.Hack//Epitaph of Twilight Volume1 Episode4 - Revision history

Tacita Koe at 20:02, 13 December 2022

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	But there had been someone else who whispered to Pleiad like a devil. They had been a spirit of darkness, and they had lied to Pleiad.		But there had been someone else who whispered to Pleiad like a devil. They had been a spirit of darkness, and they had lied to Pleiad.

	“Your sisters are afraid that you will leave them to be with that human; that is why they really insist your love is taboo.” They had told her. “But if you were to become a human like him, then he would certainly return your feelings for him.”		''“Your sisters are afraid that you will leave them to be with that human; that is why they really insist your love is taboo.”'' They had told her. ''“But if you were to become a human like him, then he would certainly return your feelings for him.”''

	And Pleiad had believed those lies and cast a shadow on herself without hesitation. She had not even consulted with Fili about it, who had been by her side the whole time.		And Pleiad had believed those lies and cast a shadow on herself without hesitation. She had not even consulted with Fili about it, who had been by her side the whole time.
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	He was starting to think he shouldn’t have come. But Pleiad already knew he was here. It was thanks to her influence that Fili was always able to know of other spirits locations.		He was starting to think he shouldn’t have come. But Pleiad already knew he was here. It was thanks to her influence that Fili was always able to know of other spirits locations.

	“If you know where everyone is, you’ll be able to help them more quickly when things happen.” Fili would never forget the smile on Pleiad’s face when she had said those words.		''“If you know where everyone is, you’ll be able to help them more quickly when things happen.” Fili would never forget the smile on Pleiad’s face when she had said those words.''

	In front of him, the door swung open. And standing before him was Pleiad, still wearing the same smile as that day so long ago.		In front of him, the door swung open. And standing before him was Pleiad, still wearing the same smile as that day so long ago.
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	“That’s none of your business.”		“That’s none of your business.”

	“It is our business. Because if you say you’re here to join us, it’ll change what we plan to do next.”		“It ''is'' our business. Because if you say you’re here to join us, it’ll change what we plan to do next.”

	“And is this how you thank someone for helping you?”		“And is this how you thank someone for helping you?”

Tacita Koe at 07:48, 13 December 2022

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			==Episode 4//raid==
	A large tree glowing with pale light stood on an island in the middle of a lake. It was bare of leaves and its trunk was as transparent as glass. In this place where the sun did not shine, the large tree grew with only the water from the lake for nutrients. And the lake’s surface constantly rippled gently even though there was no wind.		A large tree glowing with pale light stood on an island in the middle of a lake. It was bare of leaves and its trunk was as transparent as glass. In this place where the sun did not shine, the large tree grew with only the water from the lake for nutrients. And the lake’s surface constantly rippled gently even though there was no wind.

Tacita Koe at 07:32, 13 December 2022

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	Desperately, I ran through the waves of spirits, trying to reach Gendor.		Desperately, I ran through the waves of spirits, trying to reach Gendor.

			“We should have tried to repair your broom……” Vesper remarked― but I didn’t think I would be able to fly through this chaos even if I had fixed it.

	[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]		[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]

	~~“We should have tried to repair your broom……” Vesper remarked― but I didn’t think I would be able to fly through this chaos even if I had fixed it.~~

	It was easy to find where Gendor was, because the other spirits all had to run around his larger form as he bent over and curled in on himself.		It was easy to find where Gendor was, because the other spirits all had to run around his larger form as he bent over and curled in on himself.

Tacita Koe at 07:32, 13 December 2022

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	“That was Gendor!”		“That was Gendor!”

			Desperately, I ran through the waves of spirits, trying to reach Gendor.

	[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]		[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]

	~~Desperately, I ran through the waves of spirits, trying to reach Gendor.~~

	“We should have tried to repair your broom……” Vesper remarked― but I didn’t think I would be able to fly through this chaos even if I had fixed it.		“We should have tried to repair your broom……” Vesper remarked― but I didn’t think I would be able to fly through this chaos even if I had fixed it.

Tacita Koe at 07:31, 13 December 2022

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	“That was Gendor!”		“That was Gendor!”

			[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]

	Desperately, I ran through the waves of spirits, trying to reach Gendor.		Desperately, I ran through the waves of spirits, trying to reach Gendor.
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	“Huh……?”		“Huh……?”

	~~[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]~~

	Gendor was holding me in his arms, which he could only do because he wasn’t holding anything else. But there were no shards of pottery to be seen around him, either. All I could see was the people around us trying to flee, and even if we tried to search for it, we’d just get overrun by the rush of spirits and humans again.		Gendor was holding me in his arms, which he could only do because he wasn’t holding anything else. But there were no shards of pottery to be seen around him, either. All I could see was the people around us trying to flee, and even if we tried to search for it, we’d just get overrun by the rush of spirits and humans again.

Tacita Koe at 07:31, 13 December 2022

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	“Huh……?”		“Huh……?”

			[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]

	Gendor was holding me in his arms, which he could only do because he wasn’t holding anything else. But there were no shards of pottery to be seen around him, either. All I could see was the people around us trying to flee, and even if we tried to search for it, we’d just get overrun by the rush of spirits and humans again.		Gendor was holding me in his arms, which he could only do because he wasn’t holding anything else. But there were no shards of pottery to be seen around him, either. All I could see was the people around us trying to flee, and even if we tried to search for it, we’d just get overrun by the rush of spirits and humans again.
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	All I could do at that moment was stand stunned in front of a crying Gendor.		All I could do at that moment was stand stunned in front of a crying Gendor.

	~~[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]~~

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Tacita Koe at 07:30, 13 December 2022

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	All I could do at that moment was stand stunned in front of a crying Gendor.		All I could do at that moment was stand stunned in front of a crying Gendor.

			[[File:Epitaph of Twilight v01 bw6.png\|thumb]]

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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