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User:Sarenthenis

2010-06-13T12:44:39Z

Sarenthenis:

I can speak English natively, French reasonably well, Japanese better, and am currently learning Chinese (which probably my best language at the moment). You can mail at matt9089@hotmail.com, or find me on irc, maybe... I usually forget to login on to irc.

Tomoyo After:SEEN0815

2010-06-13T00:29:08Z

Sarenthenis:

== Translation ==
*[[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]

== Text ==
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<pre>
// Resources for SEEN0815.TXT

// #character '朋也'
#character 'Tomoya'

// #character '河南子'
#character 'Kanako'

// #character '智代'
#character 'Tomoyo'

// <0000> ８月１５日(日)
<0000> August 15th (Sun)

// <0001> 朝からスチール棚の据付作業をしていた。
<0001> I had been working since morning on assembling the steel shelves.

// <0002> \{朋也}（…ここに黒板を置くか）
<0002> \{Tomoya}（... Well I guess I'll put the blackboard here）

// <0003> 簡単に書いた図面を元に、配置場所を決めて組み上げていく。
<0003> Following the simple draft plan I had drawn up, I decided on how I would arrange the room.

// <0004> \{河南子}「ねぇねぇ、みてみて、いいでしょ、ホットケーキ！」
<0004> \{Kanako}"Hey, hey, look at what I did, aren't they wonderful? Pancakes!"

// <0005> 突然河南子の声がしたので、顔を上げると、河南子はクレープのように紙に巻いたホットケーキを見せびらかした。
<0005> **Suddenly hearing Kanako's voice, I lifted up my head to see Kanoko showing off her paper-rolled pancakes, seemingly as if they were crepes.

// <0006> \{河南子}「なんと中にはアイスが挟んであるのだ」
<0006> \{Kanako}"And look, a few of them even have ice cream added inside."

// <0007> \{朋也}「どうしたんだよ、それ」
<0007> \{Tomoya}"What's up with them?"

// <0008> \{河南子}「一緒に作った」
<0008> \{Kanako}"Let's make them together."

// <0009> \{朋也}「またか」
<0009> \{Tomoya}"What? Again?"

// <0010> \{河南子}「違うよ、村の人が一緒に作ろうって誘ってくれたんだよ」
<0010> \{Kanako}"It's not what you think, the townspeople invited us over saying, 'Let's make them together'."

// <0011> \{朋也}「へぇ…」
<0011> \{Tomoya}"Oh really...?"

// <0012> \{河南子}「みんなで楽しかったよ」
<0012> \{Kanako}"So let's go and have fun with everyone else."

// <0013> \{朋也}「そりゃいいけど、迷惑とかかけてないだろうな」
<0013> \{Tomoya}"Well going is fine but you better not make any trouble."

// <0014> \{河南子}「ちゃんとお礼も言ったし、みんな笑ってたよ」
<0014> \{Kanako}"But I already said 'thank you', and everyone even smiled."

// <0015> \{朋也}「そっか、じゃ、その調子で仲良くな」
<0015> \{Tomoya}"Oh really? Well, in following the same track of mind, be friendly."

// <0016> \{朋也}「あれ、おまえ、智代は」
<0016> \{Tomoya}"Hey, wait. You can't just... What about Tomoyo?"

// <0017> \{河南子}「あー、大丈夫、大丈夫、ちゃんと見てるってば」
<0017> \{Kanako}「Ah, don't worry, don't worry, she'll be watching, I guarantee it.

// <0018> \{河南子}「じゃあねー」
<0018> \{Kanako}"So I'm off."

// <0019> 結局、食べ物を見せびらかしにきただけのようだった。
<0019> It seems after all she was just here to show off the food she made.

// <0020> \{朋也}（子供かよ…）
<0020> \{Tomoya}(How childish...)

// <0021> 再び図面に目を落とす。
<0021> My eyes once more returned back to my draft plan.

// <0022> 午後には、智代が訪れた。
<0022> In the afternoon, Tomoyo paid me a visit.

// <0023> \{智代}「なぁ、朋也…」
<0023> \{Tomoyo}"Hey、Tomoya..."

