Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 6 - Revision history

RikiNutcase at 02:46, 27 December 2014

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	Lilith moved her sights to Tatsu and said that as if to show her composure.		Lilith moved her sights to Tatsu and said that as if to show her composure.

	<nowiki></nowiki>Zan!! The <<~~Scimitar~~>> that got swung down made a big crack on the path but, Lilith dodged it with a back flip and landed on top of the glass fence like that.		<nowiki></nowiki>Zan!! The <<Crescent Blade>> that got swung down made a big crack on the path but, Lilith dodged it with a back flip and landed on top of the glass fence like that.

	“Tatsu!! Swing to the side!!”		“Tatsu!! Swing to the side!!”
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	The silver girl dodged the bullet just right.		The silver girl dodged the bullet just right.

	And at the same time, Tatsu roared and swung down the <<~~Scimitar~~>>.		And at the same time, Tatsu roared and swung down the <<Crescent Blade>>.

	---But, Lilith dodged the attack by jumping over Tatsu’s head, and the shelves got mowed down by the <<~~Scimitar~~>>.		---But, Lilith dodged the attack by jumping over Tatsu’s head, and the shelves got mowed down by the <<Crescent Blade>>.

	<nowiki></nowiki>Kurun. Lilith spun the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> in her hands.		<nowiki></nowiki>Kurun. Lilith spun the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> in her hands.

RikiNutcase at 01:58, 27 August 2014

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	“What, didn’t you go ~~together~~ with Miyabi and the rest?”		“What, didn’t you go with Miyabi and the rest?”, I asked the silver girl who was waiting for me even though I had told her it was all right to go on ahead.

	~~Even though I told her it was alright to head on ahead of me, but even so~~, I asked the silver girl who was waiting for me.

	“It’s because I am Tooru’s <<Duo>>.”		“It’s because I am Tooru’s <<Duo>>.”
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	“Ja---. Okay let’s go. Miyabi and the rest are waiting.”		“Ja---. Okay let’s go. Miyabi and the rest are waiting.”

	Maybe it was the thought of wanting to hurry up to Miyabi's and the rest ~~side,~~ Julie took my hands.		Maybe it was the thought of wanting to hurry up to side of Miyabi and the rest; Julie took my hands.

	(Uu…………..this is somehow embarrassing……….)		(Uu…………..this is somehow embarrassing……….)
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	Once we entered the building and immediately descended 2 floors down with the escalator, we let go of our hands.		Once we entered the building and immediately descended 2 floors down with the escalator, we let go of our hands.

	It seems the power supplies were off today so, after we ~~get~~ down 2 floors using the escalator which had become a staircase with big ramps, we reached a place called Nagisa plaza.		It seems the power supplies were off today so after we got down 2 floors using the escalator, which had become a staircase with big ramps, we reached a place called Nagisa plaza.

	There was a path on the left side while there was an atrium connecting ~~the~~ the first floor and right side; there was also a book store in front of us.		There was a path on the left side while there was an atrium connecting the first floor and right side; there was also a book store in front of us.

	From this place which was located at the very east of the building, we headed to the meeting point we promised with Tachibana and the rest located to the west-----		From this place which was located at the very east end of the building, we headed to the meeting point we promised with Tachibana and the rest located to the west-----

	“Ah-re? it’s Kokonoe-kun and Julie-chan. You two took your time coming down here?”		“Ah-re? it’s Kokonoe-kun and Julie-chan. You two took your time coming down here?”
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	“It seems I can manifest the shape of an arrow using my mental strength by having the <<Blaze>> be the medium. The arrow is like the other self of the <<{{Furigana\|Western bow\|Archery}}>> main body.”		“It seems I can manifest the shape of an arrow using my mental strength by having the <<Blaze>> be the medium. The arrow is like the other self of the <<{{Furigana\|Western bow\|Archery}}>> main body.”

	“During the manifestation, I have to ~~image~~ the actions. It seems it is different for each individual but, mine is like the feeling of pulling out an arrow from the quiver. It seems you can manifest it by just taking the pose if you are used to it.”		“During the manifestation, I have to imagine the actions. It seems it is different for each individual, but mine is like the feeling of pulling out an arrow from the quiver. It seems you can manifest it by just taking the pose if you are used to it.”

	“I see. That was knowledgeable.”		“I see. That was knowledgeable.”
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	“Ja---. Let’s do that.”		“Ja---. Let’s do that.”

