Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 6 - Revision history

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2021-03-30T23:18:20Z

First pass for punctuation, some sentences/word order

RikiNutcase at 01:34, 29 August 2014

2014-08-29T01:34:35Z

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	Imari was the one surprised when she saw the battle in the hall from the office. Lilith stopped her saying that it’s better not to head outside and she remained there looking at the situation outside the room.		Imari was the one surprised when she saw the battle in the hall from the office. Lilith stopped her saying that it’s better not to head outside and she remained there looking at the situation outside the room.

	If Imari was in the hall, she ~~dit~~ not know if she ~~would be~~ this calm.		If Imari was in the hall, she would not know if she could remain this calm.

	With a window frame between her and the scene, she could be somewhat remain calm while looking at the scene in front of her.		With a window frame between her and the scene, she could be somewhat remain calm while looking at the scene in front of her.

	“I knew this from the data but, it’s still amazing” ~~Lilith mumbled.~~		“I knew this from the data but, it’s still amazing”

	“The low accuracy is a flaw in the crystal though” Sakuya responded to her comments.		“The low accuracy is a flaw in the crystal though”

			Lilith mumbled,and Sakuya responded to her comments.

	However, it was true that there was no more trustworthy existence than her in this current situation.		However, it was true that there was no more trustworthy existence than her in this current situation.

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-28T16:43:18Z

Part 1

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	When I looked at Tachibana’s face, she was making an expression as if she was having issue trying to say something.		When I looked at Tachibana’s face, she was making an expression as if she was having issue trying to say something.

	“Li-like I said…….. St-st-strip off my p-~~pantyhose~~ and use it…………”		“Li-like I said…….. St-st-strip off my l-leotard and use it…………”

	“I see, your ~~pantyhose~~. I get it!”		“I see, your leotard. I get it!”

	Its elasticity and length was enough. I had no objections using it as a bandage substitute.		Its elasticity and length was enough. I had no objections using it as a bandage substitute.

	“…………….strip your----~~pantyhose~~?”		“…………….strip your----leotard?”

	I regained my senses here.		I regained my senses here.
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	Thinking about the injuries on her shoulder and body, it’s true that her words are correct but-----		Thinking about the injuries on her shoulder and body, it’s true that her words are correct but-----

	“T-that’s why, I want you to strip off ~~my………pantyhose~~ with……your hands……..”		“T-that’s why, I want you to strip off my………leotard with……your hands……..”

	She looked dazed half-way through her words.		She looked dazed half-way through her words.
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	“hnn……….”		“hnn……….”

	She twitched her shoulders when I placed my fingers on her ~~pantyhose’s~~ waistband.		She twitched her shoulders when I placed my fingers on her leotard’s waistband.

	After I pulled away my fingers in surprise, Tachibana looked at me meekly and apologized.		After I pulled away my fingers in surprise, Tachibana looked at me meekly and apologized.
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	I made her slightly lift her hips but, it hurts my heart to see her breath roughly.		I made her slightly lift her hips but, it hurts my heart to see her breath roughly.

	But since I had no choice of stopping here, I started pulling down the ~~pantyhose~~ again----and half-way, my finger got caught on something.		But since I had no choice of stopping here, I started pulling down the leotard again----and half-way, my finger got caught on something.

	“What? Strings……?”		“What? Strings……?”
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	(My mouth is the one causing disaster huh……….)		(My mouth is the one causing disaster huh……….)

	While reflecting on my mistake, I vow to pull her ~~pantyhose~~ down silently from now on------I planned to vow but.		While reflecting on my mistake, I vow to pull her leotard down silently from now on------I planned to vow but.

	“Fuu…………Hnn, ah…………..Nuuuuu……….A-ahh, Haaan………Kokonoe, your fingers are, haaa……..”		“Fuu…………Hnn, ah…………..Nuuuuu……….A-ahh, Haaan………Kokonoe, your fingers are, haaa……..”
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	“So-sorry………Errr, I am continuing”		“So-sorry………Errr, I am continuing”

	While feeling awkward, I started pulling down her ~~pantyhose~~ again.		While feeling awkward, I started pulling down her leotard again.

	“Hnn, Haaa………..a,Hnkuh………..Fuaa-a-a-aaaaa………”		“Hnn, Haaa………..a,Hnkuh………..Fuaa-a-a-aaaaa………”
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	That’s because I found a familiar parka washed ashore at the rocky area.		That’s because I found a familiar parka washed ashore at the rocky area.

