Absolute Duo:Volume 4 Chapter 4 - Revision history

RikiNutcase at 01:57, 11 March 2015

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	I released the power and performed <<{{Furigana\|Thunder god’s strike\|Mjolnir}}>> on the inner side of the <<Shield>>.		I released the power and performed <<{{Furigana\|Thunder god’s strike\|Mjolnir}}>> on the inner side of the <<Shield>>.

	I used it my palm and not with my fist; the impact was passed through the <<Shield>>-----it’s a shield bash.		I used it with my palm and not with my fist; the impact was passed through the <<Shield>>-----it’s a shield bash.

	The transmitted impact destroyed the <<Power>> of the <<{{Furigana\|Ell.Libel\|God’s Destruction soldier}}>>.		The transmitted impact destroyed the <<Power>> of the <<{{Furigana\|Ell.Libel\|God’s Destruction soldier}}>>.

RikiNutcase at 04:28, 19 December 2014

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	ɳ̩==Chapter 4 『Why Won't You Look At Me?』==		==Chapter 4 『Why Won't You Look At Me?』==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

RikiNutcase: ....why?

2014-12-19T04:27:50Z

....why?

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	==Chapter 4 『Why Won't You Look At Me?』==		ɳ̩==Chapter 4 『Why Won't You Look At Me?』==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
	(Nothing strange could be felt, from what I could see…………)~~fgfgfgffgfgfgfgfgf~~		(Nothing strange could be felt, from what I could see…………)

	After finishing lunch, I looked at Miyabi who was walking further in front while using the road to the school from the dorm.		After finishing lunch, I looked at Miyabi who was walking further in front while using the road to the school from the dorm.

120.181.247.56 at 23:26, 18 December 2014

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
	(Nothing strange could be felt, from what I could see…………)		(Nothing strange could be felt, from what I could see…………)fgfgfgffgfgfgfgfgf

	After finishing lunch, I looked at Miyabi who was walking further in front while using the road to the school from the dorm.		After finishing lunch, I looked at Miyabi who was walking further in front while using the road to the school from the dorm.

RikiNutcase at 02:45, 12 September 2014

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	Once again-----I became perplexed on what I should do, now that she shown that weird side of her.		Once again-----I became perplexed on what I should do, now that she shown that weird side of her.

	However, in an unrelated matter, the conversation between the chairman and <<K>> was still ~~resuming (~~ongoing).		However, in an unrelated matter, the conversation between the chairman and <<K>> was still ongoing.

	“I will ignore that for today………okay then, can I ask you what kind of business do you have with us today?”		“I will ignore that for today………okay then, can I ask you what kind of business do you have with us today?”
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	I pushed away the guy that got dragged into this.		I pushed away the guy that got dragged into this.

	After I heard him call my ~~voice (~~name), the tip of the spear approached me.		After I heard him call my name, the tip of the spear approached me.

	I crossed my arms in reflex-----		I crossed my arms in reflex-----
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	Even Lilith couldn’t hide her bewilderment at the situation.		Even Lilith couldn’t hide her bewilderment at the situation.

	“Oh look what we have here, well if it isn’t Miss Bristol. It looks like Kokonoe Tooru misunderstood something but, we only gave her a choice-----she was the one that wanted <<Power>>……..though, the <<Unit>> given to her has the function of clouding the user’s decision (making) by strengthening their wishes”		“Oh look what we have here, well if it isn’t Miss Bristol. It looks like Kokonoe Tooru misunderstood something but, we only gave her a choice-----she was the one that wanted <<Power>>……..though, the <<Unit>> given to her has the function of clouding the user’s decision-making by strengthening their wishes”

	“Don’t screw with me!!”		“Don’t screw with me!!”
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	Even though it was to stop her, Julie swung her sword with a sad expression because she had to attack her friend.		Even though it was to stop her, Julie swung her sword with a sad expression because she had to attack her friend.

