Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 7 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 10:57, 11 June 2015

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	It’s true that, in case of getting attacked by a <<Blaze>>, an instantaneous pain would be produced.		It’s true that, in case of getting attacked by a <<Blaze>>, an instantaneous pain would be produced.

	But in the very end it was for an instant, what’s more it should be slightly ~~pain~~, and not be something strong enough to cause a shout.		But in the very end it was for an instant, what’s more it should be slightly painful, and not be something strong enough to cause a shout.

	When we reached to the highest floor, there was a shadow standing in the middle of the corridor---------a silhouette of a characteristic rabbit ears was there.		When we reached to the highest floor, there was a shadow standing in the middle of the corridor---------a silhouette of a characteristic rabbit ears was there.
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	“Guh,AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!”		“Guh,AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!”

	Immediately, Tora raised a shout and ~~with~~ the same time with his voice interrupted, he powerlessly collapsed to the floor.		Immediately, Tora raised a shout and at the same time with his voice interrupted, he powerlessly collapsed to the floor.

	That figure made me have a flashback of my sister-----Otoha.		That figure made me have a flashback of my sister-----Otoha.
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	“Julie………………….”		“Julie………………….”

	Hearing the silver girl words, even though not even a month passed but, the feelings that I will never forget float out like a rotating lantern-----------------		Hearing the silver girl's words, even though not even a month passed but, the feelings that I will never forget float out like a rotating lantern-----------------

	“-------------!!”		“-------------!!”

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371836 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:35:35Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371836 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (72)

2014-07-21T20:25:26Z

Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (72)

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Acolyte at 21:22, 20 July 2014

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	“Uh,kuh…………..!! Julie, are you okay!?”		“Uh,kuh…………..!! Julie, are you okay!?”

	~~“Ya~~----. Thanks to you……..but even so, it was an unbelievable strength. It's expected from someone selected to be a special teacher here.”		“Ja----. Thanks to you……..but even so, it was an unbelievable strength. It's expected from someone selected to be a special teacher here.”

	It would seem she wasn’t injured, and I made a sigh of relief.		It would seem she wasn’t injured, and I made a sigh of relief.
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	“I know. Thank you for worrying about me, Julie.”		“I know. Thank you for worrying about me, Julie.”

	~~“Ya~~---. You are welcome………….okay, I will be going to take a bath now.”		“Ja---. You are welcome………….okay, I will be going to take a bath now.”

	“Aah, take your time.”		“Aah, take your time.”
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	“No peeking okay, Tooru.”		“No peeking okay, Tooru.”

	~~“Yu~~-Julie”		“Ju-Julie”

	“It’s a joke.”		“It’s a joke.”
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	“Towel…………?”		“Towel…………?”

	~~“Ya~~----. I forgot to bring it with me. It is in the 2nd drawer from the top of my clothing case, so please.”		“Ja----. I forgot to bring it with me. It is in the 2nd drawer from the top of my clothing case, so please.”

	“A-aah. I get it……………..”		“A-aah. I get it……………..”
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	She then fell forward from unable to support her body--------and Julie came out in the state when she was born.		She then fell forward from unable to support her body--------and Julie came out in the state when she was born.

	“Bu!? Yu-Julie!!”		“Bu!? Ju-Julie!!”

	I suddenly catch her but-----------since I was unable to put any strength into my legs, we fell to the floor just like that.		I suddenly catch her but-----------since I was unable to put any strength into my legs, we fell to the floor just like that.
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	Seeing that the naked girl----------Julie was being hugged closely by me, both of their faces stiffened.		Seeing that the naked girl----------Julie was being hugged closely by me, both of their faces stiffened.

	“Ko-koko-Kokonoe! Wha-wha-what kind of shameless thi-thing are you doing?! Making ~~YuYu~~-Julie naked, what on earth, what are you, what are you doing--------------!?”		“Ko-koko-Kokonoe! Wha-wha-what kind of shameless thi-thing are you doing?! Making Ju-Ju-Julie naked, what on earth, what are you, what are you doing--------------!?”

