Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371828 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:34:54Z

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Simon: Before changing the name of a character, contact the TL

2014-07-21T20:06:52Z

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Acolyte at 21:20, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:20:16Z

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	“Aah, I don’t mind.”		“Aah, I don’t mind.”

	~~“Ya~~--. Me too.”		“Ja--. Me too.”

	“Then please take care of me.”		“Then please take care of me.”
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	“By the way Julie. Err………..I feel sorry to say this in front of Kokonoe but, even if it is until the weekend, are you okay living together?”		“By the way Julie. Err………..I feel sorry to say this in front of Kokonoe but, even if it is until the weekend, are you okay living together?”

	~~“Ya~~--. It is okay.”		“Ja--. It is okay.”

	“I see. If you say so then it’s okay………”		“I see. If you say so then it’s okay………”
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	Miso soup spurt out x2………………Hotaka spurt out milk.		Miso soup spurt out x2………………Hotaka spurt out milk.

	[Yu,Julie!?] [Wha,whawha!?] [~~YuYuYu~~, Julie-chan!?]		[Ju,Julie!?] [Wha,whawha!?] [JuJuJu, Julie-chan!?]

	“--------------?”		“--------------?”
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	“Are you okay?”		“Are you okay?”

	~~“Ya~~----……………., it was tiring……….”		“Ja----……………., it was tiring……….”

	(Her stamina is just like how she looks.)		(Her stamina is just like how she looks.)
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	“Julie, do you want to drink apple tea too? It’s instant though.”		“Julie, do you want to drink apple tea too? It’s instant though.”

	~~“Ya~~--. I’ll gladly have it.”		“Ja--. I’ll gladly have it.”

	Hearing her reply, and after not even a minute, the sound of the boiling hot water from the kettle could be heard.		Hearing her reply, and after not even a minute, the sound of the boiling hot water from the kettle could be heard.
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	“Are you okay, Julie?”		“Are you okay, Julie?”

	~~“Ya~~,ya---………….”		“Ja,Ja---………….”

	The side of her eyebrows slightly went down, and Julie nodded despondently.		The side of her eyebrows slightly went down, and Julie nodded despondently.
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	“Aah, although it’s from a far view but, they are blooming. Although you shouldn’t expect the sakuras to be elegantly in rows like in the television…………. So, how about it Julie?”		“Aah, although it’s from a far view but, they are blooming. Although you shouldn’t expect the sakuras to be elegantly in rows like in the television…………. So, how about it Julie?”

	~~“Ya~~----. I will go………..”		“Ja----. I will go………..”

	Julie nodded and-------------		Julie nodded and-------------
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	(Eh, wait, Julie,eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehh!?)		(Eh, wait, Julie,eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehh!?)

	~~“Yu~~,Julie, what is wrong…………wait, A-re?”		“Ju,Julie, what is wrong…………wait, A-re?”

	Time lag blurriness again.		Time lag blurriness again.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 3 『Punch me!!』 */

2014-07-20T16:42:03Z

Chapter 3 『Punch me!!』

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	In the end, instead of leaving it to Julie, I have no choice but to fix the misunderstanding by myself.		In the end, instead of leaving it to Julie, I have no choice but to fix the misunderstanding by myself.

	“----------with that said, the power up from <<~~Luciful~~>> is something like multiplication so, the more you strengthen your body with training the higher the results will become---☆.Is everything until here okay?”		“----------with that said, the power up from <<Lucifer>> is something like multiplication so, the more you strengthen your body with training the higher the results will become---☆.Is everything until here okay?”

	Speaking of lessons, since this was the first day, it will be regarding the <<~~Luciful~~>>.		Speaking of lessons, since this was the first day, it will be regarding the <<Lucifer>>.

	Yesterday towards Tsukimi-sensei who I had insecurities with, turned into a figure that can teach quite well.		Yesterday towards Tsukimi-sensei who I had insecurities with, turned into a figure that can teach quite well.
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	……………..however, today too she was wearing a rabbit ear hairband and maid uniform, clothes that are improper as a teacher.		……………..however, today too she was wearing a rabbit ear hairband and maid uniform, clothes that are improper as a teacher.

	“So, there are ranks called <<Level>> attached to the <<~~Luciful~~>>. Because everyone just sublimated just recently so you are all <<{{Furigana\|I\|Level 1}}>>. We will be commencing the <<The Sublimation Ceremony>> each end of semester to perform the rank up. Your <<Level>> will become your results so, if we see your rank not going up at all in an interval of one year then you will be disposed-------which means expelled so you better train your body and mind daily ☆.”		“So, there are ranks called <<Level>> attached to the <<Lucifer>>. Because everyone just sublimated just recently so you are all <<{{Furigana\|I\|Level 1}}>>. We will be commencing the <<The Sublimation Ceremony>> each end of semester to perform the rank up. Your <<Level>> will become your results so, if we see your rank not going up at all in an interval of one year then you will be disposed-------which means expelled so you better train your body and mind daily ☆.”

