Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 07:15, 13 June 2015

2015-06-13T07:15:04Z

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	She was probably very embarrassed about misunderstanding this as a dream, and it felt heartwarming seeing her swing both her hands quickly.		She was probably very embarrassed about misunderstanding this as a dream, and it felt heartwarming seeing her swing both her hands quickly.

	(Pretend I didn’t hear that huh, I wonder how I am supposed do that………….)		(Pretend I didn’t hear that huh, I wonder how I am supposed to do that………….)

	Miyabi regained her calm after a while and asked a question.		Miyabi regained her calm after a while and asked a question.

JFerg: /* Chapter 1 『Lilith=Bristol』 */

2014-08-22T17:32:13Z

Chapter 1 『Lilith=Bristol』

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371838 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:35:53Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371838 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: /* Part 1 */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (54)

2014-07-21T20:25:43Z

Part 1: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (54)

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Acolyte at 21:27, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:27:39Z

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	In an instant, I felt myself getting pale.		In an instant, I felt myself getting pale.

	~~“Yu~~-Julie…………!! Thi-this, errr……….!!”		“Ju-Julie…………!! Thi-this, errr……….!!”

	“By this you mean…………………?”		“By this you mean…………………?”
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	“I-I want to move my hand so, could you relax the strength in your arms?”		“I-I want to move my hand so, could you relax the strength in your arms?”

	“------uh! ~~Ya—…………”~~		“------uh! Ja—…………”

	I urged Julie and she relaxed the strength in her arms.		I urged Julie and she relaxed the strength in her arms.
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	Maybe just maybe------is this the end for me? Is it that so called social death?		Maybe just maybe------is this the end for me? Is it that so called social death?

	~~“Yu~~-Julie…….?”		“Ju-Julie…….?”

	“……………It wasn’t intentional right?”		“……………It wasn’t intentional right?”
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	“Errr…………you will forgive me?”		“Errr…………you will forgive me?”

	~~“Ya~~---. In the first place, the cause was me breaking our promise and crawling into your bed as I pleased.”		“Ja---. In the first place, the cause was me breaking our promise and crawling into your bed as I pleased.”

	After saying that, Julie lowered her head.		After saying that, Julie lowered her head.
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	“You’re right. I want to sleep a bit more but, I'm confident in oversleeping if I sleep now.”		“You’re right. I want to sleep a bit more but, I'm confident in oversleeping if I sleep now.”

	~~“Ya~~---Me too.”		“Ja---Me too.”

	She smiled and Julie got off the bed.		She smiled and Julie got off the bed.
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	Just like usual, she was probably going to change her clothes after taking a shower.		Just like usual, she was probably going to change her clothes after taking a shower.

	“Ah…….Yu-Julie.”		“Ah…….Ju-Julie.”

	“--------?”		“--------?”
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	“Good morning, Tomoe.”		“Good morning, Tomoe.”

	~~“Yaa~~. Good morning, Julie.”		“Jaa. Good morning, Julie.”

	Gracefully moving her chopsticks until now, chirin after Julie lowered her head producing a bell sound, and Tachibana lowered her eyebrows and made a smile.		Gracefully moving her chopsticks until now, chirin after Julie lowered her head producing a bell sound, and Tachibana lowered her eyebrows and made a smile.
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	“E-eerr…….Tsukimi-sensei was trying to kill Julie-chan and Tooru-kun right?”		“E-eerr…….Tsukimi-sensei was trying to kill Julie-chan and Tooru-kun right?”

	~~“Ya~~---. If not for Tooru, by now I would be………….”		“Ja---. If not for Tooru, by now I would be………….”

	“I could not do anything if I was alone. That plan succeeded because Julie was there.”		“I could not do anything if I was alone. That plan succeeded because Julie was there.”

Mashiro: /* Chapter 1 『Lilith=Bristol』 */

2014-07-20T16:38:16Z

Chapter 1 『Lilith=Bristol』

Mashiro: /* Chapter 1 『Lilith=Bristol』 */

2014-07-20T15:53:14Z

Chapter 1 『Lilith=Bristol』

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182.68.65.93: /* Chapter 1 『Lealith=Bristol』 */

2014-04-13T16:26:59Z

Chapter 1 『Lealith=Bristol』

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	“………………..”		“………………..”

	Sweat ~~flown~~ down.		Sweat flowed down.

	Right now, in order to gain conviction on what ''that something'' I was touching was.		Right now, in order to gain conviction on what ''that something'' I was touching was.

