」
<0148> \{Tomoyo) "Huh... I guess you didn't see it that way."

// <0149> \{智代}「あまり付き合いが深くない私でもそう思ったぐらいだ」
<0149> \{Tomoyo} "Even I, an acquaintance, thought about her like that."

// <0150> \{智代}「朋也なら、気づいていたと思ってたんだが…」
<0150> \{Tomoyo} "I thought you would've figured it out already."

// <0151> \{朋也}「俺のほうが付き合い、浅いっての」
<0151> \{Tomoya} "I'm not as close to Kanako as you."

// <0152> \{智代}「時間という意味ではそうだが…」
<0152> \{Tomoyo} "For the time being, yes. But..."

// <0153> \{智代}「まあ、いい」
<0153> \{Tomoyo} "No, forget it."

// <0154> \{智代}「私はなんとかしてやりたい」
<0154> \{Tomoyo} "I want to do something about it."

// <0155> 鷹文のカチャカチャとキーを打つ音が一際大きくなっていた。
<0155> The jangling noise of Takafumi's attempt to insert the key grew louder.

// <0156> \{智代}「出よう」
<0156> \{Tomoyo} "Let's get out."

// <0157> 智代がそう促して立ち上がった。
<0157> Tomoyo urged me as she stood up.

// <0158> \{智代}「河南子は今も、鷹文のことが好きなんだと思う」
<0158> \{Tomoyo} "I think Kanako still loves Takafumi."

// <0159> \{朋也}「そうか？」
<0159> \{Tomoya} "Really?"

// <0160> \{智代}「最初から、鷹文に会うことが目的だったじゃないか」
<0160> \{Tomoyo} "Her purpose to come here is to see Takafumi in a first place."
<0160> \{Tomoyo} "Her reason for coming here is to see Takafumi in a first place."

// <0161> \{朋也}「いや、親の再婚話が嫌で出てきたんだろ？」
<0161> \{Tomoya} "No, wait. She ran away because she didn't like the talk of her parent's remarriage, right?
<0161> \{Tomoya} "No, wait. She ran away because she didn't want to hear talk of her parent's remarriage, right?

// <0162> \{智代}「それはきっかけにすぎないと思うんだ」
<0162> \{Tomoyo} "I think she just used that as an excuse."

// <0163> \{智代}「鷹文の気持ちを確かめにきたんだと思う」
<0163> \{Tomoyo} "Maybe she came here to confirm Takafumi's feelings towards her."

// <0164> \{朋也}「でも、鷹文はぜんぜんそんな気ないようだけど」
<0164> \{Tomoya} "But I don't think he cares at all."

// <0165> \{智代}「そうか？」
<0165> \{Tomoyo} "You think so?"

// <0166> \{朋也}「え、あるように見えるのか？」
<0166> \{Tomoya} "What, you think he still has feelings for her?"

// <0167> \{智代}「うん…ある。これは姉だから言い切れる」
<0167> \{Tomoyo} "Yes, I do. I am his sister after all."

// <0168> \{朋也}「じゃあ、ふたりはなんでよりを戻さない？」
<0168> \{Tomoya} "Then, why don't they just get back together?"

// <0169> \{朋也}「きっかけがないだけか？」
<0169> \{Tomoya} "They just don't have a reason to?"

// <0170> \{智代}「私たちの知らない問題があるんだろうと思う」
<0170> \{Tomoyo} "Maybe they have a personal problem we don't know about."

// <0171> \{朋也}「あるとしたら…ふたりが別れたとき」
<0171> \{Tomoya} "If they do... when they broke up..."

// <0172> \{朋也}「三年前に何があったかだな」
<0172> \{Tomoya} "Something must have happened three years ago."

// <0173> \{智代}「三年前か…」
<0173> \{Tomoyo} "Three years ago..."

// <0174> すっと智代は目を細めた。
<0174> Tomoyo squinted her eyes slightly.

// lit. "jumped into the road" - an car accident
// <0175> \{智代}「鷹文が公道に飛び出したのも三年前だ」
<0175> \{Tomoyo} "Takafumi had an accident three years ago."
<0175> \{Tomoyo} "Takafumi was involved in a car accident three years ago."

// <0176> \{智代}「河南子が父親をなくしたのも三年前だ」
<0176> \{Tomoyo} "Kanako lost her father three years ago."

// <0177> \{智代}「そして、ふたりが別れたのも三年前だ」
<0177> \{Tomoyo} "And they broke up three years ago."

// <0178> 智代はしばらく黙りこむ。
<0178> Tomoyo kept quiet for while.

// <0179> \{朋也}「どうした」
<0179> \{Tomoya} "What's the matter?"

// <0180> \{智代}「いや…」
<0180> \{Tomoyo} "...Nothing."

// <0181> \{朋也}「他に知ってることがあるのか？」
<0181> \{Tomoya} "Do you know anything else about it?"

// <0182> \{智代}「ううん、ない」
<0182> \{Tomoyo} "No, I don't."

// <0183> \{朋也}「じゃあ、あとは、鷹文本人から訊くよ」
<0183> \{Tomoya} "Then I'll ask Takafumi personally."

// <0184> \{智代}「それは容易なことじゃないぞ。姉である私でも知っていることは少ないんだ」
<0184> \{Tomoyo} "That won't be so easy. Even I, his own sister, don't know much about it."

// <0185> \{朋也}「だろうな」
<0185> \{Tomoya} "I would've figured."
<0185> \{Tomoya} "I figured as much."

// <0186> \{智代}「どうするつもりだ？」
<0186> \{Tomoyo} "What are you going to do?"

// <0187> \{朋也}「真っ向から訊いてみる」
<0187> \{Tomoya} "Simply ask him directly."

// <0188> \{智代}「それはやめたほうがいい」
<0188> \{Tomoyo} "I wouldn't suggest it."

// <0189> \{智代}「これは忠告だ」
<0189> \{Tomoyo} "That's my advice."

// <0190> \{智代}「安易に聞きだせるなんて思うな。信頼を失うことになるぞ」
<0190> \{Tomoyo} "Don't think you'll be able to get him to speak that easy. You might lose his trust."
<0190> \{Tomoyo} "I don't think you'll be able to get him to speak that easily. You might lose his trust."

// <0191> \{朋也}「俺もそう思ってたところだ」
<0191> \{Tomoya} "I was just thinking about that."