// <0024> \{朋也}「うん？」
<0024> \{Tomoya}"Yes?"

// <0025> \{智代}「先に帰ろうと思うんだ」
<0025> \{Tomoyo}"I thought I would come back a little early."

// <0026> \{朋也}「どうして」
<0026> \{Tomoya}"Why is that?"

// <0027> 手を止めて、向き合う。
<0027> I stopped moving my hands and faced her.

// <0028> \{智代}「ともが心配なんだ…」
<0028> \{Tomoyo}"I really worry about Tomo..."

// <0029> \{朋也}「鷹文がいるだろ」
<0029> \{Tomoya}"Takafumi is here too isn't he?"

// <0030> \{智代}「あんな頼りない奴には任せておけない」
<0030> \{Tomoyo}"That unreliable boy? I can't leave you to him.

// <0031> \{朋也}「おまえ、矛盾してるぞ」
<0031> \{Tomoya}"... You're starting contradicting yourself again."

// <0032> \{朋也}「ともの母親には、しっかり者だから心配ないって言ってたじゃないか」
<0032> \{Tomoya}"Didn't Tomo's mother say he's quite a reliable guy?"

// <0033> \{智代}「そういう意味じゃない…」
<0033> \{Tomoyo}"That's not what I'm trying to say..."

// <0034> \{智代}「寂しい思いをしていると思うんだ…」
<0034> \{Tomoyo}"I start to think, Tomo is feeling lonely..."

// <0035> \{智代}「私じゃないと…」
<0035> \{Tomoyo}"If it's not me that's there..."

// <0036> \{智代}「約束したから…」
<0036> \{Tomoyo}"We made that promise after all..."

// <0037> \{智代}「ともは私と遊びたいはずなんだ…」
<0037> \{Tomoyo}"Right about now, Tomo must be thinking that he wants to play with me."

// <0038> \{朋也}「悪いが…」
<0038> \{Tomoya}"I know it's difficult..."

// <0039> \{朋也}「おまえだけ先に帰らせるわけにはいかない」
<0039> \{Tomoya}"but you definitely can't be the only one to leave early."

// <0040> \{朋也}「帰る時は一緒だ」
<0040> \{Tomoya}"When you come back regularly we will be together."

// <0041> \{智代}「嫌だ、ともと一緒にいたいんだっ」
<0041> \{Tomoyo}"No, I want to be together with Tomo—"

// <0042> \{朋也}「それはおまえのわがままだろう」
<0042> \{Tomoya}"Isn't that just you being selfish."

// <0043> \{智代}「………」
<0043> \{Tomoyo}"........."

// <0044> \{朋也}「いや、ぜんぶおまえのわがままだ」
<0044> \{Tomoya}"No, it simply is just you being selfish."

// <0045> \{朋也}「ともは、母親との暮らしを選ぶ」
<0045> \{Tomoya}"Tomo choose to live with your mother after all."

// <0046> \{朋也}「そして、俺たちとともの生活は終わる」
<0046> \{Tomoya}"So the time for the three of us to live together with Tomo ended."

// <0047> \{朋也}「楽しかったな」
<0047> \{Tomoya}"Ah, those were days."

// <0048> \{朋也}「そのことをちゃんと理解して、帰ろうな」
<0048> \{Tomoya}"Well if you've understood, then head on back."

// <0049> \{智代}「………」
<0049> \{Tomoyo}"........."

// <0050> \{智代}「本当に、それが正しいのか…」
<0050> \{Tomoyo}"Was that really the right decision...?"

// <0051> \{智代}「ともがそれを選んだとしても、それが正しいとは限らない」
<0051> \{Tomoyo}"Even though Tomo made the choice, we can't be certain that it was correct."

// <0052> \{智代}「そもそも母親がそれを望んでいるのか？」
<0052> \{Tomoyo}"And in the first place, did her mother even want wish for this to happen?"

// <0053> \{朋也}「まだ望んでいない」
<0053> \{Tomoya}「She didn't and still hasn't.」

// <0054> \{智代}「じゃあ、おまえは何をしているんだ」
<0054> \{Tomoyo}"Then, what are you on earth are you doing?"