RikiNutcase at 18:54, 10 April 2014

2014-04-10T18:54:50Z

Drowzycow: -haired girl and standardizing the scene where text switched between a hand/hands

2014-04-10T09:48:27Z

-haired girl and standardizing the scene where text switched between a hand/hands

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	My head was in chaos.		My head was in chaos.

	I did not have to say the reason, it was ~~regarding~~ about the reason on why was Tsukimi still our homeroom teacher, and why ~~does~~ Mikuni-sensei------the academy side approved it.		I did not have to say the reason; it was about the reason as to why was Tsukimi still our homeroom teacher, and why did Mikuni-sensei------the academy side approved it.

	But, during the time I was thinking inside my head, the HR was still continuing.		But, during the time I was thinking inside my head, the HR was still continuing.

	After that, we were told about the classes from now on, the interleague match with the 2nd year students, and there would be a seaside school trip on July, Tsukimi then left the classroom from the chime signal and the class started after the general science teacher entered while she left.		After that, we were told about the classes from now on, the interleague match with the 2nd year students, and that there would be a seaside school trip in July. Tsukimi then left the classroom from the chime signal and the class started after the general science teacher entered while she left.

	The questions regarding Tsukimi, everyone related to that incident felt bewildered.		The questions regarding Tsukimi, everyone related to that incident felt bewildered.
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	Both of them agreed to my opinion.		Both of them agreed to my opinion.

	(However, to think something like her attacks ~~was~~ related to the country, I don’t know how much of that I could believe………….)		(However, to think something like her attacks were related to the country, I don’t know how much of that I could believe………….)


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	After leaving an ''I understand'' from the nodding Julie, I left the room and headed towards the underground facility.		After leaving an ''I understand'' from the nodding Julie, I left the room and headed towards the underground facility.

	Although it was still morning, there were only a few ~~numbers of~~ people inside the training room which can be used from 6am to 10pm.		Although it was still morning, there were only a few people inside the training room which can be used from 6am to 10pm.

	I exchanged a simple greeting with one classmate and headed deeper inside.		I exchanged a simple greeting with one classmate and headed deeper inside.
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	“Almost every day, I would be in the training room around this time.”		“Almost every day, I would be in the training room around this time.”

	And after that ended, she would go around to other people’s ~~room~~ to wake them up.		And after that ended, she would go around to other people’s rooms to wake them up.

	She’s amazing, after honestly stating my opinion, I swung my head left and right.		She’s amazing, after honestly stating my opinion, I swung my head left and right.
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	“What, it wasn’t much. I think it’s better to replace the wrap a few more times so, feel free to tell me when you want it.”		“What, it wasn’t much. I think it’s better to replace the wrap a few more times so, feel free to tell me when you want it.”

	It’s true that, it would finish quick and would look nicer compared to me doing it.		It’s true that it would finish quick and would look nicer compared to me doing it.

	“The problem is taking notes will be a little tough with my hand like this.”		“The problem is taking notes will be a little tough with my hand like this.”
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	She was probably very embarrassed about misunderstanding this as a dream, and it felt heartwarming seeing her swing both her hands quickly.		She was probably very embarrassed about misunderstanding this as a dream, and it felt heartwarming seeing her swing both her hands quickly.

	(Pretend I didn’t hear that huh, I wonder how I am supposed do ~~about~~ that………….)		(Pretend I didn’t hear that huh, I wonder how I am supposed do that………….)

	Miyabi regained her calm after a while and asked a question.		Miyabi regained her calm after a while and asked a question.
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	“B-but……….”		“B-but……….”

	“No buts. I can’t remain calm when I get apologized ~~too~~ all the time, and more importantly, it is only natural to misunderstand that situation.”		“No buts. I can’t remain calm when I get apologized to all the time, and more importantly it is only natural to misunderstand that situation.”

	“…………………It’s a misunderstanding right?”		“…………………It’s a misunderstanding right?”
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	She places her hands on her knees and repeatedly breathed heavily.		She places her hands on her knees and repeatedly breathed heavily.

	That was a normal aftermath scenery of someone running ~~finish~~ but, the unusual one was Miyabi’s………..err, those.		That was a normal aftermath scenery of the finish of someone running, but the unusual one was Miyabi’s………..err, those.

	~~It was~~ swaying in a manner as if ~~it was~~ following gravity, it made one think as if melons were inserted inside her chest.		They were swaying in a manner as if they were following gravity; it made one think as if melons were inserted inside her chest.

