Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 7 - Revision history

SNovah: First pass for punctuation, some sentences/word order

2021-03-31T01:13:37Z

First pass for punctuation, some sentences/word order

199.245.32.210: /* Part 2 */

2015-01-19T22:45:31Z

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	I talked to Imari who held her hands behind her head and was looking away from me.		I talked to Imari who held her hands behind her head and was looking away from me.

	“Oh come on. Don’t make it sound like we will never meet again. ~~You~~ will just have to fulfill the cake promise the next time we meet, and repay the remaining 2 debts each time we meet again”		“Oh come on. Don’t make it sound like we will never meet again. I will just have to fulfill the cake promise the next time we meet, and repay the remaining 2 debts each time we meet again”

	“Next time huh……….”		“Next time huh……….”

199.245.32.210: /* Part 2 */

2015-01-19T22:44:39Z

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	“I could not fulfill the cake promise in the end”		“I could not fulfill the cake promise in the end”

	“Fufuu, it can’t be helped in this island without any shops. Nonetheless, it doesn’t change the fact it’s disappointing…………..aaah, I still have 3 debts left though”		“Fufuu, it can’t be helped in this island without any shops. Nonetheless, it doesn’t change the fact it’s disappointing…………..aaah, you still have 3 debts left though”

	I talked to Imari who held her hands behind her head and was looking away from me.		I talked to Imari who held her hands behind her head and was looking away from me.

199.245.32.210: /* Part 2 */

2015-01-19T22:33:25Z

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	“………….now that you have finish discussing, can I begin now? However, I will be moving my hands now”		“………….now that you have finish discussing, can I begin now? However, I will be moving my hands now”

	<<K>> pulled out two ~~knifes~~ from the circular storage on his hips, and prepared it with both his hands.		<<K>> pulled out two knives from the circular storage on his hips, and prepared it with both his hands.

	“Let’s go, <<K>>!!”		“Let’s go, <<K>>!!”

Kemm: /* Part 2 */

2014-12-28T23:32:02Z

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	--Iiiiinn…………..		--Iiiiinn…………..

	The sound stopped the same time Julie ~~feｌｌ~~ to her knees.		The sound stopped the same time Julie fell to her knees.

	(What the hell was that……….)		(What the hell was that……….)

Yoyoyo5678: grammar

2014-11-24T09:16:43Z

grammar

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	“Yes, Lilith! …………but, taking this guy alone is too much for me so, it would be a lifesaver if you finish it fast!”		“Yes, Lilith! …………but, taking this guy alone is too much for me so, it would be a lifesaver if you finish it fast!”

	Both the {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} and ponytail fluttered.		Both the {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} and ponytail were fluttered.

	Julie and I considered that aside and ran towards the big hole ahead.		Julie and I considered that aside and ran towards the big hole ahead.

RikiNutcase at 00:10, 24 November 2014

2014-11-24T00:10:42Z

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	“Yes, Lilith! …………but, taking this guy alone is too much for me so, it would be a lifesaver if you finish it fast!”		“Yes, Lilith! …………but, taking this guy alone is too much for me so, it would be a lifesaver if you finish it fast!”

	Both of the ~~girls fluttered their~~ {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} and ponytail.		Both the {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} and ponytail fluttered.

	Julie and I considered that aside and ran towards the big hole ahead.		Julie and I considered that aside and ran towards the big hole ahead.
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	“I'm counting on you! Please protect that girl-Sakuya, Tooru!! Julie I will count on you too, but tentatively though!!”		“I'm counting on you! Please protect that girl-Sakuya, Tooru!! Julie I will count on you too, but tentatively though!!”

	[Aah, I will definitely protect her!] [Ya---!]		[Aah, I will definitely protect her!] [Ja---!]

	We accepted Lilith’s request while running through.		We accepted Lilith’s request while running through.
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	“Julie, we're jumping!”		“Julie, we're jumping!”

	~~“Ya~~---!”		“Ja---!”