	Miyabi stabbed the <<{{Furigana\|Chivalry lance\|Lance}}>> into the ground and performed a pole vault to the air to dodge the straight slash. After taking away Julie’s mid-air specialty, Miyabi send a sharp and cold ~~sight (~~glare) to her before----kicking her.		Miyabi stabbed the <<{{Furigana\|Chivalry lance\|Lance}}>> into the ground and performed a pole vault to the air to dodge the straight slash. After taking away Julie’s mid-air specialty, Miyabi send a sharp and cold glare to her before----kicking her.

	Julie was unable to dodge the kick and took a direct hit.		Julie was unable to dodge the kick and took a direct hit.
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	“Thank you……..Tooru-kun…….”		“Thank you……..Tooru-kun…….”

	I ~~caught (stop)~~ Miyabi from falling.		I stopped Miyabi from falling.

	Although she was unconscious, I confirmed her breathing; whether she was breathing normally before I exhaled in relief.		Although she was unconscious, I confirmed her breathing; whether she was breathing normally before I exhaled in relief.
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	“That’s why Miyabi. Will you stay as my <<Duo>> from now on? Will you hold the feeling of getting stronger in your heart with me? Will you help straighten my path if I was led astray? Will you----become my real friend?”		“That’s why Miyabi. Will you stay as my <<Duo>> from now on? Will you hold the feeling of getting stronger in your heart with me? Will you help straighten my path if I was led astray? Will you----become my real friend?”

	The person to choose ~~(fulfill)~~ Tomoe’s wish which could be also called as desire, was Miyabi.		The person to choose Tomoe’s wish, which could be also called as desire, was Miyabi.

	Take Tomoe’s hand and stay in Kouryou academy.		Take Tomoe’s hand and stay in Kouryou academy.

Dual Blades: That’s basically plating the <> with-----“. Plating? Comparing makes more sense, plating means to cover or w/e.

2014-09-12T01:45:14Z

That’s basically plating the <<Unit>> with-----“. Plating? Comparing makes more sense, plating means to cover or w/e.

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Dual Blades at 00:19, 12 September 2014

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RikiNutcase at 23:50, 11 September 2014

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	I brushed of <<K>>’s sights by glaring back and shouted.		I brushed of <<K>>’s sights by glaring back and shouted.

	“But it’s different now! I found out that, the <<Lucifer>> won’t sublimate unless we improve ourselves more!! The <<Power>> gained from effort, suffering and regret isn’t called borrowed <<Power>>! It’s called real <<Power??!!”		“But it’s different now! I found out that, the <<Lucifer>> won’t sublimate unless we improve ourselves more!! The <<Power>> gained from effort, suffering and regret isn’t called borrowed <<Power>>! It’s called real <<Power>>!!”

	I moved my sights to Miyabi and told her.		I moved my sights to Miyabi and told her.

Dual Blades: When I thought about the many blood-sheds that occurred at this entrance. There weren't any fights with Libel destruction team at Kouryou. only the mall and seas side school.

2014-09-11T22:52:27Z

When I thought about the many blood-sheds that occurred at this entrance. There weren't any fights with Libel destruction team at Kouryou. only the mall and seas side school.

RikiNutcase: complete

2014-09-11T12:09:56Z

complete

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	This wasn’t the first time.		This wasn’t the first time.

	~~Few~~ days has passed since the weekends but, Miyabi has not shown that face that gave me chills since that day.		A few days has passed since the weekends but, Miyabi has not shown that face that gave me chills since that day.

	That was why I was wondering.		That was why I was wondering.
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	Was that smile just a dream?		Was that smile just a dream?

	Because I had that thought, I did not talk to-----~~and~~ even consult this with anyone.		Because I had that thought, I did not talk to-----or even consult this with anyone.

	Even though I thought that “will that uneasiness I felt at that time take shape if I talked about it”, the chances for it to happen was considerably high.		Even though I thought that “will that uneasiness I felt at that time take shape if I talked about it”, the chances for it to happen was considerably high.
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	That’s because I saw this helicopter before.		That’s because I saw this helicopter before.

	After I saw ~~the~~ giant wheel type helicopter-----the helicopter that I saw during <<Survive>> again, I felt goosebumps around my whole body.		After I saw this giant wheel type helicopter-----the helicopter that I saw during <<Survive>> again, I felt goosebumps around my whole body.