	According to Tsukimi-sensei, in order to sublimate to a higher rank, it would require a very tough body and mental power, and it would seem this semester would be focusing on physical enhancement.		According to Tsukimi-sensei, in order to sublimate to a higher rank, it would require a very tough body and mental power, and it would seem this semester would be focusing on physical enhancement.
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	After saying that with a feeble voice, Hotaka made a big sigh.		After saying that with a feeble voice, Hotaka made a big sigh.

	“I don’t know how tough it is but, your basic physical strength should have increased from the <<~~Luciful~~>>, isn’t it okay not to think in your usual standards?”		“I don’t know how tough it is but, your basic physical strength should have increased from the <<Lucifer>>, isn’t it okay not to think in your usual standards?”

	“I,is that so…..?”		“I,is that so…..?”
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	Nonetheless, she was 2nd place for the girls and it was quite a speed to reach the goal at 8th place in both genders.		Nonetheless, she was 2nd place for the girls and it was quite a speed to reach the goal at 8th place in both genders.

	(But even so, the blessings from the <<~~Luciful~~>> is amazing.)		(But even so, the blessings from the <<Lucifer>> is amazing.)

	The academy surrounding roads has high up and down difference while having strong winds blowing since the earth was filled in on the surface of the sea, and it made running quite tough.		The academy surrounding roads has high up and down difference while having strong winds blowing since the earth was filled in on the surface of the sea, and it made running quite tough.
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	“I am completely useless………”		“I am completely useless………”

	“………………That is not true. No matter how much you were power upped by the <<~~Luciful~~>>, that distance was quite severe even for me. Miyabi originally wasn’t used to moving your body right? If that is the case, it’s better for you not to call yourself useless and be negative from the beginning.”		“………………That is not true. No matter how much you were power upped by the <<Lucifer>>, that distance was quite severe even for me. Miyabi originally wasn’t used to moving your body right? If that is the case, it’s better for you not to call yourself useless and be negative from the beginning.”

	“I see…..”		“I see…..”

Mashiro: /* Chapter 3 『Punch me!!』 */

2014-07-20T15:33:01Z

Chapter 3 『Punch me!!』

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RikiNutcase at 15:41, 22 June 2014

2014-06-22T15:41:31Z

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	“I, I, err…………fro,from a girl school so err……….”		“I, I, err…………fro,from a girl school so err……….”

	Tachibana asked, and Hotaka who was giving glances at me answered.		Tachibana asked, and Hotaka who was giving glances at me answered.

SirEatALot at 09:49, 5 April 2014

2014-04-05T09:49:15Z

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	“Ah……….u,un, <small>nice to meet you</small>…………..”		“Ah……….u,un, <small>nice to meet you</small>…………..”

	~~Hotaka’s~~ blushed, and lowered her sights before shrinking.		Hotaka blushed, and lowered her sights before shrinking.

	“What’s wrong, Miyabi?”		“What’s wrong, Miyabi?”
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	“Ya--. It is okay.”		“Ya--. It is okay.”

	“I see. If you say so then ~~its~~ okay………”		“I see. If you say so then it’s okay………”

	After saying that, this time she looked towards me------		After saying that, this time she looked towards me------
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	While making a cough, Tachibana’s cheeks slightly blushed probably because she imagined those so called problems.		While making a cough, Tachibana’s cheeks slightly blushed probably because she imagined those so called problems.

	“No, ~~its~~ okay. It’s only natural to think that way.”		“No, it’s okay. It’s only natural to think that way.”

	“If that is the case…………..however, you can tell me anytime if there are any problems. If there is a need for it, I don’t mind having her living in our room in secret. Right? Miyabi”		“If that is the case…………..however, you can tell me anytime if there are any problems. If there is a need for it, I don’t mind having her living in our room in secret. Right? Miyabi”
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	Looking at Yurie with the side of my eyes, I turned on the kettles switch.		Looking at Yurie with the side of my eyes, I turned on the kettles switch.

	With the reason to calm my feelings down , I purposely brought my favorite apple tea (however it is powder type) in order to drink it.		With the reason to calm my feelings down, I purposely brought my favorite apple tea (however it is powder type) in order to drink it.
	“Yurie, do you want to drink apple tea too? It’s instant though.”		“Yurie, do you want to drink apple tea too? It’s instant though.”

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	Because Yurie was completely focused on the television, it looks like she was absent-minded from my warning and the moment she brought the cup to her mouth, her body twitched.		Because Yurie was completely focused on the television, it looks like she was absent-minded from my warning and the moment she brought the cup to her mouth, her body twitched.

	“Are you okay, Yurie.”		“Are you okay, Yurie?”