// <0055> \{智代}「全部無駄になるかもしれないぞ」
<0055> \{Tomoyo}"It's entirely possibly everything we've done will be for nothing in the end."

// <0056> \{朋也}「母親も説得する」
<0056> \{Tomoya}"Even Tomo's mother is trying to persuade us."

// <0057> \{智代}「それじゃあ、ともがまた不幸になってしまうじゃないか…」
<0057> \{Tomoyo}"In that case, doesn't that mean Tomo will once more become unhappy...?"

// <0058> \{智代}「私だったらともを…幸せにできる…」
<0058> \{Tomoyo}"If it was me... I would definitely make Tomo happy..."

// <0059> \{智代}「するから…」
<0059> \{Tomoyo}"Definitely..."

// <0060> \{智代}「誓うから…」
<0060> \{Tomoyo}"I swear it..."

// <0061> \{智代}「お願いだ…」
<0061> \{Tomoyo}"So please..."

// <0062> 体を震わせて、声を絞り出す。
<0062> Her body was trembling, squeezing out every last word.

// <0063> 最後には嗚咽になっていた。
<0063> Down until her very tears were gushing out from her eyes.

// <0064> \{朋也}「河南子っ」
<0064> \{Tomoya}"Kanako—"

// <0065> 呼ぶと、木陰が揺れる。
<0065> "Just as I called, the shadow of a nearby tree quivered.

// <0066> そこに河南子が立っていた。
<0066> In it, Kanako stood.

// <0067> \{朋也}「智代に花畑を見せてやってくれ」
<0067> \{Tomoya}"Please show Tomoyo to the flower garden was "

// <0068> こくと河南子が頷く。
<0068> Hearing this, Kanako nodded.

// <0069> \{朋也}「智代、きれいな場所があるらしいんだ。見に行ってこい」
<0069> \{Tomoya}"Tomoyo, I hear there is a beautiful place nearby. Let's go and see it."

// <0070> \{智代}「………」
<0070> \{Tomoyo}"........."

// <0071> \{河南子}「さ、先輩、いっしょにいこ。きれいなお花いっぱい咲いてるんだよ」
<0071> \{Kanako}"So, Senpai, come along with me. See the flowers blooming beautifully."

// <0072> \{河南子}「ほら、いーきーーまーーしょーーーーっ！！」
<0072> \{Kanako}"So、Leettt'sss Gooooo!!」

// <0073> その手をつかんで、河南子が力任せに智代をひきずっていく。。
<0073> Grabbing hold of her hand, Kanako pulled Tomoyo with all her might..

// <0074> すがるような目がずっとこちらに向いたままだった。
<0074> But those pair of eyes never left the place I stood.

// <0075> \{朋也}「ふぅ…」
<0075> \{Tomoya}"Ah..."

// <0076> 作業に戻った。
<0076> I got back to work.

// <0077> 日が暮れる。
<0077> It became dark.

// <0078> \{河南子}「今日の報告」
<0078> \{Kanako}"So today's report:"

// <0079> \{河南子}「ふたりで花を見ました」
<0079> \{Kanako}"The two of us went enjoy the sight of the flowers.

// <0080> \{河南子}「いろいろ話をされました」
<0080> \{Kanako}"We talked about many things."

// <0081> \{河南子}「名案のように、多数決をとろうと言い出しました」
<0081> \{Kanako}"Thinking it a good idea, we said we would get a majority vote on the matter.

// <0082> \{河南子}「河南子と鷹文はともと一緒に暮らすほうを選んでくれるな？と訊かれました」
<0082> \{Kanako}"She asked her, 'Tomo, would you like to live with Kanako and Takafumi？'"

// <0083> \{朋也}「え…」
<0083> \{Tomoya}"Eh..."

// <0084> 手が止まる。
<0084> My hands stopped moving.

// <0085> \{朋也}「で…どうした…」
<0085> \{Tomoya}"So... Then what happened..."

// <0086> \{河南子}「正直に答えたら、崩れ落ちました」
<0086> \{Kanako}"To be honest, it fell apart and crumbled to pieces."

