Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 4 - Revision history

EDCX32: /* Chapter 4 『Equal to the Protection of a Knight』 */

2015-01-29T07:44:46Z

Chapter 4 『Equal to the Protection of a Knight』

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	<nowiki></nowiki>Hafuuu Miyabi was the only one that made a relieved sigh.		<nowiki></nowiki>Hafuuu Miyabi was the only one that made a relieved sigh.

	Julie felt the same as usual but, I and Tachibana stiffened our faces.		Julie felt the same as usual but, me and Tachibana stiffened our faces.

	“……….That is a <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> <<Blaze>> right, if I am correct?”		“……….That is a <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> <<Blaze>> right, if I am correct?”

121.121.121.220 at 01:48, 3 September 2014

2014-09-03T01:48:23Z

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	“Is that so. It sort of feels unexpected………..”		“Is that so. It sort of feels unexpected………..”

	“I can’t help it since ~~Britain~~ doesn’t have one. When I decided to go to Japan, I thought that I definitely have to come here.”		“I can’t help it since UK doesn’t have one. When I decided to go to Japan, I thought that I definitely have to come here.”

	While replying ''I see'', I felt that I saw a new face of the girl called Lilith.		While replying ''I see'', I felt that I saw a new face of the girl called Lilith.
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	“…………….Was it a Tyre maker?”		“…………….Was it a Tyre maker?”

	“No, seriously……………it is quite a famous corporation in ~~Britain~~ and my grandfather is the head. And also---The Bristol Company is one of the investors for Dawn organization.”		“No, seriously……………it is quite a famous corporation in UK and my grandfather is the head. And also---The Bristol Company is one of the investors for Dawn organization.”

	I did not even need to ask this anymore because; Dawn organization was the founder of Kouryou academy.		I did not even need to ask this anymore because; Dawn organization was the founder of Kouryou academy.

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371841 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:36:20Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371841 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (80)

2014-07-21T20:26:11Z

Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (80)

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Acolyte at 21:30, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:30:31Z

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	“A-am I right, Julie?”		“A-am I right, Julie?”

	~~“Ya~~--. It was very delicious so. It is expected from Miyabi’s recommendation.”		“Ja--. It was very delicious so. It is expected from Miyabi’s recommendation.”

	<nowiki></nowiki>Hoo I made a sigh at Julie’s reply.		<nowiki></nowiki>Hoo I made a sigh at Julie’s reply.
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	“I have to apologize to Miyabi tomorrow.”		“I have to apologize to Miyabi tomorrow.”

	~~“Ya~~---. That’s right.”		“Ja---. That’s right.”


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	“Let’s see…….I’ll get into the baths first then. I feel dusty since I was walking around inside a crowd of people.”		“Let’s see…….I’ll get into the baths first then. I feel dusty since I was walking around inside a crowd of people.”

	~~“Ya~~--. You can go in anytime so go on ahead.”		“Ja--. You can go in anytime so go on ahead.”

	“I see. Thanks, Julie.”		“I see. Thanks, Julie.”
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	Thinking maybe, I tried calling out to her with a soft voice and------		Thinking maybe, I tried calling out to her with a soft voice and------

	~~“Ya—”~~		“Ja—”

	Together with that reply, Julie face sprung out from behind the sofa.		Together with that reply, Julie face sprung out from behind the sofa.
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	“There should be a coffee spoon if I am correct so, let’s take that and head back.”		“There should be a coffee spoon if I am correct so, let’s take that and head back.”

	~~“Ya~~--. Let’s do that.”		“Ja--. Let’s do that.”

	'''''Eating is going to look tough but'''''……….just when I was thinking things like that.		'''''Eating is going to look tough but'''''……….just when I was thinking things like that.
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	“Aah me too. I am happy being together with Julie too.”		“Aah me too. I am happy being together with Julie too.”

	~~“Ya~~---♪”		“Ja---♪”

	After saying that, the silver girl smiled happily under the moonlight.		After saying that, the silver girl smiled happily under the moonlight.
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	“…………I understand. But, we have to go back before our bodies get cold.”		“…………I understand. But, we have to go back before our bodies get cold.”

