Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 5 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 08:51, 11 June 2015

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Hiro Hayase at 10:18, 10 June 2015

2015-06-10T10:18:54Z

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	To see through the influence during bad eye sight, is to me a very important aspect.		To see through the influence during bad eye sight, is to me a very important aspect.

	Since my <<Blaze>> is a <<Shield>>, i have no choice but to block my opponents attack and bring it to a close-range combat, having the time period at night time puts me at a disadvantage.		Since my <<Blaze>> is a <<Shield>>, I have no choice but to block my opponents attack and bring it to a close-range combat, having the time period at night time puts me at a disadvantage.

	But, having that type of situation is what I wish for.		But, having that type of situation is what I wish for.

	Able to grasp the chance of victory during a ~~disadvantage~~ situation, is what I think gaining strength is.		Able to grasp the chance of victory during a disadvantageous situation, is what I think gaining strength is.

	“I see, there are a lot of reasons…………I understand the reasons but, I think I would be better after getting more used to the <<Blaze>> first…………….”		“I see, there are a lot of reasons…………I understand the reasons but, I think I would be better after getting more used to the <<Blaze>> first…………….”

Vexing: Added turn to "it was time to turn off the lights." This removes, for me, the mental image of gangsters beating up light bulbs.

2015-05-02T21:21:34Z

Added turn to "it was time to turn off the lights." This removes, for me, the mental image of gangsters beating up light bulbs.

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	Looking at that smile, I was glad from the bottom of my hearts to talk with Hotaka on that day.		Looking at that smile, I was glad from the bottom of my hearts to talk with Hotaka on that day.

	After that we continued immersing ourselves in talking, the dormitory advisor then showed up in the lounge to tell us it was time to off the lights, and we returned back to our respective rooms.		After that we continued immersing ourselves in talking, the dormitory advisor then showed up in the lounge to tell us it was time to turn off the lights, and we returned back to our respective rooms.

	“Okay then, let’s work hard for the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.”		“Okay then, let’s work hard for the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.”

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371834 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:35:15Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371834 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: /* Part 1 */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (86)

2014-07-21T20:25:07Z

Part 1: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (86)

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Acolyte at 21:21, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:21:22Z

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	I spurt out the apple tea.		I spurt out the apple tea.

	~~“Yu~~-Yu,~~Yuri~~-Julie--------------!?”		“Ju-Ju,Juli-Julie--------------!?”

	From that sudden explosive remark, while it being natural, I was only shocked.		From that sudden explosive remark, while it being natural, I was only shocked.
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	“He-hey Julie………….if I did not hear this right………………ju-just now, did you ask me if I wasn’t entering the bath together?................”		“He-hey Julie………….if I did not hear this right………………ju-just now, did you ask me if I wasn’t entering the bath together?................”

	“…………….Ya---“		“…………….Ja---“

	<nowiki></nowiki>Chirin, the bells rang, and Julie moved her head vertically.		<nowiki></nowiki>Chirin, the bells rang, and Julie moved her head vertically.
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	“Hahaha, I-I see, papa huh………….bu-but give up on the bath. As expected there is a lot of problems………………al-also, that goes for toilet”		“Hahaha, I-I see, papa huh………….bu-but give up on the bath. As expected there is a lot of problems………………al-also, that goes for toilet”

	~~“Ya~~----. I understand.”		“Ja----. I understand.”

	With various things, the sudden explosive remark that was reached has finally reached a stage where it could be dropped.		With various things, the sudden explosive remark that was reached has finally reached a stage where it could be dropped.
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	“Hey Julie. I think this might be impossible but, are you planning to sleep together………..?”		“Hey Julie. I think this might be impossible but, are you planning to sleep together………..?”

	~~“Ya~~---. That’s because we are <<Duo>>.”		“Ja---. That’s because we are <<Duo>>.”

	“………………….”		“………………….”
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	“I-it’s only for today…………..”		“I-it’s only for today…………..”

	~~“Ya~~-----♪“		“Ja-----♪“


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	“Bu-but not every day. It's only when Julie thinks she is very lonely okay?”		“Bu-but not every day. It's only when Julie thinks she is very lonely okay?”

	~~“Ya~~---------!”		“Ja---------!”

