Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 - Revision history

SNovah: Changed a few things that really stuck out. Tried to leave as much of the original TL/editor work in place while making it less jarring for a native ENG reader

2021-03-29T23:53:07Z

Changed a few things that *really* stuck out. Tried to leave as much of the original TL/editor work in place while making it less jarring for a native ENG reader

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199.245.32.210: /* Part 2 */

2015-01-19T19:32:26Z

Part 2

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	Although she was shocked, she waited for the next sentence. Even though she had known her for only few days, she thought there should be a reason why someone like Imari would say something like that.		Although she was shocked, she waited for the next sentence. Even though she had known her for only few days, she thought there should be a reason why someone like Imari would say something like that.

	“My family works in a small factory but, how should I say this, managing it is a little tough. We are often told that it’s better to close it, but my father and the workers there are working hard because they don’t want to close the company that my ~~diseased~~ grand-father worked so hard to build up. My sisters and I love our grandfather very much, so we agreed to say no to shutting the company down and often think about ways to help them somehow”		“My family works in a small factory but, how should I say this, managing it is a little tough. We are often told that it’s better to close it, but my father and the workers there are working hard because they don’t want to close the company that my deceased grand-father worked so hard to build up. My sisters and I love our grandfather very much, so we agreed to say no to shutting the company down and often think about ways to help them somehow”

	“Ah…… so you became an <<Exceed>> for that……?”		“Ah…… so you became an <<Exceed>> for that……?”

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-27T05:32:50Z

Part 2

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-27T05:15:23Z

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RikiNutcase at 04:17, 27 August 2014

2014-08-27T04:17:31Z

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	Ever since the 2nd day, the students have been made to cook for themselves as part of the training. Of course, we were required to make our side-dishes on our own along with the main course.		Ever since the 2nd day, the students have been made to cook for themselves as part of the training. Of course, we were required to make our side-dishes on our own along with the main course.

	It took some time since we were completely exhausted from the afternoon training, but it was quite fun cooking while everyone was being lively. At the same time, I saw an unexpected ability that I had not known until now.		It took some time since we were completely exhausted from the afternoon training, but it was quite fun cooking while everyone was being lively.

			At the same time, I saw an unexpected ability that I had not known until now.

	While peeling a potato, I send a look to the girl standing in front of the kitchen with an apron on.		While peeling a potato, I send a look to the girl standing in front of the kitchen with an apron on.

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-27T04:04:38Z

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RikiNutcase at 01:44, 27 August 2014

2014-08-27T01:44:02Z

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	Hard training continued for the rest of the 2nd day of the seaside school.		Hard training continued for the rest of the 2nd day of the seaside school.



	Not only was there the battle training we usually go through in the main school, but we would also get survival training and rock climbing using the islands terrain with traps set up.		Not only was there the battle training we usually go through in the main school, but we would also get survival training and rock climbing using the islands terrain with traps set up.

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-26T22:02:33Z

Part 1

69.114.187.179: /* Chapter 4 『I Wanted To Be Together Longer』 */

2014-07-25T02:31:39Z

Chapter 4 『I Wanted To Be Together Longer』

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	“Good morning, Tooru……….”		“Good morning, Tooru……….”

	“Aah, Good morning, ~~Yuri~~------“		“Aah, Good morning, Juli------“

	(Wait, I must not look there too------!!)		(Wait, I must not look there too------!!)

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371849 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:37:19Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371849 by Simon (talk)

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	The 5th day of the training ~~has~~ ended.		The 5th day of the training had ended.

	The training camp with the alias of a seaside school ~~ends~~ today.		The training camp with the alias of a seaside school ended today.

	It was a completely free day on the 6th day (which is tomorrow) and even though they were still unable to leave the island, the students ~~have~~ been pardoned to do ~~anything~~ they ~~like~~ there.		It was a completely free day on the 6th day (which is tomorrow) and even though they were still unable to leave the island, the students had been pardoned to do whatever they wanted there.

	Heading back to the academy ~~was~~ probably enough to ~~give~~ them time to relax, but the reason for giving them a rest day on the island ~~has~~ the same simple meaning as giving candy to a child. Especially for the main school, there were quite a lot of students who ~~got~~ excited when they heard they were headed to a seaside school located on a southern island.		Heading back to the academy would probably be enough to allow them time to relax, but the reason for giving them a rest day on the island had the same simple meaning as giving candy to a child. Especially for the main school, there were quite a lot of students who had gotten excited when they heard that they were headed to a seaside school located on a southern island.

	During the night before the final day everyone was excited for-----		During the night before the final day everyone was excited for-----
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	Julie, Tomoe, Miyabi, Kibitsu and one more person were from the main school.		Julie, Tomoe, Miyabi, Kibitsu and one more person were from the main school.

	3 girls ~~and Imari~~ were from the branch school.		Imari and three other girls were from the branch school.

	There were a total of 9 girls there snacking on candies while talking.		There were a total of 9 girls there snacking on candies while talking.