// <0087> \{河南子}「支えて帰ってくるのが大変でした」
<0087> \{Kanako}"Sustaining this routine of going back and forth was quite difficult."

// <0088> \{朋也}「そっか…」
<0088> \{Tomoya}"Is that so..."

// <0089> \{朋也}「おまえもちゃんとわかってくれてたんだな」
<0089> \{Tomoya}"So you also managed to understand in the end."

// <0090> \{河南子}「先輩ほど子供じゃないっすよ」
<0090> \{Kanako}"I'm not that much of a child like you, you know."

// <0091> \{河南子}「鷹文のやつもね」
<0091> \{Kanako}"Nor like that Takafumi."

// <0092> 俺も含めて、みんな子供だと思ったけど…
<0092> Even including me, I think that we're all children though...

// <0093> それでもふたりの援護は心強く思えた。
<0093> But even so, support of those two was very reassuring.
</pre>
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== Script Chart ==
{{Tomoyo_After:ScriptChart}}

Tomoyo After:Registration Page

2010-06-13T00:26:32Z

Sarenthenis: /* List */

To re-iterate the registration procedure:

*This is not some Binding Contract of "I must do the work I put down here". Choices put down here are negotiable between translators (including their own selves who signed up for it).

== Status ==
(Last updated March 21st 2010) 
~39% first translation pass. 
.xls file with more detailed progress [http://www.mediafire.com/?jovzodyujoj here].

== List ==

SEENXXXX: Nothing done.
SEENXXXX: Under half is done.
SEENXXXX: Over half is done.
SEENXXXX: Nearly done.
SEENXXXX: Done. 
H means H-content remains to translate. 
MIA means the translator is assumed to be Missing In Action.

*SEEN0628H - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]];[[User:Wrengear|Wrengear]];[[User:Ilebur|Ilebur]]
*SEEN0629H - Unknown/anonymous contributor;[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0630H - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0701H - [[User:Appztetra|Appztetra]];[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0702H - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]];[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] *QCed
*SEEN0707 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]];[[User:Karmainall|Karmainall]];[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] *QCed
*SEEN0708 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]];[[User:Karmainall|Karmainall]];[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] *QCed
*SEEN0709 - [[user:seitsuki|seitsuki]];[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]];[[User:Suppish|Suppish]] *QCed
*SEEN0710 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]];[[User:Suppish|Suppish]]
*SEEN0711 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0712 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0713 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]][[User:LF2005|LF2005]]
*SEEN0714 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]];[[User:Ilebur|Ilebur]]
*SEEN0715 - [[User:Soulphalanx|Soulphalanx]]MIA
*SEEN0716 - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]]
*SEEN0717 - [[User:Aleh|Aleh]]MIA?;
*SEEN0720 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0721 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0722 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0723 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0724 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0725 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0726 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0727 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0728 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0729 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0744 - [[User:Gman|Gman]]; [[User:Suppish|Suppish]] *QCed
*SEEN0801 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0803 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0804 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0806 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]MIA *QCed
*SEEN0807 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] *QCed
*SEEN0808 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] *QCed
*SEEN0809 - [[User:Kyoske|Kyoske]];[[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0810 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0811 -
*SEEN0812 -
*SEEN0813 - [[User:KittyCarnage|KittyCarnage]]MIA
*SEEN0814 - [[User:HiagoX|HiagoX]]
*SEEN0815 - [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]
*SEEN0816 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0817
*SEEN0818
*SEEN0819
*SEEN0820
*SEEN0821
*SEEN0822
*SEEN0823
*SEEN1710 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN1714
*SEEN1715
*SEEN1716
*SEEN1806 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN1811
*SEEN1813
*SEEN1814
*SEEN2811
*SEEN2813
*SEEN2814
*SEEN3814
*SEEN4814
*SEEN5000 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]];Unknown/anonymous contributor
*SEEN5001
*SEEN5002
*SEEN5003
*SEEN5004
*SEEN5005
*SEEN5006
*SEEN5007
*SEEN5010
*SEEN5011
*SEEN7010
*SEEN7160
*SEEN7910
*SEEN7920
*SEEN7930
*SEEN7940
*SEEN7950 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]MIA

== Script Chart ==
{{Tomoyo_After:ScriptChart}}

[[Category:Registration Page]]

Tomoyo After:Registration Page

2009-10-14T14:33:01Z

Sarenthenis:

To re-iterate the registration procedure:

*This is not some Binding Contract of "I must do the work I put down here". Choices put down here are negotiable between translators (including their own selves who signed up for it).

