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SNovah: /* Chapter 1 『Everyone Has Things They Don't Want To Say』 */

2021-03-31T21:50:56Z

Chapter 1 『Everyone Has Things They Don't Want To Say』

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	“Tooru. What’s that move?”		“Tooru. What’s that move?”

	Maybe he took a rest from his sparring; '''''Tora saw Hrungnir ~~and asked me.~~'''''		Maybe he took a rest from his sparring; '''''Tora saw Hrungnir''''' and asked me about it.

	I told him about my mastering this technique, that this technique got broken by <<K>> who found its weakness in the battle, and the name given to this technique-----		I told him about my mastering this technique, that this technique got broken by <<K>> who found its weakness in the battle, and the name given to this technique-----

SNovah: /* Part 2 */

2021-03-31T21:50:03Z

Part 2

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	The cause behind her fall into despair was that she had become a hindrance to him because of her weakness.		The cause behind her fall into despair was that she had become a hindrance to him because of her weakness.

	That’s why Miyabi yearns for ''''it''''.		That’s why Miyabi yearns for '''''it'''''.

	The one thing she wished and yearned for----was <<Power>>.		The one thing she wished and yearned for----was <<Power>>.

SNovah: Fixing reference links

2021-03-31T21:45:32Z

Fixing reference links

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	After I laughed back at Tora, I stood in front of the mirror.		After I laughed back at Tora, I stood in front of the mirror.

	“Shadow training?”<ref group="4a">Best guess that this is what the writer/TL meant; basically the same thing as "shadow boxing", it's intended to let a person check their own form~~. The use of the mirror might be because of how this Duo fights, and allows Tooru to view what Julie is doing~~.</ref>		“Shadow training?”<ref group="4a">Best guess that this is what the writer/TL meant; basically the same thing as "shadow boxing", it's intended to let a person check their own form.</ref>

	“Aah. There’s something I want to confirm. Julie, try making some strikes?”		“Aah. There’s something I want to confirm. Julie, try making some strikes?”

SNovah at 21:44, 31 March 2021

2021-03-31T21:44:30Z

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	Having had her identity revealed already, she didn't hesitate to reveal her real-self anymore in response to the student's teasing.		Having had her identity revealed already, she didn't hesitate to reveal her real-self anymore in response to the student's teasing.

	“The gold and silver girls fighting over a guy there. HR is going to start so, hurry up and end the Shuraba<ref group="4b">A quick search indicates that this word is used to mean "scene of bloodshed", "carnage", etc; basically, Tsukimi is implying that the contest over Tooru is about to turn violent, and homeroom isn't the time for that</ref> love triangle with the couple and mistress.”		“The gold and silver girls fighting over a guy there. HR is going to start so, hurry up and end the Shuraba<ref group="4a">A quick search indicates that this word is used to mean "scene of bloodshed", "carnage", etc; basically, Tsukimi is implying that the contest over Tooru is about to turn violent, and homeroom isn't the time for that</ref> love triangle with the couple and mistress.”

	“It’s not a Shuraba or anything!”		“It’s not a Shuraba or anything!”
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	After I laughed back at Tora, I stood in front of the mirror.		After I laughed back at Tora, I stood in front of the mirror.

	“Shadow training?”<ref group="4c">Best guess that this is what the writer/TL meant; basically the same thing as "shadow boxing", it's intended to let a person check their own form. The use of the mirror might be because of how this Duo fights, and allows Tooru to view what Julie is doing.</ref>		“Shadow training?”<ref group="4a">Best guess that this is what the writer/TL meant; basically the same thing as "shadow boxing", it's intended to let a person check their own form. The use of the mirror might be because of how this Duo fights, and allows Tooru to view what Julie is doing.</ref>

	“Aah. There’s something I want to confirm. Julie, try making some strikes?”		“Aah. There’s something I want to confirm. Julie, try making some strikes?”
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	What’s more-----		What’s more-----

	“Oh it’s simple. I am acquainted with Tsukumo-Jou-chan<ref group="4d">"Jou-chan" is shorthand for "ojou-chan"; basically, he's saying "Young Lady Tsukumo", or "Little Lady Tsukumo" might be more accurate.</ref>.”		“Oh it’s simple. I am acquainted with Tsukumo-Jou-chan<ref group="4a">"Jou-chan" is shorthand for "ojou-chan"; basically, he's saying "Young Lady Tsukumo", or "Little Lady Tsukumo" might be more accurate.</ref>.”

	“Eh………? Errr----Tsukumo? Is that the director? Then Ojii-chan is part of the research team?”		“Eh………? Errr----Tsukumo? Is that the director? Then Ojii-chan is part of the research team?”
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	==Translation Notes and References==		==Translation Notes and References==

			<references group="4a" />

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	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

SNovah: /* Chapter 1 『Everyone Has Things They Don't Want To Say』 */

2021-03-31T21:42:16Z

Chapter 1 『Everyone Has Things They Don't Want To Say』

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	Replies and prattling could be heard in the classroom in response to Tsukimi's greeting.		Replies and prattling could be heard in the classroom in response to Tsukimi's greeting.

