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User talk:Mcpvp

2014-10-26T19:07:37Z

Mcpvp:

Hey does anyone mind if i make a book here as an individual author, but have some help in draw some scenes because i can't draw for my life.
Also if I can I can. Can I help edit some novels because I want to help make them go up faster, but I only know english. :(

I also want to be a perminate editor for Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan

User talk:Thatsjustpeachy

2014-10-13T01:38:20Z

Mcpvp: /* Hey */

Thank you for your time. --[[Special:Contributions/68.3.217.157|68.3.217.157]] 03:29, 30 July 2014 (CDT)

==Editing 剣神の継承者==
===Prologue of Vol 2===
* The pale blue sky stretched for '''miles, with not a single cloud to be seen'''. --> The pale blue sky stretched for miles, '''without a cloud in sight'''. I guess that captures the 'feel' better?
* It was already past mid-May, the '''sunlight''' being glaringly bright and warm winds blowing about. --> It was already past mid-May, the '''sun''' being glaringly bright and warm winds blowing about.
* However, those phenomena would only last for the briefest of '''moments, and at this moment in time he''' hadn’t spotted anything out of the ordinary. --> However, those phenomena would only last for the briefest of moments '''and, until now, he''' hadn’t spotted anything out of the ordinary. (Just a suggestion) 'until now' seems to make the sentence 'flow' better compared to 'at this moment in time'.
* Kurou was currently in '''one corner''' of the academy he was attending as a student, '''a vibrantly viridian garden'''. --> Kurou was currently in '''a corner''' of the academy he was attending as a student, '''a vibrant viridian garden'''. I guess vibrant viridian[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Viridian (Viridian is a blue-green pigment, a hydrated chromium(III) oxide, of medium saturation and relatively dark in value.)] garden makes more sense.
* There was a grove of trees in the deepest part of the garden, '''and that was the location of the small cottage in which he resided.''' --> There was a grove of trees in the deepest part of the garden, '''and that was the location of the small cottage where he resided.''' --> There '''were''' a grove of trees in the deepest part of the garden, '''which marked the location of the small cottage where he resided.''' (Though I prefer this suggestion more, it seems to change the meaning a little)
* Most importantly though, since it was within school '''grounds, commuting''' to school was a breeze. Coma there?
* Kurou suddenly came to a '''halt, placing''' his hand on the katana strapped to his waist. --> Kurou suddenly came to a halt'''and placed''' his hand on the katana strapped to his waist.
* Of course, '''his state of mind''' was prepared for '''anything to happen'''. --> Of course, '''he was mentally''' prepared for anything. 'His state of mind' sounds somewhat weird when used in that context.
* Where the grove opened up into a clearing, there was a girl who was putting her '''spirit''' into swinging her sword. Maybe instead of 'spirit' how about 'whole'?
* The sunlight '''streamed''' through her golden hair, which was tied in a '''sidetail, she''' was wearing a pale beige blazer, and the hem of her miniskirt was flapping about. --> The sunlight '''filtered''' through her golden hair, which was tied in a '''sidetail. She''' was wearing a pale beige blazer, and the hem of her miniskirt was flapping about.
* The blade of the sword she was wielding was '''broad and thick, and it was roughly''' as long as she was tall. --> The blade of the sword she was wielding was broad, thick, and roughly as long as she was tall.
* Just '''once''' look at it and it was clear that this sword was a genuine broadsword-esque blade. --> Just '''one''' look at it and it was clear that this sword was a genuine broadsword-esque blade.
* However, the blonde girl was handling it lightly—even wielding it single-handedly '''on occasion'''. --> However, the blonde girl was handling it lightly—even wielding it single-handedly '''occasionally'''.
* Her practice swings were stirring up '''wind''' in the grove, causing the trees to sway and their trunks to bend. --> Her practice swings were stirring up '''air''' in the grove, causing the trees to sway and their trunks to bend.
* It was '''scenery''' that didn’t look rooted in reality at all. --> It was '''a scene''' that didn’t look rooted in reality at all.
* Swordies could crush '''rock''' with their bare '''hands, and''' sprint faster than the wind. --> Swordies could crush '''rock(s?)''' with their bare hands and sprint faster than the wind.
* Above all else '''though, Swordies''' were a race '''that was proficient with''' the sword '''from''' the time they were born into the world. --> Above all''' else, Swordies''' were a race '''proficient in''' the sword '''since''' the time they were born into the world.
* Although appearance wise humans and Swordies looked alike, they were two completely different living organisms. --> Although, appearance wise, humans and Swordies looked alike, they were two completely different living organisms.
* “Speaking of which, you’re finally discharged. I was wondering how long you were going to '''spend being cooped''' up in there.” --> “Speaking of which, you’re finally discharged. I was wondering how long you were going to '''spend cooped''' up in there.”
* “I’m a human, you know. I '''got a deep gouging wound on my shoulder, not to mentioned I''' was slashed in various other places. The doctor remarked that the fact that I could be discharged in two week was already a miracle of sorts.” --> “I’m a human, you know. I '''got a deep wound gouged on my shoulder, not to mention that I''' was slashed in various other places. The doctor remarked that the fact that I could be discharged in two week was already a miracle of sorts.”
* '''There was some stiffness left in it''', but it had roughly healed from the incident two weeks ago. --> It was still a little stiff, but it had roughly healed from the incident two weeks ago. (Makes more sense & a flows a little better)
* “Humans are such inconvenient creatures. Well, in '''anycase'''… W-w-w-w-el-co…” --> “Humans are such inconvenient creatures. Well, in '''any case'''… W-w-w-w-el-co…”
* Her skirt was dangerously short, till the '''point it barely''' concealed her panties. --> Her skirt was dangerously short, till the '''point where it barely''' concealed her panties.
* “That woman… '''Such a needless souvenir to leave behind'''.” --> “That woman… leaving such an needless souvenir behind.”
* She was currently missing, but even when she was gone she was still causing Kurou '''problems'''. --> She was currently missing, but even when she was gone she was still causing Kurou '''trouble'''.
* However, the building in front of Kurou was a brand new '''two storied''' house that looked like it had been prefabricated. --> However, the building in front of Kurou was a brand '''new two storey''' house that looked like it had been '''prefabricated'''. There should be a better word choice than 'prefabricated' ? How about preconstructed?
* Kurou nodded, chuckling wryly on the inside. It was hard '''to''' the academy to refuse any of Sefi’s requests. --> Kurou nodded, chuckling wryly on the inside. It was hard '''for''' the academy to refuse any of Sefi’s requests.
* Living together with Hinako was something that was unavoidable and he '''couldn’t cancel,''' but now that Sefi was living together with them… --> "Couldn't cancel"? There should a better phrase ...
* Kurou’s hand lightly touched the katana '''that was by his side.''' --> Did he take his katana off? Wouldn't "strapped to his side" (something like that) make a little more sense?
[[User:はじめ|はじめ]] ([[User talk:はじめ|talk]]) 01:32, 27 January 2014 (CST) Guess I finished editing the prologue (for now). Well, (once again) the above are just my suggestions.[[User:はじめ|はじめ]] ([[User talk:はじめ|talk]]) 01:32, 27 January 2014 (CST)
===Chapter 1 of Vol 2===
* Wearing the uniform of the academy, both hands were gripped tightly onto his sword as he lifted it into a '''raised position'''. Just my thoughts, but doesn't 'raised position' sound a little weird?
* Returning the sword to the raised position, he '''repeated swinging his sword'''. --> Returning the sword to the raised position, he '''repeatedly swung his sword'''. or maybe '''again he swung his sword'''?
* Within the Seven Swords, the '''most brilliant''' of them was given the title of Sword Saint. How about 'strongest' ?
* Kurou swung his '''blade''' down even harder. Wouldn't 'sword' make more sense instead of blade?
* There was a fine line between training and '''ruining his body'''. --> How about 'overexerting himself'?
* He could hear Sefi’s stream of '''abuse''' from behind the closed door. --> He could hear Sefi’s stream of '''insults''' from behind the closed door.
* ... with all his might as well as continued to stay inside the '''toilet''', the fact that Sefi hadn’t resorted to violence was a reflection of her kind nature. Wasn't he in the '''washroom'''?
* When he '''finally noticed his surroundings''', Hinako was already standing next to him, staring at Kurou intently. Wouldn't 'came to his senses' (or something like that) make a little more sense?
* Kurou was sitting right in front of the table '''at''' the center of the room. --> Kurou was sitting right in front of the table '''in''' the center of the room.
[[User:はじめ|はじめ]] ([[User talk:はじめ|talk]]) 06:38, 22 January 2014 (CST) Yeah, haven't quite finished editing this chapter. Well, the above are just my suggestions. Would you (Thatsjustpeachy) happen to be translating from a Chinese raw? There are a few sentences that seem to be a little awkward ... that aside, thanks for the effort you put into your translations and I hope that you continue to translate this LN. [[User:はじめ|はじめ]] ([[User talk:はじめ|talk]]) 06:38, 22 January 2014 (CST)

==Kenshin no Keishousha==
I just wanted to say thanks for the work your putting into your translations.