// <0192> \{智代}「助けてあげたい」
<0192> \{Tomoyo} "I want to help them."

// <0193> 鷹文のカチャカチャとキーを打つ音が一際大きくなっていた。
<0193> The jangling noise of Takafumi's attempt to insert the key grew louder.

// if someone can edit this part then plaese do
// <0194> 俺はちょっと出よう、と智代に目配せした。
<0194> I gave Tomoyo an eye signal that said "Let's take a walk".
<0194> I glanced at Tomoyo with a look that said "Let's take a walk".

// <0195> \{朋也}「河南子が救いを求めてるなら…」
<0195> \{Tomoya} "If Kanako is looking for help..."

// <0196> \{朋也}「それは鷹文にだよ」
<0196> \{Tomoya} "then that would be from Takafumi."

// <0197> 俺は歩きながら話す。
<0197> I talked as we walked.

// <0198> \{朋也}「最初から河南子の目的はあいつに会うことだったんだし…」
<0198> \{Tomoya} "Kanako's reason for coming was to see Takafumi in the first place."

// <0199> \{朋也}「河南子は今も、鷹文が好きなんだと思う」
<0199> \{Tomoya} "I think Kanako still loves Takafumi."

// <0200> \{朋也}「昔にふたりの間に何があったのか知らないけどさ…」
<0200> \{Tomoya} "Though I don't know what happened between them..."

// <0201> \{朋也}「河南子は確かめにきたんだよ」
<0201> \{Tomoya} "Kanako came to see..."

// <0202> \{朋也}「鷹文も自分のことをまだ好きでいてくれてるってことを」
<0202> \{Tomoya} "to see if Takafumi still thinks about her."

// <0203> \{智代}「うん…そうだな。私もそう思う」
<0203> \{Tomoyo} "Yeah... You're right. I think so too."

// <0204> \{智代}「ふたりなんだかんだいって、いいコンビだもんな」
<0204> \{Tomoyo} "Those two make a good couple after all."

// <0205> \{智代}「まったく、あまのじゃくな奴らだ」
<0205> \{Tomoyo} "Hmph, they're so inconsistent."

// once again edit as you please
// <0206> \{朋也}「そんな言葉じゃ片づけられない何かがふたりを割いてるんだろ」
<0206> \{Tomoya} "There is something unexplainable that keeps them seperated."
<0206> \{Tomoya} "There must be something keeping them separated."

// <0207> \{智代}「そうなのか…？」
<0207> \{Tomoyo} "Do you think so?"

// <0208> \{朋也}「そうだろ」
<0208> \{Tomoya} "There must be."

// <0209> \{朋也}「問題はふたりが別れたとき」
<0209> \{Tomoya} "The problem is in the time when they broke up."
<0209> \{Tomoya} "The problem will be from when they broke up."

// <0210> \{朋也}「三年前に何があったかだけど」
<0210> \{Tomoya} "Something must have happened three years ago."

// <0211> \{智代}「三年前か…」
<0211> \{Tomoyo} "Three years ago..."

// <0212> すっと智代は目を細めた。
<0212> Tomoyo squinted her eyes slightly.

// <0213> \{朋也}「鷹文が公道に飛び出したのも三年前」
<0213> \{Tomoya} "Takafumi had an accident three years ago."
<0213> \{Tomoya} "Takafumi was involved in a car accident three years ago."

// <0214> \{朋也}「河南子が父親をなくしたのも三年前」
<0214> \{Tomoya} "Kanako lost her father three years ago."

// <0215> \{朋也}「そして、ふたりが別れたのも三年前だ」
<0215> \{Tomoya} "And the time they broke up was also three years ago."

// <0216> \{朋也}「なあ、智代」
<0216> \{Tomoya} "Hey, Tomoyo."

// <0217> \{朋也}「三年前に起きたことさ、おまえが知ってることでいいから、教えてくれないか」
<0217> \{Tomoya} "Can you tell me everything you know about what happened three years ago?"

// <0218> しばらくの沈黙の後…
<0218> After a long silence...

// <0219> \{智代}「うん…」
<0219> \{Tomoyo} "All right..."

// <0220> 智代は頷いた。
<0220> Tomoyo nodded.

// <0221> \{智代}「河南子の父親は、陸上部の顧問だったんだ」
<0221> \{Tomoyo} "Kanako's father was a coach for the track team."

// <0222> \{智代}「鷹文は、その人を慕って、陸上をしていた」
<0222> \{Tomoyo} "Takafumi adored him and joined the team."

// <0223> \{智代}「長距離走者だった」
<0223> \{Tomoyo} "He was a long-distance runner."

// <0224> \{智代}「その父親がなくなったのは…鷹文が公道に飛び出した三ヶ月後」
<0224> \{Tomoyo} "Her father passed away three months after Takafumi's accident."

// <0225> \{智代}「退院して、少ししてのことだ」
<0225> \{Tomoyo} "It was soon after he was discharged."

// <0226> \{智代}「元から心臓が弱い人で…心臓発作で倒れてそのまま…」
<0226> \{Tomoyo} "He had a weak heart to start with... He fell after a heart attack..."

// <0227> \{智代}「そして…」
<0227> \{Tomoyo} "And..."

// <0228> \{智代}「それを境に…鷹文と河南子は疎遠になった」
<0228> \{Tomoyo} "Since then, those two became estranged from each other."

// <0229> \{智代}「私が知ってることはこれだけだ」
<0229> \{Tomoyo} "That's all I know..."

// <0230> \{智代}「悲しいことにな」
<0230> \{Tomoyo} "Sadly..."

// <0231> \{朋也}「ありがとう、十分だよ」
<0231> \{Tomoya} "No, that's enough. Thanks."

// <0232> \{朋也}「あとは、鷹文本人から訊くよ」
<0232> \{Tomoya} "From here, I'll ask Takafumi personally."

// <0233> \{智代}「それは容易なことじゃないぞ」
<0233> \{Tomoyo} "That won't be so easy."

// <0234> \{朋也}「だろうな」
<0234> \{Tomoya} "I would've figured."
<0234> \{Tomoya} "I figured as much."

// <0235> \{智代}「どうするつもりだ？」
<0235> \{Tomoyo} "What are you going to do?"