	Inside the A La Mode building which was filled with people when we visited a few days ago.		Inside the A La Mode building, which was filled with people when we visited a few days ago, it was now wrapped in silence and it gave off the illusion as if we slipped into a ghost town.

	It was now wrapped in silence and it gave off the illusion as if we slipped into a ghost town.

	The different atmosphere where there was no one manning the shop even though it was open made that feeling stronger.		The different atmosphere where there was no one manning the shop even though it was open made that feeling stronger.
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	From far away, Miyabi was making small waves with her hands to us.		From far away, Miyabi was making small waves with her hands to us.

	(I don’t know whether ~~or not if~~ she is appealing or not……….)		(I don’t know whether she is appealing or not……….)

	While making a wry smile, we met up with Tachibana and Miyabi.		While making a wry smile, we met up with Tachibana and Miyabi.
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	After going straight through the approximately 400 meter wide path which was stretched out from the east to west, there consisted 4 plazas mid-way through.		After going straight through the approximately 400 meter wide path which was stretched out from the east to west, there consisted 4 plazas mid-way through.

	The names of the ~~plaza~~ in ~~orders~~ were: Nagisa is the first eastern plaza right when we got down from the roof, after heading west from there is Yukari, then the Center~~, and~~ finally Sora.		The names of the plazas in order were:
			..Nagisa, the first eastern plaza right when we got down from the roof
			..after heading west from there is Yukari
			..then the Center
			..finally Sora.

	However, the path was not a completely straight path and each of the Yukari and Center plazas had narrow paths to use for moving around.		However, the path was not a completely straight path and each of the Yukari and Center plazas had narrow paths to use for moving around.
	The building has a 2 floor structure but, although this does not go for all the plazas, all of the paths connect from the 2nd floor and 1st floor through an atrium.		The building has a 2 floor structure but, although this does not go for all the plazas, all of the paths connect from the 2nd floor and 1st floor through an atrium.

	It was easy to move around on the 1st floor since it is wide but, since it is very disadvantageous if she attacks us from above by using the atrium~~, so~~ we chose to fight on the 2nd floor.		It was easy to move around on the 1st floor since it is wide, but since it is very disadvantageous if she attacks us from above by using the atrium we chose to fight on the 2nd floor.

	Around 1 minute after confirming the place I would be stationed again, a building announcement that the <<Survive>> had started.		Around 1 minute after confirming the place I would be stationed again, a building announcement that the <<Survive>> had started.
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	In spite of coming down timidly, Miyabi failed in her landing and landed on her butt.		In spite of coming down timidly, Miyabi failed in her landing and landed on her butt.

	Thanks to that her skirt got flipped up but, it stopped at a dangerous spot luckily.		Thanks to that her skirt got flipped up, but it stopped at a dangerous spot luckily.

	“Ouch…….. ………………---------!!”		“Ouch…….. ………………---------!!”

	Although she frowned her face in pain at first, she immediately noticed what was happening ~~to her skirt~~ and quickly fixed the hem of her skirt.		Although she frowned her face in pain at first, she immediately noticed what was happening and quickly fixed the hem of her skirt.

	“Miyabi are you okay?”		“Miyabi are you okay?”
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	Kigami got angry at his partner’s plan.		Kigami got angry at his partner’s plan.

	“Maa maa, Kigami. Isn’t it okay. We are low on numbers anyway so, everything is okay if we go with this for the last.”		“Maa maa, Kigami. Isn’t it okay. We are low on numbers anyway, so everything is okay if we go with this for the last.”

	He probably purposely did it to allow everyone to hear.		He probably purposely did it to allow everyone to hear.
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	Now that he mentioned it, most of the people that I saw when I crossed by the Yukari plaza at the beginning had been eliminated.		Now that he mentioned it, most of the people that I saw when I crossed by the Yukari plaza at the beginning had been eliminated.

	“What are you going to do? If it is an okay then, it would be a lifesaver if you corner her from down there.”		“What are you going to do? If it is okay, then it would be a lifesaver if you corner her from down there.”

	Izumi claimed the charge of the 2nd floor which had the lowest possibility of getting shrewdly attacked from above.		Izumi claimed the charge of the 2nd floor which had the lowest possibility of getting shrewdly attacked from above.

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2014-07-25T02:26:33Z

Chapter 6 『Existence Transcending Humans』

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Simon: /* Part 1 */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (38)

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	“Kigami, dodge it!!”		“Kigami, dodge it!!”

