Absolute Duo:Volume 4 Chapter 5 - Revision history

RikiNutcase at 07:37, 10 June 2015

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	“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is he?”		“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is he?”

	“I brought ~~that for~~ him here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”		“I brought him here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”

	“Hnnn, ~~it’s~~ not ~~to that extent but~~ I’ll pass”		“Hnnn, it's not a big deal so I’ll pass”

	While hearing the big man’s reply, Sakuya sat down and Mikuni stood behind his master.		While hearing the big man’s reply, Sakuya sat down and Mikuni stood behind his master.

RikiNutcase at 02:04, 30 March 2015

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	==Chapter 5 『If ~~Malice Fills~~ The ~~World』~~==		==Chapter 5 『If The World is Filled With Malice』==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
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	The chairman standing at the window turned around and told me this.		The chairman standing at the window turned around and told me this.

	“No matter how wonderful your determination may be, the world will not guarantee you its acceptance……………that is even more so, ~~since this~~ world is filled with ~~ill intents”~~		“No matter how wonderful your determination may be, the world will not guarantee you its acceptance……………that is even more so, if the world is filled with Malice”

	Ill intents will bear their fangs towards you no matter what determination one has.		Ill intents will bear their fangs towards you no matter what determination one has.
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	After the man called <<Phantom>> pointed to the chair, Sakuya walked over and-----		After the man called <<Phantom>> pointed to the chair, Sakuya walked over and-----

	“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is ~~that person~~?”		“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is he?”

	~~“That person is~~ here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”		“I brought that for him here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”

	“Hnnn, it’s not to that extent but I’ll pass”		“Hnnn, it’s not to that extent but I’ll pass”
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	After a little while, <<Phantom>> looked at the monitor that was going to display the outside situation, get brought into the room while sighing before mumbling to himself.		After a little while, <<Phantom>> looked at the monitor that was going to display the outside situation, get brought into the room while sighing before mumbling to himself.

	“<<Killing game>> huh………seriously, that’s one bloody name………well, let’s see how much you ~~have~~ grown huh”		“<<Killing game>> huh………seriously, that’s one bloody name………well, let’s see how much you grown huh”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

RikiNutcase at 02:01, 30 March 2015

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	After the man called <<Phantom>> pointed to the chair, Sakuya walked over and-----		After the man called <<Phantom>> pointed to the chair, Sakuya walked over and-----

	“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is he?”		“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is that person?”

	~~“I brought that for him~~ here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”		“That person is here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”

	“Hnnn, it’s not to that extent but I’ll pass”		“Hnnn, it’s not to that extent but I’ll pass”
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	After a little while, <<Phantom>> looked at the monitor that was going to display the outside situation, get brought into the room while sighing before mumbling to himself.		After a little while, <<Phantom>> looked at the monitor that was going to display the outside situation, get brought into the room while sighing before mumbling to himself.

	“<<Killing game>> huh………seriously, that’s one bloody name………well, let’s see how much you grown huh”		“<<Killing game>> huh………seriously, that’s one bloody name………well, let’s see how much you have grown huh”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Kemm: /* Chapter 5 『If Malice Fills The World』 */

2014-12-29T17:35:11Z

Chapter 5 『If Malice Fills The World』

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	She suddenly said that without looking at us.		She suddenly said that without looking at us.

	“<<Equipment Smith>>-----his real name is Edward=Walker, an expert of Mechanical Engineering; he’s an enthusiastic person that develops engine and propulsion systems, while on the other hand he develop things like artificial muscles……..if I remember correctly”		“<<Equipment Smith>>-----his real name is Edward Walker, an expert of Mechanical Engineering; he’s an enthusiastic person that develops engine and propulsion systems, while on the other hand he develop things like artificial muscles……..if I remember correctly”

	“Ojou-sama………!”		“Ojou-sama………!”
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	“Oh my, why if isn’t Tooru. You came to drink milk tea I guess”		“Oh my, why if isn’t Tooru. You came to drink milk tea I guess”

	With that one sentence, ~~Lealith~~ has implicitly ended the talk.		With that one sentence, Lilith has implicitly ended the talk.

	“Aah. I want the others to know about Sara’s milk tea too. Both of you sit down, it’s exquisite”		“Aah. I want the others to know about Sara’s milk tea too. Both of you sit down, it’s exquisite”

RikiNutcase at 12:26, 9 December 2014

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	~~==Translation Notes and References==~~

	{{SimpleNav}}		{{SimpleNav}}
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RikiNutcase at 13:20, 3 November 2014

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	The boat reached the dock for aquatic buses located at the riverside, which was among one of the several spots including the dummy place scheduled for us to dock as a pre-caution for surprise attacks.		The boat reached the dock for aquatic buses located at the riverside, which was among one of the several spots including the dummy place scheduled for us to dock as a pre-caution for surprise attacks.

	We met up with the ~~Etharch~~, and switch to a car.		We met up with the Ethnarch, and switch to a car.

	While taking caution for an attack from <<{{Furigana\|God’s Destruction Team\|Libel}}>>, the car shook around for 30 minutes and the curtains for night time fell-------nothing particular happened and the moment Tooru was told that he could see their destination, he made a relieved sigh.		While taking caution for an attack from <<{{Furigana\|God’s Destruction Team\|Libel}}>>, the car shook around for 30 minutes and the curtains for night time fell-------nothing particular happened and the moment Tooru was told that he could see their destination, he made a relieved sigh.

