https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=MidutaniVBaka-Tsuki - User contributions [en]2026-05-02T12:33:52ZUser contributionsMediaWiki 1.43.1https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Toradora!:Volume1_Chapter1&diff=38862Talk:Toradora!:Volume1 Chapter12008-12-07T21:23:02Z<p>MidutaniV: midutaniV</p>
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<div>When a speaker talks for more than one paragraph, then it's customary to omit the end quotation marks (") in all of the paragraphs except for the last paragraph. <br />
http://www.edenpr.k12.mn.us/ephs/departments/media/punctuating.pdf Note #11.<br />
--Margaretman2 <br />
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If you are speaking of the ''Then Then'', it's not between quotation marks but in italics.<br />
[[User:Vaelis|Vaelis]] 01:15, 24 June 2008 (PDT)<br />
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== Very heavy parrot ==<br />
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"Argh... Why are birds so dumb? As expected when you have a brain that weighs only 1kg, Ryuuji sighed, wrapping up the soiled newspaper."<br />
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Given that parrots rarely weigh more than a kilogram total, this must be the heaviest parrot in the world (200kg+!)<br />
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I think you must of meant 1g, not 1kg (0.035oz vs 2.2lb).<br />
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Try looking here:[http://www.avianweb.com/AverageBirdWeights.htm]<br />
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== Hi, Kinny! ==<br />
I'm MidutaniV<br />
Cheers for your good work. Im in love with toradora like you.<br />
So let me start to give you suggestions of changes to vol. 1. What I can do is to check if your translation fits the contexts (I've read all the volumes),<br />
but my English is much less capable so just take them as minor suggestions.<br />
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「手に入れるべきたった一人が、ちゃんとそれを見つけられる。」"And only those who should obtain it will be able to find it."<br />
I suggest that you put "in the end" or something to express "ちゃんと” <br />
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「そういうふうになっている」"That is all."<br />
How about "That's how it is supposed to be."? Too awkward?<br />
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== midutaniV ==<br />
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This is half my study of English. So I might need to ask questions.<br />
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「だが苛立ちは鏡に対してはなんかでなく、〜〜 」"It was pointless to take anger out on the mirror no matter how frustrated one was..."<br />
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"But actually his frustration was coming from not ~ but ~" is my translation from the JP sentence. Why did you choose such a structure?<br />
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「こんなもん、うそっぱちだ」"This stuff is nothing but a rip-off!"<br />
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Doesn't "rip-off" reffer to more like 'money' things? well I can't tell though. I'd say "This is useless shit!"(joke)<br />
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「ひとつ言わせてもらえば、〜 失敗に終わった」"Were it up to me, I'm not too sure if I would care about modeling. Still, I wanted to change."<br />
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Shouldn't this be him and he instead of me and I? does not much matter though.<br />
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「こんなところはかわいくない、こともない。」"This was why he was cute."<br />
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This is hard, but I want Ryuji to show his hesitation to clearly call Inko-chan "cute". so what about " This is why he is cu...year, kind of cute."? Also I want you to make Inko-chan looking crazier and uglier(^_^). That's what Inko-chan is about. Like "le...le..leeee...llelllellltettttooooo..."</div>MidutaniVhttps://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Toradora!:Volume1_Chapter1&diff=38861Talk:Toradora!:Volume1 Chapter12008-12-07T20:08:48Z<p>MidutaniV: /* Hi, Kinny! */</p>
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<div>When a speaker talks for more than one paragraph, then it's customary to omit the end quotation marks (") in all of the paragraphs except for the last paragraph. <br />
http://www.edenpr.k12.mn.us/ephs/departments/media/punctuating.pdf Note #11.<br />
--Margaretman2 <br />
<br />
If you are speaking of the ''Then Then'', it's not between quotation marks but in italics.<br />
[[User:Vaelis|Vaelis]] 01:15, 24 June 2008 (PDT)<br />
<br />
== Very heavy parrot ==<br />
<br />
"Argh... Why are birds so dumb? As expected when you have a brain that weighs only 1kg, Ryuuji sighed, wrapping up the soiled newspaper."<br />
<br />
Given that parrots rarely weigh more than a kilogram total, this must be the heaviest parrot in the world (200kg+!)<br />
<br />
