Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Prologue - Revision history

Dr4cul at 08:27, 16 November 2016

2016-11-16T08:27:08Z

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	The only thing left was silence.		The only thing left was silence.

	This was the beginning of my story——the story of ~~Toru~~ Kokonoe.		This was the beginning of my story——the story of Tooru Kokonoe.

Dr4cul: I made a few small edits to improve the flow of reading.

2016-11-16T08:15:03Z

I made a few small edits to improve the flow of reading.

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	『I pray, that you will ~~reach to become the 《Absolute~~ Duo》 ~~one day~~.』		『I pray that one day you will reach《Absolute Duo》.』


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	«Absolute Duo»——.		«Absolute Duo»——.

	I ~~never had any~~ time to inquire as to the meaning of those words.		I didn't have the time to inquire as to the meaning of those words.

	"——Ku!!"		"——Ku!!"
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	The mark called «Aster» appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.		The mark called «Aster» appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.

	The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it ~~become~~ hard to breathe.		The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it hard for me to breathe.

	This hellish fire was tearing me apart.		This hellish fire was tearing me apart.
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	For this reason, I must control the «Flame» that burns wildly.		For this reason, I must control the «Flame» that burns wildly.

	No, I should be able to control this.		No, I ''should'' be able to control this.

	That's because this «Flame»——is my «Soul».		That's because this «Flame»——is my «Soul».
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	"«Irregular». That's how I would put it."		"«Irregular». That's how I would put it."

	The person who had been watching over me silently ~~since I said that~~ finally spoke.		The person who had been watching over me silently finally spoke.

	Devilish, or ominous.		Devilish, or ominous.
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	The only thing left was silence.		The only thing left was silence.

	This was the beginning of my story——the story of ~~Tooru~~ Kokonoe.		This was the beginning of my story——the story of Toru Kokonoe.

Xionol: /* Prologue */

2015-03-04T03:00:23Z

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	The mark called «Aster» appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.		The mark called «Aster» appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.

	The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it ~~became~~ hard to breathe.		The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it become hard to breathe.

	This hellish fire was tearing me apart.		This hellish fire was tearing me apart.
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	"Ugh...ah...aaaaaaaaaagggh!"		"Ugh...ah...aaaaaaaaaagggh!"

	I shouted in agony, expressing the feeling of having my blood, flesh and bone ~~burn~~.		I shouted in agony, expressing the feeling of having my blood, flesh and bone burned.

	Shortly after, my body was surrounded by «Flame».		Shortly after, my body was surrounded by «Flame».

Kira0802 at 05:10, 29 January 2015

2015-01-29T05:10:19Z

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	~~'''''I~~ pray ~~for~~ you to reach, to become the ~~«Absolute Duo»~~ one day.~~'''''~~		『I pray, that you will reach to become the 《Absolute Duo》 one day.』


	==Prologue==		==Prologue==
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	"——Ku!!"		"——Ku!!"

	The mark called ~~«Astar»~~ appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.		The mark called «Aster» appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.

	The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it became hard to breathe.		The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it became hard to breathe.
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	Shortly after, my body was surrounded by «Flame».		Shortly after, my body was surrounded by «Flame».

	The hellish fire, which was overflowing from the ~~«Astar»~~, went wild, as if it was trying to burn me, the very person who had released it, to ashes.		The hellish fire, which was overflowing from the «Aster», went wild, as if it was trying to burn me, the very person who had released it, to ashes.

	But I could not give in.		But I could not give in.

Kira0802 at 05:00, 29 January 2015

2015-01-29T05:00:43Z

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	『I pray~~, that~~ you ~~will~~ reach to become the ~~《Absolute Duo》~~ one day.』		'''''I pray for you to reach, to become the «Absolute Duo» one day.'''''


	==Prologue==		==Prologue==

Kira0802: /* Prologue */ Fixing and rephrasing. Also Japanese punctuation-->English punctuation.