	Each time Miyabi breathed and her shoulders would go up and down, ''it'' would jiggle and-------		Each time Miyabi breathed and her shoulders would go up and down, ''they'' would jiggle and-------

	(…………..Wait, what the hell kind of eyes am I giving Miyabi when she did her best in running!?)		(…………..Wait, what the hell kind of eyes am I giving Miyabi when she did her best in running!?)
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	The light from the morning sun reached the descending helicopter.		The light from the morning sun reached the descending helicopter.

	The sun reflected something and a golden-~~haired~~ color shined.		The sun reflected something and a golden-hair color shined.

	For some reason, I could not release my eyes from that shine.		For some reason, I could not release my eyes from that shine.

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	But, it was persuasive.		But, it was persuasive.

	It does sound convincing if I think about the fact that the existence of the <<~~Luciful~~>> and <<Exceed>> has not come out to public because there is a country in the background.		It does sound convincing if I think about the fact that the existence of the <<Lucifer>> and <<Exceed>> has not come out to public because there is a country in the background.

	“Well, it is up to you guys to '''believe how much you want'''. ………….alright then, break time is about to end so see you all later. Don’t be late for class.”		“Well, it is up to you guys to '''believe how much you want'''. ………….alright then, break time is about to end so see you all later. Don’t be late for class.”
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	The baggage I received transmitted the weight into my arms-------although I say that, I don’t feel the small number of 20 kilograms now that I am in my enhanced state.		The baggage I received transmitted the weight into my arms-------although I say that, I don’t feel the small number of 20 kilograms now that I am in my enhanced state.

	I once again knew the amazingness of the <<~~Luciful~~>> since the small bodied Julie could bring the baggage with a weight almost the same or even crossing her body weight when it was joined together with just some wobbling.		I once again knew the amazingness of the <<Lucifer>> since the small bodied Julie could bring the baggage with a weight almost the same or even crossing her body weight when it was joined together with just some wobbling.

	What’s more, since this is said when we are still <<{{Furigana\|I\|Level}}>>, I can’t even imagine how much it would be at the end.		What’s more, since this is said when we are still <<{{Furigana\|I\|Level}}>>, I can’t even imagine how much it would be at the end.
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	When I did that, Tachibana grabbed my hands while starting to walk.		When I did that, Tachibana grabbed my hands while starting to walk.

	“Let’s go to the infirmary. It would probably heal immediately thanks to the <<~~Luciful~~>> but this is for just in case.”		“Let’s go to the infirmary. It would probably heal immediately thanks to the <<Lucifer>> but this is for just in case.”

	I completely understood the blessings of this strengthened healing power from that one battle with Tsukimi.		I completely understood the blessings of this strengthened healing power from that one battle with Tsukimi.
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	Different from the gauze application on the wounds we learned in class before GW, this was the moist wound healing method covered with a vulnerary covering material.		Different from the gauze application on the wounds we learned in class before GW, this was the moist wound healing method covered with a vulnerary covering material.

	Many people get injured because Kouryou academy was a special technique training school, but thanks to the <<~~Luciful~~>> increasing the healing abilities, there were many cases where it would end with just emergency treatment just like this.		Many people get injured because Kouryou academy was a special technique training school, but thanks to the <<Lucifer>> increasing the healing abilities, there were many cases where it would end with just emergency treatment just like this.

	Tachibana wrapped the cling film on my hand in a familiar manner before wrapping it with a bandage.		Tachibana wrapped the cling film on my hand in a familiar manner before wrapping it with a bandage.

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	Under the moonlight, when I was told that the silver~~-haired~~ girl who was exposing the scar on her back was wishing for revenge, I just lost my words to say.		Under the moonlight, when I was told that the silver girl who was exposing the scar on her back was wishing for revenge, I just lost my words to say.

	In order to be an inhuman existence------an <<Avenger>>, the silver~~-haired~~ girl crossed the seas to come here.		In order to be an inhuman existence------an <<Avenger>>, the silver girl crossed the seas to come here.

	I thought she would have a suitable reason for that.		I thought she would have a suitable reason for that.
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	Possessing transparent-like {{Furigana\|snow colored skin\|Snow White}}, the {{Furigana\|silver hair\|Silver blonde}} girl was sleeping peacefully there while breathing.		Possessing transparent-like {{Furigana\|snow colored skin\|Snow White}}, the {{Furigana\|silver hair\|Silver blonde}} girl was sleeping peacefully there while breathing.

