Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 7 - Revision history

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-24T03:19:32Z

Part 2

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	“Thanks to us having especially promising students this year, I am really looking forward for the future.”		“Thanks to us having especially promising students this year, I am really looking forward for the future.”

	The faces of the people that took ~~down~~ the people that went down floated in Sakuya's mind and she made a smile.		The faces of the people that took out the people that went down floated in Sakuya's mind and she made a smile.

	“Well then, what will you do next? If your side wants to leave then, we will not lay our hands on you all any further.”		“Well then, what will you do next? If your side wants to leave, then we will not lay our hands on you all any further.”

	“Hou, that is thankful. Well then <<{{Furigana\|Blaze Witch\|Blaze Diabolica}}>>-dono, I will generously follow your words. <<K>>-Kun, order those who can move to retrieve the people that went down.”		“Hou, that is thankful. Well then <<{{Furigana\|Blaze Witch\|Blaze Diabolica}}>>-dono, I will generously follow your words. <<K>>-Kun, order those who can move to retrieve the people that went down.”
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	And the black-haired young man carrying a girl standing in between them.		And the black-haired young man carrying a girl standing in between them.

	<<K>> made a hunch~~. That~~ this boy was the one that took down his subordinate.		<<K>> made a hunch that this boy was the one that took down his subordinate.

	For a short time, Tooru and <<K>>’s sights crossed.		For a short time, Tooru and <<K>>’s sights crossed.
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	“……….Looks like we will meet again soon.”		“……….Looks like we will meet again soon.”

	That was a prediction. However, it was close to conviction.		That was a prediction. However, it was close to a conviction.

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-24T03:01:30Z

Part 1

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	“……….Nai. Nothing.”		“……….Nai. Nothing.”

	It was for an instant but, Julie sent her ~~sights~~ over to me.		It was only for an instant, but Julie sent her gaze over to me.

	(------? Just now………….)		(------? Just now………….)

	Behind me, Miyabi, ~~Tora~~ and of course Tachibana who was in front of me were looking downwards so they did not notice the movements of her ~~sights~~.		Behind me Miyabi and Tora, and of course Tachibana who was in front of me, were looking downwards so they did not notice the movements of her gaze.

	“………………I guess she got too worked up because the opponent is a strong one right?”		“………………I guess she got too worked up because the opponent is a strong one, right?”

	“Fufu, I see. If that is the case then, Julie has one unexpected side to her huh………….”		“Fufu, I see. If that is the case then, Julie has one unexpected side to her huh………….”
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	After I made a random follow up after seeing Julie’s state, it seemed Tachibana was satisfied with that.		After I made a random follow up after seeing Julie’s state, it seemed Tachibana was satisfied with that.

	“But Julie. I feel that your weapon is speed……………and the coolness to see it through in an instant. I hope you will not forget that and go to battle……….”		“But Julie, I feel that your weapon is speed……………and the coolness to see it through in an instant. I hope you will not forget that and go into battle……….”

	“Ja---. Thank you for the advice, Tomoe.”		“Ja---. Thank you for the advice, Tomoe.”
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Pekori around the time Julie lowered her head, a gunshot could be heard from quite far away.		<nowiki></nowiki>Pekori around the time Julie lowered her head, a gunshot could be heard from quite far away.

	Either someone running away from the spot or was hiding was defeated.		Either someone who was running away from the spot or who was hiding was defeated.

	“I wonder how many people are left…………”		“I wonder how many people are left…………”
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	“I don’t know. But, it won’t be weird for Lilith to be coming to this west side.”		“I don’t know. But, it won’t be weird for Lilith to be coming to this west side.”

	That is why, we have to make some kind of plan before then or else we have a slim chance at victory.		That is why we have to make some kind of plan before then or else we have only a slim chance at victory.