	I wouldn't have had to use her ~~pantyhose~~.		I wouldn't have had to use her leotard.

	“”…………………””		“”…………………””

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-28T13:49:27Z

Part 2

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JFerg: /* Chapter 6 『Devour it』 */

2014-08-28T12:07:55Z

Chapter 6 『Devour it』

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Mashiro: /* Chapter 6 『Devour it』 */

2014-07-20T16:30:48Z

Chapter 6 『Devour it』

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Bakapervert: /* Chapter 6 『Devour it』 */

2014-05-24T11:43:58Z

Chapter 6 『Devour it』

RikiNutcase at 06:51, 24 May 2014

2014-05-24T06:51:49Z

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	She then slowly lifted her face.		She then slowly lifted her face.

	“Errr-errr, Tooru-kun………..y want you to listen……..you might heard this just now but……but even so, I want you to listen………..!”		“Errr-errr, Tooru-kun………..i want you to listen……..you might heard this just now but……but even so, I want you to listen………..!”

	Her face was so red that it could not get any redder but she continued starting straight at me-----		Her face was so red that it could not get any redder but she continued starting straight at me-----
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	That’s why, it’s obvious to stop wasting time with Lealith, and prevent Sakuya from running away------- he prepared a gun in order to finish this quickly.		That’s why, it’s obvious to stop wasting time with Lealith, and prevent Sakuya from running away------- he prepared a gun in order to finish this quickly.

	~~The~~ gun that caused an explosion ~~echoes~~ until the office ~~just now~~-----a grenade launcher.		It was the gun that caused that loud explosion that could be heard until the office-----a grenade launcher.

	A moment before he pulled the trigger, Lealith noticed <<K>>’s posture and got shocked.		A moment before he pulled the trigger, Lealith noticed <<K>>’s posture and got shocked.

Dual Blades: /* Part 2 */ The gun that caused an explosion echoes until the office just now, need to fix this sentence.

2014-05-24T06:37:27Z

Part 2: The gun that caused an explosion echoes until the office just now, need to fix this sentence.

Dual Blades: /* Part 1 */ Does he mean he not wearing the parka or anything on his upper body? Even though I helped in - help is probably the wrong word. she leaked puffing breath, puffing breath doesn't flow well.

2014-05-24T06:25:21Z

Part 1: Does he mean he not wearing the parka or anything on his upper body? Even though I helped in - help is probably the wrong word. she leaked puffing breath, puffing breath doesn't flow well.

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	She then slowly lifted her face.		She then slowly lifted her face.

	“Errr-errr, Tooru-kun………..i want you to listen……..you might heard this just now but……but even so, I want you to listen………..!”		“Errr-errr, Tooru-kun………..I want you to listen……..you might heard this just now but……but even so, I want you to listen………..!”

	Her face was so red that it could not get any redder but she continued starting straight at me-----		Her face was so red that it could not get any redder but she continued starting straight at me-----
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	She told me what’s in her heart.		She told me what’s in her heart.

	“I love you………it might not have been long since we met but……..but even so, I love you. Ever since Tooru-kun told me that you would be lonely if I left………….i was in love with you……..that’s why……..that’s why, I really love Tooru-kun…..!!”		“I love you………it might not have been long since we met but……..but even so, I love you. Ever since Tooru-kun told me that you would be lonely if I left………….I was in love with you……..that’s why……..that’s why, I really love Tooru-kun…..!!”

	Even though the sound of the waves was echoing, that confession clearly reached me.		Even though the sound of the waves was echoing, that confession clearly reached me.

	I-----was ~~shock~~ while at the same time somehow predicted this.		I-----was shocked while at the same time somehow predicted this.

	I thought of this possibility during the afternoon, when I went looking for shells with Miyabi.		I thought of this possibility during the afternoon, when I went looking for shells with Miyabi.
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	Those wavers moved and the doubt slowly changed to fear.		Those wavers moved and the doubt slowly changed to fear.

	It changed to the fear of my everyday life filled with happy laughter and peace, one day turning to that summer day; my past ~~with~~ filled with anger, hate, and sadness.		It changed to the fear of my everyday life filled with happy laughter and peace, one day turning to that summer day; my past filled with anger, hate, and sadness.

	I must not forget.		I must not forget.
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	It was true that I have a small affection to her.		It was true that I have a small affection to her.

	But, but even so, i-----		But, but even so, I-----

	I can’t throw away my revenge.		I can’t throw away my revenge.
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	“I’m not happy at all if I am popular with you old man…….”		“I’m not happy at all if I am popular with you old man…….”