2015-01-29T04:57:41Z

Prologue: Fixing and rephrasing. Also Japanese punctuation-->English punctuation.

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	~~<<Absolute Duo>>———~~.		«Absolute Duo»——.

	I never had any time to inquire as to the meaning of those words.		I never had any time to inquire as to the meaning of those words.

	~~“ ——— Ku~~!!”		"——Ku!!"

	The mark called ~~<<Astar>>~~ appeared on my chest and it emitted a strong heat.		The mark called «Astar» appeared on my chest and emitted a strong heat.

	The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly ~~and~~ it became hard to breathe.		The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly, making it became hard to breathe.

	This hellish fire was tearing me apart.		This hellish fire was tearing me apart.
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	However, this was a ritual.		However, this was a ritual.

	A power that surpasses ~~mankind —— the~~ process of sublimating by taking ~~<<Lucifer>>~~ into your body.		A power that surpasses mankind——the process of sublimating by taking «Lucifer» into your body.

	~~“Ugh……ah……aaaaaaaaaagggh~~!”		"Ugh...ah...aaaaaaaaaagggh!"

	I shouted in agony, expressing the feeling of having my blood, flesh and bone burn.		I shouted in agony, expressing the feeling of having my blood, flesh and bone burn.

	Shortly after, my body is surrounded by ~~<<Flame>>~~.		Shortly after, my body was surrounded by «Flame».

	The ~~hell~~ fire, which was overflowing from the ~~<<Astar>>~~, ~~goes~~ wild as if it was trying to burn me ~~to ashes~~, the very person who had released it.		The hellish fire, which was overflowing from the «Astar», went wild, as if it was trying to burn me, the very person who had released it, to ashes.

	But I ~~cannot~~ give in.		But I could not give in.

	~~That’s~~ because I would not be able to obtain what I desire unless I overcome this ~~《Flame》~~.		That's because I would not be able to obtain what I desire unless I overcome this «Flame».

	(I... I have ~~an ambition~~ I must fulfill!)		(I... I have a wish I must fulfill!)

	That's right. I can't stop until I reach my goal.		That's right. I can't stop until I reach my goal.

	For this reason, I must control the ~~<<Flame>>~~ that burns wildly.		For this reason, I must control the «Flame» that burns wildly.

	No, I should be able to control this.		No, I should be able to control this.

	~~That’s~~ because this ~~<<Flame>>——— is~~ my ~~<<Soul>>~~.		That's because this «Flame»——is my «Soul».

	~~“Ooooooooooooooooh~~!!”		"Ooooooooooooooooh!!"

	I shouted with all my ~~energy~~. I then ~~lifted~~ my fist up and grabbed my ~~《Flame》~~.		I shouted with all my strength. I then raised my fist up and grabbed my «Flame».

	~~“<<Blaze>>~~!”		"«Blaze»!"

	~~It responded~~ to the ~~<<word~~ that carried ~~strength>>~~, the ~~<<Flame>>~~ encompassed my entire body, burning wildly as if it was trying to incinerate me, swirled around my arm like a snake, ~~radiating~~ a bright light.		Responding to the «word that carried strength», the «Flame» encompassed my entire body, burning wildly as if it was trying to incinerate me, then swirled around my arm like a snake, diffusing a bright light.

	~~“Ku~~...!”		"Ku...!"

	Because it was so bright, I ~~wasn’t~~ able to keep my eyes open ~~and ———~~		Because it was so bright, I wasn't able to keep my eyes open and——

	Eventually the light disappeared, I moved my gaze to my arm, and I was shocked by what I saw.		Eventually the light disappeared. I moved my gaze to my arm, and was shocked by what I saw.

	My ~~<<Flame>>~~ has turned into a ~~<<Shield>>~~.		My «Flame» has turned into a «Shield».

	~~“This~~... is my ~~<<Blaze>>~~...?”		"This... is my «Blaze»...?"