	I shouted once more while swinging my fist targeted towards Lilith------it rose, but she dodged it.		I shouted once more while swinging my fist targeted towards Lilith------towards the rose, but she dodged it.

	However, since I swung it down in a manner of charging my body, I got between them with that momentum and prepared my <<Shield>> while covering Kigami.		However, since I swung it down in a manner of charging my body, I got between them with that momentum and prepared my <<Shield>> while covering Kigami.
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	“Aah. I refuse to see…….someone getting downed in front of me. That’s why you should hurry up and run away!”		“Aah. I refuse to see…….someone getting downed in front of me. That’s why you should hurry up and run away!”

	The ~~scenery,~~ that was carved into my brain from that day in summer, moved my body.		The scene that was carved into my brain from that day in summer moved my body.

	Even if I know <<Survive>> was just a practice match, and no one would die.		Even if I know <<Survive>> was just a practice match, and no one would die.
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	When she pointed the gun------I expanded my awareness to its maximum and saw through the firing line.		When she pointed the gun------I expanded my awareness to its maximum and saw through the firing line.

	It might be hard to dodge the bullet but, as long as I know the place where she is targeting ~~then~~ I could use the <<Shield>> to block it.		It might be hard to dodge the bullet, but as long as I know the place where she is targeting I could use the <<Shield>> to block it.

	This was the counter-plan I prepared for the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>>.		This was the counter-plan I prepared for the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>>.
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	Even though I blocked it with the <<Shield>> immediately, her goal was not to attack me.		Even though I blocked it with the <<Shield>> immediately, her goal was not to attack me.

	Lilith kicked the <<Shield>> and ~~use~~ that momentum to jump behind and open some distance.		Lilith kicked the <<Shield>> and used that momentum to jump behind and open some distance.

	(Oh no, this distance is disadvantageous for me………!!)		(Oh no, this distance is disadvantageous for me………!!)

	If she opened up a distance of more than 5 meter, I would lose the ability to see through the ~~fire~~ line accurately.		If she opened up a distance of more than 5 meter, I would lose the ability to see through the firing line accurately.

	At the same time ~~with~~ her firing, I jumped into a nearby shop.		At the same time as her firing, I jumped into a nearby shop.

	“Fufu, it’s okay even if you don’t run away that pathetically. That was just an intimidation, so I did not aim at you. I already told you that you are the main dish.”		“Fufu, it’s okay even if you don’t run away that pathetically. That was just an intimidation, so I did not aim at you. I already told you that you are the main dish.”
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	After hanging the tip of the <<{{Furigana\|Iron chain\|Chain}}>> near the ceiling, Tachibana caught Julie in mid-air with the movement of a pendulum.		After hanging the tip of the <<{{Furigana\|Iron chain\|Chain}}>> near the ceiling, Tachibana caught Julie in mid-air with the movement of a pendulum.

	Tachibana then landed on the 1st floor like that and while carrying Julie and running ~~pass~~ the ball light and decorative plants to block the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> line of fire.		Tachibana then landed on the 1st floor like that and while carrying Julie and running past the ball light and decorative plants to block the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> line of fire.

	“Kokonoe! We are retreating!!”		“Kokonoe! We are retreating!!”
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	“Thank you very much, Tomoe.”		“Thank you very much, Tomoe.”

	After a while, Tora found the bandages and brought it back and Tachibana performed the emergency treatment.		After a while Tora found the bandages and brought them back, and Tachibana performed the emergency treatment.

	About the time she was about to take her clothes off, me and ~~Tora~~ went outside to stand guard.		About the time she was about to take her clothes off, Tora and I went outside to stand guard.

	“………..Even if you are treated, please be careful not to force yourself.”		“………..Even if you are treated, please be careful not to force yourself.”
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	Immediately, I found out.		Immediately, I found out.

	There was a hole opened by a bullet on Tachibana’s uniform.		There was a hole opened by a bullet in Tachibana’s uniform.

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	“Ja---. Okay let’s go. Miyabi and the rest are waiting.”		“Ja---. Okay let’s go. Miyabi and the rest are waiting.”

	Maybe it was the thought of wanting to hurry up to side of Miyabi and the rest; Julie took my ~~hands~~.		Maybe it was the thought of wanting to hurry up to side of Miyabi and the rest; Julie took my hand.