	~~“Ya~~--. If that is the case then………”		“Ja--. If that is the case then………”

	When I thought that, Julie took a step closer-----		When I thought that, Julie took a step closer-----
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	“Julie……….you have something to tell me right?”		“Julie……….you have something to tell me right?”

	~~“…………Ya~~---”		“…………Ja---”

	“Is it……about the scar on your back?”		“Is it……about the scar on your back?”
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	Immediately after that, my stomach growled as if to turn my proclamation into reality.		Immediately after that, my stomach growled as if to turn my proclamation into reality.

	~~“Ya~~--♪”		“Ja--♪”

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Mashiro: /* Chapter 4 『Equal to the Protection of a Knight』 */

2014-07-20T16:12:12Z

Chapter 4 『Equal to the Protection of a Knight』

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RikiNutcase at 14:53, 12 April 2014

2014-04-12T14:53:06Z

Drowzycow: /* Part 1 */

2014-04-12T14:33:13Z

Part 1

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RikiNutcase at 02:44, 12 April 2014

2014-04-12T02:44:31Z

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	“Eh? Ah-----”		“Eh? Ah-----”

	Miyabi regained herself when she was called out again about the time ~~<!--before?-->~~she ~~took~~ her bra off.		Miyabi regained herself when she was called out again about the time she was taking her bra off.

	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 2 Non-Colour 6.jpg\|thumb]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 2 Non-Colour 6.jpg\|thumb]]
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	(Her body might be cold if she gets out of the baths so, I guess I’ll close it then.)		(Her body might be cold if she gets out of the baths so, I guess I’ll close it then.)

	Feeling the chill of the night, Tomoe stood at the ~~window side.<!--~~side of the window~~/window sill-->~~		Feeling the chill of the night, Tomoe stood at the side of the window.

	Just like Miyabi just now, she took a glance at the direction of Tooru’s room to the right side before closing the window.		Just like Miyabi just now, she took a glance at the direction of Tooru’s room to the right side before closing the window.

Drowzycow: /* Part 2 */ suggestions

2014-04-12T02:35:16Z

Part 2: suggestions

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	There was one boy that said he ran away because training was hard but, Miyabi muttered that it was not true.		There was one boy that said he ran away because training was hard but, Miyabi muttered that it was not true.

	It is impossible to think Tooru would run away when he was the one that pushed her back when she was about to give up.		It was impossible to think Tooru would run away when he was the one that pushed her back when she was about to give up.

	But, the sun set and it was almost for lights ~~to be off~~ but even so, it ~~seems~~ Tooru ~~has~~ not come back to the dormitory.		But, the sun set and it was almost time for lights out but even so, it seemed Tooru had not come back to the dormitory.

	(It’s around there right……….)		(It’s around there right……….)
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	Outside the window, she directed her eyes to the room at the right hand side at the lower floor.		Outside the window, she directed her eyes to the room at the right hand side at the lower floor.

	It’s not like she ~~can’t~~ see because there was no light but, unluckily since Tooru’s room was quite far away from Miyabi and Tomoe’s room, she could not see properly.		It’s not like she couldn’t see because there was no light but, unluckily since Tooru’s room was quite far away from Miyabi and Tomoe’s room, she could not see properly.

	Tomoe who was reading a book, lifted her face and called out to Miyabi.		Tomoe who was reading a book, lifted her face and called out to Miyabi.
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	“Ah…….Th-that’s right, un………”		“Ah…….Th-that’s right, un………”

	Because Miyabi was worried about Tooru’s return and read a book in the lounge until it was time for lights ~~off~~, she did not take a bath.		Because Miyabi was worried about Tooru’s return and read a book in the lounge until it was time for lights out, she did not take a bath.

	(I can meet him tomorrow right………..)		(I can meet him tomorrow right………..)

	Miyabi took off her clothes while telling herself that it ~~will~~ definitely be okay but--------		Miyabi took off her clothes while telling herself that it would definitely be okay but--------

	“Mi-miyabi. Is it alright for you to take of your clothes once you enter the bathroom………..?”		“Mi-miyabi. Is it alright for you to take off your clothes once you enter the bathroom………..?”

