Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Epilogue - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 11:03, 11 June 2015

2015-06-11T11:03:20Z

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	“Tooru!?”		“Tooru!?”

	It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and Julie took a peek at me in worry.		It looks like I woke her up with the shout I released, and Julie took a peek at me in worry.

	“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”		“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”
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	After coming out to the balcony from the lounge, I was waiting for a world befitting that representation.		After coming out to the balcony from the lounge, I was waiting for a world befitting that representation.

	The pale moon was shining up in the sky, and it was a peaceful and kind.		The pale moon was shining up in the sky, and it was peaceful and kind.

	But the dark feeling was still swirling inside my heart.		But the dark feeling was still swirling inside my heart.
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	My back muscle twitched.		My back muscle twitched.

	There is long straight scar carved into her exposed back.		There is a long straight scar carved into her exposed back.

	Bathed in the pale blue light of the moon, these words fell from the silver girl’s mouth-----that confession.		Bathed in the pale blue light of the moon, these words fell from the silver girl’s mouth-----that confession.

RikiNutcase at 07:25, 18 February 2015

2015-02-18T07:25:38Z

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	But the dark feeling was still swirling inside my heart.		But the dark feeling was still swirling inside my heart.

	That moment on that summer day --------- has ~~still not~~ left my mind.		That moment on that summer day --------- has yet left my mind.

	“Otoha…………….”		“Otoha…………….”
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	But even so, I have no choice but to seek it.		But even so, I have no choice but to seek it.

	In order to slam these ~~black~~ feelings towards my best friend who destroyed everything~~--------~~my precious daily life.		In order to slam these dark feelings towards my best friend who destroyed everything; my precious daily life.

	Even though 2 years passed after that, the rage and hate did not change inside me.		Even though 2 years passed after that, the rage and hate did not change inside me.

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371837 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:35:40Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371837 by Simon (talk)

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	“Tooru!?”		“Tooru!?”

	It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and ~~Yurie~~ took a peek at me in worry.		It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and Julie took a peek at me in worry.

	“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”		“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”
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	My clothes were wet and sticky with cold sweat and I could only say it was unpleasant.		My clothes were wet and sticky with cold sweat and I could only say it was unpleasant.

	“…………………sorry, I’ll change my clothes and then I’ll go get a drink in the lounge so, don’t mind me and go back to sleep, ~~Yurie~~. I am really sorry I woke you up.”		“…………………sorry, I’ll change my clothes and then I’ll go get a drink in the lounge so, don’t mind me and go back to sleep, Julie. I am really sorry I woke you up.”

	I quickly changed my clothes before exiting the room.		I quickly changed my clothes before exiting the room.
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	“Tooru……………”		“Tooru……………”

	Just before I closed the door, I heard ~~Yurie’s~~ worried voice but I did not stop.		Just before I closed the door, I heard Julie’s worried voice but I did not stop.

	While thinking I made her even more worried; this unpleasantness---- this squirming dark feeling in the depths of my heart and the face distorted by this feeling, I didn’t want ~~Yurie~~ to see any of it.		While thinking I made her even more worried; this unpleasantness---- this squirming dark feeling in the depths of my heart and the face distorted by this feeling, I didn’t want Julie to see any of it.


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	Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.		Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.

	“………………you didn’t sleep, ~~Yurie~~.”		“………………you didn’t sleep, Julie.”

	“You hadn’t come back so…………”		“You hadn’t come back so…………”
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	“…………..sorry to make you worry. I was just cooling off……… let's go back and sleep.”		“…………..sorry to make you worry. I was just cooling off……… let's go back and sleep.”

	To avoid letting ~~Yurie~~ see my face, I walked past her flank and was about to go out to the lounge------		To avoid letting Julie see my face, I walked past her flank and was about to go out to the lounge------

	“Tooru…………….!!”		“Tooru…………….!!”
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	I stopped from hearing her shout.		I stopped from hearing her shout.

	When I turned around, ~~Yurie~~ was looking straight at me.		When I turned around, Julie was looking straight at me.

	Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.		Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.
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	The atmosphere shook from my shout.		The atmosphere shook from my shout.

	But ~~Yurie~~ slowly swung her head-------		But Julie slowly swung her head-------

	“Me too-------“		“Me too-------“
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	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]

	~~“Yurie……………~~.?”		“Julie…………….?”

	“I am the same as Tooru.”		“I am the same as Tooru.”

Simon: /* Epilogue */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (9)

2014-07-21T20:25:34Z

Epilogue: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (9)

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	“Tooru!?”		“Tooru!?”

	It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and ~~Julie~~ took a peek at me in worry.		It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and Yurie took a peek at me in worry.

	“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”		“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”
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	My clothes were wet and sticky with cold sweat and I could only say it was unpleasant.		My clothes were wet and sticky with cold sweat and I could only say it was unpleasant.