	(Uu…………..this is somehow embarrassing……….)		(Uu…………..this is somehow embarrassing……….)
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	After I took a small glance at Lilith for the last time, she was staring at me while placing her hands on her hips.		After I took a small glance at Lilith for the last time, she was staring at me while placing her hands on her hips.

	Once we entered the building and immediately ~~descended~~ 2 floors down ~~with~~ the escalator, we let go of our hands.		Once we entered the building and immediately walked 2 floors down on the escalator, we let go of our hands.

	It seems the power supplies were off today so after we got down 2 floors using the escalator, which had become a staircase with big ramps, we reached a place called Nagisa plaza.		It seems the power supplies were off today so after we got down 2 floors using the escalator, which had become a staircase with big ramps, we reached a place called Nagisa plaza.
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	Just how could she say that with a confident smile on her face.		Just how could she say that with a confident smile on her face.

	“By the way Kibitsu. I have been wondering this since a while back but, how do you manifest the arrow?”		“By the way Kibitsu, I have been wondering this since a while back but, how do you manifest the arrow?”

	<<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> and <<{{Furigana\|Western bow\|Archery}}>>. It is quite different but, it is the same type of shooting weapon if I put it in forceful words.		<<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> and <<{{Furigana\|Western bow\|Archery}}>>. It is quite different but, it is the same type of shooting weapon if I put it in forceful words.
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	While making a smile while making a comeback, Kibitsu once again hid herself behind the book shelf.		While making a smile while making a comeback, Kibitsu once again hid herself behind the book shelf.

	“Well then, it seems we are a little late so, let’s hurry up and go to everyone.”		“Well then, it seems we are a little late so, let’s hurry up and go to everyone else.”

	“Ja---. Let’s do that.”		“Ja---. Let’s do that.”
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	Inside the A La Mode building, which was filled with people when we visited a few days ago, it was now wrapped in silence and it gave off the illusion as if we slipped into a ghost town.		Inside the A La Mode building, which was filled with people when we visited a few days ago, it was now wrapped in silence and it gave off the illusion as if we slipped into a ghost town.

	The different atmosphere ~~where~~ there was no one manning the shop even though it was open made that feeling stronger.		The different atmosphere as if there was no one manning the shop even though it was open made that feeling stronger.

	“To-Tooru-kun, Julie-chan. Over here, over here……….!”		“To-Tooru-kun, Julie-chan. Over here, over here……….!”
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	From far away, Miyabi was making small waves with her hands to us.		From far away, Miyabi was making small waves with her hands to us.

	(I don’t know whether she is appealing or not……….)		(I don’t know whether she is appealing to us or not……….)

	While making a wry smile, we met up with Tachibana and Miyabi.		While making a wry smile, we met up with Tachibana and Miyabi.
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	Being the group leader, Tachibana looked at the building map while she started talking about the plan.		Being the group leader, Tachibana looked at the building map while she started talking about the plan.

	Several situations were assumed ~~but~~, the basic plan was to drive Lilith to a corner with our numbers.		Several situations were assumed, the basic plan was to drive Lilith to a corner with our numbers.

	After the ~~confirmation~~ was over, we confirmed the actual building instead of the map.		After the strategy meeting was over, we confirmed the plan with the actual building instead of the map.

	The northern part of the A La Mode which was the grounds for <<Survive>>-----		The northern part of the A La Mode which was the grounds for <<Survive>>-----

	After going straight through the approximately 400 meter wide path which was stretched out from ~~the~~ east to west, there consisted 4 plazas mid-way through.		After going straight through the approximately 400 meter wide path which was stretched out from east to west, there consisted 4 plazas mid-way through.

	The names of the plazas in order were:		The names of the plazas in order were:

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	There was the sound of a helicopter coming nearer from far away.		There was the sound of a helicopter coming nearer from far away.

	It was different from the one ~~Lilith’s~~ personally owned and was a giant tandem type rotor.		It was different from the one Lilith personally owned and was a giant tandem type rotor.

	On the A La Mode roof, Tsukimi Rito moved her sights from the helicopter up at the skies of Tokyo bay to the special monitor and muttered that.		On the A La Mode roof, Tsukimi Rito moved her sights from the helicopter up at the skies of Tokyo bay to the special monitor and muttered that.
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	“If that happens, it would probably end without showing any good prospects.”		“If that happens, it would probably end without showing any good prospects.”