== List ==

*SEEN0628 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]; [[User:Wrengear|Wrengear]] [I would like to edit the text in several places so that it sounds more natural. Im sorry but I didnt really realize that I had to register before I made several changes.]
*SEEN0629 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0630 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0701 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0702 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]]
*SEEN0707 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0708 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]]
*SEEN0709 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]] [In the absence of progress I have taken it upon myself to start this] [[user:seitsuki|seitsuki]]
*SEEN0710 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]
*SEEN0711 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]
*SEEN0712 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]
*SEEN0713 - [[User:LF2005|LF2005]]
*SEEN0714 - [[User:Yuntian990|Yuntian990]]
*SEEN0715 - [[User:Soulphalanx|Soulphalanx]]
*SEEN0716 - [[User:Befrienderer|Befrienderer]]
*SEEN0717
*SEEN0720 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0721 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0722 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0723 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0724 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] (For some reason, this was already finished before I could edit)
*SEEN0725 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0726 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0727 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0728 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0729 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0744
*SEEN0801 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] (Whoever was working on this before I was. Sorry to edit it but you weren't registered.)
*SEEN0803 - [[User:KittyCarnage|KittyCarnage]]
*SEEN0804 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0806 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0807 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0808 - [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]
*SEEN0809 - [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]
*SEEN0810 - [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]
*SEEN0811 - [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]
*SEEN0812 - [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]]
*SEEN0813 - [[User:KittyCarnage|KittyCarnage]]
*SEEN0814
*SEEN0815
*SEEN0816 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0817
*SEEN0818
*SEEN0819
*SEEN0820
*SEEN0821
*SEEN0822
*SEEN0823
*SEEN1710
*SEEN1714
*SEEN1715
*SEEN1716
*SEEN1806 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] (This SEEN is exactly same as the SEEN0816)
*SEEN1811
*SEEN1813
*SEEN1814
*SEEN2811
*SEEN2813
*SEEN2814
*SEEN3814
*SEEN4814
*SEEN5000 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]] (I also want to give a credit for anonymous who worked on first 70 lines)
*SEEN5001 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN5002
*SEEN5003
*SEEN5004
*SEEN5005
*SEEN5006
*SEEN5007
*SEEN5010
*SEEN5011
*SEEN7010
*SEEN7160
*SEEN7910
*SEEN7920
*SEEN7930
*SEEN7940
*SEEN7950 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]

[[Category:Registration Page]]

Tomoyo After:Registration Page

2009-10-14T08:05:15Z

Sarenthenis: Go go go go

To re-iterate the registration procedure:

*This is not some Binding Contract of "I must do the work I put down here". Choices put down here are negotiable between translators (including their own selves who signed up for it).

== List ==

*SEEN0628 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]; [[User:Wrengear|Wrengear]] [I would like to edit the text in several places so that it sounds more natural. Im sorry but I didnt really realize that I had to register before I made several changes.]
*SEEN0629 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0630 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0701 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0702 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]]
*SEEN0707 - [[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]]
*SEEN0708 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]]
*SEEN0709 - [[User:Yummy|Yummy]] [In the absence of progress I have taken it upon myself to start this] [[user:seitsuki|seitsuki]]
*SEEN0710 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]
*SEEN0711 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]
*SEEN0712 - [[User:DanDanTheIdiot|DanDanTheIdiot]]
*SEEN0713 - [[User:LF2005|LF2005]]
*SEEN0714 - [[User:Yuntian990|Yuntian990]]
*SEEN0715 - [[User:Soulphalanx|Soulphalanx]]
*SEEN0716 - [[User:Befrienderer|Befrienderer]]
*SEEN0717
*SEEN0720 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0721 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0722 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
*SEEN0723 - [[User:Mr4eyeguy|Mr4eyeguy]]
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Talk:Tomoyo After

2009-10-02T14:38:58Z

Sarenthenis: /* Looking for translators? */ new section

What version of the game are you guys planning to work with? There was an old project started by velocity 7 (it doesn't seem as if they are keeping up with it, though), where they were trying to port the PS2 to PC. (You can find the thread for it here: http://forums.novelnews.net/showthread.php?t=16671)

I personally think the PS2 would be more interesting to play, since it is longer and perhaps the ending is more satisfactory. The PC version would still be great though. Thank you very much for your effort guys.

