Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Hp2 at 04:33, 12 January 2017

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	I thought that but, asking for common sense in a school devoid from common sense itself was useless.		I thought that but, asking for common sense in a school devoid from common sense itself was useless.

	"Tsukimi-sensei has excellent grades amongst last year's graduates so she has been specially selected to be a teacher this year. Leaving that character aside, there are no ~~shortcoming~~ in her abilities and skills so be rest assured."		"Tsukimi-sensei has excellent grades amongst last year's graduates so she has been specially selected to be a teacher this year. Leaving that character aside, there are no shortcomings in her abilities and skills so rest assured."

	We heard the following from Mikuni-sensei, and there were sighs of relief leaking out from everywhere.		We heard the following from Mikuni-sensei, and there were sighs of relief leaking out from everywhere.

Hp2 at 04:29, 12 January 2017

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	<nowiki></nowiki>peek………..peek		<nowiki></nowiki>peek………..peek

	She was looking at me with ~~the~~ side peeks for some reason. She probably planned to secretly look at me but, it was completely obvious.		She was looking at me with side peeks for some reason. She probably planned to secretly look at me but, it was completely obvious.

	“………………Hey, do you know her?”		“………………Hey, do you know her?”

Hp2 at 04:28, 12 January 2017

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	It’s not like I talked to her before, so I completely had no idea why she knew my name.		It’s not like I talked to her before, so I completely had no idea why she knew my name.

	The silver girl was staring at me and started walking right when I ~~was~~ had many question marks popping in my head.		The silver girl was staring at me and started walking right when I had many question marks popping in my head.

	Chirint together with the sound of the bells, her silver hair was swaying near her hips while being expressionless.		Chirint together with the sound of the bells, her silver hair was swaying near her hips while being expressionless.

Hiro Hayase at 09:19, 9 June 2015

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	It was a little too frank but, I turned my face away to trick her and headed towards the dressing room without hearing Julie’s reply.		It was a little too frank but, I turned my face away to trick her and headed towards the dressing room without hearing Julie’s reply.

	I started taking a shower, and the flowing hot water washed of the cold sweat.		I started taking a shower, and the flowing hot water washed off the cold sweat.

	My body started getting warm and it gave me the actual feelings I am alive.		My body started getting warm and it gave me the actual feelings I am alive.

Hiro Hayase at 08:45, 9 June 2015

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Hiro Hayase at 06:52, 9 June 2015

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	It’s not like I talked to her before, so I completely had no idea why she knew my name.		It’s not like I talked to her before, so I completely had no idea why she knew my name.

	The silver girl was staring at me and started walking right when I ~~was~~ had many question marks popping in my head.		The silver girl was staring at me and started walking right when I had many question marks popping in my head.

	Chirint together with the sound of the bells, her silver hair was swaying near her hips while being expressionless.		Chirint together with the sound of the bells, her silver hair was swaying near her hips while being expressionless.

EDCX32: /* Chapter 2 『I am interested in you』 */

2015-01-22T06:17:07Z

Chapter 2 『I am interested in you』

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	(As expected she’s lonely…………)		(As expected she’s lonely…………)

	I don’t know what reasons she study abroad for but, there is no way a young girl far from her familiar country, and coming to this far side of the east alone would not ~~won’t~~ feel anxious .		I don’t know what reasons she study abroad for but, there is no way a young girl far from her familiar country, and coming to this far side of the east alone would not feel anxious.

	I ~~feel~~ miserable to not ~~notice~~ such an obvious fact, because she was able to speak fluent Japanese, and doesn’t show her emotions.		I felt miserable not noticing such an obvious fact, because she was able to speak fluent Japanese and doesn’t show her emotions.

	And now that I have found out her true feelings, I could not pretend that I didn’t see that. That’s why I-------I made a vow that I wanted to become Julie’s power to support her before scooping the drop of tear from her eyes.		And now that I have found out her true feelings, I could not pretend that I didn’t see that. That’s why I-------I made a vow that I wanted to become Julie’s power to support her before scooping the drop of tear from her eyes.

JFerg: /* Chapter 2 『I am interested in you』 */

2014-08-22T04:38:15Z

Chapter 2 『I am interested in you』

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	“What’s wrong?”		“What’s wrong?”