	“Ya,ya---………….”		“Ya,ya---………….”
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	This situation was something completely unimaginable until now-------		This situation was something completely unimaginable until now-------

	It was strange to be beside a foreigner girl watching television , so because it was so weird and pleasant------I felt very dear towards that peacefulness.		It was strange to be beside a foreigner girl watching television, so because it was so weird and pleasant------I felt very dear towards that peacefulness.

	“It’s beautiful………….”		“It’s beautiful………….”
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	The time when Hotaka Miyabi woke up was just before the date changed.		The time when Hotaka Miyabi woke up was just before the date changed.

	“Are you awake, Miyabi.”		“Are you awake, Miyabi?”

	“Tomoe………….chan……..i………..?”		“Tomoe………….chan……..i………..?”

RikiNutcase at 12:19, 4 April 2014

2014-04-04T12:19:13Z

Glock17: Another heavy grammar edit.

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Another heavy grammar edit.

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Bakapervert: /* Chapter 3 『Punch me!!』 */

2013-11-29T03:02:58Z

Chapter 3 『Punch me!!』

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	After a while, Tachibana made a satisfied smile before giving me back the plate that has various vegetables and fish put on it.		After a while, Tachibana made a satisfied smile before giving me back the plate that has various vegetables and fish put on it.

	“Tha,thank you……….. i am totally not happy about the celery, rather how should I say this, I don’t really like it though………”		“Tha,thank you……….. I am totally not happy about the celery, rather how should I say this, I don’t really like it though………”

	“That’s called hating before eating.”		“That’s called hating before eating.”
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	Tora made a sight saying “go on and tell her”, although I was unwilling to do so but I decided to go ahead.		Tora made a sight saying “go on and tell her”, although I was unwilling to do so but I decided to go ahead.

	“From the way you put it just now, it’s like ~~i……………did~~ something per-perverted to Yurie.”		“From the way you put it just now, it’s like I……………did something per-perverted to Yurie.”

	“-------?”		“-------?”
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	From her scent and warmth, my nervousness increased and my heartbeat increased.		From her scent and warmth, my nervousness increased and my heartbeat increased.

	(Eh, wait, ~~Yurei~~,eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehh!?)		(Eh, wait, Yurie,eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehh!?)

	“Yu,Yurie, what is wrong…………wait, A-re?”		“Yu,Yurie, what is wrong…………wait, A-re?”
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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	==Translation Notes and References==		==Translation Notes and References==
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	“Anyway. I have no intentions to punch Tachibana.”		“Anyway. I have no intentions to punch Tachibana.”

	“No please punch me! As long as I am a daughter born from a ~~military~~ family, if I was embarrassed then I will wipe off that disgrace, and if I embarrassed someone else then I will have to receive punishment fit for it!!”		“No please punch me! As long as I am a daughter born from a martial arts family, if I was embarrassed then I will wipe off that disgrace, and if I embarrassed someone else then I will have to receive punishment fit for it!!”

	A daughter from a ~~military~~ family--------------now that she put that in her mouth, it would mean she is the type to be very worried about disgrace or pride.		A daughter from a martial arts family--------------now that she put that in her mouth, it would mean she is the type to be very worried about disgrace or pride.

	(Again this turned into something annoying………….)		(Again this turned into something annoying………….)
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	“Wha!? T-to end it at such a level is-------“		“Wha!? T-to end it at such a level is-------“

	“Just now I said one shot, and Tachibana said she understood. This means the promise has been made. Tachibana is from a ~~military~~ family right? Were you planning to scrap the promise away, just because you can’t agree?”		“Just now I said one shot, and Tachibana said she understood. This means the promise has been made. Tachibana is from a martial arts family right? Were you planning to scrap the promise away, just because you can’t agree?”

	“Uh…………….tha-that’s………….”		“Uh…………….tha-that’s………….”
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	“If it is a match then it is a different story but, as long as that isn’t the case then I don’t want to raise my hands against a girl. If I followed what Tachibana said you would feel satisfied but, this time I won’t be the one satisfied. That’s why, just now was the best conciliation for me.”		“If it is a match then it is a different story but, as long as that isn’t the case then I don’t want to raise my hands against a girl. If I followed what Tachibana said you would feel satisfied but, this time I won’t be the one satisfied. That’s why, just now was the best conciliation for me.”

	“Bu-but as a daughter from a ~~military~~ family I------“		“Bu-but as a daughter from a martial arts family I------“

	“I don’t care. The first thing that comes is the fact Tachibana is a girl.”		“I don’t care. The first thing that comes is the fact Tachibana is a girl.”
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	(I didn’t mean to say something weird to her though………)		(I didn’t mean to say something weird to her though………)

	Maybe because she is a daughter from a ~~military~~ family that she can’t show smiles, there might be that kind of weird rules.		Maybe because she is a daughter from a martial arts family that she can’t show smiles, there might be that kind of weird rules.

	At least, it seems it was the atmosphere of not hating me.		At least, it seems it was the atmosphere of not hating me.