	The man is no showing any weakness even though we were talking. The gun was normally just aimed at us.		The man is not showing any weakness even though we were talking. The gun was normally just aimed at us.

	The hatred of me was probably boiling but, it seems he was calm in battle aspects. He probably lost to me because he made light of me during our last confrontation.		The hatred of me was probably boiling but, it seems he was calm in battle aspects. He probably lost to me because he made light of me during our last confrontation.
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	I could hear a weak call mixed with that sound.		I could hear a weak call mixed with that sound.

	(Wh-where is this……..? What was ~~i……~~..i was searching for for Miyabi and……)		(Wh-where is this……..? What was I……..I was searching for for Miyabi and……)

	Inside my cloudy conscious, I wondered why I am lying down on a place like this.		Inside my cloudy conscious, I wondered why I am lying down on a place like this.
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	As expected, I just had to tell her after she leaked puffing breath.		As expected, I just had to tell her after she leaked puffing breath.

	“Don’t call it weird……..! I can’t help it since your fingers have been touching my thighs and its ticklish………..i am just bad with tickles………!”		“Don’t call it weird……..! I can’t help it since your fingers have been touching my thighs and its ticklish………..I am just bad with tickles………!”

	Either it was anger or troubled, Tachibana was showing one of those expressions.		Either it was anger or troubled, Tachibana was showing one of those expressions.
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	Something is happening.		Something is happening.

	Although I don’t what it was, I continued running while an uneasy feeling was in my body-----		Although I don’t know what it was, I continued running while an uneasy feeling was in my body-----

	“Iyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!”		“Iyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!”
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	“What’s wrong?”		“What’s wrong?”

	Since there was an emergency in the main school, ~~Sakuya’s~~ was irritated without it being shown in her face.		Since there was an emergency in the main school, Sakuya was irritated without it being shown in her face.

	However, the anger was mixed into her voice and both of them that entered the room got overwhelmed for an instant.		However, the anger was mixed into her voice and both of them that entered the room got overwhelmed for an instant.
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	This would be included in later curriculum but at the current point, since this was a technique not taught to them yet, it was only normal for them to say they don’t know.		This would be included in later curriculum but at the current point, since this was a technique not taught to them yet, it was only normal for them to say they don’t know.

	However, it was different for the teachers and staff graduated from Kouryou academy. They immediately noticed it was a HALO and judged that ~~a u-~~unscheduled abnormal situation completely irrelevant to the beach school training was happening.		However, it was different for the teachers and staff graduated from Kouryou academy. They immediately noticed it was a HALO and judged that an unscheduled abnormal situation completely irrelevant to the beach school training was happening.

	Intruders started landing one after another. They all have the same mechanical designed battle suits on, helmets covering their face leaving only the mouth and were holding assault rifles.		Intruders started landing one after another. They all have the same mechanical designed battle suits on, helmets covering their face leaving only the mouth and were holding assault rifles.
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	“I understand. I leave the rest to you”		“I understand. I leave the rest to you”

	Sakuya took a glance at the gold girl who gave out the orders, before leaving one sentence and disappearing into another entrance with a staff member. There were stairs in the door and ~~was~~ it was connected to an emergency evacuation pathway.		Sakuya took a glance at the gold girl who gave out the orders, before leaving one sentence and disappearing into another entrance with a staff member. There were stairs in the door and it was connected to an emergency evacuation pathway.

	“What do you mean by leave the rest to you…………what are you going to do, Lealith?”		“What do you mean by leave the rest to you…………what are you going to do, Lealith?”
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	If she was the target then, she thought that everything would end if she turns the table here.		If she was the target then, she thought that everything would end if she turns the table here.

	Sara was ~~surprise~~ at Lealith who made a big swing with her {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} while making a very natural smile.		Sara was surprised at Lealith who made a big swing with her {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} while making a very natural smile.

	“Ojou-sama!? No way, if ojou-sama is going to stay, I am-----“		“Ojou-sama!? No way, if ojou-sama is going to stay, I am-----“
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	“Sorry but, you’re not getting through”		“Sorry but, you’re not getting through”

	“Fufu, well looks who we have here………..it’s unexpected that you will be the one taking the role to stop us, Miss Bristol. I am greatly honored to see you. My name is <<K>>----~~Please~~ to meet you”		“Fufu, well looks who we have here………..it’s unexpected that you will be the one taking the role to stop us, Miss Bristol. I am greatly honored to see you. My name is <<K>>----Pleased to meet you”

	Lealith frowned at the unpleasant feeling coming from the polite but rude attitude.		Lealith frowned at the unpleasant feeling coming from the polite but rude attitude.
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	Offer declined-------but, the teenager never thought the offer would be accepted in the first place anyway.		Offer declined-------but, the teenager never thought the offer would be accepted in the first place anyway.