Thanks TJP for taking this project again. :) --[[User:Chancs|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs|talk]]) 01:05, 12 November 2013 (CST)

I'll upload the image of volumes 2,3 after thursday (Due to important exam ) --[[User:Yoyoyo5678|Yoyoyo5678]] ([[User talk:Yoyoyo5678|talk]])

Thanks for picking Kenshin no Keishousha again and while I'm at it, making the volume 2 current content readable. :D [[User:Zeikuu|Zeikuu]] ([[User talk:Zeikuu|talk]]) 12:54, 14 November 2013 (CST)

I'm done with V2 but I am very sorry I messed up a little with the names of the Image --[[User:Yoyoyo5678|Yoyoyo5678]] ([[User talk:Yoyoyo5678|talk]])

I fixed the names. --[[User:Yoyoyo5678|Yoyoyo5678]] ([[User talk:Yoyoyo5678|talk]])

I'm done with V3 too --[[User:Yoyoyo5678|Yoyoyo5678]] ([[User talk:Yoyoyo5678|talk]])

== Hoping to support your work as a editor ==

Hello thatsjustpeachy my user name is Tjobbear I am a inexperienced editor in baka-tsuki and yours translations are top notch I hope I can have permission to support you in your translations (even if it maybe only a little) on kenshin as a editor in the project.

== Editing For Kenshin no Keishousha ==

I would like to register to be an editor. Are there any kind of requirements to meet? [[User:LT|LT]] ([[User talk:LT|talk]])

Thank You!

== Editing Kenshin ==

Hi I love your work on kenshin. I was just wondering, how do I become an editor? I promise my english good.--[[User:Hayashi s|Hayashi s]] ([[User talk:Hayashi s|talk]]) 18:51, 15 August 2013 (CDT)

You are an amazing translator! I thank you for finishing this great series! [Spirit of the books]

== Uhm, hello ==

Just a newbie here so.....
Erm, anyways, I wonder if I can become one of the editors of Blade Dance of the Elementalers(if you don't mind); or recommend me to a series that has no enough editors(if you mind.)
Either way, I have problems with registering at the Baka-Tsuki Forum. I can't register, I understand that I have to register with the same username(Even though not required, I prefer to have the same username), but the problem is, it doesn't allow me to register. I keep going to the same page again and again for almost 2 hours(sounds funny.lol)
That's all I wanted to say.
Oh, and by the way, thanks for reading:)

== Hey ==
I see that you need editors for Kenshin. So I want to help you. I am an english speaking person and can speak i well so can I join? Mcpvp ([[User talk:Mcpvp|talk]]) 5:52 pm EST

User:Mcpvp

2014-10-11T22:00:21Z

Mcpvp:

Introduction
In a world where magic is socially accepted and everyone uses magic. One boy will shape how the world functions, acts, and shapes for generations to generations. The boys name is Arie.
Chapter one
“I think he is starting to wake up.”
Yes professor, but don’t you think he remembers what happened to him?
Well i don’t know but lets ask him when he wakes up shall we.
“Mmh, where am i?” Arie said
“Ha i told you he was awake. Oh sorry for my rudeness, but you are currently in a hospital.Do you remember anything?” Professor said.
“I think i remember something. I think my name is Are and i attended Surine middle school.” Arie said
“Ah so he does remember something. Please can you tell me a little more about yourself.” the professor asked
“Well, as far as i can know. I remember taking a magic test in elementary school and i was told that i have no magic.”
“Oh that is interesting, Don’t you think Sharlet?”
“Yes that is indeed peculiar that there is someone doesn't have magic.” Sharlet said
“Well since that first examination test in elementary school i was put in as the school’s punching bag. Everyone at the school picked and bullied me for their own problems.” Arie said
“Oh, so that is very unfortunate for you so can you tell me more?” the professor asked.
“That is when i got my first friend named Sara. She was the only one that defended me and helped me get through elementary school. Without her i would have gone and died right then and there the old way.” Arie said
“Oh that is terrible. Why did the teachers not help you.” Sharlet asked.
“Well that is because when i was being bullied it would happen during lunch and recess. If the teachers did see me being bullied then they would turn a blind eye because i couldn’t use magic.” Arie said
“That is so sad” Sharlet said while crying tears.
“Come on Sharlet i told you that you are a grown woman. You need to act like one instead of crying.”the professor said
Yes sir. I will sniff but sniff at least sniff give me some sniff time to calm down sniff. She walks out of the room.
“Sorry about that, my assistant can be a little too emotional sometimes. Now can you continue where you left off.” the professor said cheerfully.
“It kept going like that up until 7th grade in Physical education. We were playing dodgeball and I was targeted and i got hit 5 times by the popular jocks. Then they called me a failure of a human and a black sheep of the world and continued. That is when i was when i felt this feeling in my heart that said shut up and it grew and grew and grew until i yelled shut up and then their heads was sliced off. I didn’t mean too but it happened. Everyone in the gym called me a monster and a killer. I denied it and said stay away from me. Everyone in the gym was flung back until they hit the wall. I was cowering in the corner and panicking until Sara came up to me, hugged me, and said to me that everything was going to be alright.” Arie said
I heard the teacher yelling to call the police, people running in fear and Sara saying that she will always be there for me while i lost consciousness.
Hmm, this is rather interesting. The professor said to himself while looking at Arie happily
“What where is Sara, Why am i cuffed to this bed, and why did i not noticed this until now?” Are panics as he started to realise that he is in a white room with a stranger that is sitting in a chair in front of him with a huge smile.
“Ah so the drugs and truth serum wore out. You see Are you caused a lot of trouble today you know that right?” the professor said with a big grin on his face.
“Who are you, how do you know my name and how do i know what trouble i caused. I am currently cuffed to a bed, there is a stranger who knows my name that is talking to me like he knows me, and why is there a one way MIRROR!” Arie exclaimed.
“Crap his heart rate is increasing drastically. Sharlet, SHARLET COME QUICKLY WITH THE SEDATIVE.” The professor exclaimed with a booming voice.
“Coming sir.” Sharlet said. She rushes in and injects Are with it. “Its done sir, but why did you yell for me to come in when i was just outside the one way mirror?” Sharlet asked
“Sorry, sometimes i forget the protocol sometimes. It is that we are currently dealing with an unusual case here.” The professor said while dumbfounded about Arie.
“Yes, indeed we are. Should we report this to headquarters or give him to the courts to deal with him?” Sharlet said, “Because we are dealing with someone who killed 2 kids without any effort, I think we should put him in a maximum security prison to prevent any massacres.”
“Sharlet, as much as i can agree to stop anything from going wrong. He still is a child and if we can help him control his power. We can have him as the stepping stone to make our society to move forward.” The professor said.
“Where is Sara?” Are asked intensely.
“I am sorry again that i forgot about you again. If you are looking for Sara then you will tell me what does she mean to you.” the professor asked
“Ha do you think i will tell you what she means to me. Why should i tell you that.” Are scoffed.
“Hmm seems that you do not know who you are dealing with. I am Dr.Hasbo who is also a professor. I am the one who is willing to save your life and give you a chance to see Sara if you answer on question. What does Sara mean to you.” Dr.Hasbo said calmly.
“If i answer the question then can i see Sara and have her with me?” Arie pleaded.
“Of course, I am a man of my word so please answer the question are. What does Sara mean to you.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“She means the whole world to me. Ever since the magic test my actual parents abandoned me, i had to live in an orphanage. When i lived in the orphanage i was isolated from everyone. Then Sara came to the orphanage with her parents and when we looked at each other eyes. There was a spark within me that said to be with Sara, and when the spark ended she said to her farther “Can we adopt him?”. Her father said to her “Now honey, I don’t think he would make a good brother for you. Everyone in the orphanage calls him the cursed child and i don’t think you would have fun with him. Let’s look for someone else shall we?”. Then she instantly responded with “No papa. I don’t care if he may be strange or anything. All i know is that i want him near me at all times and no matter what we will be friends no matter what. I want him as my brother and that is final.” No matter what her father told her. She wouldn’t give up her 7th year old stand. Since then i have always looked up to her for help, guidance, savior, happiness, and hope.” Arie said, “Can i see her now please. I want her to be here with me now.”
“Wow. There is no way i can stop it now.” Dr.Hasbo said, “Let her in.”
Sara was tall, slender and had a blindfold around her eyes so she couldn't see anything. She was constantly saying “Where is my brother. Where is Are. Where is my precious brother.”
“Sara! Unblindfold her, uncuff me and let me hold my sister. You promised me that Dr.Hasbo.” Are said
“Arie is that you?” Sara asked. looking around for a reply.
“Yes sis. yes it is me. Your brother is here. Don’t panic sis i am here.” Arie said.
“Arie before i can do that you will have to go through a series of test to test you. If you want your sister beside you during it then be my guest, but if you want to hug her now. Then you must accept the test and go through them. Do you understand.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“Yes. Then i accept the tests so let me go and let me hold my sister.” Arie said.
“As you wish” Dr.Hasbo said while uncuffing Are he said, “Most people today call common magic as magic and nothing else, but when government officials use elemental magic they are called elementalist when they still use magic but more complex plus use common magic. After that the most elite of the government's magic user can use basic and elemental plus a unique magic called supernatural magic. The elite magic users can only have one or two while you on the other hand have more supernatural magic that anyone else. Arie this doesn't mean that you don’t have magic.It means that you are extremely special.”
“How can you prove this Dr.Hasbo?” Are asked while reaching out to hug Sara. Are then replied, “Sara, what did they do to you. Did they hurt you in any way. Are you ok?” When saying this Are removes the blindfold on Sara.
“Arie. ARIE. Are, thank god you are ok. I didn't know if you were ok or not. After the gym scene, the military showed up and i took you with me and held onto you when i brought you to the sewer system that we would go to if things went bad. When we were there you didn’t wake up so i kept you in my hands as long as i could. They eventually surrounded me and i didn’t let go of you so they knocked me out and i found myself being interrogated by strangers. They said that if i confessed what we were doing there and who we are then i could see you so i gave in and told them. Afterwards i was blindfolded and was brought here.” Sara said while crying of joy to see her adopted little brother safe.
“Well it seems that we have some family reunion settled so if you mind. Arie come with me we are going to have some marvelous testing. Oh and Sara i know what you are thinking. I am not going to hurt Arie. I am going to train Arie to make him control his new found magic.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“Well than if i can’t come then i will have to force myself to come.” Sara said angrily.
“I anticipated this much and i told Arie that you could stay with him so there is no reason to throw a hissy fit young lady.” Dr.Hasbo said with his usual big smile.
End of chapter one