	“Understanding the situation is first -------our battle strength is, me, Julie, Miyabi and Tora. These 4 people.”		“Understanding the situation is first -------our battle strength is, me, Julie, Miyabi and Tora. These 4 people.”
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	Julie could only swing her right hand due to the influence of the fracture.		Julie could only swing her right hand due to the influence of the fracture.

	Although Miyabi’s <<{{Furigana\|Chivalry lance\|Lance}}>> was a trustworthy power ~~but~~, it's reckless to charge directly at the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>>.		Although Miyabi’s <<{{Furigana\|Chivalry lance\|Lance}}>> was a trustworthy power, it's reckless to charge directly at the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>>.

	I can’t think of anything now but, I included the methods we could use before moving to the next confirmation.		I can’t think of anything now but, I included the methods we could use before moving to the next confirmation.
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	If my imagination was correct--------		If my imagination was correct--------

	I recalled back Lilith’s back during the time in <<Survive>> and the previous <<Kouryou battle>>.		I recalled back to Lilith’s back during the time in <<Survive>> and the previous <<Kouryou battle>>.

	(Lilith normally………….no, wait………..)		(Lilith normally………….no, wait………..)
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	“B-but, but………I…..Uuu……..”		“B-but, but………I…..Uuu……..”

	“It’s okay. No one will blame you. Also, I will save Lilith so, stop crying ~~it’~~ going to be okay.”		“It’s okay. No one will blame you. Also, I will save Lilith so stop crying. It’s going to be okay.”

	“Tooru…….kun……….”		“Tooru…….kun……….”
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	That is why, I swung my head.		That is why, I swung my head.

	“I promised this before right. I will come back for you. The situation is kind ~~off~~ different from that talk but, I will definitely protect that promise. I will save Lilith and come back to pick you up so, please wait here.”		“I promised this before right. I will come back for you. The situation is kind of different from that talk, but I will definitely protect that promise. I will save Lilith and come back to pick you up, so please wait here.”

	After I said that I Ponpon lightly hit her head.		After I said that I Ponpon lightly hit her head.
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	“Kokonoe Tooru!!”		“Kokonoe Tooru!!”

	While dodging the stray bullets which had lost ~~its~~ target, the gold girl jumped into my arms.		While dodging the stray bullets which had lost their target, the gold girl jumped into my arms.

	“I leave the rest to you two, Julie, Tora-------!!”		“I leave the rest to you two, Julie, Tora-------!!”
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	---In addition, it's a different story that both of Miyabi and I became embarrassed when she came hugging me when we went to pick her up and Tachibana who looked like she could not walk was making a big rampage when I tried to carry her.		---In addition, it's a different story that both Miyabi and I became embarrassed when she came hugging me when we went to pick her up, and Tachibana who looked like she could not walk was making a big rampage when I tried to carry her.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371844 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:36:39Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371844 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: /* Part 1 */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (65)

2014-07-21T20:26:39Z

Part 1: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (65)

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Acolyte at 21:32, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:32:21Z

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	“…………That’s what she said, Julie.”		“…………That’s what she said, Julie.”

	~~“Ya~~,Ya-----! I will win, definitely………….!!”		“Ja,Ja-----! I will win, definitely………….!!”

	Tachibana smiled when Julie strengthened her determination again, and made a strong vow.		Tachibana smiled when Julie strengthened her determination again, and made a strong vow.
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	“But Julie. I feel that your weapon is speed……………and the coolness to see it through in an instant. I hope you will not forget that and go to battle……….”		“But Julie. I feel that your weapon is speed……………and the coolness to see it through in an instant. I hope you will not forget that and go to battle……….”

	~~“Ya~~---. Thank you for the advice, Tomoe.”		“Ja---. Thank you for the advice, Tomoe.”

	<nowiki></nowiki>Pekori around the time Julie lowered her head, a gunshot could be heard from quite far away.		<nowiki></nowiki>Pekori around the time Julie lowered her head, a gunshot could be heard from quite far away.
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	“………….Is your body okay?”		“………….Is your body okay?”