:PS2 Version is better overall, but the ending feels "tagged-on" without the usual Key quality. It feels like Tonokawa (the person who wrote the PS2 add-ons, while Maeda Jun wrote the original) just "tagged it on" to appease fans who want a happy ending. I personally like the PC ending a lot better. It feels a lot more "Key-like" and a lot deeper.
:I'm willing to translate as soon as there's more translators. Though I am obsessed with the game, I won't translate it all myself
:email: stupid1961@hotmail.com

To the guys, translating this: seriously, stop - there are a lot of mistranslations and overall translation quality is pretty low. I'd fixed them for you but it would be easier to start translation from the scratch.

To the guy above this: I realize that my past work on this project is not what I'd call adequate. I'd love to go back and retranslate everything I've done, and continue with translating the rest of the project, but a general lack of time and motivation is keeping me from doing that. Not to mention that this project seems a bit stalled at the moment. I'd love to hear something from the supposed project admin... --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 20:34, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

To Nightjumper: The project isn't stalled. It's just hard to do anything if nobody is translating anything. I've been busy with personal stuff lately so I haven't been able to look for anyone that might be interested in it. If anyone can find someone who might be interested in translating Tomoyo After, please point them to the registration page. Please feel free to contact me on IRC if you have any further questions. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 03:45, 27 February, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be better to do the PC version. The ending honestly feels a bit cheap in the PS2 version. They made a dramatic, sad scene but then the extra ending was added and it felt like they pulled a "lol jk" and invalidated it all. That's just my take. Also, although it is true that the PC version does have less in terms of content, it also happens to be more accessible to everyone. Not everyone has a PS2, but certainly everyone interested in this has a computer.

hey all i just recently finished the clannad vn and found it really enjoyable. im looking forward to the complete translated version of Tomoyo After. i agree that it should be done on pc. good luck and hope yous finish it soon.

The project has been handed over to RadicalR who will be the new project administrator from now on. Please direct all further questions about the project to RadicalR who can be found in #ndt on PPiRC. --[[User:ArchDemon|ArchDemon]] 02:29, 6 March, 2009 (UTC)

I am currently looking at the possibilty of allocating time for this project. There's a big possibility that I won't do anything before the spring term is finished. I might look around and use some contacts to see if we can get more people on this. By the way, I'd rather leave translating/writing H-scenes to somebody else. --[[User:Nightjumper|Nightjumper]] 10:18, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys! I've been studing Japanese for about 4 years now and this project is something I'm really interested in :D If you don't mind some machine-translated kanji and explaining to me how to work this stupid RLdev thing I'd be glad to help. Just seeing what edits I can make atm
[Seitsuki]

Tomoyo After Memorial Edition All-age version had been released. If you don't like translate H-scene, so may I help you upload new seen files below old files? --[[User:Midishero|Midishero]] 15:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I also have Tomoyo After ~ Memorial Edition. I played through it and I confirm there are no h-scenes but has more content and they implemented Tomoya's voice. If you need it just post on here. Where is Tomoyo After's % at now? There's like almost no news about this game. Do you guys need help with anything? Voice out so I can carry the words over. The game is very small compared to Clannad VN. 8.27.09

== Looking for translators? ==

Is the project still looking for translators? I'm willing to help out if it is. I can read Japanese fairly well and although I have not played Tomoyo After, I have played Clannad. [[User:Sarenthenis|Sarenthenis]] 14:38, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

User:Sarenthenis

2009-10-02T14:34:01Z

Sarenthenis: Created

I can speak English natively, French reasonably well, Japanese better, and am currently learning Chinese.