	There was no hesitation. We jumped through the fence and let our bodies dance in the air.		There was no hesitation. We jumped through the fence and let our bodies dance in the air.
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	“Sorry. I have to calm down”		“Sorry. I have to calm down”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	Since I managed to relax a bit thanks to Julie, I started talking to <<K>> while thinking about what we should do now.		Since I managed to relax a bit thanks to Julie, I started talking to <<K>> while thinking about what we should do now.
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	“We are going to continue attacking, Julie. It’s disadvantage to keep blocking in this small deck”		“We are going to continue attacking, Julie. It’s disadvantage to keep blocking in this small deck”

	~~“Ya~~---!”		“Ja---!”

	We charged in again. I went in front this time and released a hook from a distance-----but, this was a feint. I shifted to bending my body when I missed, and made a spinning side sweep with my leg. However, <<K>> slightly crouched down to dodge that too.		We charged in again. I went in front this time and released a hook from a distance-----but, this was a feint. I shifted to bending my body when I missed, and made a spinning side sweep with my leg. However, <<K>> slightly crouched down to dodge that too.
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	“Are you okay, Julie?”		“Are you okay, Julie?”

	~~“Ya~~--, no, problem………”		“Ja--, no, problem………”

	Her words do not match her state completely at all. Julie’s shoulder was going up and down while her breathing was in complete disarray.		Her words do not match her state completely at all. Julie’s shoulder was going up and down while her breathing was in complete disarray.
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	“Aah, Julie how about you?”		“Aah, Julie how about you?”

	~~“Ya~~--. It’s thanks to Tooru hugging me properly”		“Ja--. It’s thanks to Tooru hugging me properly”

	“I see. I would like to keep hugging you like this after this too but……….”		“I see. I would like to keep hugging you like this after this too but……….”
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	“Julie. I have a request. Will you listen?”		“Julie. I have a request. Will you listen?”

	~~“Ya~~----. I will listen to everything if it’s Tooru’s words”		“Ja----. I will listen to everything if it’s Tooru’s words”

	“……….that’s one crazy answer depending on the time and situation”		“……….that’s one crazy answer depending on the time and situation”
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	“I will stop his movements for an instant. I’ll leave that moment to you”		“I will stop his movements for an instant. I’ll leave that moment to you”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	<nowiki></nowiki>kokun after hitting her forehead, Julie leaned against the handrails.		<nowiki></nowiki>kokun after hitting her forehead, Julie leaned against the handrails.
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	“Lap? Well I don’t mind……….”		“Lap? Well I don’t mind……….”

	~~“Ya~~---. Then I will accept the offer”		“Ja---. Then I will accept the offer”

	Julie lay down her body and used my lap as a pillow.		Julie lay down her body and used my lap as a pillow.
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	“You’re not sleeping? I think you will feel more comfortable doing so you know”		“You’re not sleeping? I think you will feel more comfortable doing so you know”

	~~“Ya~~---. But, I need to ask something before that”		“Ja---. But, I need to ask something before that”

	Just when I thought what it is, she threw me a question.		Just when I thought what it is, she threw me a question.
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	“Let’s drink apple tea when we get back”		“Let’s drink apple tea when we get back”

	~~“Ya~~---♪“		“Ja---♪“

RikiNutcase at 02:04, 30 August 2014

2014-08-30T02:04:31Z

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	It seems <<K>> took Julie’s answer as a joke and clapped his hands.		It seems <<K>> took Julie’s answer as a joke and clapped his hands.

	“Okay then------let’s begin. The game where the winner would be given the princess and our lives ~~wuuld~~ be bet on the toss of the coin………..of course the winner would be me”		“Okay then------let’s begin. The game where the winner would be given the princess and our lives would be bet on the toss of the coin………..of course the winner would be me”

	The owner of those arrow-like eyes made a different kind of smile.		The owner of those arrow-like eyes made a different kind of smile.

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-30T01:48:59Z

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2014-08-28T18:38:43Z

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