Chapter two
“Ok Arie, We are going to try elemental magic." Dr.Hasbo said.
"What is elemental magic? What are you talking about doc." Arie said
"Well magic is classified into 3 sections. Most people classify magic as basic magic which is used in daily life like cooking food or opening the shutters. Out of that bunch some people can use elemental magic which uses peoples internal mana to control a specific element. From there we have the most royal or most special people who have legendary magic. They have an incantation of their own personality. It takes rigorous training and only 1% of the human population have legendary magic." Dr.Hasbo elaborated.
Arie, Dr.Hasbo, and Sara are watching the video tutorial which is downstairs behind a well placed book shelf.
"Oh so what is Arie. You said that he needs to control his new magic. I thought that he failed the magic test." Sara said.
"The magic test tests for basic magic. From what he said earlier. It seems that he has elemental and legendary magic. I have never seen someone that can't use basic magic and can use elemental and legendary magic without training." Dr.Hasbo said, "That is why I will help you go to Magic academy and mature your internal mana and magic."
"If I go then what will happen to Sara? Will she be left alone with her family? I won't go the the academy if she can't come with me." Arie stated with confidence.
"Don't worry. I will make sure that she will come with you. Besides she will help you get to class to class and be rooming with you. I think that she is the only one that can help you control your mana and magic." Dr.Hasbo said.
"Does that mean that she will enroll there too?" Arie asked.
"Yes it will. So you guys should be set to go in about 1 day." Dr.Hasbo said with his usual smile.
"Sir I don't think that we should be doing this. They are currently in the news and if we take them to the academy then the other students will put him down." Sharlet said with trembling fear in her voice.
"DON'T YOU THINK THAT I KNOW THAT!" Dr. Hasbo shouted with anger, "THEY ARE CHILDREN AND THEY DON'T KNOW HOW TO CONTROL THEIR MAGIC. WHERE ELSE CAN THEY TRAIN EXCEPT THE ACADEMY!"
Yes sir. I understand but Sharlet said.
THERE IS NO BUT'S. THAT IS AN ORDER AND YOU WILL FOLLOW IT. YOU DON'T TAKE RISKS. THAT IS WHY NO ONE ACKNOWLEDGES YOU SHARLET! Dr. Hasbo shouted at the top of his lounges.
“Yes sir. I will get the preparations ready.” Sharlet says with depression.
“I am sorry i had to say it that way, but we need the funding so if we didn’t need the funding then i wouldn’t send them to the academy.” Dr.Hasbo said with sadness, “ So Arie you are going to take an entrance test with Sara to get an entrance to the academy.”
“Sara do you want to do this?” Arie asked
“Yes as long as i am with you there is nowhere i wouldn’t go.” Sara said in a loving fashion.
“Alright. Then we will take the test together.” Arie said confidently.
They walk down the hall and on their right sees a huge training facility.
The test took about 3 hours. It encompass a durability test, knowledge test, Invoking test, and physical test. During the invoking test Arie summoned a dragon and Sara summoned a spirit.
“Well just as i expected, it turns out that both of you are qualified to go to the academy.” Dr.Hasbo said, “So you will have to get your parents permission to go to the academy.”
“I don’t think we can professor” Sara said with displease.
“Why is that Sara?” Dr.Hasbo said pondering about the answer.
“I was going to tell you later Arie, but since the gym incident i brought you to the house. Once we were in the house our parents wanted to get rid of you so there would be no ties to my family. I protested and said if they wanted to get rid of you then they have to get rid of me. They wanted pleaded one last time to get rid of you so I ran with you to the sewer.” Sara said
“Sara, why did you have to sacrifice so much for me?” Arie said.
“Because I love you Arie, and I want to be with you forever.” Sara said.
“Okay before this goes any further. Lets get ready for the academy then.” Dr.Hasbo said with his usual cool smile.
“We can continue this later, but first do we have to get a guardian's signature?” Arie asked.
“No you don’t have to. I have thought this far so the guardian of you two is you two.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“What do you mean? We are each other guardian’s?” Arie asked with a puzzled attitude.
“Yes. That is why i made Sara join you in the entrance test for the magic academy. I heard the story about your adoption, how Sara wouldn’t give up on adopting you, and how she stayed with you. Then using that i predicted that when stuff hits the fan. Your adopted parents would try to cut the tie with you and their family.I am sorry that i went on a rant. The reason you are each other guardian is that in the Magic academy. Students will have to chose a partner to work with and cooperate to achieve victory. The partners look after one another so that is why you guys are each other guardians. ” Dr.Hasbo said.
“When knowing this guess that our parents would ditch us then why did you ask for our parent’s signature?” Arie said.
“That is because in regular protocol your parents would have to sign the sheet that they would never again see their children and they could die at any time in and after the academy. Then the academy would not be liable if their children die in combat.” Dr.Hasbo said.
"Wow. What do we do at this academy?" Arie said.
"You will find out when you guys get there." Dr.Hasbo said.
"Ok so when are we leaving?" Sara asked.
"We are going in about now, so get yourself organized to be on a jet with royalty." Dr.Hasbo said.
End of chapter 2