	Matching <<K>>’s words, he 3 man standing behind him step out.		Matching <<K>>’s words, the 3 man standing behind him step out.

	Under the watchful eyes of those arrow-like eyes, a 3 vs 1 battle started.		Under the watchful eyes of those arrow-like eyes, a 3 vs 1 battle started.
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	The enemy-<<K>> said his admiration at the sight of her magnificent footwork and blocking of his blade with the <<Rifle>>.		The enemy-<<K>> said his admiration at the sight of her magnificent footwork and blocking of his blade with the <<Rifle>>.

	“------nonetheless, we don’t have the time to dawdle around like this.		“------nonetheless, we don’t have the time to dawdle around like this.”

	<<K>>’s priority was to execute his mission.		<<K>>’s priority was to execute his mission.

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	“Excuse me”		“Excuse me”

	A staff member brought the ponytail girl t into the office, Sakuya and Lealith was in.		A staff member brought the ponytail girl into the office, Sakuya and Lealith was in.

	“What’s wrong?”		“What’s wrong?”
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	Lealith was the only one there that she has gone out together these past few days and somewhat understood about.		Lealith was the only one there that she has gone out together these past few days and somewhat understood about.

	Although she is a little selfish and follows her own pace, she basically has a frankly sociable personality and because of that, she has good relationship with the other students. She’s a beauty and although she knows it, she would not boast about it. She probably was confident about herself. She was so relaxed that it was unthinkable she is in the same age.		Although she is a little selfish and follows her own pace, she basically has a frankly sociable personality and because of that, she has a good relationship with the other students. She’s a beauty and although she knows it, she would not boast about it. She probably was confident about herself. She was so relaxed that it was unthinkable she is in the same age.

	And one more------She does not hide her affections to Tooru at all to the surroundings.		And one more------She does not hide her affections to Tooru at all to the surroundings.
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	The rabbit-ear girl-----Tsukimi Rito swung the <<{{Furigana\|Fang sword\|Tebutje}}>> in her hands.		The rabbit-ear girl-----Tsukimi Rito swung the <<{{Furigana\|Fang sword\|Tebutje}}>> in her hands.

	One guy in battle ~~suits~~ nearby jumped of her range and dodged it-----was what he tried to do.		One guy in a battle suit nearby jumped out of her range and dodged it-----was what he tried to do.

	The blade separated and suddenly extended its range.		The blade separated and suddenly extended its range.
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	Ordered by the leader, the attackers scattered and started shooting at Rito after taking some distance.		Ordered by the leader, the attackers scattered and started shooting at Rito after taking some distance.

	Although Rito was a <<{{Furigana\|V\|Level 5}}>> which is a <<High Level>>, not only was she outnumbered by the attackers with powers incomparable to normal people-----(What’s more they are even stronger compared to 2 months ago), they also have guns in their disposals.		Although Rito was a <<{{Furigana\|V\|Level 5}}>> which is a <<High Level>>, not only was she outnumbered by the attackers with powers incomparable to normal people-----(What’s more they are even stronger compared to 2 months ago), they also have guns at their disposals.

	Even though she knows she won’t lose, it was true that the damage would increase if this goes on.		Even though she knows she won’t lose, it was true that the damage would increase if this goes on.
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	After getting trampled one-sidedly, the Kouryou academy ~~swift~~ to counterattacking because of Rito’s <<Blaze>>.		After getting trampled one-sidedly, the Kouryou academy swiftly move to counterattacking because of Rito’s <<Blaze>>.

	The blades moved continuously slashed and slammed at the attackers one after another by Rito’s commands.		The blades moved continuously slashed and slammed at the attackers one after another by Rito’s commands.
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	Imari was the one surprised when she saw the battle in the hall from the office. Lealith stopped her saying that it’s better not to head outside and she remained there looking at the situation outside from the room.		Imari was the one surprised when she saw the battle in the hall from the office. Lealith stopped her saying that it’s better not to head outside and she remained there looking at the situation outside from the room.

	If Imari was in the hall, she ~~does~~ not know if she would be this calm.		If Imari was in the hall, she would not know if she would be this calm.