// <0236> 真っ向から訊く
<0236> Ask him directly

// <0237> それは避ける
<0237> Avoid asking

// <0238> \{朋也}「真っ向から訊いてみる」
<0238> \{Tomoya} "I'll simply ask him directly."

// <0239> \{智代}「それはやめたほうがいい」
<0239> \{Tomoyo} "I wouldn't suggest it."

// <0240> \{智代}「これは忠告だ」
<0240> \{Tomoyo} "That's my advice."

// <0241> \{智代}「安易に聞きだせるなんて思うな。信頼を失うことになるぞ」
<0241> \{Tomoyo} "Don't think you'll be able to get him to speak that easy. You might lose his trust."
<0241> \{Tomoyo} "I don't think you'll be able to get him to speak that easily. You might lose his trust."

// <0242> その忠告を聞き入れる
<0242> Listen to her advice

// <0243> 聞き入れない
<0243> Ignore her advice

// <0244> \{朋也}「じゃあ、何か別の方法を考えてみるよ」
<0244> \{Tomoya} "Then I'll think of some other way to ask him."

// <0245> \{智代}「うん」
<0245> \{Tomoyo} "Okay."

// <0246> \{朋也}「何事も真っ向勝負だ」
<0246> \{Tomoya} "I have to tackle everything head-on."

// <0247> \{智代}「そうか…止めても無駄なようだな」
<0247> \{Tomoyo} "I see... It seems it's pointless to stop you."
<0247> \{Tomoyo} "I see... then it's pointless trying to stop you."

// <0248> \{朋也}「おい、鷹文」
<0248> \{Tomoya} "Hey, Takafumi."

// <0249> 俺は帰りがけの鷹文を追っていって捕まえた。
<0249> I caught Takafumi while he was on his way home.

// <0250> \{鷹文}「いきなり立ちふさがったりして、どうしたの？」
<0250> \{Takafumi} "Why are you standing in front of me, all of a sudden?"

// <0251> \{朋也}「話があるんだ」
<0251> \{Tomoya} "I have something to ask."

// <0252> \{鷹文}「なに？」
<0252> \{Takafumi} "What is it?"

// <0253> \{朋也}「河南子と三年前になにがあった？」
<0253> \{Tomoya} "Three years ago, what happened between you and Kanako?"

// <0254> そうストレートに訊いた。
<0254> I simply asked him straightforwardly.

// <0255> \{鷹文}「…前に話したよね」
<0255> \{Takafumi} "...I told you about it before."

// <0256> \{朋也}「ああ、お前が車道に飛び込んだってな」
<0256> \{Tomoya} "Yeah, you jumped in front of a car."

// <0257> \{鷹文}「それだけだよ」
<0257> \{Takafumi} "That's all."

// <0258> \{朋也}「足りないだろ。河南子と何があったんだ」
<0258> \{Tomoya} "That's not good enough. What happened between you and Kanako?"

// <0259> \{鷹文}「にぃちゃんには関係ないよ」
<0259> \{Takafumi} "It's none of your business."

// <0260> \{朋也}「ある」
<0260> \{Tomoya} "It is."

// <0261> \{鷹文}「………」
<0261> \{Takafumi} "..."

// <0262> \{鷹文}「…ただ、つきあって別れただけだって」
<0262> \{Takafumi} "...I went out with her and broke up with her, that's all."

// <0263> \{鷹文}「何度も言ったけど、もう河南子とは終わったんだよ？」
<0263> \{Takafumi} "Haven't I told you before? Kanako and I are finished."

// <0264> \{鷹文}「よくある話だよ」
<0264> \{Takafumi} "It's pretty common."

// <0265> \{朋也}「じゃあ、陸上の話だ」
<0265> \{Tomoya} "Then, tell me about the track team."

// <0266> 俺は話の矛先を変えることにした。
<0266> I changed the direction of the conversation.

// <0267> \{朋也}「恩師の話、してくれないか」
<0267> \{Tomoya} "Can you tell me about your former coach?"

// <0268> \{鷹文}「いないよ、そんなの」
<0268> \{Takafumi} "I don't know any."

// <0269> \{朋也}「いたはずだ。智代から聞いてるんだぞ」
<0269> \{Tomoya} "I know you do. I've heard it from Tomoyo."

// <0270> \{鷹文}「そんな又聞きで、当事者でもないくせに…」
<0270> \{Takafumi} "Just because you've heard it at second hand, doesn't mean that you are related."
<0270> \{Takafumi} "Just because you've heard it at second hand, doesn't mean it's true."

// にぃちゃん: bro, not a family-related way in this case
// <0271> \{鷹文}「あのね、にぃちゃん…」
<0271> \{Takafumi} "You know, Nii-chan"

// <0272> \{鷹文}「僕にだって、触れられたくないことはある」
<0272> \{Takafumi} "I do have things that don't want to be mentioned."
<0272> \{Takafumi} "I do have things I don't want mentioning."

// does "pissed off" sound better?
// <0273> \{鷹文}「キレるときだってある」
<0273> \{Takafumi} "And there are times when I get angry."

// <0274> \{鷹文}「それが今だよ…」
<0274> \{Takafumi} "Like right now."

// <0275> \{朋也}「…どうするつもりだよ」
<0275> \{Tomoya} "...What are you going to do?"

// <0276> \{鷹文}「こうするっ」
<0276> \{Takafumi} "This."

// <0277> ばきぃっ！
<0277> Smack!

// I think "tremendous" sound better.
// <0278> 俺の顔が真横を向いていた。鷹文の渾身の一撃により。
<0278> I was facing sideways after tremondous blow from Takafumi.

// <0279> \{朋也}「ってぇなあ…このっ」
<0279> \{Tomoya} "That hurt you bastard-"

// <0280> 殴り返したつもりだが、その手応えがない。
<0280> I tried to punch him back but I couldn't feel the power.

// <0281> \{智代}「やめるんだ」
<0281> \{Tomoyo} "Stop it."

// <0282> 智代が俺の拳を掴んでいた。
<0282> Tomoyo was holding my fist.

// <0283> \{智代}「喧嘩はよくない…」
<0283> \{Tomoyo} "You guys shouldn't fight."

// <0284> \{智代}「ずっと、おまえたちは仲良しだったじゃないか…」
<0284> \{Tomoyo} "You guys got along just fine..."