Chapter 3
"So who are we going with on the private jet?" Arie asked.
"The person who we are going to be with is Mary hasson." Dr.Hasbo said.
"I think that I know her. She went to Surine middle school right?" Arie asked.
"Yeah she is. How do you know her Arie?" Dr.Hasbo asked.
"In the beginning of 7th grade Mary started off getting bullied for her child like attitude and behavior. I stopped her from being bullied even more and from then on she admired me like a big brother." Arie said, " I wonder how she would act when she sees me now. Knowing that I am going to magic academy." Are said.
"Oh look there she is now." Sara said.
"HEY ARIE ! IT HAS BEEN SOO LONG SINCE WE HAVE SEEN EACH OTHER." Mary said while jumping to hug Arie.
"Aww Mary why do you have to do this here and it has only been 6 days." Arie moaned while being squeezed by Mary.
"Still 6 days without Arie is 2 years of waiting. I never want you to leave my sights." Mary said.
"Hey can you let go of Arie now." Sara said with gradual agitation.
"Oh Sara I forgot about you being here. So where have you guys been?" Mary asked
"We were interrogated, negotiating, and accepting that we are going to magic academy." Sara said, "Plus I risked my life, been abandoned, and was tortured for Arie."
Wow I wish I was you Mary said to herself. I would do anything to be even accepted by Arie.
"Plus we are going to magic academy." Arie said.
"What you can use magic? That is amazing Arie." Mary said.
“Well it turns out that i can use magic but i can use very advanced ones.” Arie said.

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2014-10-11T21:54:12Z

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2014-10-11T21:52:01Z

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2014-10-10T14:57:11Z

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== Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa ==

I see that you chose to insert the translation of the data sheets outside the boxes instead of replacing the text. Since you did it like that, you should Remove the "To Kusumi Chiharu. Congratulations. You have been selected to be the seventh Monster Tamer. Please choose one of the demons from list below as your partner; remember to complete the duty everyday." part, since that is text, not illustration. If you ever feel like inserting the translation ito the boxes, I'll leave you here something to know what goes where:
<table><tr><th>[Something]@[somethimg else]</th><th>LV: [number]</th><th></th><th>[Whatever] tribe: [monster].</th><th>Level: [number]</th></tr>
<tr><td></td><td>[symbols]: [letter #1]  [other symbols]: [letter #2]<br>[more symbols]: [letter #3]</td><th><br><br>   ->   </th><td></td><td>'''Physical strength''': [letter #1]  '''Power''': [letter #2]<br>'''Speed''': [letter #3]</td></tr>
<tr><td><center>[photo]</center><br><br></td><td>[text]<br>[more text]<br>[even more text]</td><th></th><td>[photo]</td><td>[description]</tr>
<tr><td></td><th>[weird text] [3-cypher number]</th><th></th><td></td><th>Serial number: [3-cypher number]</table>

Example:
<table><tr><th>Dragon tribe: Red dragon</th><th>LV: 1</th></tr>
<tr><td></td><td>'''Physical strength''': B  '''Power''': B<br>'''Speed''': A</td></tr>
<tr><td><center>[photo]</center><br><br></td><td>An all-round monster.<br>Can breathe out fire from the mouth.<br>Be careful that it doesn't burn your house.</tr>
<tr><td></td><th>Serial number: 001</table>

--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 13:01, 29 July 2013 (CDT)

ok,removing that part..and the illustration modification will take time so i'll keep it like this for now,if i edit it i'll up it. --[[User:Ways|<span style="color:green;font:bold 10pt kristen itc">TheCatWalk</span>]]

And since we are at it, I've just noticed that you put the Minotauros data in the Kraken sheet and vice versa.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 13:44, 29 July 2013 (CDT)

ok,that wasnt intentional XD hahahaha -facepalms- and i thought i was being careful --[[User:Ways|<span style="color:green;font:bold 10pt kristen itc">TheCatWalk</span>]]

I'm changing "Earth dragon tribe" to "Reptile tribe", since it seems to be mostly snakes. It affect to Venus snake.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 15:10, 3 August 2013 (CDT)

As long as it doesnt deviate from the original meaning,then its ok --[[User:Ways|<span style="color:green;font:bold 10pt kristen itc">TheCatWalk</span>]]

I've just changed all instances of "serial number" for "code", as I've found that that's the fixed reading of that kanji group in the story. Sorry for the inconvenience.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 10:32, 16 August 2013 (CDT)

I haven't received any PM at the forums.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 10:18, 4 October 2014 (CDT)

== Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan ==
Hi, thanks for beginning the translation of this serie. I would also like to read it. BTW, why don't you translate the titel of the prologue? [[User:Setsuna86|Setsuna86]] ([[User talk:Setsuna86|talk]]) 09:10, 18 April 2014 (CDT)
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Hello TheCatWalk! Thanks for starting this series. :DDD

I just wanted to give a friendly reminder that there's been a '''[[Baka-Tsuki:New_Project_Startup_Guidelines|policy change on New Project Startup Guidelines]]'''. Do you think you could remember to post on the '''[[Help:Administration_Contact_Page|Administration Contact Page]]''' when you take the Manager position or start a new project in the future? Thanks! --[[User:Cloudii|Cloudii]] ([[User talk:Cloudii|talk]]) 12:37, 18 April 2014 (CDT)
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Hey TheCatWalk! Just want to let you know I appreciate that you're translating this LN so far and I'm definitely looking forward to more. You're doing amazing work! [[User:Aurst|Aurst]] ([[User talk:Aurst|talk]])

Hey there, thanks for picking this up. Just wondering if you are going to continue translating or will it end up like Kenkoku no Jungfrau for example. [[User:Zeikuu|Zeikuu]] ([[User talk:Zeikuu|talk]]) 11:02, 4 May 2014 (CDT)

Jolly Ho my good sir, just a head ups that I'm going to help edit this series.--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 15:44, 4 May 2014 (CDT)

Thanks for your work with this project :)

Thanks for picking this LN. Really looking forward for updates [[User:RougeReader|RougeReader]] ([[User talk:RougeReader|talk]]) 02:50, 27 August 2014 (CDT)
Hi! Really love this LN.would really love to join the editing team but I'm new to B-T so pls put me trough

Sorry about the previous message i put here. It was late and i want to join the team as an US English editor. [User talk:Mcpvp] I really like this series and want to help get it farther out there.

== Manager Position for two Projects ==

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The protection level of this project and the translated sub-pages will be set to registered user only. If there is a need for higher protection aka. only admins or supervisors, please contact me on my talk page as I'm currently the supervisor for these projects.

The Manager position change for [[Hitsugi_no_Chaika|Hitsugi no Chaika]] must first be discussed with the current Manager. The current Manager will be contacted and informed about the current events. If the Manager shall not respond in a limited time frame, the position will given to you by a Supervisor with the premise of being the only member of this project.

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== Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa ==

I see that you chose to insert the translation of the data sheets outside the boxes instead of replacing the text. Since you did it like that, you should Remove the "To Kusumi Chiharu. Congratulations. You have been selected to be the seventh Monster Tamer. Please choose one of the demons from list below as your partner; remember to complete the duty everyday." part, since that is text, not illustration. If you ever feel like inserting the translation ito the boxes, I'll leave you here something to know what goes where:
<table><tr><th>[Something]@[somethimg else]</th><th>LV: [number]</th><th></th><th>[Whatever] tribe: [monster].</th><th>Level: [number]</th></tr>
<tr><td></td><td>[symbols]: [letter #1]  [other symbols]: [letter #2]<br>[more symbols]: [letter #3]</td><th><br><br>   ->   </th><td></td><td>'''Physical strength''': [letter #1]  '''Power''': [letter #2]<br>'''Speed''': [letter #3]</td></tr>
<tr><td><center>[photo]</center><br><br></td><td>[text]<br>[more text]<br>[even more text]</td><th></th><td>[photo]</td><td>[description]</tr>
<tr><td></td><th>[weird text] [3-cypher number]</th><th></th><td></td><th>Serial number: [3-cypher number]</table>

Example:
<table><tr><th>Dragon tribe: Red dragon</th><th>LV: 1</th></tr>
<tr><td></td><td>'''Physical strength''': B  '''Power''': B<br>'''Speed''': A</td></tr>
<tr><td><center>[photo]</center><br><br></td><td>An all-round monster.<br>Can breathe out fire from the mouth.<br>Be careful that it doesn't burn your house.</tr>
<tr><td></td><th>Serial number: 001</table>