	~~“Ya~~---.it’s a little heavy though.”		“Ja---.it’s a little heavy though.”

	“I see………..sorry, to force you like this.”		“I see………..sorry, to force you like this.”
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	“Did you think I would bring up being a <<Duo>> with Lilith?”		“Did you think I would bring up being a <<Duo>> with Lilith?”

	“…………..Ya---”		“…………..Ja---”

	<nowiki></nowiki>Chirin Julie nodded and the bells rang.		<nowiki></nowiki>Chirin Julie nodded and the bells rang.
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	“Are you relieved already?”		“Are you relieved already?”

	~~“Ya~~,Ya----”		“Ja,Ja----”

	I once again patted her head after Julie nodded.		I once again patted her head after Julie nodded.
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	“Okay. Now that you are relieved, you should get spirited again. However, don't overdo it or you will end up too worked up you know? That’s because we have to report '''We won''', to Tachibana who is working hard.”		“Okay. Now that you are relieved, you should get spirited again. However, don't overdo it or you will end up too worked up you know? That’s because we have to report '''We won''', to Tachibana who is working hard.”

	~~“Ya~~,Ya---……!!”		“Ja,Ja---……!!”

	It was at that moment Julie made a strong nod.		It was at that moment Julie made a strong nod.
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	“I leave the rest to you two, Julie, Tora-------!!”		“I leave the rest to you two, Julie, Tora-------!!”

	[Ya---!!][Leave it to me!!]		[Ja---!!][Leave it to me!!]

	I heard the replies of both of my trustworthy comrades standing by on the 1st floor----		I heard the replies of both of my trustworthy comrades standing by on the 1st floor----

Mashiro: /* Chapter 7 『Give Me 《{{Furigana|Soul|Power}}》』 */

2014-07-20T16:18:38Z

Chapter 7 『Give Me 《{{Furigana|Soul|Power}}》』

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Drowzycow at 16:01, 18 April 2014

2014-04-18T16:01:05Z

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	An utterly amazed voice came down suddenly.		An utterly amazed voice came down suddenly.

	When I looked up-----at the direction of the voice, a beautiful girl with a red rose attached on her chest and has Yellow ~~topaz~~ and {{Furigana\|blue gemstone eyes\|Sapphire blue}}, was sitting on the glass fence while folding her legs and was looking down at us.		When I looked up-----at the direction of the voice, a beautiful girl with a red rose attached on her chest and has {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} and {{Furigana\|blue gemstone eyes\|Sapphire blue}}, was sitting on the glass fence while folding her legs and was looking down at us.

	She was not holding her <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> and was not showing any intentions of wanting to fight immediately.		She was not holding her <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> and was not showing any intentions of wanting to fight immediately.
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	It was during that time Edward got onto the helicopter after turning his heels around and <<K>> was about to follow him-----		It was during that time Edward got onto the helicopter after turning his heels around and <<K>> was about to follow him-----

	After seeing them, <<K>> stopped and directed both his ~~shooting~~-like eyes to them.		After seeing them, <<K>> stopped and directed both his arrow-like eyes to them.

	There were 3 people that took his attention.		There were 3 people that took his attention.

Drowzycow at 15:17, 18 April 2014

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	“………..I refuse. I don’t have the duty to follow someone who rudely stepped into my dance party with those dirty feet. And if you wanted to escort me in the first place then, start with sending an invitation first.”		“………..I refuse. I don’t have the duty to follow someone who rudely stepped into my dance party with those dirty feet. And if you wanted to escort me in the first place then, start with sending an invitation first.”

	“Ya-re Ya-re…………that’s your answer after having me walk all the way here.”		“Ya-re Ya-re…………that’s your answer after having me walk all the way down here.”

	“I don’t remember asking you all to pick me up.”		“I don’t remember asking you all to pick me up.”

RikiNutcase at 14:57, 18 April 2014

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	I agreed with Yurie’s comment.		I agreed with Yurie’s comment.