	“…………………sorry, I’ll change my clothes and then I’ll go get a drink in the lounge so, don’t mind me and go back to sleep, ~~Julie~~. I am really sorry I woke you up.”		“…………………sorry, I’ll change my clothes and then I’ll go get a drink in the lounge so, don’t mind me and go back to sleep, Yurie. I am really sorry I woke you up.”

	I quickly changed my clothes before exiting the room.		I quickly changed my clothes before exiting the room.
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	“Tooru……………”		“Tooru……………”

	Just before I closed the door, I heard ~~Julie’s~~ worried voice but I did not stop.		Just before I closed the door, I heard Yurie’s worried voice but I did not stop.

	While thinking I made her even more worried; this unpleasantness---- this squirming dark feeling in the depths of my heart and the face distorted by this feeling, I didn’t want ~~Julie~~ to see any of it.		While thinking I made her even more worried; this unpleasantness---- this squirming dark feeling in the depths of my heart and the face distorted by this feeling, I didn’t want Yurie to see any of it.


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	Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.		Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.

	“………………you didn’t sleep, ~~Julie~~.”		“………………you didn’t sleep, Yurie.”

	“You hadn’t come back so…………”		“You hadn’t come back so…………”
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	“…………..sorry to make you worry. I was just cooling off……… let's go back and sleep.”		“…………..sorry to make you worry. I was just cooling off……… let's go back and sleep.”

	To avoid letting ~~Julie~~ see my face, I walked past her flank and was about to go out to the lounge------		To avoid letting Yurie see my face, I walked past her flank and was about to go out to the lounge------

	“Tooru…………….!!”		“Tooru…………….!!”
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	I stopped from hearing her shout.		I stopped from hearing her shout.

	When I turned around, ~~Julie~~ was looking straight at me.		When I turned around, Yurie was looking straight at me.

	Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.		Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.
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	The atmosphere shook from my shout.		The atmosphere shook from my shout.

	But ~~Julie~~ slowly swung her head-------		But Yurie slowly swung her head-------

	“Me too-------“		“Me too-------“
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	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]

	~~“Julie……………~~.?”		“Yurie…………….?”

	“I am the same as Tooru.”		“I am the same as Tooru.”

Mashiro: /* Epilogue */

2014-07-20T15:50:37Z

Epilogue

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	“Tooru!?”		“Tooru!?”

	It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and ~~Yurie~~ took a peek at me in worry.		It looks like I woke her up with shout I released, and Julie took a peek at me in worry.

	“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”		“Sorry………….. I surprised you, again…………”
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	My clothes were wet and sticky with cold sweat and I could only say it was unpleasant.		My clothes were wet and sticky with cold sweat and I could only say it was unpleasant.

	“…………………sorry, I’ll change my clothes and then I’ll go get a drink in the lounge so, don’t mind me and go back to sleep, ~~Yurie~~. I am really sorry I woke you up.”		“…………………sorry, I’ll change my clothes and then I’ll go get a drink in the lounge so, don’t mind me and go back to sleep, Julie. I am really sorry I woke you up.”

	I quickly changed my clothes before exiting the room.		I quickly changed my clothes before exiting the room.
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	“Tooru……………”		“Tooru……………”

	Just before I closed the door, I heard ~~Yurie’s~~ worried voice but I did not stop.		Just before I closed the door, I heard Julie’s worried voice but I did not stop.

	While thinking I made her even more worried; this unpleasantness---- this squirming dark feeling in the depths of my heart and the face distorted by this feeling, I didn’t want ~~Yurie~~ to see any of it.		While thinking I made her even more worried; this unpleasantness---- this squirming dark feeling in the depths of my heart and the face distorted by this feeling, I didn’t want Julie to see any of it.


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	Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.		Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.

	“………………you didn’t sleep, ~~Yurie~~.”		“………………you didn’t sleep, Julie.”

	“You hadn’t come back so…………”		“You hadn’t come back so…………”
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	“…………..sorry to make you worry. I was just cooling off……… let's go back and sleep.”		“…………..sorry to make you worry. I was just cooling off……… let's go back and sleep.”

	To avoid letting ~~Yurie~~ see my face, I walked past her flank and was about to go out to the lounge------		To avoid letting Julie see my face, I walked past her flank and was about to go out to the lounge------

	“Tooru…………….!!”		“Tooru…………….!!”
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	I stopped from hearing her shout.		I stopped from hearing her shout.

	When I turned around, ~~Yurie~~ was looking straight at me.		When I turned around, Julie was looking straight at me.

	Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.		Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.
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	The atmosphere shook from my shout.		The atmosphere shook from my shout.

	But ~~Yurie~~ slowly swung her head-------		But Julie slowly swung her head-------

	“Me too-------“		“Me too-------“
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	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]

	~~“Yurie……………~~.?”		“Julie…………….?”

	“I am the same as Tooru.”		“I am the same as Tooru.”
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RikiNutcase at 01:00, 1 January 2014

2014-01-01T01:00:32Z

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	Otoha’s death.		Otoha’s death.