// <0285> \{智代}「どうしてこんなことになってるんだ…」
<0285> \{Tomoyo} "How did this happen..."

// '痛切': to feel one's feeling so strong that it is painful
// <0286> 智代の痛切な声を聞いて、ようやく頭が冷えていく。
<0286> I cooled my head down after hearing Tomoyo's compassionate voice.
<0286> I quickly cooled my head after hearing Tomoyo's compassionate voice.

// <0287> \{鷹文}「…みんなが楽しかったらいいじゃん」
<0287> \{Takafumi} "We had fun. Everything was going fine."

// <0288> \{鷹文}「でしょ…？」
<0288> \{Takafumi} "Right?"

// <0289> \{智代}「もちろんだ」
<0289> \{Tomoyo} "Of course."

// <0290> \{鷹文}「だったら、今のままでいこうよ」
<0290> \{Takafumi} "Then let's keep it that way."

// <0291> \{鷹文}「それでいいじゃん…」
<0291> \{Takafumi} "Shouldn't that be good enough?"

// <0292> 鷹文が横を向く。
<0292> Takafumi turns to the side.

// <0293> \{鷹文}「じゃあね」
<0293> \{Takafumi} "See ya."

// <0294> そのまま、歩いていった。
<0294> Just like that, he walked away.

// <0295> \{智代}「朋也、反省すべきだ」
<0295> \{Tomoyo} "Tomoya, you should apologize."

// <0296> \{朋也}「ああ、悪い…」
<0296> \{Tomoya} "Yeah, sorry..."

// <0297> バッドエンド
<0297> BAD END

// <0298> 日を置いて、俺は鷹文にまた同じ質問を投げかけてみた。
<0298> I gave some time and tried asking Takafumi the same question.
<0298> I waited some time before asking Takafumi the same question.

// <0299> それでも頑なに鷹文は、返答を拒み続けた。
<0299> Still, Takafumi stubbornly refused to answer.

// <0300> やがて、鷹文は次第に家に来なくなった。
<0300> After a while, he stopped coming to my house.

// <0301> 智代を通じて呼びかけてみても、いい返事は戻ってこなかった。
<0301> I tried asking through Tomoyo but there wasn't any good reply.
<0301> I tried asking through Tomoyo but didn't get a good answer.

// <0302> \{智代}「ちょっと間を置いた方がいい」
<0302> \{Tomoyo} "We should give him some space."

// <0303> \{智代}「今はそっとしておいてくれないか」
<0303> \{Tomoyo} "Could you leave him alone for now?"

// <0304> \{朋也}「…ああ、わかった」
<0304> \{Tomoya} "...Sure, I understand."

// once again, edit as you wish
// <0305> 智代は俺を責めないが、鷹文を刺激してしまったことに心を痛めているのは事実だ。
<0305> Tomoyo doesn't accuse me for it, but it's true that she is hurt seeing Takafumi so irritated.
<0305> Tomoyo doesn't say anything, but she's obviously hurt to see Takafumi so irritated.

// <0306> 俺が余計なことをしなければ…。
<0306> If only I hadn't been so reckless...

// <0307> \{朋也}「真っ向から訊いても教えてくれないだろうし…」
<0307> \{Tomoya} "I'm sure he won't tell us anything by asking him directly."

// <0308> \{朋也}「何か方法を考えてみるよ」
<0308> \{Tomoya} "I'll think of some other way."

// <0309> \{智代}「うん」
<0309> \{Tomoyo} "Okay."

// <0310> \{智代}「鷹文はおまえを信頼している」
<0310> \{Tomoyo} "Takafumi have trust in you."
<0310> \{Tomoyo} "Takafumi trusts in you."

// <0311> \{智代}「おまえのことが好きなんだ」
<0311> \{Tomoyo} "He still likes about you."
<0311> \{Tomoyo} "He still likes you."

// <0312> \{智代}「いつまでもそういさせてやってほしい」
<0312> \{Tomoyo} "I want you to keep it that way."

// <0313> \{智代}「それは私の希望だ」
<0313> \{Tomoyo} "That is my wish."

// <0314> \{朋也}「ああ」
<0314> \{Tomoya} "All right."
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2011-02-24T23:20:47Z

ManiacB: /* Recruiting English proofreaders */

== Recruiting English proofreaders ==
Here's a test of the English patch: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12426351/SEEN.TXT After downloading this, put it into the folder where you installed tomoyo after. Replace the original file if you wish, or you can just put it somewhere else for back up. Note, this test patch only works for the 18+ version. It does NOT work with the memorial edition. So, once again we need proofreaders to help me proofread the script that has not been already proofread. The process should be fast and we're looking at releasing the patch within a week time. Post below if you are interested in helping. --karmainall 06:22, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

I'd be interested in helping out. I'll add you through MSN --[[User:ManiacB|ManiacB]], 22 Feb 2011

I'm still very interested in helping with editing/proofreading, as well. Point me in the right direction, and things will get done, I promise you. I'll also be adding you in MSN. --[[User:Brine|Brine]] 23:18, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
:K, I got both your invitations on MSN and added you. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 03:10, 23 February 2011 (UTC)

--feel free to contact me at my contact mail adress I'd be happy to help [[User:Tatsuya|Tatsuya]] 17:29, 24 February 2011(UTC)
: If you are a legit translator (no machine translation) you can help us translate any SEEN you like. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 22:10, 24 February 2011 (UTC)

== Post project Related Questions/updates/get hold of project staff here ==

Am I the only one who regularly checks this page for updates and was disappointed to learn that it had been dropped? I would really like to see the game translated well, but I lack the skills (I think) necessary to help do this. Please, reconsider and continue the project as soon as you can!
-Romdeau Aug. 29 2010
:Find us an active translator and I'll see to it that RadicalR continues. [[User:karmainall|karmainall]] Aug 29, 2010

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english(http://blicky.net/ta/index2.cgi?p=1). Secondly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Thirdly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have a product worth their time. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -karmainall September 12, 2010

I'll do my best to find one then.
-Romdeau Aug 30, 2010

Hi. I heard this project needed translators. I've been learning Japanese for a few years, so if it's okay I'd like to be able to help. I've never done anything of this sort before though, so it'd be nice if someone could tell me how and where to start. Thanks in advance! ~Sept 1, 2010