	While quietly gazing at the monitor, Sakuya made a bewitching smile and was ~~damping~~ her lips in the milk tea Sara poured for her.		While quietly gazing at the monitor, Sakuya made a bewitching smile and was dampening her lips in the milk tea Sara poured for her.

	“Oi oi, even if the silver hair is defeated, that <<Irregular>> is still left right?”		“Oi oi, even if the silver hair is defeated, that <<Irregular>> is still left right?”
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	After replying her assertion to her rabbit ear wearing subordinate, Sakuya took another sip of the milk tea.		After replying her assertion to her rabbit ear wearing subordinate, Sakuya took another sip of the milk tea.

	“………..In the current stage, ~~the~~ both of them are not showing any promise of winning against her in the first place. Even if they were the same people that drove them away.”		“………..In the current stage, both of them are not showing any promise of winning against her in the first place. Even if they were the same people that drove them away.”

	“Seriously, that is one unthinkable dryness from a little kid………….ah---, by the way, I am changing the topic.”		“Seriously, that is one unthinkable dryness from a little kid………….ah---, by the way, I am changing the topic.”
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	Soon, there were 2 people walking through the center of the men in a relaxed manner.		Soon, there were 2 people walking through the center of the men in a relaxed manner.

	One of them was like the men lined up along the left and right, he was wearing a battle suit but, he was wearing a different helmet from the others and was exposing his face.		One of them was like the men lined up along the left and right, he was wearing a battle suit but he was wearing a different helmet from the others and was exposing his face.

	His age was probably around Tooru’s. It was a Caucasian teenager with arrow sharp pair of eyes.		His age was probably around Tooru’s. It was a Caucasian teenager with arrow sharp pair of eyes.
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	“First time meeting you all, my visitors. What kind of business do you all have in Japan?”		“First time meeting you all, my visitors. What kind of business do you all have in Japan?”

	“Whaat, just a little stroll.”		“Whaat, just taking a little stroll.”

	The old man was the one that answered Sakuya’s question.		The old man was the one that answered Sakuya’s question.
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	“Oya, I thought you would show some response but…………….”		“Oya, I thought you would show some response but…………….”

	“Sorry to not meet your expectations……….by the way, is it about time you named yourself? Or should we name ~~ours~~ first?”		“Sorry to not meet your expectations……….by the way, is it about time you named yourself? Or should we name ourselves first?”

	“Fuhaha, I don’t need you to do that, Tsukumo Sakuya-dono. No should I call you-----the <<{{Furigana\|Blaze Witch\|Blaze Diabolica}}>>.”		“Fuhaha, I don’t need you to do that, Tsukumo Sakuya-dono. No should I call you-----the <<{{Furigana\|Blaze Witch\|Blaze Diabolica}}>>.”
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	Sakuya bowed her head once more with a smile.		Sakuya bowed her head once more with a smile.

	Even though she heard the old-man’s nickname, she had yet determined what kind of organization the men in front ~~was~~ affiliated with.		Even though she heard the old-man’s nickname, she had yet determined what kind of organization the men in front were affiliated with.

	Enemy------it’s not like they are. At the very least, at the current point that is.		Enemy------it’s not like they are. At the very least, at the current point that is.

	But, it’s true that it was an organization that they should be cautious about and originally, it would be normal to start exchanging a conversation without obstacle to search each others intentions but-------		But, it’s true that it was an organization that they should be cautious about, and originally it would be normal to start exchanging a conversation without obstacle to search each others intentions but-------

	“Hey, Jii-san<ref group ="2F">old man</ref>. Forget the sluggish conversation already and let’s get to the point. I will become sleepy if you continue blabbing useless words.”		“Hey, Jii-san<ref group ="2F">old man</ref>. Forget the sluggish conversation already and let’s get to the point. I will become sleepy if you continue blabbing useless words.”
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	Although it was in a polite way, it was unpleasant to hear <<K>> words which had hypocritical courtesy felt in it.		Although it was in a polite way, it was unpleasant to hear <<K>> words which had hypocritical courtesy felt in it.

	'''''“That’s because we are also existences that transcend humans ~~too~~.”'''''		'''''“That’s because we are also existences that transcend humans.”'''''

	Immediately, the group of men in the surrounding scattered around in a speed unthinkable for normal people and surrounded Sakuya and the rest.		Immediately, the group of men in the surrounding scattered around in a speed unthinkable for normal people and surrounded Sakuya and the rest.