--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 13:01, 29 July 2013 (CDT)

ok,removing that part..and the illustration modification will take time so i'll keep it like this for now,if i edit it i'll up it. --[[User:Ways|<span style="color:green;font:bold 10pt kristen itc">TheCatWalk</span>]]

And since we are at it, I've just noticed that you put the Minotauros data in the Kraken sheet and vice versa.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 13:44, 29 July 2013 (CDT)

ok,that wasnt intentional XD hahahaha -facepalms- and i thought i was being careful --[[User:Ways|<span style="color:green;font:bold 10pt kristen itc">TheCatWalk</span>]]

I'm changing "Earth dragon tribe" to "Reptile tribe", since it seems to be mostly snakes. It affect to Venus snake.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 15:10, 3 August 2013 (CDT)

As long as it doesnt deviate from the original meaning,then its ok --[[User:Ways|<span style="color:green;font:bold 10pt kristen itc">TheCatWalk</span>]]

I've just changed all instances of "serial number" for "code", as I've found that that's the fixed reading of that kanji group in the story. Sorry for the inconvenience.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 10:32, 16 August 2013 (CDT)

I haven't received any PM at the forums.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 10:18, 4 October 2014 (CDT)

== Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan ==
Hi, thanks for beginning the translation of this serie. I would also like to read it. BTW, why don't you translate the titel of the prologue? [[User:Setsuna86|Setsuna86]] ([[User talk:Setsuna86|talk]]) 09:10, 18 April 2014 (CDT)
<div style="border:1px dashed orange;padding:5px 20px;">
Hello TheCatWalk! Thanks for starting this series. :DDD

I just wanted to give a friendly reminder that there's been a '''[[Baka-Tsuki:New_Project_Startup_Guidelines|policy change on New Project Startup Guidelines]]'''. Do you think you could remember to post on the '''[[Help:Administration_Contact_Page|Administration Contact Page]]''' when you take the Manager position or start a new project in the future? Thanks! --[[User:Cloudii|Cloudii]] ([[User talk:Cloudii|talk]]) 12:37, 18 April 2014 (CDT)
</div>

Hey TheCatWalk! Just want to let you know I appreciate that you're translating this LN so far and I'm definitely looking forward to more. You're doing amazing work! [[User:Aurst|Aurst]] ([[User talk:Aurst|talk]])

Hey there, thanks for picking this up. Just wondering if you are going to continue translating or will it end up like Kenkoku no Jungfrau for example. [[User:Zeikuu|Zeikuu]] ([[User talk:Zeikuu|talk]]) 11:02, 4 May 2014 (CDT)

Jolly Ho my good sir, just a head ups that I'm going to help edit this series.--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 15:44, 4 May 2014 (CDT)

Thanks for your work with this project :)

Sorry about putting this message here. My mobile phone can't go any more down thqn this :( sorry about tbis but can I help edit this because I really like this series and want to help but I only know US English. So please allow me to be on the team.

Thanks for picking this LN. Really looking forward for updates [[User:RougeReader|RougeReader]] ([[User talk:RougeReader|talk]]) 02:50, 27 August 2014 (CDT)
Hi! Really love this LN.would really love to join the editing team but I'm new to B-T so pls put me trough

== Manager Position for two Projects ==

Your position as a manager for [[Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan|Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan]] was accepted, and is now official.
The protection level of this project and the translated sub-pages will be set to registered user only. If there is a need for higher protection aka. only admins or supervisors, please contact me on my talk page as I'm currently the supervisor for these projects.

The Manager position change for [[Hitsugi_no_Chaika|Hitsugi no Chaika]] must first be discussed with the current Manager. The current Manager will be contacted and informed about the current events. If the Manager shall not respond in a limited time frame, the position will given to you by a Supervisor with the premise of being the only member of this project.

Regards,
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2014-10-06T03:01:46Z

Mcpvp:

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2014-09-23T00:34:22Z

Mcpvp:

Introduction
In a world where magic is socially accepted and everyone uses magic. One boy will shape how the world functions, acts, and shapes for generations to generations. The boys name is Arie.
Chapter one
“I think he is starting to wake up.”
Yes professor, but don’t you think he remembers what happened to him?
Well i don’t know but lets ask him when he wakes up shall we.
“Mmh, where am i?” Arie said
“Ha i told you he was awake. Oh sorry for my rudeness, but you are currently in a hospital.Do you remember anything?” Professor said.
“I think i remember something. I think my name is Are and i attended Surine middle school.” Arie said
“Ah so he does remember something. Please can you tell me a little more about yourself.” the professor asked
“Well, as far as i can know. I remember taking a magic test in elementary school and i was told that i have no magic.”
“Oh that is interesting, Don’t you think Sharlet?”
“Yes that is indeed peculiar that there is someone doesn't have magic.” Sharlet said
“Well since that first examination test in elementary school i was put in as the school’s punching bag. Everyone at the school picked and bullied me for their own problems.” Arie said
“Oh, so that is very unfortunate for you so can you tell me more?” the professor asked.
“That is when i got my first friend named Sara. She was the only one that defended me and helped me get through elementary school. Without her i would have gone and died right then and there the old way.” Arie said
“Oh that is terrible. Why did the teachers not help you.” Sharlet asked.
“Well that is because when i was being bullied it would happen during lunch and recess. If the teachers did see me being bullied then they would turn a blind eye because i couldn’t use magic.” Arie said
“That is so sad” Sharlet said while crying tears.
“Come on Sharlet i told you that you are a grown woman. You need to act like one instead of crying.”the professor said
Yes sir. I will sniff but sniff at least sniff give me some sniff time to calm down sniff. She walks out of the room.
“Sorry about that, my assistant can be a little too emotional sometimes. Now can you continue where you left off.” the professor said cheerfully.
“It kept going like that up until 7th grade in Physical education. We were playing dodgeball and I was targeted and i got hit 5 times by the popular jocks. Then they called me a failure of a human and a black sheep of the world and continued. That is when i was when i felt this feeling in my heart that said shut up and it grew and grew and grew until i yelled shut up and then their heads was sliced off. I didn’t mean too but it happened. Everyone in the gym called me a monster and a killer. I denied it and said stay away from me. Everyone in the gym was flung back until they hit the wall. I was cowering in the corner and panicking until Sara came up to me, hugged me, and said to me that everything was going to be alright.” Arie said
I heard the teacher yelling to call the police, people running in fear and Sara saying that she will always be there for me while i lost consciousness.
Hmm, this is rather interesting. The professor said to himself while looking at Arie happily
“What where is Sara, Why am i cuffed to this bed, and why did i not noticed this until now?” Are panics as he started to realise that he is in a white room with a stranger that is sitting in a chair in front of him with a huge smile.
“Ah so the drugs and truth serum wore out. You see Are you caused a lot of trouble today you know that right?” the professor said with a big grin on his face.
“Who are you, how do you know my name and how do i know what trouble i caused. I am currently cuffed to a bed, there is a stranger who knows my name that is talking to me like he knows me, and why is there a one way MIRROR!” Arie exclaimed.
“Crap his heart rate is increasing drastically. Sharlet, SHARLET COME QUICKLY WITH THE SEDATIVE.” The professor exclaimed with a booming voice.
“Coming sir.” Sharlet said. She rushes in and injects Are with it. “Its done sir, but why did you yell for me to come in when i was just outside the one way mirror?” Sharlet asked
“Sorry, sometimes i forget the protocol sometimes. It is that we are currently dealing with an unusual case here.” The professor said while dumbfounded about Arie.
“Yes, indeed we are. Should we report this to headquarters or give him to the courts to deal with him?” Sharlet said, “Because we are dealing with someone who killed 2 kids without any effort, I think we should put him in a maximum security prison to prevent any massacres.”
“Sharlet, as much as i can agree to stop anything from going wrong. He still is a child and if we can help him control his power. We can have him as the stepping stone to make our society to move forward.” The professor said.
“Where is Sara?” Are asked intensely.
“I am sorry again that i forgot about you again. If you are looking for Sara then you will tell me what does she mean to you.” the professor asked
“Ha do you think i will tell you what she means to me. Why should i tell you that.” Are scoffed.
“Hmm seems that you do not know who you are dealing with. I am Dr.Hasbo who is also a professor. I am the one who is willing to save your life and give you a chance to see Sara if you answer on question. What does Sara mean to you.” Dr.Hasbo said calmly.
“If i answer the question then can i see Sara and have her with me?” Arie pleaded.
“Of course, I am a man of my word so please answer the question are. What does Sara mean to you.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“She means the whole world to me. Ever since the magic test my actual parents abandoned me, i had to live in an orphanage. When i lived in the orphanage i was isolated from everyone. Then Sara came to the orphanage with her parents and when we looked at each other eyes. There was a spark within me that said to be with Sara, and when the spark ended she said to her farther “Can we adopt him?”. Her father said to her “Now honey, I don’t think he would make a good brother for you. Everyone in the orphanage calls him the cursed child and i don’t think you would have fun with him. Let’s look for someone else shall we?”. Then she instantly responded with “No papa. I don’t care if he may be strange or anything. All i know is that i want him near me at all times and no matter what we will be friends no matter what. I want him as my brother and that is final.” No matter what her father told her. She wouldn’t give up her 7th year old stand. Since then i have always looked up to her for help, guidance, savior, happiness, and hope.” Arie said, “Can i see her now please. I want her to be here with me now.”
“Wow. There is no way i can stop it now.” Dr.Hasbo said, “Let her in.”
Sara was tall, slender and had a blindfold around her eyes so she couldn't see anything. She was constantly saying “Where is my brother. Where is Are. Where is my precious brother.”
“Sara! Unblindfold her, uncuff me and let me hold my sister. You promised me that Dr.Hasbo.” Are said
“Arie is that you?” Sara asked. looking around for a reply.
“Yes sis. yes it is me. Your brother is here. Don’t panic sis i am here.” Arie said.
“Arie before i can do that you will have to go through a series of test to test you. If you want your sister beside you during it then be my guest, but if you want to hug her now. Then you must accept the test and go through them. Do you understand.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“Yes. Then i accept the tests so let me go and let me hold my sister.” Arie said.
“As you wish” Dr.Hasbo said while uncuffing Are he said, “Most people today call common magic as magic and nothing else, but when government officials use elemental magic they are called elementalist when they still use magic but more complex plus use common magic. After that the most elite of the government's magic user can use basic and elemental plus a unique magic called supernatural magic. The elite magic users can only have one or two while you on the other hand have more supernatural magic that anyone else. Arie this doesn't mean that you don’t have magic.It means that you are extremely special.”
“How can you prove this Dr.Hasbo?” Are asked while reaching out to hug Sara. Are then replied, “Sara, what did they do to you. Did they hurt you in any way. Are you ok?” When saying this Are removes the blindfold on Sara.
“Arie. ARIE. Are, thank god you are ok. I didn't know if you were ok or not. After the gym scene, the military showed up and i took you with me and held onto you when i brought you to the sewer system that we would go to if things went bad. When we were there you didn’t wake up so i kept you in my hands as long as i could. They eventually surrounded me and i didn’t let go of you so they knocked me out and i found myself being interrogated by strangers. They said that if i confessed what we were doing there and who we are then i could see you so i gave in and told them. Afterwards i was blindfolded and was brought here.” Sara said while crying of joy to see her adopted little brother safe.
“Well it seems that we have some family reunion settled so if you mind. Arie come with me we are going to have some marvelous testing. Oh and Sara i know what you are thinking. I am not going to hurt Arie. I am going to train Arie to make him control his new found magic.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“Well than if i can’t come then i will have to force myself to come.” Sara said angrily.
“I anticipated this much and i told Arie that you could stay with him so there is no reason to throw a hissy fit young lady.” Dr.Hasbo said with his usual big smile.
End of chapter one

