Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 6 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 09:36, 11 June 2015

2015-06-11T09:36:43Z

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	Naturally, there were <<Duo>>s that didn’t move away from their spot.		Naturally, there were <<Duo>>s that didn’t move away from their spot.

	The teams’ conscious about an ~~advantages~~ position should be like a spider waiting for its prey to get caught in its net.		The teams’ conscious about an advantageous position should be like a spider waiting for its prey to get caught in its net.

	“Let’s head to the school building for now.”		“Let’s head to the school building for now.”
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Gikiin………….!! The sound of metal clashing echoed and Tomoe’s eyes opened wide in surprise.		<nowiki></nowiki>Gikiin………….!! The sound of metal clashing echoed and Tomoe’s eyes opened wide in surprise.

	Julie ''parried the metal drip with her left sword, in order to ~~trust~~ her right sword towards Tomoe.''		Julie ''parried the metal drip with her left sword, in order to thrust her right sword towards Tomoe.''

	“It’s checkmate.”		“It’s checkmate.”

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371835 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:35:20Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371835 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (51)

2014-07-21T20:25:17Z

Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (51)

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Acolyte at 21:21, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:21:58Z

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	“Let’s do our best tomorrow.”		“Let’s do our best tomorrow.”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	“Okay then, good night Julie.”		“Okay then, good night Julie.”
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	“Let’s go, Julie!”		“Let’s go, Julie!”

	~~“Ya~~----!”		“Ja----!”

	“”<<Blaze>>””		“”<<Blaze>>””
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	“Let’s head to the school building for now.”		“Let’s head to the school building for now.”

	~~“Ya~~----. There is a route through the auditorium from the front and the opposite side from here but, which one should we go with?”		“Ja----. There is a route through the auditorium from the front and the opposite side from here but, which one should we go with?”

	“From what we can see, there is no one in the front so, let’s go around the opposite side.”		“From what we can see, there is no one in the front so, let’s go around the opposite side.”
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	“Aah, let’s go! Julie!”		“Aah, let’s go! Julie!”

	~~“Ya~~----!!”		“Ja----!!”

	All 3 of us moved at the same time.		All 3 of us moved at the same time.
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	“Julie! <<{{Furigana\|Saber\|Single blade sword}}>> throw!”		“Julie! <<{{Furigana\|Saber\|Single blade sword}}>> throw!”

	~~“Ya~~---!”		“Ja---!”

	A short instruction. But that is all it needs to get through. Julie who moved to the side in an instant, followed my instruction and reached right behind her.		A short instruction. But that is all it needs to get through. Julie who moved to the side in an instant, followed my instruction and reached right behind her.
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	“Good work, Julie.”		“Good work, Julie.”

	~~“Ya~~----. Tooru too, good work.”		“Ja----. Tooru too, good work.”

	While Tooru was replying back to Julie who was making a small smile with a smile, he was astonished of Julie’s judgments from just now inside his heart.		While Tooru was replying back to Julie who was making a small smile with a smile, he was astonished of Julie’s judgments from just now inside his heart.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 6 『I Will Be the One---That Take Your Cover!!』 */

2014-07-20T16:44:18Z

Chapter 6 『I Will Be the One---That Take Your Cover!!』

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	(If I hadn’t avoided the vital points then it seriously would have been a one-hit kill. The gap is 6 to 7 meters………?)		(If I hadn’t avoided the vital points then it seriously would have been a one-hit kill. The gap is 6 to 7 meters………?)

	Although it is a breath distance thanks to the <<~~Luciful~~>> , it was hard to make sure from that ''happening'' with only a slight movement of her wrist.		Although it is a breath distance thanks to the <<Lucifer>> , it was hard to make sure from that ''happening'' with only a slight movement of her wrist.
	On top of that, since the gap is wide, it is clear entering her chest area is going to be a pain.		On top of that, since the gap is wide, it is clear entering her chest area is going to be a pain.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 6 『I Will Be the One---That Take Your Cover!!』 */

2014-07-20T15:45:01Z

Chapter 6 『I Will Be the One---That Take Your Cover!!』

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Lawes12: /* Part 2 */

2013-12-23T00:19:17Z

Part 2

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	Yes, Yurie did not parry with her <<{{Furigana\|Twin blades\|Double}}>>, and was dodging all of it.		Yes, Yurie did not parry with her <<{{Furigana\|Twin blades\|Double}}>>, and was dodging all of it.