	With a window frame right between her and the scene, she can somewhat remain calm looking at the scene in front of her.		With a window frame right between her and the scene, she can be somewhat remain calm looking at the scene in front of her.

	“I knew this from the data but, it’s still amazing”		“I knew this from the data but, it’s still amazing”
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	“I understand. I leave the rest to you”		“I understand. I leave the rest to you”

	Sakuya took a glance at the gold girl who gave out the orders, before leaving one sentence and disappearing into another entrance with a staff. There were stairs in the door and was it was connected to an emergency evacuation pathway.		Sakuya took a glance at the gold girl who gave out the orders, before leaving one sentence and disappearing into another entrance with a staff member. There were stairs in the door and was it was connected to an emergency evacuation pathway.

	“What do you mean by leave the rest to you…………what are you going to do, Lealith?”		“What do you mean by leave the rest to you…………what are you going to do, Lealith?”
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	“I am obviously going to fight here”		“I am obviously going to fight here”

	As long as they have no clue to what the attackers real intentions were, Lealith’s top priority was to let Sakuya get away.		As long as they have no clue as to what the attackers real intentions were, Lealith’s top priority was to let Sakuya get away.

	If she was the target then, she thought that everything would end if she turns the table here.		If she was the target then, she thought that everything would end if she turns the table here.

	Sara ~~got~~ surprise at Lealith who made a big swing with her {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} while making a very natural smile.		Sara was surprise at Lealith who made a big swing with her {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} while making a very natural smile.

	“Ojou-sama!? No way, if ojou-sama is going to stay, I am-----“		“Ojou-sama!? No way, if ojou-sama is going to stay, I am-----“
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	“Fufu, well looks who we have here………..it’s unexpected that you will be the one taking the role to stop us, Miss Bristol. I am greatly honored to see you. My name is <<K>>----Please to meet you”		“Fufu, well looks who we have here………..it’s unexpected that you will be the one taking the role to stop us, Miss Bristol. I am greatly honored to see you. My name is <<K>>----Please to meet you”

	Lealith frowned at the unpleasant feeling coming from polite but rude attitude.		Lealith frowned at the unpleasant feeling coming from the polite but rude attitude.

	“Okay, Miss Bristol. I apologize after just meeting you but, we have to bring the <<Blaze Diabolica>> to <<Equipment smith>>-dono. We did not receive any orders to invite you this time so, please move away from there; it will be a great help if you make this quick………..”		“Okay, Miss Bristol. I apologize after just meeting you but, we have to bring the <<Blaze Diabolica>> to <<Equipment smith>>-dono. We did not receive any orders to invite you this time so, please move away from there; it will be a great help if you make this quick………..”
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	“I won’t say it twice. I already told you, you’re not getting through”		“I won’t say it twice. I already told you, you’re not getting through”

	“This is a disappointment but, we can just agree with you here and go back”		“This is a disappointment but, we can't just agree with you here and go back”

	“Then prepare yourself and come at me. I already charged up my energy to protect that cute girl today”		“Then prepare yourself and come at me. I already charged up my energy to protect that cute girl today”
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	The enemy-<<K>> said his admiration at the sight of her magnificent footwork and blocking of his blade with the <<Rifle>>.		The enemy-<<K>> said his admiration at the sight of her magnificent footwork and blocking of his blade with the <<Rifle>>.

	“------nonetheless, we don’t the time to dawdle around like this.		“------nonetheless, we don’t have the time to dawdle around like this.

	<<K>>’s priority was to execute his mission.		<<K>>’s priority was to execute his mission.
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	That’s why, it’s obvious to stop wasting time with Lealith, and prevent Sakuya from running away------- he prepared a gun in order to finish this quickly.		That’s why, it’s obvious to stop wasting time with Lealith, and prevent Sakuya from running away------- he prepared a gun in order to finish this quickly.

	The gun that caused an explosion echoes until the office just now-----~~the~~ grenade launcher.		The gun that caused an explosion echoes until the office just now-----a grenade launcher.

	A moment before he pulled the trigger, Lealith noticed <<K>>’s posture and got shocked.		A moment before he pulled the trigger, Lealith noticed <<K>>’s posture and got shocked.
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	“uhhh!! That isn’t funny!!”		“uhhh!! That isn’t funny!!”

	Immediately, the door ~~blast opened~~ together with a loud sound and the building shook.		Immediately, the door blasted open together with a loud sound and the building shook.


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	==Translation Notes and References==		==Translation Notes and References==