Chapter two
“Ok Arie, We are going to try elemental magic." Dr.Hasbo said.
"What is elemental magic? What are you talking about doc." Arie said
"Well magic is classified into 3 sections. Most people classify magic as basic magic which is used in daily life like cooking food or opening the shutters. Out of that bunch some people can use elemental magic which uses peoples internal mana to control a specific element. From there we have the most royal or most special people who have legendary magic. They have an incantation of their own personality. It takes rigorous training and only 1% of the human population have legendary magic." Dr.Hasbo elaborated.
"Oh so what is Arie. You said that he needs to control his new magic. I thought that he failed the magic test." Sara said.
"The magic test tests for basic magic. From what he said earlier. It seems that he has elemental and legendary magic. I have never seen someone that can't use basic magic and can use elemental and legendary magic without training." Dr.Hasbo said, "That is why I will help you go to Magic academy and mature your internal mana and magic."
"If I go then what will happen to Sara? Will she be left alone with her family? I won't go the the academy if she can't come with me." Arie stated with confidence.
"Don't worry. I will make sure that she will come with you. Besides she will help you get to class to class and be rooming with you. I think that she is the only one that can help you control your mana and magic." Dr.Hasbo said.
"Does that mean that she will enroll there too?" Arie asked.
"Yes it will. So you guys should be set to go in about 1 day." Dr.Hasbo said with his usual smile.
"Sir I don't think that we should be doing this. They are currently in the news and if we take them to the academy then the other students will put him down." Sharlet said with trembling fear in her voice.
"DON'T YOU THINK THAT I KNOW THAT!" Dr. Hasbo shouted with anger, "THEY ARE CHILDREN AND THEY DON'T KNOW HOW TO CONTROL THEIR MAGIC. WHERE ELSE CAN THEY TRAIN EXCEPT THE ACADEMY!"
Yes sir. I understand but Sharlet said.
THERE IS NO BUT'S. THAT IS AN ORDER AND YOU WILL FOLLOW IT. YOU DON'T TAKE RISKS. THAT IS WHY NO ONE ACKNOWLEDGES YOU SHARLET! Dr. Hasbo shouted at the top of his lounges.
“Yes sir. I will get the preparations ready.” Sharlet says with depression.
“I am sorry i had to say it that way, but we need the funding so if we didn’t need the funding then i wouldn’t send them to the academy.” Dr.Hasbo said with sadness, “ So Arie you are going to take an entrance test with Sara to get an entrance to the academy.”
“Sara do you want to do this?” Arie asked
“Yes as long as i am with you there is nowhere i wouldn’t go.” Sara said in a loving fashion.
“Alright. Then we will take the test together.” Arie said confidently.
They walk down the hall and on their right sees a huge training facility.
The test took about 3 hours. It encompass a durability test, knowledge test, Invoking test, and physical test. During the invoking test Arie summoned a dragon and Sara summoned a spirit.
“Well just as i expected, it turns out that both of you are qualified to go to the academy.” Dr.Hasbo said, “So you will have to get your parents permission to go to the academy.”
“I don’t think we can professor” Sara said with displease.
“Why is that Sara?” Dr.Hasbo said pondering about the answer.
“I was going to tell you later Arie, but since the gym incident i brought you to the house. Once we were in the house our parents wanted to get rid of you so there would be no ties to my family. I protested and said if they wanted to get rid of you then they have to get rid of me. They wanted pleaded one last time to get rid of you so I ran with you to the sewer.” Sara said
“Sara, why did you have to sacrifice so much for me?” Arie said.
“Because I love you Arie, and I want to be with you forever.” Sara said.
“Okay before this goes any further. Lets get ready for the academy then.” Dr.Hasbo said with his usual cool smile.
“We can continue this later, but first do we have to get a guardian's signature?” Arie asked.
“No you don’t have to. I have thought this far so the guardian of you two is you two.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“What do you mean? We are each other guardian’s?” Arie asked with a puzzled attitude.
“Yes. That is why i made Sara join you in the entrance test for the magic academy. I heard the story about your adoption, how Sara wouldn’t give up on adopting you, and how she stayed with you. Then using that i predicted that when stuff hits the fan. Your adopted parents would try to cut the tie with you and their family.I am sorry that i went on a rant. The reason you are each other guardian is that in the Magic academy. Students will have to chose a partner to work with and cooperate to achieve victory. The partners look after one another so that is why you guys are each other guardians. ” Dr.Hasbo said.
“When knowing this guess that our parents would ditch us then why did you ask for our parent’s signature?” Arie said.
“That is because in regular protocol your parents would have to sign the sheet that they would never again see their children and they could die at any time in and after the academy. Then the academy would not be liable if their children die in combat.” Dr.Hasbo said.
"Wow. What do we do at this academy?" Arie said.
"You will find out when you guys get there." Dr.Hasbo said.
"Ok so when are we leaving?" Sara asked.
"We are going in about now, so get yourself organized to be on a jet with royalty." Dr.Hasbo said.
End of chapter 2