	~~“<<Irregular>>, that’s~~ how I would put it.”		"«Irregular». That's how I would put it."

	The person who had been watching over me silently since I said that ~~word~~ finally spoke.		The person who had been watching over me silently since I said that finally spoke.

	Devilish, or ominous.		Devilish, or ominous.

	These words came to my mind ~~when~~ I looked at the little girl in a gothic dress.		These words came to my mind as I looked at the little girl in a gothic dress.

	~~<<Irregular>>——— there~~ was only one reason for this girl to say that.		«Irregular»——there was only one reason for this girl to say that.

	Normally, ~~<<Blaze>>~~ which was used to define the ~~<<Soul>>~~ would have been shaped into a weapon.		Normally, a «Blaze» which was used to define the «Soul» would have been shaped into a weapon.

	However, the thing which materialized on my arm, without a doubt, assumed the shape of a ~~protector~~.		However, the thing which materialized on my arm, without a doubt, assumed the shape of a shield.

	The mass of metal was thick, heavy and hard, giving me the impression that it ~~would~~ definitely not be cracked or pierced.		The mass of metal was thick, heavy and hard, giving me the impression that it could definitely not be cracked or pierced.

	(~~What an irony~~...)		(How ironic...)

	For ~~me,~~ a person who was not able to protect, to ~~have attained~~ a ~~<<Shield>>~~, a symbol of protection...		For a person like me who was not able to protect, giving birth to a «Shield», a symbol of protection...

	Despite my memories of the past I could not return ~~to———~~		Despite my memories of the past I could not return to——

	The girl in the black dress brought an end to my ~~recollection~~.		The girl in the black dress brought an end to my reminiscence.

	~~“Now~~, go. The path that ~~<<Shield>>~~ will lead you to... ~~I’m~~ really looking forward to it.”		"Now, go. The path that «Shield» will lead you to... I'm really looking forward to it."

	~~While leaving~~ her ~~laughter~~, the girl in the black dress disappeared into the darkness.		Leaving with her laugh, the girl in the black dress disappeared into the darkness.

	The only thing left was silence.		The only thing left was silence.

	This was the beginning of ~~me —— the~~ story of Tooru Kokonoe.		This was the beginning of my story——the story of Tooru Kokonoe.

JFerg: /* Prologue */

2014-08-22T03:03:05Z

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	<<Absolute Duo>>———.		<<Absolute Duo>>———.

	I never had any time to inquire the meaning of ~~these~~ words.		I never had any time to inquire as to the meaning of those words.

	“ ——— Ku!!”		“ ——— Ku!!”
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	For me, a person who was not able to protect, to have attained a <<Shield>>, a symbol of protection...		For me, a person who was not able to protect, to have attained a <<Shield>>, a symbol of protection...

	Despite my memories of past I could not return to———		Despite my memories of the past I could not return to———

	The girl in the black dress brought an end to my recollection.		The girl in the black dress brought an end to my recollection.

Yoyoyo5678 at 16:26, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T16:26:11Z

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	However, this was a ritual.		However, this was a ritual.

	A power that surpasses mankind —— the process of sublimating by taking <<~~Luciful~~>> into your body.		A power that surpasses mankind —— the process of sublimating by taking <<Lucifer>> into your body.

	“Ugh……ah……aaaaaaaaaagggh!”		“Ugh……ah……aaaaaaaaaagggh!”

Mashiro at 06:50, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T06:50:10Z

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	<<Absolute Duo>>———.		<<Absolute Duo>>———.

	I never had any time to inquire the meaning ot these words.		I never had any time to inquire the meaning of these words.

	“ ——— Ku!!”		“ ——— Ku!!”

	The mark called <<Astar>> appeared on my chest, and it emitted a strong heat.		The mark called <<Astar>> appeared on my chest and it emitted a strong heat.

	The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly and it became hard to breathe.		The heat spread throughout my entire body instantly and it became hard to breathe.
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	However, this was a ritual.		However, this was a ritual.