	Even in this darkness, I knew Julie was nodding her head.		Even in this darkness, I knew Julie was nodding her head.
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	“………………you mean together right?”		“………………you mean together right?”

	~~“Ya~~----♪“		“Ja----♪“

	Towards her nodding figure, my eyesight was getting dizzy.		Towards her nodding figure, my eyesight was getting dizzy.
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	“Let’s take a little break.”		“Let’s take a little break.”

	~~“Ya~~------“		“Ja------“

	After taking a bow to end it, the atmosphere Julie was having during the practice completely disappeared.		After taking a bow to end it, the atmosphere Julie was having during the practice completely disappeared.
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	“Thanks for the advice. Julie. Sorry but, can I rely on you about the other side.”		“Thanks for the advice. Julie. Sorry but, can I rely on you about the other side.”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	Julie made a nod and made a small smile before taking distance.		Julie made a nod and made a small smile before taking distance.
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	“Ah……………..Ko-kokonoe-kun, Julie-chan. You two just got back?”		“Ah……………..Ko-kokonoe-kun, Julie-chan. You two just got back?”

	~~“Ya~~----. Miyabi is going out?”		“Ja----. Miyabi is going out?”

	“U-un…………”		“U-un…………”
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	“He-hey Julie-chan. Next time, is it okay if I ask you about things I don’t know about?”		“He-hey Julie-chan. Next time, is it okay if I ask you about things I don’t know about?”

	~~“Ya~~---.I’ll be happy too if it is within my ability.”		“Ja---.I’ll be happy too if it is within my ability.”

	“………….Sorry Julie. Can I count on you………?”		“………….Sorry Julie. Can I count on you………?”
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	“Oh yeah, Julie. Sorry for it being sudden, but I have something I don’t understand from the lesson just now, can you teach me that?”		“Oh yeah, Julie. Sorry for it being sudden, but I have something I don’t understand from the lesson just now, can you teach me that?”

	~~“Ya~~---.Where?”		“Ja---.Where?”

	Julie nodded and opened her own notes.		Julie nodded and opened her own notes.
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	After I made a sigh of relief from Tsukimi-sensei’s single sentence, Hotaka called out to Julie.		After I made a sigh of relief from Tsukimi-sensei’s single sentence, Hotaka called out to Julie.

	~~“Yu~~-Julie-chan. Why don’t we do it together………?”		“Ju-Julie-chan. Why don’t we do it together………?”

	~~“Ya~~---. I am counting on you, Miyabi.”		“Ja---. I am counting on you, Miyabi.”

	(I will go with Tora-----)		(I will go with Tora-----)

Mashiro: /* Chapter 5 『It's a Promise』 */

2014-07-20T16:43:48Z

Chapter 5 『It's a Promise』

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	“No, I just remembered something from the <<Duo>>. I was wondering about the <<Absolute Duo>> the director was talking about last time………….”		“No, I just remembered something from the <<Duo>>. I was wondering about the <<Absolute Duo>> the director was talking about last time………….”

	When the <<~~Luciful~~>> was being administrated, and during the entrance ceremony, it was a word I heard twice.		When the <<Lucifer>> was being administrated, and during the entrance ceremony, it was a word I heard twice.

	“Fumu, that huh. I was bothered about that and took a look back at the pamphlet but, that word was not in it. Judging from the nuance, it makes one think it is related to the <<Duo>>, and as long as the director purposely prayed for us to reach the <<Absolute Duo>> eventually, I think it is something important……………..”		“Fumu, that huh. I was bothered about that and took a look back at the pamphlet but, that word was not in it. Judging from the nuance, it makes one think it is related to the <<Duo>>, and as long as the director purposely prayed for us to reach the <<Absolute Duo>> eventually, I think it is something important……………..”

Mashiro: /* Chapter 5 『It's a Promise』 */

2014-07-20T15:43:35Z

Chapter 5 『It's a Promise』

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Oddmoonlight: /* Chapter 5 『It's a Promise』 */

2014-05-17T07:09:38Z

Chapter 5 『It's a Promise』

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	“That’s why, even though it is in a <<Duo>> way, I am very happy to be able to sleep together”		“That’s why, even though it is in a <<Duo>> way, I am very happy to be able to sleep together”

	“I-i see……….”		“I-I see……….”