Chapter 3
"So who are we going with on the private jet?" Arie asked.
"The person who we are going to be with is Mary hasson." Dr.Hasbo said.
"I think that I know her. She went to Surine middle school right?" Arie asked.
"Yeah she is. How do you know her Arie?" Dr.Hasbo asked.
"In the beginning of 7th grade Mary started off getting bullied for her child like attitude and behavior. I stopped her from being bullied even more and from then on she admired me like a big brother." Arie said, " I wonder how she would act when she sees me now. Knowing that I am going to magic academy." Are said.
"Oh look there she is now." Sara said.
"HEY ARIE ! IT HAS BEEN SOO LONG SINCE WE HAVE SEEN EACH OTHER." Mary said while jumping to hug Arie.
"Aww Mary why do you have to do this here and it has only been 6 days." Arie moaned while being squeezed by Mary.
"Still 6 days without Arie is 2 years of waiting. I never want you to leave my sights." Mary said.
"Hey can you let go of Arie now." Sara said with gradual agitation.
"Oh Sara I forgot about you being here. So where have you guys been?" Mary asked
"We were interrogated, negotiating, and accepting that we are going to magic academy." Sara said, "Plus I risked my life, been abandoned, and was tortured for Arie."
Wow I wish I was you Mary said to herself. I would do anything to be even accepted by Arie.
"Plus we are going to magic academy." Arie said.
"What you can use magic? That is amazing Arie." Mary said.
“Well it turns out that i can use magic but i can use very advanced ones.” Arie said.

User:Mcpvp

2014-09-23T00:26:49Z

Mcpvp: Blanked the page

User:Mcpvp

2014-09-22T14:59:30Z

Mcpvp: Preview on the 1st book that i have. Needs some reworking in the testing park, and got some inspiration from mahouka

Introduction
In a world where magic is socially accepted and everyone uses magic. One boy will shape how the world functions, acts, and shapes for generations to generations. The boys name is Arie.
Chapter one
“I think he is starting to wake up.”
Yes professor, but don’t you think he remembers what happened to him?
Well i don’t know but lets ask him when he wakes up shall we.
“Mmh, where am i?” Arie said
“Ha i told you he was awake. Oh sorry for my rudeness, but you are currently in a hospital.Do you remember anything?” Professor said.
“I think i remember something. I think my name is Are and i attended Surine middle school.” Arie said
“Ah so he does remember something. Please can you tell me a little more about yourself.” the professor asked
“Well, as far as i can know. I remember taking a magic test in elementary school and i was told that i have no magic.”
“Oh that is interesting, Don’t you think Sharlet?”
“Yes that is indeed peculiar that there is someone doesn't have magic.” Sharlet said
“Well since that first examination test in elementary school i was put in as the school’s punching bag. Everyone at the school picked and bullied me for their own problems.” Arie said
“Oh, so that is very unfortunate for you so can you tell me more?” the professor asked.
“That is when i got my first friend named Sara. She was the only one that defended me and helped me get through elementary school. Without her i would have gone and died right then and there the old way.” Arie said
“Oh that is terrible. Why did the teachers not help you.” Sharlet asked.
“Well that is because when i was being bullied it would happen during lunch and recess. If the teachers did see me being bullied then they would turn a blind eye because i couldn’t use magic.” Arie said
“That is so sad” Sharlet said while crying tears.
“Come on Sharlet i told you that you are a grown woman. You need to act like one instead of crying.”the professor said
Yes sir. I will sniff but sniff at least sniff give me some sniff time to calm down sniff. She walks out of the room.
“Sorry about that, my assistant can be a little too emotional sometimes. Now can you continue where you left off.” the professor said cheerfully.
“It kept going like that up until 7th grade in Physical education. We were playing dodgeball and I was targeted and i got hit 5 times by the popular jocks. Then they called me a failure of a human and a black sheep of the world and continued. That is when i was when i felt this feeling in my heart that said shut up and it grew and grew and grew until i yelled shut up and then their heads was sliced off. I didn’t mean too but it happened. Everyone in the gym called me a monster and a killer. I denied it and said stay away from me. Everyone in the gym was flung back until they hit the wall. I was cowering in the corner and panicking until Sara came up to me, hugged me, and said to me that everything was going to be alright.” Arie said
I heard the teacher yelling to call the police, people running in fear and Sara saying that she will always be there for me while i lost consciousness.
Hmm, this is rather interesting. The professor said to himself while looking at Arie happily
“What where is Sara, Why am i cuffed to this bed, and why did i not noticed this until now?” Are panics as he started to realise that he is in a white room with a stranger that is sitting in a chair in front of him with a huge smile.
“Ah so the drugs and truth serum wore out. You see Are you caused a lot of trouble today you know that right?” the professor said with a big grin on his face.
“Who are you, how do you know my name and how do i know what trouble i caused. I am currently cuffed to a bed, there is a stranger who knows my name that is talking to me like he knows me, and why is there a one way MIRROR!” Arie exclaimed.
“Crap his heart rate is increasing drastically. Sharlet, SHARLET COME QUICKLY WITH THE SEDATIVE.” The professor exclaimed with a booming voice.
“Coming sir.” Sharlet said. She rushes in and injects Are with it. “Its done sir, but why did you yell for me to come in when i was just outside the one way mirror?” Sharlet asked
“Sorry, sometimes i forget the protocol sometimes. It is that we are currently dealing with an unusual case here.” The professor said while dumbfounded about Arie.
“Yes, indeed we are. Should we report this to headquarters or give him to the courts to deal with him?” Sharlet said, “Because we are dealing with someone who killed 2 kids without any effort, I think we should put him in a maximum security prison to prevent any massacres.”
“Sharlet, as much as i can agree to stop anything from going wrong. He still is a child and if we can help him control his power. We can have him as the stepping stone to make our society to move forward.” The professor said.
“Where is Sara?” Are asked intensely.
“I am sorry again that i forgot about you again. If you are looking for Sara then you will tell me what does she mean to you.” the professor asked
“Ha do you think i will tell you what she means to me. Why should i tell you that.” Are scoffed.
“Hmm seems that you do not know who you are dealing with. I am Dr.Hasbo who is also a professor. I am the one who is willing to save your life and give you a chance to see Sara if you answer on question. What does Sara mean to you.” Dr.Hasbo said calmly.
“If i answer the question then can i see Sara and have her with me?” Arie pleaded.
“Of course, I am a man of my word so please answer the question are. What does Sara mean to you.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“She means the whole world to me. Ever since the magic test my actual parents abandoned me, i had to live in an orphanage. When i lived in the orphanage i was isolated from everyone. Then Sara came to the orphanage with her parents and when we looked at each other eyes. There was a spark within me that said to be with Sara, and when the spark ended she said to her farther “Can we adopt him?”. Her father said to her “Now honey, I don’t think he would make a good brother for you. Everyone in the orphanage calls him the cursed child and i don’t think you would have fun with him. Let’s look for someone else shall we?”. Then she instantly responded with “No papa. I don’t care if he may be strange or anything. All i know is that i want him near me at all times and no matter what we will be friends no matter what. I want him as my brother and that is final.” No matter what her father told her. She wouldn’t give up her 7th year old stand. Since then i have always looked up to her for help, guidance, savior, happiness, and hope.” Arie said, “Can i see her now please. I want her to be here with me now.”
“Wow. There is no way i can stop it now.” Dr.Hasbo said, “Let her in.”
Sara was tall, slender and had a blindfold around her eyes so she couldn't see anything. She was constantly saying “Where is my brother. Where is Are. Where is my precious brother.”
“Sara! Unblindfold her, uncuff me and let me hold my sister. You promised me that Dr.Hasbo.” Are said
“Arie is that you?” Sara asked. looking around for a reply.
“Yes sis. yes it is me. Your brother is here. Don’t panic sis i am here.” Arie said.
“Arie before i can do that you will have to go through a series of test to test you. If you want your sister beside you during it then be my guest, but if you want to hug her now. Then you must accept the test and go through them. Do you understand.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“Yes. Then i accept the tests so let me go and let me hold my sister.” Arie said.
“As you wish” Dr.Hasbo said while uncuffing Are he said, “Most people today call common magic as magic and nothing else, but when government officials use elemental magic they are called elementalist when they still use magic but more complex plus use common magic. After that the most elite of the government's magic user can use basic and elemental plus a unique magic called supernatural magic. The elite magic users can only have one or two while you on the other hand have more supernatural magic that anyone else. Arie this doesn't mean that you don’t have magic.It means that you are extremely special.”
“How can you prove this Dr.Hasbo?” Are asked while reaching out to hug Sara. Are then replied, “Sara, what did they do to you. Did they hurt you in any way. Are you ok?” When saying this Are removes the blindfold on Sara.
“Arie. ARIE. Are, thank god you are ok. I didn't know if you were ok or not. After the gym scene, the military showed up and i took you with me and held onto you when i brought you to the sewer system that we would go to if things went bad. When we were there you didn’t wake up so i kept you in my hands as long as i could. They eventually surrounded me and i didn’t let go of you so they knocked me out and i found myself being interrogated by strangers. They said that if i confessed what we were doing there and who we are then i could see you so i gave in and told them. Afterwards i was blindfolded and was brought here.” Sara said while crying of joy to see her adopted little brother safe.
“Well it seems that we have some family reunion settled so if you mind. Arie come with me we are going to have some marvelous testing. Oh and Sara i know what you are thinking. I am not going to hurt Arie. I am going to train Arie to make him control his new found magic.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“Well than if i can’t come then i will have to force myself to come.” Sara said angrily.
“I anticipated this much and i told Arie that you could stay with him so there is no reason to throw a hissy fit young lady.” Dr.Hasbo said with his usual big smile.
End of chapter one