	It is because ~~it would be the 2nd encounter battle if it is a narrow space, and we~~ cannot use the advantage of ~~many~~ numbers ~~of people. <!--not sure~~, what ~~is being said here: 1st encounter was~~ the ~~rush past,~~ 2nd encounter ~~was the wig ambush? // It was because, during the 2nd encounter battle which was in a narrow space, we could not use our advantage of many numbers of people~~. ~~?-->~~		It's because they cannot use the advantage of having more numbers, if they fought in a narrow place just like what happened in the 2nd encounter.

	“The problem is the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> counter-plan but, I don’t know if I can bring her to an effective range……..”		“The problem is the <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> counter-plan but, I don’t know if I can bring her to an effective range……..”
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	<nowiki></nowiki>JaKiin!! However the blade was stopped by the gun’s frame.		<nowiki></nowiki>JaKiin!! However the blade was stopped by the gun’s frame.

	“It was a somewhat rough sword skill but, it was a heavy and good attack. But-------'''''your movements are duller than ~~just now~~'''''. ~~<!--duller than before-->~~ Since you are only using one hand and sword, it would mean that there is quite some damage left I guess.”		“It was a somewhat rough sword skill but, it was a heavy and good attack. But-------'''''your movements are duller than before'''''. Since you are only using one hand and sword, it would mean that there is quite some damage left I guess.”

	Seeing through Yurie’s movement turning dull in an instant, Lealith guessed the level of injury she had.		Seeing through Yurie’s movement turning dull in an instant, Lealith guessed the level of injury she had.
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	“How about this!!”		“How about this!!”

	I repeatedly ~~showed<!--~~showered~~?-->~~ a left jab and a right back knuckle but, it all hit the air with her bending her body.		I repeatedly showered a left jab and a right back knuckle but, it all hit the air with her bending her body.

	---But, right after that, Lealith flipped up her leg while making a swaying posture.		---But, right after that, Lealith flipped up her leg while making a swaying posture.
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	Lealith said that while touching her cut right arm with her left hand.		Lealith said that while touching her cut right arm with her left hand.

	“So there are 2 ambushers~~<!--traps-->~~ huh………..I ~~lose as expected~~.”~~<!--Lealith wasn't expecting a loss was she? // I can't believe I lost-->~~		“So there are 2 ambushers huh………..even I will fall for that.”

	Lealith moved her sights towards <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> that fell to the ground, and made a sigh of admiration.		Lealith moved her sights towards <<{{Furigana\|Gun\|Rifle}}>> that fell to the ground, and made a sigh of admiration.
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	“………..I refuse. I don’t have the duty to follow someone who rudely stepped into my dance party with those dirty feet. And if you wanted to escort me in the first place then, start with sending an invitation first.”		“………..I refuse. I don’t have the duty to follow someone who rudely stepped into my dance party with those dirty feet. And if you wanted to escort me in the first place then, start with sending an invitation first.”

	~~“Ya-re Ya-re…………that’s the answer after bringing my legs this deep inside here.” <!--~~“Ya-re Ya-re…………that’s your answer after having me walk all the way here.”		“Ya-re Ya-re…………that’s your answer after having me walk all the way here.”

	“I don’t remember asking you all to pick me up.”		“I don’t remember asking you all to pick me up.”
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	While staring at the giant helicopter, Sakuya whispered out.		While staring at the giant helicopter, Sakuya whispered out.

	“………….<<Equipment smith>>-sama. We are the same and yet different. That is why our paths will never intersect.” ~~<!--intersect means to cross, their paths just crossed :S // That's why we will never share the same path -->~~		“………….<<Equipment smith>>-sama. We are the same and yet different. That is why our paths will never intersect.”

	Her mutter did not reach anyone’s ear and got blown away by the wind just like that.		Her mutter did not reach anyone’s ear and got blown away by the wind just like that.

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2014-04-18T14:13:38Z

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