	“N-no, this is a misunderstanding…………….!!”		“N-no, this is a misunderstanding…………….!!”
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	The <<Flame>> danced from the <<Word that carried strength>>, and the <<{{Furigana\|Chivalry lance\|Lance}}>> appeared in Miyabi’s hands-------		The <<Flame>> danced from the <<Word that carried strength>>, and the <<{{Furigana\|Chivalry lance\|Lance}}>> appeared in Miyabi’s hands-------

	“Wai, a sec, Miyabi!? Yu-Julie! Explain how this got this way---------“		“Wai, a sec, Miyabi!? Ju-Julie! Explain how this got this way---------“

	“Tooru-kun you………………Pervert--------------------------!!”		“Tooru-kun you………………Pervert--------------------------!!”

Mashiro: /* Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Yurie』 */

2014-07-20T16:44:47Z

Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Yurie』

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	“Tsukimi-sensei!”		“Tsukimi-sensei!”

	“I-I get it, I will tell you but------this is a very important confidential secret regarding the <<~~Luciful~~>> so keep this a secret okay? …………… Actually, the fact that the <<Blaze>> is a weapon that can’t hurt people, is ''a flat-out lie''”		“I-I get it, I will tell you but------this is a very important confidential secret regarding the <<Lucifer>> so keep this a secret okay? …………… Actually, the fact that the <<Blaze>> is a weapon that can’t hurt people, is ''a flat-out lie''”

	“A lie……….!?”		“A lie……….!?”

Mashiro: /* Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Julie』 */

2014-07-20T15:48:09Z

Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Julie』

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Levant08: /* Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Yurie』 */

2014-05-15T09:39:36Z

Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Yurie』

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	“Uun, it is my job anyway…….more importantly, these injuries------“		“Uun, it is my job anyway…….more importantly, these injuries------“

	After she started performing first-aid on Tora and Tatsu, Tsukimi-~~sense’s~~ expression turned cloudy.		After she started performing first-aid on Tora and Tatsu, Tsukimi-sensei’s expression turned cloudy.

	“Is there something wrong?”		“Is there something wrong?”

RikiNutcase at 23:31, 18 March 2014

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	“When a seed bud in a harsh environment, it is only then when it will bloom to a beautiful flower, it is what I think.”		“When a seed bud in a harsh environment, it is only then when it will bloom to a beautiful flower, it is what I think.”

	Before the <<New blade battle(Newcomer battle)>>, Rito made a smile when she was told that things would be left to her and killing might be okay depending on her. During that time, having said every single word Sakuya said without changing any of it, Mikuni lowered his head in apology before, returning back to the previous topic of the video.		Before the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>, Rito made a smile when she was told that things would be left to her and killing might be okay depending on her. During that time, having said every single word Sakuya said without changing any of it, Mikuni lowered his head in apology before, returning back to the previous topic of the video.

	“However, this is a surprise. To think a person that could drive a <<{{Furigana\|III\|Level 3}}>> away appeared ''again''…………”		“However, this is a surprise. To think a person that could drive a <<{{Furigana\|III\|Level 3}}>> away appeared ''again''…………”

Acolyte at 20:15, 5 December 2013

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	“---------!!”		“---------!!”

	“Hostility, malice………..strong intentions of hurting people will turn it into a lethal weapon. With just one way put into the heart, it is a weapon that could easily ~~tack~~ away someone’s life-------and that is the <<Blaze>>…………ah, just like what I said, this is a highly classified information so the special lecture ends here, I am counting on you.”		“Hostility, malice………..strong intentions of hurting people will turn it into a lethal weapon. With just one way put into the heart, it is a weapon that could easily take away someone’s life-------and that is the <<Blaze>>…………ah, just like what I said, this is a highly classified information so the special lecture ends here, I am counting on you.”

	“I understand.”		“I understand.”

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Yurie』 */

2013-11-29T06:04:35Z

Chapter 7 『{{Furigana|Ai(Love)|Eins(One)}} To Yurie』

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	“-------that’s all for the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>> recording.”		“-------that’s all for the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>> recording.”

	About the time Tsukimi Rito <<{{Furigana\|Fang sword\|Tebutje}}>> was destroyed by Tooru, and collapsing a male------Mikuni stopped the video.		About the time Tsukimi Rito <<{{Furigana\|Fang sword\|Tebutje}}>> was destroyed by Tooru, and collapsing, a male------Mikuni stopped the video.

	“Kuhah. Going to the extent of showing the video, even though it was not done cynically, isn’t my result report enough—“		“Kuhah. Going to the extent of showing the video, even though it was not done cynically, isn’t my result report enough—“