	They ~~are~~ the group that ~~has~~ gotten the closest in ~~these~~ 5 days of training.		They were the group that had gotten the closest in those 5 days of training.

	The conversation started with what they should do tomorrow, but it changed to a very ordinary topic ~~now~~.		The conversation started with what they should do tomorrow, but then it changed to a very ordinary topic.

	It was getting late into the night and------		It was getting late into the night and------
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	---that’s what she thought but, only one person responded from there.		---that’s what she thought but, only one person responded from there.

	The 4 people that did not respond-----Julie, Tomoe, and Kibitsu made an expression as if they ~~have~~ no idea what she meant. Miyabi twitched her shoulders for only an instant, but luckily there was no one that noticed that.		The people that did not respond-----Julie, Tomoe, and Kibitsu made an expression as if they had no idea what she meant. Miyabi twitched her shoulders for only an instant, but luckily there was no one that noticed that.

	“What do you mean by that?”		“What do you mean by that?”
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	“It’s about, is there a boy you are thinking about, Tomoe”		“It’s about, is there a boy you are thinking about, Tomoe”

	The main school girl ~~guided~~ here and Tomoe nodded as if she understood.		The other main school girl guidedthe discussion here and Tomoe nodded as if she understood.

	“……………Fumu. If you say it’s thinking about then, it’s going to be Tora or Kokonoe I guess”		“……………Fumu. If you say it’s just thinking about, then it’s going to be Tora or Kokonoe I guess”

	6 girls excluding Julie and Kibitsu reacted to Tomoe’s words.		6 girls excluding Julie and Kibitsu reacted to Tomoe’s words.
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	6 girls excluding Julie and Kibitsu reacted to Tomoe’s words again------rather, they collapsed.		6 girls excluding Julie and Kibitsu reacted to Tomoe’s words again------rather, they collapsed.

	“Ahaha……….It’s that so-called girl talk and the ~~standard~~ for it are love talks………..”		“Ahaha……….It’s that so-called girl talk and the standards for it are love talks………..”

	Tomoe turned red when she realized it was a misunderstanding after hearing Imari’s explanation of the topic while making a wry smile.		Tomoe turned red when she realized it was a misunderstanding after hearing Imari’s explanation of the topic while making a wry smile.
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	“Sorry, I just thought………”		“Sorry, I just thought………”

	After some of them laughed at Tomoe’s reaction, one girl from the branch school opened her mouth ~~this time~~.		After some of them laughed at Tomoe’s reaction, one girl from the branch school opened her mouth next.

	[There are a lot of cool guys in the main school right? Like Izumi-kun. Judging by the failures in the branch school, it’s an envious thing] [It’s better to be careful around him since he likes girls]		[There are a lot of cool guys in the main school right? Like Izumi-kun. Judging by the failures we have in the branch school, it’s an envious thing] [It’s better to be careful around him since he likes girls]

	[Ah, I think I’ll pick Tora-kun. He is small and cute] [But isn’t he kind of scary?] [I will definitely pick Tatsu-kun! Guys with muscles are awesome] [[[No way]]]		[Ah, I think I’ll pick Tora-kun. He is small and cute] [But isn’t he kind of scary?] [I will definitely pick Tatsu-kun! Guys with muscles are awesome] [[[No way]]]

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	On the sea 180 km southeast ~~from~~ Tokyo, in an island that's blocked from the public------		On the sea 180 km southeast of Tokyo, on an island that's blocked from the public------

	The 2nd morning of the seaside school came to greet us.		The 2nd morning of the seaside school came to greet us.
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	I exited the tent without waking Julie up and Tachibana laughed when I headed to the meeting spot while yawning. Unlike me, it seems Tachibana was already completely awake and giving out her usual dignified atmosphere.		I exited the tent without waking Julie up and Tachibana laughed when I headed to the meeting spot while yawning. Unlike me, it seems Tachibana was already completely awake and giving out her usual dignified atmosphere.

	I left the hall lined up with the tents to avoid waking everyone else up and headed to the forest path reaching ~~to the harbor~~ from the branch school.		I left the hall lined up with the tents to avoid waking everyone else up and headed to the forest path reaching from the branch school to the harbor.

	Maybe most of the animals living in the island were still sleeping but, I could occasionally hear the sound of birds ~~chirpping~~; basically it was very quiet. The air in this untouched island smells nice and after I took a good sniff of the clear air into my chest, the morning just like what I go through in the main school started.		Maybe most of the animals living in the island were still sleeping, but I could occasionally hear the sound of birds chirping; basically it was very quiet. The air in this untouched island smells nice and after I took a good sniff of the clear air into my chest, the morning just like what I go through in the main school started.

	“Okay then, let’s begin from the first like usual. Start”		“Okay then, let’s begin from the first like usual. Start”
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	I made a stance first and it was a basic move where I only can move my back feet.		I made a stance first and it was a basic move where I only can move my back feet.