	I leaked a small groan from the creak of my body; Tora did not let that get ~~passed~~ him and looked towards me in doubt.		I leaked a small groan from the creak of my body; Tora did not let that get past him and looked towards me in doubt.

	“I forced myself a little just now.”		“I forced myself a little just now.”
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	The cause was the skill I used on Imari.		The cause was the skill I used on Imari.

	That was originally a skill that used muscles but~~, since~~ the ~~recklessly~~ use of it with my middle-build body~~, it~~ places quite a burden on my body even though it was just one shot. ~~But this~~ skill was a double edged sword; on the one hand it holds absolute destructive power but on the other hand I wouldn't be able to move normally if I used it twice. When I explained this to him.		That was originally a skill that used muscles, but the reckless use of it with my middle-build body places quite a burden on my body even though it was just one shot. This skill was a double edged sword; on the one hand it holds absolute destructive power, but on the other hand I wouldn't be able to move normally if I used it twice. When I explained this to him...

	“I see. So that means you ~~are~~ a novice huh?”		“I see. So that means you're a novice huh?”

	I’m astonished……..		I’m astonished……..
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	It was an immediate reply.		It was an immediate reply.

	“Fuun. There is one question I want to ask regarding that technique~~. Why~~ didn’t you ever use that when you were training with me? …………Haa! Don’t tell me you were holding back when I was the opponent!?”		“Fuun. There is one question I want to ask regarding that technique; why didn’t you ever use that when you were training with me? …………Haa! Don’t tell me you were holding back when I was the opponent!?”

	Tora pressed me with questions and I swung my head in panic.		Tora pressed me with questions and I swung my head in panic.

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371827 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:34:43Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371827 by Simon (talk)

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	It’s not like I talked to her before, so I completely had no idea why she knew my name.		It’s not like I talked to her before, so I completely had no idea why she knew my name.

	The silver girl was staring at me and started walking right when I had many question marks popping in my head.		The silver girl was staring at me and started walking right when I was had many question marks popping in my head.

	Chirint together with the sound of the bells, her silver hair was swaying near her hips while being expressionless.		Chirint together with the sound of the bells, her silver hair was swaying near her hips while being expressionless.
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	One day, a foreigner I have never met or seen before (and naturally even her name is unknown to me) suddenly starts calling my name, sits on the seat beside me, and in addition she is conscious of me by looking at me with side peeks----------I suddenly fell into such a situation and if there is someone that wouldn't get confused of this situation then I want someone to tell me about that person.		One day, a foreigner I have never met or seen before (and naturally even her name is unknown to me) suddenly starts calling my name, sits on the seat beside me, and in addition she is conscious of me by looking at me with side peeks----------I suddenly fell into such a situation and if there is someone that wouldn't get confused of this situation then I want someone to tell me about that person.

	Nonetheless, it feels uncomfortable being peeked at like that while unable to comprehend to situation.		Nonetheless, it feels uncomfortable being peeked at like that while unable to comprehend the situation.

	“………He,hey, can I have a moment?”		“………He,hey, can I have a moment?”
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	I made a small sigh, and amused myself talking with Tora about some boring stuffs.		I made a small sigh, and amused myself talking with Tora about some boring stuffs.

	Most of the commotion in the classroom also returned back normal when they saw us------		Most of the commotion in the classroom also returned back to normal when they saw us------

	“……………”		“……………”
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	I thought that but, asking for common sense in a school devoid from common sense itself was useless.		I thought that but, asking for common sense in a school devoid from common sense itself was useless.

	"Tsukimi-sensei has excellent grades amongst last year graduates so she has been specially selected to be a teacher this year. Leaving that character aside, there are no shortcoming in her abilities and skills so be rest assured."		"Tsukimi-sensei has excellent grades amongst last year's graduates so she has been specially selected to be a teacher this year. Leaving that character aside, there are no shortcoming in her abilities and skills so be rest assured."

	We heard the following from Mikuni-sensei, and there were sighs of relief leaking out from everywhere.		We heard the following from Mikuni-sensei, and there were sighs of relief leaking out from everywhere.