	“Eh? Ah-----”		“Eh? Ah-----”

	Miyabi regained herself when she was called out again about the time she took her bra off.		Miyabi regained herself when she was called out again about the time <!--before?-->she took her bra off.

	[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 2 Non-Colour 6.jpg\|thumb]]		[[File:Absolute Duo Volume 2 Non-Colour 6.jpg\|thumb]]
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	(Oh my oh my……….Kokonoe is a troublesome one.)		(Oh my oh my……….Kokonoe is a troublesome one.)

	Tomoe noticed the reason why Miyabi is acting strange.		Tomoe noticed the reason why Miyabi was acting strange.

	---Even though she said that, that was the only thing she could think off.		---Even though she said that, that was the only thing she could think off.
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	(Tomorrow, I have to have a word with him if he is back.)		(Tomorrow, I have to have a word with him if he is back.)

	Maybe it was for Miyabi sake or………..		Maybe it was for Miyabi's sake or………..

	<nowiki></nowiki>Hyuu the wind blew in from the window that was left open.		<nowiki></nowiki>Hyuu the wind blew in from the window that was left open.

	(Her body might cold if she gets out of the baths so, I guess I’ll close it then.)		(Her body might be cold if she gets out of the baths so, I guess I’ll close it then.)

	Feeling the chill at night, Tomoe stood at the window side.		Feeling the chill of the night, Tomoe stood at the window side.<!--side of the window/window sill-->

	Just like Miyabi just now, she took a glance at the direction of Tooru’s room at the right side before closing the window.		Just like Miyabi just now, she took a glance at the direction of Tooru’s room to the right side before closing the window.

	If she directed her eyes towards the balcony at the left side during that time-----		If she directed her eyes towards the balcony to the left side during that time-----

	If Tomoe discovered Tooru hugging Yurie then there might be change in her mental state.		If Tomoe discovered Tooru hugging Yurie then there might be change in her mental state.

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	Her closed eyes slowly opened together with the sound of the parade coming closer.		Her closed eyes slowly opened together with the sound of the parade coming closer.

	~~<!--~~Under ~~the shine/glow-->Inside~~ the 7 lights coming from the parade, the gold girl extended out her hand.		Under the 7 lights coming from the parade, the gold girl extended out her hand.

	“It’s not my principle but, I’ll say it once more.”		“It’s not my principle but, I’ll say it once more.”
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	“------!! That’s------”		“------!! That’s------”

	“I vowed to become her power. For that girl, and for me………..that’s is why no matter how many time you ~~say it<!--~~ask~~-->~~, my feelings will never change.”		“I vowed to become her power. For that girl, and for me………..that’s is why no matter how many time you ask, my feelings will never change.”
	In an instant, Paan a dry sound echoed but, it got erased by the parade.		In an instant, Paan a dry sound echoed but, it got erased by the parade.

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	Because I was the cause of it, I did not chase after her and came back alone using the train.		Because I was the cause of it, I did not chase after her and came back alone using the train.

	~~She probably got back here already, by the time I saw the helicopter I think that I rode on flying to the east, when I was not back from DNL yet. <!--needs re-phrasing:~~She probably got back here already, I think I saw the helicopter that I rode on flying to the east, while on the train back from DNL.~~-->~~		She probably got back here already, I think I saw the helicopter that I rode on flying to the east, while on the train back from DNL.

	And the thing that was waiting for me when I got back was a reflection paper and a lecture from Mikuni-sensei.		And the thing that was waiting for me when I got back was a reflection paper and a lecture from Mikuni-sensei.
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	I did not and wasn’t planning to tell him that I went out because I got dragged by Lealith but, it seemed that there were some staff members that saw me getting on the helicopter.		I did not and wasn’t planning to tell him that I went out because I got dragged by Lealith but, it seemed that there were some staff members that saw me getting on the helicopter.

	Even though the reason for my no permission outing was the <<Exception>>, it meant that the ~~school side~~ has some dignity.~~<!--not sure what the school side bit is meant to say-->~~		Even though the reason for my no permission outing was the <<Exception>>, it meant that the academy still has some dignity.

	“Tooru, have you finished your dinner?”		“Tooru, have you finished your dinner?”