Is anyone here? Please respond. ~Sept 2, 2010

Try contacting karmainall via e-mail by clicking on his username. What's your name?
-Romdeau Sep 2, 2010

My username here is PanzerElement. Is karmainall the person behind this project? ~Sept 3, 2010

Not exactly, but I think he can get the horse moving again. Glad to see a potential translator interested in this project, try e-mailing him! If not, post on the baka-tsuki forums and see if you can get a response there. http://www.baka-tsuki.org/forums/viewforum.php?f=40
-Romdeau Sep 3, 2010

I've emailed him already, just waiting for a response now. Just a question, how dead has this been anyway? There are others who want to get it going again, right? I'd hate to devote a lot of time to this only to see it continue to stall. Though, that said, I'm willing to translate however much it takes, since I need the practic- okay, who am I kidding, I just want to see more of Tomoyo-chan :3
~Sept 3, 2010
As for actual translators? Maybe, but you're the only one that has expressed interest in a good while. I've been following this project since June and it would be painful to watch this project just die. So know that you have at least 1 guy out there that supports you! If enough gets translated, I'll gladly proofread it as well.
-Romdeau Sept. 3, 2010

Good to know I'm not the only one interested. Still though, I'm surprised that there aren't more people aboard. Given the popularity of Clannad, shouldn't that also extend over to Tomoyo After? I've got nothing against being the only translator, but it'd probably be better for overall quality if there was someone more experienced helping too. All I'm used to doing is textbook Japanese, so it's likely I'll get some things off.
~Sept 3, 2010

I can't translate but if needed I am more than willing to proofread and edit the script to a reasonable standard, if I'm ever needed for that then feel free to email me at zorbonalien@hotmail.co.uk I've been following this project since 2008 and would hate for it to just shut down. - Zorbon Sep. 5th

So basically it looks like we are just waiting for "karmainall" to work his magic and press magic green button so RadicalR will start caring about this project again. I don't see why he (RadicalR) should manage it, as it doesn't seem he wasn't putting very much effort into keeping the project alive. Anyhow, I hope he gets around to it soon.
-Romdeau Sept 6 2010

I have e-mailed several EX members of this project to reconsider working on it, I hope to hear back from them and to see who (if anyone) is interested in seeing this project to completion. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 6, 7:51 pm

I've never dropped the project. I'm one of the translators and came after receiving your e-mail. It happens that I, and all translators, are really busy with other stuff. As for me, I am rarely having time to even check how this project is going. The project was dropped but I was still working on it, translating some lines when I had time. At any rate, I dropped by to tell you guys that even if I'm busy with other matters, I'm still interested in this and don't want this to die. However, we MUST get more people to work. ESPECIALLY translators. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 7

Potential translator here. Just waiting for the green light now. I emailed karmainall a while ago, still haven't gotten any kind of response. I don't have much going on right now, so I've got as much time to spend on this as needed. -PanzerElement Sept 7, 2010

Its a wiki no need to wait for a permission just [[Tomoyo_After:Registration_Page|register]] the SEEN you would like to translate and do it. - As long as the translation isnt too bad (like in machine translation ;)) there would probably be no problem. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 21:29, 7 September 2010 (UTC)

True, but what are we supposed to think when the person heading this project suddenly declares "project dead" and leaves? It's quite demoralizing, and I have not seen much activity on the project itself for quite some time. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 7

As previously said, we are not having much time for translating. However, things would be a little bit easier for everyone if we got more members. Also, even if the project is considered dead, you can continue working on it. There is no problem with that, I guess. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 8

Working on an as dead declared project isnt a problem - as long as there is one left working on it, is it not dead! Only the quality should'nt suffer. Also that first sentence would only mean that the project would need a new Administrator who coordinates the project (as an example to ask the translators if they are still translating or already lost in oblivion.) Also normaly here are only stalled and no dead projects. ;) And stalled is only tagged after 6 to 12 month without translation activity. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 15:15, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Could someone tell me how to get started, then? Where do I get the SEEN files? Sorry if that's a dumb question, it's my first time doing this. -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010

You can see at the [[Tomoyo After:Registration Page|Registration Page]] which SEEN are already taken by other translators and how far their progress ist. The SEEN's are behind the SEEN links. Always the second line needs to get a translation. --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:06, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, I see. Thanks. How do you get that hyperlinked name thing? -PanzerElement Sept 8, 2010
:The easy way is to click at the sign button up at the edit menu or just write <nowiki>--~~~~</nowiki> (clicking would put that just at the last position of the cursor) --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 20:25, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

I've begun to read through the translated scenes and editing them so that they sound smoother in English. I am avoiding changing any actual content, and edits I am unsure about I will make sure to leave a note so that a translator can review the line. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8

Is there any way to view what actually happens ingame as the diologue in a SEEN file is played out, aside from maneuvering to that particular scenario in the game? It'd be much easier to have the translated text match up with the action if I could see the action for myself. --[[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Also, since you're looking through the already translated scenes anyway, could you link me to the ones that have obvious need of being reviewed? I'd like to be sure that everything that's supposedly done is done up to standard. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

I have renamed the title of this section to be more accurate. SEEN 0629 has raw parts still (in the H scene), SEEN 0630 and 0701 also need to be looked at. For future reference, I will be leaving notes of SEENS I have read through and edited. SEENS that have already been looked through by an editor will not be touched by me. Panzer, ask EchoMateria (via e-mail) about in game images-he may be able to set you up. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] -Sept. 9

Gotcha. Thanks for the tips, I'll be sure to go through the list sometime. And may I ask, who're the editors? Would that be Echo? [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] Sept 9, 2010

Look under the project staff to find out who Echo is. As for editors, I'm not sure-I suppose that would be the guys who can read Japanese and English who review the translated scripts. Since I can't read Kanji, I don't qualify-so I'm a proofreader who knows hiragana and katakana. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 10