	Those words from my best friend; “They are dead because they were weak.”		Those words from my best friend

			“They are dead because they were weak.”

	And then------with a shout overflowing with hopelessness, rage and resentment, the memories called a nightmare concluded.		And then------with a shout overflowing with hopelessness, rage and resentment, the memories called a nightmare concluded.
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	When I turned around, Yurie was looking straight at me.		When I turned around, Yurie was looking straight at me.


	Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.		Filled with a pitiful light, she was staring right at me with her {{Furigana\|red eyes\|Ruby eyes}}.
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	“Me too-------“		“Me too-------“

			Under the moonlight, she exposed her {{Furigana\|white skin\|Snow white}}.

	~~Under the moonlight, she exposed her {{Furigana\|white skin\|Snow white}}.~~
	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]

	“Yurie…………….?”		“Yurie…………….?”

RikiNutcase at 00:57, 1 January 2014

2014-01-01T00:57:05Z

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	The crimson flames were burning everything down.		The crimson flames were burning everything down.

	Again, this dream comes to the front of my mind. A grey dream~~, a~~ nightmare with red as its only color~~, it’s~~ Otoha’s death.		Again, this dream comes to the front of my mind.

			A grey dream.

			A nightmare with red as its only color.

			Otoha’s death.

	Those words from my best friend; “They are dead because they were weak.”		Those words from my best friend; “They are dead because they were weak.”
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	(If I had been strong, would I have not lost everything………?)		(If I had been strong, would I have not lost everything………?)

	Time will not go back~~, it cannot be returned~~.		Time will not go back.

	Even if I seek <<Power>> now or gain it, everything I lost will not come back.		Even if I seek <<Power>> now or gain it, everything I lost will not come back.
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	But even so, I have no choice but to seek it.		But even so, I have no choice but to seek it.

			In order to slam these black feelings towards my best friend who destroyed everything--------my precious daily life.

	~~My precious daily life-------- towards my best friend who destroyed everything~~, ~~in order to slam these black feelings at him.'''(!<!-- Note: this sentence is very grammatically incorrect and I cannot fix it without translator clarification. Is it related to~~ the ~~subject above? Is the daily life portion related to training~~ and ~~gaining power or the life he lost, fueling his~~ hate ~~and rage? -->)'''~~		Even though 2 years passed after that, the rage and hate did not change inside me.

	It has been one month since I came to Kouryou academy---------		It has been one month since I came to Kouryou academy---------
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	Suddenly, someone called out to me from behind.		Suddenly, someone called out to me from behind.

	I didn’t need to turn around~~, because~~ there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.		I didn’t need to turn around.

			Because there is only one person that would call out to me in that tone.

	“………………you didn’t sleep, Yurie.”		“………………you didn’t sleep, Yurie.”
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	“Tooru…………….!!”		“Tooru…………….!!”

	~~Her loud voice forced me to stop~~.		I stopped from hearing her shout.

	When I turned around, Yurie was looking straight at me.		When I turned around, Yurie was looking straight at me.
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	There is long straight scar carved into her exposed back.		There is long straight scar carved into her exposed back.

	Bathed in the pale blue light of the moon, ~~those~~ words fell from the silver girl’s mouth-----that confession.		Bathed in the pale blue light of the moon, these words fell from the silver girl’s mouth-----that confession.

	“I am also the same as Tooru-------an <<Avenger>>.”		“I am also the same as Tooru-------an <<Avenger>>.”

JesseAlexander: Full chapter edit; TL note enclosed (!)

2013-12-31T21:00:06Z

Full chapter edit; TL note enclosed (!)

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RikiNutcase at 14:35, 17 December 2013

2013-12-17T14:35:12Z

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	“Me too-------“		“Me too-------“

	Under the moonlight, she exposed her white skin.		Under the moonlight, she exposed her {{Furigana\|white skin\|Snow white}}.
	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 1 Non-Colour 10.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]
	“Yuri,e…………….?”		“Yuri,e…………….?”

Bakapervert: /* Epilogue */

2013-11-29T06:06:52Z

Epilogue

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	After coming out to the balcony from the lounge, I was waiting for that world befitting that representation.		After coming out to the balcony from the lounge, I was waiting for that world befitting that representation.

	The pale moon was ~~shinning~~ up in the sky, and it was a peaceful and kind world.		The pale moon was shining up in the sky, and it was a peaceful and kind world.

	But that dark feeling was still swirling inside my heart.		But that dark feeling was still swirling inside my heart.
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	Ever since then, I followed my best friend’s words, to seek <<Power>> and reached to this academy.		Ever since then, I followed my best friend’s words, to seek <<Power>> and reached to this academy.

	(If had been strong, i wonder will I have not lost everything………)		(If I had been strong, I wonder will I have not lost everything………)

	Time will not go back.		Time will not go back.