	Towards that smile, I could only answer powerlessly.		Towards that smile, I could only answer powerlessly.
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	When i said my goodbyes in front of the staircase, Hotaka headed a few steps up before looking back.		When i said my goodbyes in front of the staircase, Hotaka headed a few steps up before looking back.

	“E-err, Kokonoe-kun. I-i-i-i-i-i-i-I have a request………..!”		“E-err, Kokonoe-kun. I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I have a request………..!”

	“Request?”		“Request?”

Lawes12: /* Part 1 */

2013-12-22T23:48:44Z

Part 1

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	Yurie ~~swing~~ her head and ''continued her words………for some reason with her cheeks blushed''.		Yurie swung her head and ''continued her words………for some reason with her cheeks blushed''.

	“Are you not coming in together?”		“Are you not coming in together?”
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	“Tooru……….somehow feels like a papa”		“Tooru……….somehow feels like a papa”

	I seriously was about to ~~trip~~ over from Yurie’s comment.		I seriously was about to fall over from Yurie’s comment.

	“Hahaha, I-I see, papa huh………….bu-but give up on the bath. As expected there is a lot of problems………………al-also, that goes for toilet”		“Hahaha, I-I see, papa huh………….bu-but give up on the bath. As expected there is a lot of problems………………al-also, that goes for toilet”

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	That was how much the amount of concentration she put towards the battle.		That was how much the amount of concentration she put towards the battle.

	(It’ll be 4 continuous ~~lost~~ with this on today, huh…………..we were still equal during the <<Fist practice>>………..)		(It’ll be 4 continuous losses with this one today, huh…………..we were still equal during the <<Fist practice>>………..)

	Although I was overwhelmed during the first match but, originally my fighting skills learned are centered on being weaponless and if it is a weaponless fight right now, then we should be equal.		Although I was overwhelmed during the first match but, originally my fighting skills learned are centered on being weaponless and if it is a weaponless fight right now, then we should be equal.
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	“---------?”		“---------?”

	I quickly moved my sights back to her legs, and swing my head to ward of the image I saw.		I quickly moved my sights back to her legs, and swing my head to ward off the image I saw.

	(Sh-she’s too defenseless, this is just too…………..!!)		(Sh-she’s too defenseless, this is just too…………..!!)
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	It should be written on the profile list but, since I checked (What’s more roughly) only through the males, I am quite interested to what it is.		It should be written on the profile list but, since I checked (What’s more roughly) only through the males, I am quite interested to what it is.

	(Well, I’ll find out when I have a match with her during at <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.)		(Well, I’ll find out when I have a match with her during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.)

	“Speaking of which, recently your marathon time has increased. There was this kind behind the scenes huh.”		“Speaking of which, recently your marathon time has increased. There was this kind behind the scenes huh.”
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	The quiet Hotaka made a small smile that makes me think of a giant flower.		The quiet Hotaka made a small smile that makes me think of a giant flower.

	Looking at that smile, I was glad from the bottom of my ~~hearts~~ to talk with Hotaka on that day.		Looking at that smile, I was glad from the bottom of my heart to talk with Hotaka on that day.

	After that we continued immersing ourselves in talking, the dormitory advisor then showed up in the lounge to tell us it was time to turn off the lights, and we returned back to our respective rooms.		After that we continued immersing ourselves in talking, the dormitory advisor then showed up in the lounge to tell us it was time to turn off the lights, and we returned back to our respective rooms.
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	“U-un”		“U-un”

	When i said my goodbyes in front of the staircase, Hotaka headed a few steps up before looking back.		When I said my goodbyes in front of the staircase, Hotaka headed a few steps up before looking back.

	“E-err, Kokonoe-kun. I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I have a request………..!”		“E-err, Kokonoe-kun. I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I have a request………..!”
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	“Good night. To-Tooru,-kun…………..”		“Good night. To-Tooru,-kun…………..”

	Miyabi made a smile and swing her hands before lightly go up the stairs.		Miyabi made a smile and swing her hands before lightly going up the stairs.

	Her back somehow looks in a good mood to me.		Her back somehow looks in a good mood to me.