	~~This~~ power that surpasses mankind —— the process of sublimating by taking <<Luciful>> into your body.		A power that surpasses mankind —— the process of sublimating by taking <<Luciful>> into your body.

	“Ugh……ah……aaaaaaaaaagggh!”		“Ugh……ah……aaaaaaaaaagggh!”

	I shouted in agony, expressing the feeling of having my blood, flesh, and bone burn.		I shouted in agony, expressing the feeling of having my blood, flesh and bone burn.

	Shortly after, my body is surrounded by <<Flame>>.		Shortly after, my body is surrounded by <<Flame>>.
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	The hell fire, which was overflowing from the <<Astar>>, goes wild as if it was trying to burn me to ashes, the very person who had released it.		The hell fire, which was overflowing from the <<Astar>>, goes wild as if it was trying to burn me to ashes, the very person who had released it.

	But I ~~can’t~~ give in.		But I cannot give in.

	That’s because I ~~won’t~~ be able to obtain what I desire unless I overcome this 《Flame》.		That’s because I would not be able to obtain what I desire unless I overcome this 《Flame》.

	(I... I have an ambition I must fulfill!)		(I... I have an ambition I must fulfill!)
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	“Ooooooooooooooooh!!”		“Ooooooooooooooooh!!”

	I shouted with all my energy~~, and~~ then lifted my fist up and grabbed my 《Flame》.		I shouted with all my energy. I then lifted my fist up and grabbed my 《Flame》.

	“<<Blaze>>!”		“<<Blaze>>!”

	It responded to the <<word that carried strength>>, ~~then~~ the <<Flame>> ~~which~~ encompassed my entire body, burning wildly as if it was trying to incinerate me, swirled around my arm like a snake, radiating a bright light.		It responded to the <<word that carried strength>>, the <<Flame>> encompassed my entire body, burning wildly as if it was trying to incinerate me, swirled around my arm like a snake, radiating a bright light.

	“Ku...!”		“Ku...!”
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	Because it was so bright, I wasn’t able to keep my eyes open and ———		Because it was so bright, I wasn’t able to keep my eyes open and ———

	Eventually ~~when~~ the light disappeared, I moved my gaze to my arm, and I was shocked by what I saw.		Eventually the light disappeared, I moved my gaze to my arm, and I was shocked by what I saw.

	My <<Flame>> has turned into a <<Shield>>.		My <<Flame>> has turned into a <<Shield>>.
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	<<Irregular>>——— there was only one reason for this girl to say that.		<<Irregular>>——— there was only one reason for this girl to say that.

	Normally, <<Blaze>> was used to define the <<Soul>> ~~which had~~ been shaped into a weapon.		Normally, <<Blaze>> which was used to define the <<Soul>> would have been shaped into a weapon.

	However, the thing which materialized on my arm, without a doubt, assumed the shape of a protector.		However, the thing which materialized on my arm, without a doubt, assumed the shape of a protector.

	The mass of metal was thick, heavy, and hard, giving me the impression that it definitely ~~would~~ not be cracked or pierced.		The mass of metal was thick, heavy and hard, giving me the impression that it would definitely not be cracked or pierced.

	(What an irony...)		(What an irony...)

	For me, a person who ~~wasn’t~~ able to protect, to have attained a <<Shield>>, a symbol of protection...		For me, a person who was not able to protect, to have attained a <<Shield>>, a symbol of protection...

	Despite my memories of past I ~~couldn't~~ return to———		Despite my memories of past I could not return to———

	The girl in the black dress brought an end to my recollection.		The girl in the black dress brought an end to my recollection.

Caladcholg: /* Prologue */

2014-05-19T18:38:45Z

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	<<~~bsolute~~ Duo>>———.		<<Absolute Duo>>———.

	I never had any time to inquire the meaning ot these words.		I never had any time to inquire the meaning ot these words.