Chapter two
“Ok Arie, We are going to try elemental magic." Dr.Hasbo said.
"What is elemental magic? What are you talking about doc." Arie said
"Well magic is classified into 3 sections. Most people classify magic as basic magic which is used in daily life like cooking food or opening the shutters. Out of that bunch some people can use elemental magic which uses peoples internal mana to control a specific element. From there we have the most royal or most special people who have legendary magic. They have an incantation of their own personality. It takes rigorous training and only 1% of the human population have legendary magic." Dr.Hasbo elaborated.
"Oh so what is Arie. You said that he needs to control his new magic. I thought that he failed the magic test." Sara said.
"The magic test tests for basic magic. From what he said earlier. It seems that he has elemental and legendary magic. I have never seen someone that can't use basic magic and can use elemental and legendary magic without training." Dr.Hasbo said, "That is why I will help you go to Magic academy and mature your internal mana and magic."
"If I go then what will happen to Sara? Will she be left alone with her family? I won't go the the academy if she can't come with me." Arie stated with confidence.
"Don't worry. I will make sure that she will come with you. Besides she will help you get to class to class and be rooming with you. I think that she is the only one that can help you control your mana and magic." Dr.Hasbo said.
"Does that mean that she will enroll there too?" Arie asked.
"Yes it will. So you guys should be set to go in about 1 day." Dr.Hasbo said with his usual smile.
"Sir I don't think that we should be doing this. They are currently in the news and if we take them to the academy then the other students will put him down." Sharlet said with trembling fear in her voice.
"DON'T YOU THINK THAT I KNOW THAT!" Dr. Hasbo shouted with anger, "THEY ARE CHILDREN AND THEY DON'T KNOW HOW TO CONTROL THEIR MAGIC. WHERE ELSE CAN THEY TRAIN EXCEPT THE ACADEMY!"
Yes sir. I understand but Sharlet said.
THERE IS NO BUT'S. THAT IS AN ORDER AND YOU WILL FOLLOW IT. YOU DON'T TAKE RISKS. THAT IS WHY NO ONE ACKNOWLEDGES YOU SHARLET! Dr. Hasbo shouted at the top of his lounges.
“Yes sir. I will get the preparations ready.” Sharlet says with depression.
“I am sorry i had to say it that way, but we need the funding so if we didn’t need the funding then i wouldn’t send them to the academy.” Dr.Hasbo said with sadness, “ So Arie you are going to take an entrance test with Sara to get an entrance to the academy.”
“Sara do you want to do this?” Arie asked
“Yes as long as i am with you there is nowhere i wouldn’t go.” Sara said in a loving fashion.
“Alright. Then we will take the test together.” Arie said confidently.
They walk down the hall and on their right sees a huge training facility.
The test took about 3 hours. It encompass a durability test, knowledge test, Invoking test, and physical test. During the invoking test Arie summoned a dragon and Sara summoned a spirit.
“Well just as i expected, it turns out that both of you are qualified to go to the academy.” Dr.Hasbo said, “So you will have to get your parents permission to go to the academy.”
“I don’t think we can professor” Sara said with displease.
“Why is that Sara?” Dr.Hasbo said pondering about the answer.
“I was going to tell you later Arie, but since the gym incident i brought you to the house. Once we were in the house our parents wanted to get rid of you so there would be no ties to my family. I protested and said if they wanted to get rid of you then they have to get rid of me. They wanted pleaded one last time to get rid of you so I ran with you to the sewer.” Sara said
“Sara, why did you have to sacrifice so much for me?” Arie said.
“Because i love you Arie, and i want to be with you forever.” Sara said.
“Okay before this goes any further. Lets get ready for the academy then.” Dr.Hasbo said with his usual cool smile.
“We can continue this later, but first do we have to get a guardian's signature?” Arie asked.
“No you don’t have to. I have thought this far so the guardian of you two is you two.” Dr.Hasbo said.
“What do you mean? We are each other guardian’s?” Arie asked with a puzzled attitude.
“Yes. That is why i made Sara join you in the entrance test for the magic academy. I heard the story about your adoption, how Sara wouldn’t give up on adopting you, and how she stayed with you. Then using that i predicted that when stuff hits the fan. Your adopted parents would try to cut the tie with you and their family.I am sorry that i went on a rant. The reason you are each other guardian is that in the Magic academy. Students will have to chose a partner to work with and cooperate to achieve victory. The partners look after one another so that is why you guys are each other guardians. ” Dr.Hasbo said.
“When knowing this guess that our parents would ditch us then why did you ask for our parent’s signature?” Arie said.
“That is because in regular protocol your parents would have to sign the sheet that they would never again see their children and they could die at any time in and after the academy. Then the academy would not be liable if their children die in combat.” Dr.Hasbo said.
"Wow. What do we do at this academy?" Arie said.
"You will find out when you guys get there." Dr.Hasbo said.
"Ok so when are we leaving?" Sara asked.
"We are going in about now, so get yourself organized to be on a jet with royalty." Dr.Hasbo said.
End of chapter 2

Chapter 3
"So who are we going with on the private jet?" Arie asked.
"The person who we are going to be with is Mary hasson." Dr.Hasbo said.
"I think that I know her. She went to Surine middle school right?" Arie asked.
"Yeah she is. How do you know her Arie?" Dr.Hasbo asked.
"In the beginning of 7th grade Mary started off getting bullied for her child like attitude and behavior. I stopped her from being bullied even more and from then on she admired me like a big brother." Arie said, " I wonder how she would act when she sees me now. Knowing that I am going to magic academy." Are said.
"Oh look there she is now." Sara said.
"HEY ARIE ! IT HAS BEEN SOO LONG SINCE WE HAVE SEEN EACH OTHER." Mary said while jumping to hug Arie.
"Aww Mary why do you have to do this here and it has only been 6 days." Arie moaned while being squeezed by Mary.
"Still 6 days without Arie is 2 years of waiting. I never want you to leave my sights." Mary said.
"Hey can you let go of Arie now." Sara said with gradual agitation.
"Oh Sara I forgot about you being here. So where have you guys been?" Mary asked
"We were interrogated, negotiating, and accepting that we are going to magic academy." Sara said, "Plus I risked my life, been abandoned, and was tortured for Arie."
Wow I wish I was you Mary said to herself. I would do anything to be even accepted by Arie.
"Plus we are going to magic academy." Arie said.
"What you can use magic? That is amazing Arie." Mary said.
“Well it turns out that i can use magic but i can use very advanced ones.” Arie said.

User talk:Mcpvp

2014-09-22T14:37:29Z

Mcpvp: For a book

Hey does anyone mind if i make a book here as an individual author, but have some help in draw some scenes because i can't draw for my life.