:Sorry for my late response. However couple things needs to be cleared up. First, PanzerElement, I didn't see your email due to the fact that I only use my university email now. If you wish to get hold of me in the future please add me on MSN (if you have). Secondly, EchoMateria is the project's graphic editor, he basically edit the graphical japanese names to english. Thirdly, project manager isn't someone that just co-ordinate staff. On the contrary, the project manager must be able to hack into Realive, the program all Key VN runs on. Also Tomoyo After just happens to have a encryption etched into all game files which none of previous Key VNs had. So far in my knowledge only RadicalR knows how. Lastly, finding a hacker to de-pack and re-compress all the SEEN files won't be much effort if we actually have something worth while for them. Meaning unless SEENS0714-0717 gets translated RadicalR or any other hackers to my knowledge won't be interested in joining. Once SEENS0714-0717 gets translated we can release a partial patch covering over 40% of the beginning storyline. -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] September 12, 2010

Sounds good, I'll get working on 714-717 then. Also, would it be possible for someone to go in and note in the SEEN files where different choices in the game branch off and rejoin? (i.e. choice at line 345, A goes to 347, B goes to 373, C goes to 401, and they all lead into 435) A full map of every choice and result would be even better. Since I've been trying to follow along in the game as I translate, something like this would make it a lot easier to make sure everything fits within context. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 13, 2010

You can leave 716 to me, as I was previously working on it. If I delay it too much, you can take over the SEEN. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] September 14, 2010

Halfway done with 714, and a certain degree of inroad on 715 and 717. I've left 716 alone like you asked. I'll upload it all after I'm done, probably going to have 714 done in a few days. Sorry for the slow pace, been fairly busy with school. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 19, 2010

Could someone with access to the game files check line #345 in SEEN0714, or preferably the whole block of horrible google translate-esque translations in the file, and compare it to the original text? I'm having a few issues with comprehending certain things, so I'm thinking it's possible someone incompetant had altered the Japanese text. Thanks in advance. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 25, 2010

Just dropping here to say thank you for everyone working in this project, I was sad when I read it was dead, but I see some future in this now. Sadly I lack the skills to help. Also, PanzerElement, you can check the page's history, this is the first entry: http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tomoyo_After:SEEN0714&oldid=30612 - GBcrazy September 26, 2010

That's exactly what I was looking for. Thanks much. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 27, 2010

I have updated couple of things to clarify and for organizational purposes. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 16:48, 28 October 2010 (UTC)

Is this out yet...Probroly not. Lol my dad can speak fluent japanese and can easily read it. If you really want to i can ask him to translate this. Although not the H- Scenes of course. Anyways Someone get this thing started. :D ------------michaelgungjr@aim.com------------- :D Nov. 3 2010

Back from my long leave of absence. Today, I've translated 0291-0339 from SEEN0715 (some of them are left untranslated since I'm unsure about the meaning of those lines; may try looking at it again later, or some other translator could check them out). I'll be doing SEEN 0715, but if you feel like helping me translate it, please feel free to do it! - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] December 2, 2010

== General Discussion ==
Writing at this top so it is more likely to be read. I've only read a few translated SEENS, and I've noticed that every H-scene is significantly worse in translation quality and it appears the "good" translators for personal reasons aren't translating them. The ones I've read definitely could use another look over. [[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] Sept. 8 2010

What version of the game are you guys planning to work with? There was an old project started by velocity 7 (it doesn't seem as if they are keeping up with it, though), where they were trying to port the PS2 to PC. (You can find the thread for it here: http://forums.novelnews.net/showthread.php?t=16671)

I personally think the PS2 would be more interesting to play, since it is longer and perhaps the ending is more satisfactory. The PC version would still be great though. Thank you very much for your effort guys.

:PS2 Version is better overall, but the ending feels "tagged-on" without the usual Key quality. It feels like Tonokawa (the person who wrote the PS2 add-ons, while Maeda Jun wrote the original) just "tagged it on" to appease fans who want a happy ending. I personally like the PC ending a lot better. It feels a lot more "Key-like" and a lot deeper.
:I'm willing to translate as soon as there's more translators. Though I am obsessed with the game, I won't translate it all myself
:email: stupid1961@hotmail.com

To the guys, translating this: seriously, stop - there are a lot of mistranslations and overall translation quality is pretty low. I'd fixed them for you but it would be easier to start translation from the scratch.

To the guy above this: I realize that my past work on this project is not what I'd call adequate. I'd love to go back and retranslate everything I've done, and continue with translating the rest of the project, but a general lack of time and motivation is keeping me from doing that. Not to mention that this project seems a bit stalled at the moment. I'd love to hear something from the supposed project admin... --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 20:34, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

To Nightjumper: The project isn't stalled. It's just hard to do anything if nobody is translating anything. I've been busy with personal stuff lately so I haven't been able to look for anyone that might be interested in it. If anyone can find someone who might be interested in translating Tomoyo After, please point them to the registration page. Please feel free to contact me on IRC if you have any further questions. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 03:45, 27 February, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be better to do the PC version. The ending honestly feels a bit cheap in the PS2 version. They made a dramatic, sad scene but then the extra ending was added and it felt like they pulled a "lol jk" and invalidated it all. That's just my take. Also, although it is true that the PC version does have less in terms of content, it also happens to be more accessible to everyone. Not everyone has a PS2, but certainly everyone interested in this has a computer.

hey all i just recently finished the clannad vn and found it really enjoyable. im looking forward to the complete translated version of Tomoyo After. i agree that it should be done on pc. good luck and hope yous finish it soon.

The project has been handed over to RadicalR who will be the new project administrator from now on. Please direct all further questions about the project to RadicalR who can be found in #ndt on PPiRC. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 02:29, 6 March, 2009 (UTC)

I am currently looking at the possibilty of allocating time for this project. There's a big possibility that I won't do anything before the spring term is finished. I might look around and use some contacts to see if we can get more people on this. By the way, I'd rather leave translating/writing H-scenes to somebody else. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 10:18, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys! I've been studing Japanese for about 4 years now and this project is something I'm really interested in :D If you don't mind some machine-translated kanji and explaining to me how to work this stupid RLdev thing I'd be glad to help. Just seeing what edits I can make atm
[Seitsuki]

Tomoyo After Memorial Edition All-age version had been released. If you don't like translate H-scene, so may I help you upload new seen files below old files? --[[User:Midishero|Midishero]] 15:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I also have Tomoyo After ~ Memorial Edition. I played through it and I confirm there are no h-scenes but has more content and they implemented Tomoya's voice. If you need it just post on here. Where is Tomoyo After's % at now? There's like almost no news about this game. Do you guys need help with anything? Voice out so I can carry the words over. The game is very small compared to Clannad VN. 8.27.09