	“Tooru!!”		“Tooru!!”
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	[Tooru, Julie!?] [Tooru-kun!!]		[Tooru, Julie!?] [Tooru-kun!!]

	Even though I could hear Tachibana and Miyabi’s voice from behind, we didn’t stop our legs and headed towards the school.		Even though I could hear Tachibana's and Miyabi’s voice from behind, we didn’t stop our legs and headed towards the school.

	“Tooru, that’s…….!”		“Tooru, that’s…….!”

	Julie, who was one step slower than me, did not stop her legs and asked ~~the~~ confirmation from me.		Julie, who was one step slower than me, did not stop her legs and asked for confirmation from me.

	“Ahhh, it’s those bastards------the <<{{Furigana\|God’s Destruction Team\|Libel}}>> helicopters!!”		“Ahhh, it’s those bastards------the <<{{Furigana\|God’s Destruction Team\|Libel}}>>'s helicopters!!”

	The bad premonition I had just now happened in a different form.		The bad premonition I had just now happened in a different form.
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	(Is it another attack!? Or another goal!? Damn it, I never would have imagined that they would infiltrate here when it’s on full-alert and what’s more right in the day……..!!)		(Is it another attack!? Or another goal!? Damn it, I never would have imagined that they would infiltrate here when it’s on full-alert and what’s more right in the day……..!!)

	Suspicion and impatience ~~was~~ pushing my back while we reached the helicopters landing spot----the hall in front of the school. There were already 5 security members at the hall ~~and were~~ cautious at the helicopter.		Suspicion and impatience were pushing my back while we reached the helicopters landing spot----the hall in front of the school. There were already 5 security members at the hall, cautious about the helicopter.

	But, the security team ~~wasn’t~~ the only ones at the hall.		But, the security team weren’t the only ones at the hall.

	There were around 20 students heading back to the school from the dorm because it was lunch time but, they were looking at the helicopter from a distance.		There were around 20 students heading back to the school from the dorm because it was lunch time but, they were looking at the helicopter from a distance.
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	Whether they pick to run or fight, I have to change their mood before they are attacked unguarded.		Whether they pick to run or fight, I have to change their mood before they are attacked unguarded.

	However, those conscious disappeared the moment i saw one teenager with sharp eyes in the helicopter.		However, those conscious (thoughts) disappeared the moment I saw one teenager with sharp eyes in the helicopter.

	“<<K>>----------!!”		“<<K>>----------!!”

	My voice which echoed the sky got the attention from everyone in my surroundings.		My voice which echoed in the sky got the attention from everyone in my surroundings.

	“Long time no see------oh I guess it wasn’t ~~the~~ long since we last met. It is an honor to meet you this fast, Kokonoe Tooru”		“Long time no see------oh I guess it wasn’t that long since we last met. It is an honor to meet you this fast, Kokonoe Tooru”

	“I didn’t want to see your face though…..!!”		“I didn’t want to see your face though…..!!”
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	However, our surroundings were different. They might feel that a serious atmosphere was floating around us and <<K>> but, they were looking at us and were whispering speculations without understanding the situation.		However, our surroundings were different. They might feel that a serious atmosphere was floating around us and <<K>> but, they were looking at us and were whispering speculations without understanding the situation.

	It’s probably because they couldn’t feel any danger since <<K>> was not wearing his <<Unit>> and was in a neck tie ~~suits~~.		It’s probably because they couldn’t feel any danger since <<K>> was not wearing his <<Unit>> and was in a neck tie and suit.

	“Can you please not make such a scary face. Just like what you see now, I did not come here to fight you today”		“Can you please not make such a scary face. Just like what you see now, I did not come here to fight you today”
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	(Damn it, what do you mean by trouble, don’t screw with me…….!!)		(Damn it, what do you mean by trouble, don’t screw with me…….!!)

	When I thought about the many ~~bloodshed~~ that occurred at this entrance, I felt anger and couldn’t forgive him for using a simple word like trouble.		When I thought about the many blood-sheds that occurred at this entrance, I felt anger and couldn’t forgive him for using a simple word like trouble.

	At that moment, someone tapped my shoulders.		At that moment, someone tapped my shoulders.