	……………Just like my conviction, my hand was touching the silver~~-haired~~ girl’s breast.		……………Just like my conviction, my hand was touching the silver girl’s breast.

	(Why are you sleeping beside me!? Wait, more importantly------)		(Why are you sleeping beside me!? Wait, more importantly------)
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	“Hyuuun…………!”		“Hyuuun…………!”

	''Maybe I hit a stimulating part'', the silver~~-haired~~ girl twitched almost at the same time while making a cute shriek and she embraced her own body.		''Maybe I hit a stimulating part'', the silver girl twitched almost at the same time while making a cute shriek and she embraced her own body.

	…………Luckily or unluckily, she was pressing my hand harder on her breast.		…………Luckily or unluckily, she was pressing my hand harder on her breast.
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	A girl with {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} showed herself from the helicopter.		A girl with {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} showed herself from the helicopter.

	Sakuya made a charming smile towards the ~~golden-haired~~ girl whose shine made one think of the sun.		Sakuya made a charming smile towards the gold girl whose shine made one think of the sun.

	“Welcome, to Kouryou Academy. <<Exception>>------Lealith Bristol.”		“Welcome, to Kouryou Academy. <<Exception>>------Lealith Bristol.”

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	Under the moonlight, when I was told that the silver girl who was exposing the scar on her back was wishing for revenge, I just lost my words to say.		Under the moonlight, when I was told that the silver-haired girl who was exposing the scar on her back was wishing for revenge, I just lost my words to say.

	In order to be an inhuman existence------an <<Avenger>>, the silver-haired girl crossed the seas to come here.		In order to be an inhuman existence------an <<Avenger>>, the silver-haired girl crossed the seas to come here.
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	(What is this………..?)		(What is this………..?)

	I moved my ~~hands~~ in a dazed manner.		I moved my hand in a dazed manner.

	''That something'' I grabbed had a modest bulge enough to fit into my ~~hands~~ and it was something soft covered with a thin layer of cloth.		''That something'' I grabbed had a modest bulge enough to fit into my hand and it was something soft covered with a thin layer of cloth.

	It was soft, and ''that something'' shape would change when I moved my fingers. It had resilience however and it would turn back to its original shape when I separated my fingers.		It was soft, and ''that something'' shape would change when I moved my fingers. It had resilience however and it would turn back to its original shape when I separated my fingers.
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	Possessing transparent-like {{Furigana\|snow colored skin\|Snow White}}, the {{Furigana\|silver hair\|Silver blonde}} girl was sleeping peacefully there while breathing.		Possessing transparent-like {{Furigana\|snow colored skin\|Snow White}}, the {{Furigana\|silver hair\|Silver blonde}} girl was sleeping peacefully there while breathing.

	……………Just like my conviction, my hand was touching the silver girl’s breast.		……………Just like my conviction, my hand was touching the silver-haired girl’s breast.

	(Why are you sleeping beside me!? Wait, more importantly------)		(Why are you sleeping beside me!? Wait, more importantly------)

	I regained my composure, and the moment I tried to separate my ~~hands~~ in panic-----		I regained my composure, and the moment I tried to separate my hand in panic-----

	“Hyuuun…………!”		“Hyuuun…………!”

	''Maybe I hit a stimulating part'', the silver girl twitched almost at the same time while making a cute shriek and she embraced her own body.		''Maybe I hit a stimulating part'', the silver-haired girl twitched almost at the same time while making a cute shriek and she embraced her own body.

	…………Luckily or unluckily, she was pressing my hand harder on her breast.		…………Luckily or unluckily, she was pressing my hand harder on her breast.
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	The light from the morning sun reached the descending helicopter.		The light from the morning sun reached the descending helicopter.

	The sun reflected something and a ~~gold~~ color shined.		The sun reflected something and a golden-haired color shined.

	For some reason, I could not release my eyes from that shine.		For some reason, I could not release my eyes from that shine.
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	A girl with {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} showed herself from the helicopter.		A girl with {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} showed herself from the helicopter.

	Sakuya made a charming smile towards the ~~gold~~ girl whose shine made one think of the sun.		Sakuya made a charming smile towards the golden-haired girl whose shine made one think of the sun.

	“Welcome, to Kouryou Academy. <<Exception>>------Lealith Bristol.”		“Welcome, to Kouryou Academy. <<Exception>>------Lealith Bristol.”