A quick question, do I have to add punctuation marks in lines with these squarish brackets? 「____」 I've been finding a lot of these and I am not sure what to do about it. -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]]
:To answer your question, guidelines like those in the [[Clannad:Guidelines|Clannad project]] haven't been established yet. I suppose some of it should be agreed on in the near future. Personally, I change hook(Japanese) brackets to double quotation marks, and I usually end the text inside them with a full stop, comma, question mark, exclamation mark or three full stops in a row(ellipses), as I think without any of that, it would be poor English. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 16:20, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

How many translators do we have? (Besides Gman.) -[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] March 18
:Well, not many, that's for sure. Basically two - There's this Gman you mentioned, and me, and I work rather slow. [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] seems to have been semi-active recently, but I don't know if he's done any real translation work. [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] is someone who popped up a month ago or so, but it doesn't look like he's done much translation work the last few weeks. Edit: Forgot my signature. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:16, 19 March 2010 (UTC)

I referred [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]], he works at a slow pace however very accurate translation and requires little corrections. There is another translator I stole from another project(MUHHAHAHHA), however he/she won't begin any translation work until beginning/middle of April.
By the way Nightjumper, if possible, could you drop whatever SEEN you are currently translating and do seen 0712 instead? I don't know if you heard from RR yet, but our goal right now is to release a partial patch of seens up to 0808 to regain supporters. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] 19 March 2010
:I finished 0711 just yesterday, and I was looking at doing 0712 next. So, yes, I will do that one next. By the by, as you can see on my [[User:Nightjumper|userpage]], I usually hang out in #ndt@irc.ppirc.net if you wish to contact me through other means than this talk page. Edit: Keep forgetting my signature.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 14:10, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey! I think Mr4eyeguy is back. Well, judging from the fact that he put his name next to SEEN0810 he's either got some time to kill or no longer MIA. In any case if you read this Mr4eyeguy, welcome back! --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] April 3rd, 2010

I apologize for not being able to translate much until now, but as I told [[User:Karmainall|karmainall]], I am not having much free time and I have to deal with loads of other things. I will try to work as much as I can, but I can assure that I won't lose interest in the project that easily. --[[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] 12 April, 2010

Can I say a word? Is this project still alive? And will all of you translate the 10th Memorial Edition of this visual novel? - BonaQuack Sep 21, 2010
No worries, it's definitely still alive. Rather short-handed at the moment though, as far as I can tell I'm one of the only two translators here. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm thinking that given how long this is taking, it might be a while before we even get to consider the 10th Memorial edition. [[User:PanzerElement|PanzerElement]] September 24, 2010
:BonaQuack, Key memorial box contain a unique never before encountered cryptic "key". To my knowledge no hacker has yet cracked the lock or is interested enough to attempt it. If you find a hacker who has the ability then we will consider it. Otherwise, do not hope the impossible. Panzer, thanks for your hard work. ---[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] September 24, 2010

Unfortunately, I don't know anyone who good at hacking. But, about the project, how many percent have you translated till now? -Bonaquack Sep 26th, 2010

The project, just based on what I've gone through on the registration page, looks to be around 30-40% done, so it'll be awhile. I'm currently trying to continue translating, but I am by no means an expert, so I'm going to need a dedicated QC'er to help out. The H-scenes are more difficult to translate partly due to the emotions being needed to convey during them, and the wording they use to explain their actions differ from normal activity. I'll take a shot at it, but going to need someone to go through it for correspondence, to make sure it's translated correctly and/or conveys the right idea. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] 19 October 2010
:To be honest, at this stage H-scenes are not the main focus or even considered even slightly important. If you seen the intro of the game the H-Scene is totally independent from the game itself. It's as if the H-Scene is added at the last second before publishing in order to attract Otakus (Clannad-freaks like me) to buy the game. Therefore, please just leave the H-scenes and translate SEENS 0714-0717. If those SEENS get translated, I'll just bullshit random stuff for the H-scenes. However if you insists on translating the hentai scenes be my guest. Please do note that once SEENS 0714-0717 gets translated there will be a release of a partial patch covering roughly 30% of the beginning storyline. --[[User:Karmainall|karmainall]] Oct 28th, 2010
::I understand that. I'll try to get to work on the actual SEENS rather than the H-scenes. I was trying to do top to bottom, but it's probably better if we do storyline plot first. Well, at least we have some beginning H-scenes translated. May not be important to some, but to others it may deepen the emotional bond. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] Oct. 28, 2010

I will QC anything you need I'm new to this but my grammar is pretty good. Message me at smgman423@hotmail.com for anything you need. I'm available to QC anything anyone else needs to so feel free to email me. --[[User:kikyo423|kikyo423]] 20 October 2010

Wonderful news about the 30% patch. I'll try to pour some more time on this now, SEEN0714 in particular, but I'll be needing a checker quite likely a lot more than others here. My japanese is mostly self-learnt so I'll just have to leave some lines untranslated since I can't for the life of me figure out what they mean. Anyways, I'll do what I can and hope someone can check my trail a bit. Any criticism/pointers highly welcome (flood my page!)
--[[User:Ilebur|Ilebur]] 28 October 2010

I think this will be my first post here. I just wanted to let you guys know that I translated the rest of the SEEN0717 and SEEN0716. I know my translation is not spot-on but it should be enough to understand what's going on. I may work on SEEN0715 but can't promise anything for now. Kudos to Aleh and HiagoX who translated the majority of those SEENs!
--[[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] 2 December 2010

Thank you, Mr4eyeguy! It was my pleasure. Now, regarding the H-scenes: I've translated part of one of them; but I think we should leave them for last. We should focus on the actual SEENs and then go for the H-scenes. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] December 2, 2010

Hello again. I just finished the rest of SEEN0715 with the help of HiagoX. Boy, I'm worn out but good news is that I finally got some time this winter. I won't be touching the SEEN0714 (or I believe that's what's left) due to how several people are already working on it. Instead, what I'll do is look over some of the completed SEENS and make some changes if there is any mistranslation that contradicts the flow of the story, and maybe work on some of untranslated SEENS...MAYBE. Hopefully at some point this project gets to 50% completion but I doubt it'll be happening sometime this year. But we all can hope, right? Happy holidays everyone.
--[[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] 8 December 2010