I think you must of meant 1g, not 1kg (0.035oz vs 2.2lb).<br />
<br />
<br />
Try looking here:[http://www.avianweb.com/AverageBirdWeights.htm]<br />
<br />
== Hi, Kinny! ==<br />
I'm MidutaniV<br />
Cheers for your good work. Im in love with toradora like you.<br />
So let me start to give you suggestions of changes to vol. 1. What I can do is to check if your translation fits the contexts (I've read all the volumes),<br />
but my English is much less capable so just take them as minor suggestions.<br />
<br />
「手に入れるべきたった一人が、ちゃんとそれを見つけられる。」"And only those who should obtain it will be able to find it."<br />
I suggest that you put "in the end" or something to express "ちゃんと” <br />
<br />
「そういうふうになっている」"That is all."<br />
How about "That's how it is supposed to be."? Too awkward?</div>MidutaniVhttps://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Toradora!:Volume1_Chapter1&diff=38860Talk:Toradora!:Volume1 Chapter12008-12-07T20:08:16Z<p>MidutaniV: /* Hi, Kinny! */</p>
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<div>When a speaker talks for more than one paragraph, then it's customary to omit the end quotation marks (") in all of the paragraphs except for the last paragraph. <br />
http://www.edenpr.k12.mn.us/ephs/departments/media/punctuating.pdf Note #11.<br />
--Margaretman2 <br />
<br />
If you are speaking of the ''Then Then'', it's not between quotation marks but in italics.<br />
[[User:Vaelis|Vaelis]] 01:15, 24 June 2008 (PDT)<br />
<br />
== Very heavy parrot ==<br />
<br />
"Argh... Why are birds so dumb? As expected when you have a brain that weighs only 1kg, Ryuuji sighed, wrapping up the soiled newspaper."<br />
<br />
Given that parrots rarely weigh more than a kilogram total, this must be the heaviest parrot in the world (200kg+!)<br />
<br />
I think you must of meant 1g, not 1kg (0.035oz vs 2.2lb).<br />
<br />
<br />
Try looking here:[http://www.avianweb.com/AverageBirdWeights.htm]<br />
<br />
== Hi, Kinny! ==<br />
I'm MidutaniV<br />
Cheers for your good work. Im in love with toradora like you.<br />
So let me start to give you suggestions of changes to vol. 1. What I can do is to check if your translation fits the contexts (I've read all the volumes),<br />
but my English is much less capable so just take them as minor suggestions.<br />
<br />
「手に入れるべきたった一人が、ちゃんとそれを見つけられる。」"And only those who should obtain it will be able to find it."<br />
I suggest that you put "in the end" or something to express "ちゃんと” <br />
「そういうふうになっている」"That is all."<br />
How about "That's how it is supposed to be."? Too awkward?</div>MidutaniVhttps://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Toradora!:Volume1_Chapter1&diff=38859Talk:Toradora!:Volume1 Chapter12008-12-07T20:06:29Z<p>MidutaniV: Hi, Kinny!</p>
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<div>When a speaker talks for more than one paragraph, then it's customary to omit the end quotation marks (") in all of the paragraphs except for the last paragraph. <br />
http://www.edenpr.k12.mn.us/ephs/departments/media/punctuating.pdf Note #11.<br />
--Margaretman2 <br />
<br />
If you are speaking of the ''Then Then'', it's not between quotation marks but in italics.<br />
[[User:Vaelis|Vaelis]] 01:15, 24 June 2008 (PDT)<br />
<br />
== Very heavy parrot ==<br />
<br />
"Argh... Why are birds so dumb? As expected when you have a brain that weighs only 1kg, Ryuuji sighed, wrapping up the soiled newspaper."<br />
<br />
Given that parrots rarely weigh more than a kilogram total, this must be the heaviest parrot in the world (200kg+!)<br />
<br />
I think you must of meant 1g, not 1kg (0.035oz vs 2.2lb).<br />
<br />
<br />
Try looking here:[http://www.avianweb.com/AverageBirdWeights.htm]<br />
<br />
== Hi, Kinny! ==<br />
<br />
Cheers for your good work. Im in love with toradora like you.<br />
So let me start to give you suggestions of changes to vol. 1. What I can do is to check if your translation fits the contexts (I've read all the volumes),<br />
but my English is much less capable so just take them as minor suggestions.<br />
<br />
「手に入れるべきたった一人が、ちゃんとそれを見つけられる。」"And only those who should obtain it will be able to find it."<br />
I suggest that you put "in the end" or something to express "ちゃんと” <br />
「そういうふうになっている」"That is all."<br />
How about "That's how it is supposed to be."? Too awkward?</div>MidutaniVhttps://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=User:MidutaniV&diff=38857User:MidutaniV2008-12-07T19:43:02Z<p>MidutaniV: New page: testing</p>
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<div>testing</div>MidutaniVhttps://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=User_talk:MidutaniV&diff=38856User talk:MidutaniV2008-12-07T19:42:01Z<p>MidutaniV: New page: A Japanese student studying in AU loves light novels would like to join for my English study.</p>
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<div>A Japanese student studying in AU<br />
loves light novels<br />
would like to join for my English study.</div>MidutaniV