	I then moved to the next 8th style basic move and advanced forward while changing my step in leg’s axis just like what Tachibana taught me. ~~The~~ technique of sometimes turning around or half around with the technique of turning to the opposite direction was the combination I used to throw Imari when I fought her on the first day.		I then moved to the next 8th style basic move and advanced forward while changing my step in leg’s axis just like what Tachibana taught me. This technique of sometimes turning around or half around coupled with the technique of turning to the opposite direction was the combination I used to throw Imari when I fought her on the first day.

	The last was the middle line--------I started the Tachibana style Himonho technique which consists of me turning around Tachibana without showing most of my body vital points.		The last was the middle line--------I started the Tachibana style Himonho technique which consists of me turning around Tachibana without showing most of my body's vital points.

	I’ll be honest and say that this training is plain but, it's because I know how important the basics are that I concentrate and repeat it.		I’ll be honest and say that this training is plain, but it's because I know how important the basics are that I concentrate and repeat it.
	And I found something out because I was concentrating, and that’s--------		And I found something out because I was concentrating, and that’s--------

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	“More than everyone else!? Bu-but if that’s the case then Julie is more than me right!?”		“More than everyone else!? Bu-but if that’s the case then Julie is more than me right!?”

	“Tachibana joins me in morning training everyday like this and I had to turn around you the whole time when I am doing the Himonho right. In terms of being together longer, it would probably Julie. But, it feels as if Julie and my shoulders are lined up and we would see the same thing so……….most of the time we would be looking at the television”		“Tachibana joins me in morning training everyday like this and I had to turn around you the whole time when I am doing the Himonho right. In terms of being together longer, it would probably be Julie. But, it feels as if Julie and my shoulders are lined up and we would see the same thing so……….most of the time we would be looking at the television”

	“I-I see, more than Julie too huh………..”		“I-I see, more than Julie too huh………..”
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	“Eh, ah………Fu-fumu…….err, Tha-thank you…………”		“Eh, ah………Fu-fumu…….err, Tha-thank you…………”

	While fiddling her hair by twirling it around with her finger, Tachibana said her thanks.		While fiddling with her hair by twirling it around with her finger, Tachibana said her thanks.

	I relaxed knowing that she understood that I seriously said that and was not teasing her.		I relaxed knowing that she understood that I seriously said that and was not teasing her.
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	“Is it okay? It's only been 2 months since I started learning you know”		“Is it okay? It's only been 2 months since I started learning you know”

	Even though I can smoothly perform the walks and body movements that I first learned ~~but,~~ it was not at the level where I can put my chest up proudly and say I mastered it completely.		Even though I can smoothly perform the walks and body movements that I first learned it was not at the level where I can put my chest up proudly and say I mastered it completely.

	When I asked whether is it okay to go to the next stage with this hasty knowledge------		When I asked whether is it okay to go to the next stage with this hasty knowledge------

	“It's okay. It’s true that grasping the basics is important and, the thing really needed is not to understand the surface techniques but rather to grasp the true nature of it. In order for that, the most important thing is to gain experience. If you don’t get it then, you won’t be able to grasp the nature right?”		“It's okay. It’s true that grasping the basics is important and the thing really needed is not to understand the surface techniques but rather to grasp the true nature of it. In order for that, the next most important thing is to gain experience. If you don’t get it then you won’t be able to grasp the nature, right?”

	Of course, Tachibana sums it up by telling me continue what I learned before when I have time, before making a smile.		Of course, Tachibana sums it up by telling me continue what I learned before when I have time, before making a smile.
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	Hard training ~~continues in~~ the ~~remaining~~ 2nd day of the seaside school.		Hard training continued for the rest of the 2nd day of the seaside school.

	~~Not only were there battle training and battle training we usually go through in the main school, we would also get survival training, and rock climbing using the islands terrain with traps set up.~~

	In this tough training, we would not escape getting hurt if we ~~don’t~~ concentrate and since the contents of the training usually ~~comes~~ with dangers, we go through every day without relaxing.
			Not only was there the battle training we usually go through in the main school, but we would also get survival training and rock climbing using the islands terrain with traps set up.

			In this tough training we would not escape getting hurt if we didn’t concentrate, and since the contents of the training usually came with dangers we went through the every day without relaxing.


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	“Haaa…………..Haaa………!”		“Haaa…………..Haaa………!”

	I was dripping in ~~sweating~~ while running deep inside the dark forest even though it was the in the afternoon.		I was dripping in sweat while running deep inside the dark forest even though it was the in the afternoon.

	The temperature today was the highest among these past few days and it was quite tough.		The temperature today was the highest among these past few days and it was quite tough.

Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 - Revision history

SNovah: Changed a few things that *really* stuck out. Tried to leave as much of the original TL/editor work in place while making it less jarring for a native ENG reader

199.245.32.210: /* Part 2 */

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

RikiNutcase at 04:17, 27 August 2014

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

RikiNutcase at 01:44, 27 August 2014

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

69.114.187.179: /* Chapter 4 『I Wanted To Be Together Longer』 */

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371849 by Simon (talk)

SNovah: Changed a few things that really stuck out. Tried to leave as much of the original TL/editor work in place while making it less jarring for a native ENG reader