I was actually thinking about reviewing those 4 SEENs. I could do it, but if you think you can do it all by yourself, then be my guest! Or rather, we could share the work. And oh, I should thank you for editting some of the lines. Sometimes I just can't word what I'm translating the way I want to. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] December 9, 2010

Hey HiagoX and Mr4eyeguy some of those people are not currently translating any of SEEN0714. We might need your help on that. --[[User:Kikyo423|Kikyo423]] 9 December 2010

I've translated a few lines yesterday. Probably will be able to translate some more, but I'll need Mr4eyeguy's help on this for some lines. - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]] December 15, 2010

I translated SEEN0714 at the point of near completion. But I definitely missed few lines. Also my translation could use a lot of editing because of my lack of vocab and my tendency to misuse words. --[[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] 21 December 2010

I'll be QC'ing SEEN0714 on whatever spare time I have, I'll mark up untranslated lines (that I can't figure out) on the page info, so please take a look at them when you can. --[[User:Ilebur|Ilebur]] 16 January 2011

== Want to help us? ==

Gents, where do I send potential supporters/fans patiently waiting for this game to be translated? I know all of you are doing this on your own free time and I'd like to post or write my support for you somewhere. Or perhaps, this is the way to do it? Anyhow I don't want to get too spammy with this post, but guys-thanks and keep going! Tomoyo is my favorite heroine from the Clannad VN and I'm looking forward to reading this story. I'd help if I could, but I only know elementary Japanese and I doubt it's sufficient to take on a project such as this.
-[[User:Romdeau|Romdeau]] July 17 2010

Is the project still looking for translators? I'm willing to help out if it is. I can read Japanese fairly well and although I have not played Tomoyo After, I have played Clannad. [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]] 14:38, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Watching this page, no real translation effort has been done in months, and to my knowledge no translator is actively working on this at the minute, so yes, and work that you would like to do would be greatly welcomed.

If you are still looking for translators ill gladly help im fluent in Japanese and English so i would love to join you guys in this effort so let me know what you think and i would love to help Kyoske-username

Kyoske. drop into the IRC chat room irc.ppirc.net in room #ndt look for Nightjumper or RadicalR. talk to them and they should provide you with more information...

sorry to sound dumb but when i go there theres just a big 9. -kyoske

irc://irc.ppirc.net/ndt - try that. - SirShadow
(also lol the 9 is because Cirno is all over the server...)
:You don't need our permission to translate. This is an open wiki project, after all. Although, we haven't set any translation guidelines as of yet. But feel free to drop in and ask any questions you may have.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 23:50, 28 March 2010 (UTC)

I can help you QC things but again I need instructions on some things but my grammar is very good so message me at smgman423@hotmail.com and I will help no problem. -kikyo423

Hello there, if you're in need of a proofreader, feel free to message me at X_x_xYeyis@hotmail.com, my grammar is pretty good. Though I'd like to work as a translator, i know almost no japanese, so i can only assist in this way. Nice to see this project lively again. - YeyisX 7:21, November 13, 2010 [EST]

Good work guys, I really want to help out but since im horrible in japanese i could only help you with the proofreader part. I'm probably going to to the university to study english so my skills are genuine. If you need any help from me with either the uploading from files or the proofreading, mail me at da.casa@ NO SPAM hotmail.com. I would really like to see this game translated, so you've got my full support!

== Project status? ==
(Last updated March 21st 2010)
~39% first translation pass. See this page[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Tomoyo_After:Registration_Page]
.xls file with more detailed progress [http://www.mediafire.com/?jovzodyujoj here].

Is this project still alive or are there other people that translated this VN themselves?

... Seemingly, this project has died --[[Special:Contributions/82.168.72.39|82.168.72.39]] 05:52, 21 December 2009 (UTC)

The project is not dead; It's just stalled at the moment. I've just gone through the progress so far, and quite a large chunk of the first translation work is done(I'd say about 30-40%). --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 17:10, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
:I'm really looking forward to playing. I wish my Japanese was better and I could help. --[[Special:Contributions/67.170.35.129|67.170.35.129]] 20:15, 26 January 2010 (UTC)

It seems like it's been stalled for quite some time...like half a year or more. Hope someone comes along and revives this. I'd help if i could, but i don't know one word of japanese, so yea...[[Special:Contributions/211.30.198.99|211.30.198.99]] 08:54, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
:''Been'' is the keyword here. It's not stalled at the moment, although it's progressing slowly for the time being.--[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 15:27, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

Looks like things are moving again! I look forward to playing this game. --[[Special:Contributions/71.227.233.247|71.227.233.247]] 12:24, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Hey.. if you guys need a proof-reader to check the scripts for Typo's and grammatical errors that have occurred when translating from Japanese to English. feel free to contact me, I'm usually sitting around in the chatroom under SirShadow (give or take an s on the end)...I don't know a drop of Japanese and what japanese i have picked up is from novels and anime etc. however my english is pretty good. and i can usually fix up sentences that have errors when translated into English. like missing commas or typo's. it might be a small contribution but every little bit helps right?
:Add me on MSN if you have (karmainall@NOSPAM hotmail DOT NOSPAM com) -[[User:karmainall|karmainall]] March 28th

So, this patch will be for the PS2 or for the PC version?
Thanks for the work guys
:I believe this will be for the PC version - [[Special:Contributions/195.241.232.78|195.241.232.78]] 19:21, 29 April 2010 (UTC)

I feel so useless I can't tranlsate anything but I really want this project to finish. How many tranlsators total are there, and if given an estimate how long would this take to finish if no other translators join?

I can't translate whatsoever but I'm very good in english grammar and sentence structure so if you need a proff reader I open. I'd just need instructions on how to do so because I'm new to this. -Kikyo423

Honestly, it looks like the project is around 30-40% completed, so it looks to be awhile. Lots of QC needed. I'm currently trying to continue translating starting from the beginning (QC'ing SEEN0628) and moving up. Currently on SEEN0629. Those H-scenes are a pain, lol. Need someone to QC for what's been translated so far. I'll try to get the SEEN completed by tonight. Anyone that would like to correspond with me (it'd help a lot), contact me at abstractbluesky@gmail.com or msg me in the #Baka-Tsuki irc channel if I'm there. --[[User:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] 09:40, 19 October 2010 (HST)