	There ~~were~~ cold ~~sweats~~ flowing ~~behind~~ Tomoe’s back.		There was cold sweat flowing down Tomoe’s back.

	Towards that movement that crosses over common sense, Tomoe found out the real meaning of the other name black wing angel which became a rumor during the entrance examination.		Towards that movement that crosses over common sense, Tomoe found out the real meaning of the other name black wing angel which became a rumor during the entrance examination.

Lawes12: /* Part 1 */

2013-12-23T00:18:15Z

Part 1

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	[-----------!!][Tooru!]		[-----------!!][Tooru!]

	Even though I dodged it almost at the same ~~thiming~~ with Yurie’s shout, the metal drip scratched me and plowed down the tree behind me like that.		Even though I dodged it almost at the same timing with Yurie’s shout, the metal drip scratched me and plowed down the tree behind me like that.

	“It has some power but------it’s okay, it’s just a scratch.”		“It has some power but------it’s okay, it’s just a scratch.”

Morgi: /* Part 1 */

2013-11-25T08:15:50Z

Part 1

Dual Blades at 19:42, 17 November 2013

2013-11-17T19:42:34Z

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	(This isn’t something I should be asking out of curiosity…………..)		(This isn’t something I should be asking out of curiosity…………..)

	I controlled myself ~~from~~ the same reason as the last time.		I controlled myself using the same reason as the last time.

	It might have a circumstance she doesn’t want to be asked.		It might have a circumstance she doesn’t want to be asked.

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	A night before the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.		A night before the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.

	The comfortable time after taking bath has already turned into a daily thing--------		The comfortable time after taking a bath has already turned into a daily thing--------

	Like usual, we were drinking apple tea while watching television.		Like usual, we were drinking apple tea while watching television.
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	When I thought about that, the question that arose on the first day after enrollment once again came forth.		When I thought about that, the question that arose on the first day after enrollment once again came forth.

	The question of, why did Yurie ~~enrolled~~ into Kouryou.		The question of, why did Yurie enroll into Kouryou.

	Leaving her country, and coming to the deepest part of the east while holding anxiety----------what’s more to a very special background school, a ''battle technique instruction school''.		Leaving her country, and coming to the deepest part of the east while holding anxiety----------what’s more to a very special background school, a ''battle technique instruction school''.
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	(<nowiki>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~</nowiki>!!)		(<nowiki>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~</nowiki>!!)

	It has already been something done every time but even so, I was so agitated by this action I couldn’t get used to, and not long ~~later~~, my consciousness lost to the drowsiness and fell into the darkness.		It has already been something done every time but even so, I was so agitated by this action I couldn’t get used to, and not long after, my consciousness lost to the drowsiness and fell into the darkness.


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	In case the students get hurt during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>, there were few people including Tsukimi-sensei and Mikuni-sensei patrolling.		In case the students get hurt during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>, there were few people including Tsukimi-sensei and Mikuni-sensei patrolling.

	“No no, this is also my job……………..and, now it isn’t time to be talking nor overemphasis, both of you please continue the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.”		“No no, this is also my job……………..and, now it isn’t the time to be talking nor overemphasis, both of you please continue the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>.”

	[Yes, please excuse us] [Please excuse us]		[Yes, please excuse us] [Please excuse us]
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	[-----------!!][Tooru!]		[-----------!!][Tooru!]

	Even though I dodged it almost at the same ~~thing~~ with Yurie’s shout, the metal drip scratched me and plowed down the tree behind me like that.		Even though I dodged it almost at the same thiming with Yurie’s shout, the metal drip scratched me and plowed down the tree behind me like that.

	“It has some power but------it’s okay, it’s just a scratch.”		“It has some power but------it’s okay, it’s just a scratch.”