	The thing different from last time was that she was being called “White Usa<ref group ="1a">"Usa" generally means "rabbit", but in this context, "bunny" is arguably more accurate, given Tsukimi's... fashion choices.</ref>."		The thing different from last time was that she was being called “White Usa<ref group ="4a">"Usa" generally means "rabbit", but in this context, "bunny" is arguably more accurate, given Tsukimi's... fashion choices.</ref>."

	The reason for that was-----		The reason for that was-----
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	Having had her identity revealed already, she didn't hesitate to reveal her real-self anymore in response to the student's teasing.		Having had her identity revealed already, she didn't hesitate to reveal her real-self anymore in response to the student's teasing.

	“The gold and silver girls fighting over a guy there. HR is going to start so, hurry up and end the Shuraba<ref group="1b">A quick search indicates that this word is used to mean "scene of bloodshed", "carnage", etc; basically, Tsukimi is implying that the contest over Tooru is about to turn violent, and homeroom isn't the time for that</ref> love triangle with the couple and mistress.”		“The gold and silver girls fighting over a guy there. HR is going to start so, hurry up and end the Shuraba<ref group="4b">A quick search indicates that this word is used to mean "scene of bloodshed", "carnage", etc; basically, Tsukimi is implying that the contest over Tooru is about to turn violent, and homeroom isn't the time for that</ref> love triangle with the couple and mistress.”

	“It’s not a Shuraba or anything!”		“It’s not a Shuraba or anything!”
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	After I laughed back at Tora, I stood in front of the mirror.		After I laughed back at Tora, I stood in front of the mirror.

	“Shadow training?”<ref group="1c">Best guess that this is what the writer/TL meant; basically the same thing as "shadow boxing", it's intended to let a person check their own form. The use of the mirror might be because of how this Duo fights, and allows Tooru to view what Julie is doing.</ref>		“Shadow training?”<ref group="4c">Best guess that this is what the writer/TL meant; basically the same thing as "shadow boxing", it's intended to let a person check their own form. The use of the mirror might be because of how this Duo fights, and allows Tooru to view what Julie is doing.</ref>

	“Aah. There’s something I want to confirm. Julie, try making some strikes?”		“Aah. There’s something I want to confirm. Julie, try making some strikes?”
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	What’s more-----		What’s more-----

	“Oh it’s simple. I am acquainted with Tsukumo-Jou-chan<ref group="1c">"Jou-chan" is shorthand for "ojou-chan"; basically, he's saying "Young Lady Tsukumo", or "Little Lady Tsukumo" might be more accurate.</ref>.”		“Oh it’s simple. I am acquainted with Tsukumo-Jou-chan<ref group="4d">"Jou-chan" is shorthand for "ojou-chan"; basically, he's saying "Young Lady Tsukumo", or "Little Lady Tsukumo" might be more accurate.</ref>.”

	“Eh………? Errr----Tsukumo? Is that the director? Then Ojii-chan is part of the research team?”		“Eh………? Errr----Tsukumo? Is that the director? Then Ojii-chan is part of the research team?”

SNovah: Major pass, fixing punctuation, tenses, sentences, etc

2021-03-31T21:39:14Z

Major pass, fixing punctuation, tenses, sentences, etc

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Darklor at 09:23, 21 November 2014

2014-11-21T09:23:38Z

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	Whether it’s the last matter or the last attack, Tora has been helping out a lot.		Whether it’s the last matter or the last attack, Tora has been helping out a lot.

	“It’s not like I am worried about you, it just ~~feel~~ annoying……….and, that isn’t the only thing I want to talk about”		“It’s not like I am worried about you, it just feels annoying……….and, that isn’t the only thing I want to talk about”

	“Eh, there’s something else?”		“Eh, there’s something else?”

Mashiro: /* Part 1 */

2014-09-01T13:26:00Z

Part 1

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RikiNutcase at 14:24, 28 August 2014

2014-08-28T14:24:19Z

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	Having her identity questioned when her real-self was seen; she showed her snapped off appearance to everyone.		Having her identity questioned when her real-self was seen; she showed her snapped off appearance to everyone.

	“The gold and silver fighting over a guy there. HR is going to start so, hurry up and end the Shuraba triangle ~~relation~~ with the couple and mistress”		“The gold and silver fighting over a guy there. HR is going to start so, hurry up and end the Shuraba love triangle with the couple and mistress”

	“It’s not a Shuraba or anything”		“It’s not a Shuraba or anything”

Npeace: /* Chapter 1 『Is It Okay To Wish For It』 */

2014-08-28T09:29:32Z

Chapter 1 『Is It Okay To Wish For It』

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	==Chapter 1 ~~『Is It Okay~~ To ~~Wish For It』~~==		==Chapter 1 『Everyone Has Things They Don't Want To Say』==