Bakapervert at 01:27, 20 September 2014

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	“The feelings of taking care of your partner <<Duo>>, it’s wonderful. Within the students in the same year, you are a skilled, smart, and excellent student so, I wanted you to experience the field as fast as possible but, it can’t be helped if you have that reason”		“The feelings of taking care of your partner <<Duo>>, it’s wonderful. Within the students in the same year, you are a skilled, smart, and excellent student so, I wanted you to experience the field as fast as possible but, it can’t be helped if you have that reason”

	“Thank you, Chairman.		“Thank you, Chairman."

	After making one nod to Tachibana, who bowed down, the chairman looked back at us again.		After making one nod to Tachibana, who bowed down, the chairman looked back at us again.
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	The plan for the new-model <<Lucifer>> was established during the several years the old man was missing.		The plan for the new-model <<Lucifer>> was established during the several years the old man was missing.

	This means that, there was no way for ~~Edwawrd~~ to know about the new-model and he currently holds more secrets than just the <<Lucifer>>.		This means that, there was no way for Edward to know about the new-model and he currently holds more secrets than just the <<Lucifer>>.

	(………….I should think that there is a traitor among us. Judging by the number of people that knows about confidential information, there are only a few but………..)		(………….I should think that there is a traitor among us. Judging by the number of people that knows about confidential information, there are only a few but………..)

RikiNutcase at 12:40, 19 September 2014

2014-09-19T12:40:09Z

Dual Blades: (If it’s only by atmosphere, she the most out of character here). Is Diva the one thinking that here or is it Sayuka.

2014-09-19T01:54:42Z

(If it’s only by atmosphere, she the most out of character here). Is Diva the one thinking that here or is it Sayuka.

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Dual Blades: Give me a break, I have to baby-sit oh give me a break, is the give me a break x2 repetitive? <> written inside Dawn organization’s secret data’s. Written down or about maybe.

2014-09-19T00:56:55Z

Give me a break, I have to baby-sit oh give me a break, is the give me a break x2 repetitive? <<Rien>> written inside Dawn organization’s secret data’s. Written down or about maybe.

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	“No need! Tooru, Julie, let’s go!!”		“No need! Tooru, Julie, let’s go!!”

	I understand Lilith’s position but, since I also understand Tora’s feeling for getting enraged, I was about to leave the room after ~~giving~~ up to gain info of the enemy.		I understand Lilith’s position but, since I also understand Tora’s feeling for getting enraged, I was about to leave the room after i given up trying to gain info of the enemy.

	“Sorry, Lilith. I’ll take your treat next time okay”		“Sorry, Lilith. I’ll take your treat next time okay”
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	I asked if there were any wounds on her from the check up but, I became relieved anyway.		I asked if there were any wounds on her from the check up but, I became relieved anyway.

	Even though I know it’s going to be alright since I attacked her with a ~~similar bashing-type~~ <<Blaze>> but, it was still fact that I launched <<{{Furigana\|Thunder god’s strike\|Mjolnir}}>> at Miyabi.		Even though I know it’s going to be alright since I attacked her with a <<Blaze>> similar to a blunt-type but, it was still fact that I launched <<{{Furigana\|Thunder god’s strike\|Mjolnir}}>> at Miyabi.

	“But, she will be there for a few days just in case after considering the influences she might get from her surroundings”		“But, she will be there for a few days just in case after considering the influences she might get from her surroundings”
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	“-----!! E-<<Equipment Smith>>….!?”		“-----!! E-<<Equipment Smith>>….!?”

	I ~~raised my~~ surprise when the chairman told me the unexpected name.		I shouted in surprise when the chairman told me the unexpected name.

	“Judging by that reaction, it seems you know about him to a certain extent”		“Judging by that reaction, it seems you know about him to a certain extent”
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	The chairman told us that there will be a fork path here.		The chairman told us that there will be a fork path here.

	“I don’t mind if anyone says that they want to ~~leave~~ this one ~~out~~ you know? All of you are still students after all”		“I don’t mind if anyone says that they want to pass on this one you know? All of you are still students after all”

	But-----not a single person wanted to leave it out.		But-----not a single person wanted to leave it out.
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	“I-in the first place, what did you come here for? We aren’t going together in this mission right”		“I-in the first place, what did you come here for? We aren’t going together in this mission right”

	“Well yeah. Give me a break, I have to baby-sit oh ~~give me a break…………”~~		“Well yeah. Give me a break, why do I have to baby-sit oh come on…………”

	Tsukimi placed her hands on my shoulders in an overly-friendly manner and it seems that she was made to house-watch to avoid causing any troubles there.		Tsukimi placed her hands on my shoulders in an overly-friendly manner and it seems that she was made to house-watch to avoid causing any troubles there.

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	“Tooru, we are going”		“Tooru, we are going”

	“Opps, I am coming”		“Opps, I'm coming”

	Right after I entered the boat, the boat engine started producing sound and we slowly started moving.		Right after I entered the boat, the boat engine started producing sound and we slowly started moving.
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	“……….Tooru”		“……….Tooru”

	When I looked behind, Julie, Lilith and Tora ~~was~~ looking at me.		When I looked behind, Julie, Lilith and Tora were looking at me.

	“Let’s protect our promise”		“Let’s protect our promise”
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	“Aah, of course. Let’s come back, everyone!”		“Aah, of course. Let’s come back, everyone!”

	3 of them made a strong nod at my words.		The 3 of them made a strong nod at my words.


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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	After 20 minutes, Tooru and the gang were no longer on the sea and were ascending ~~the~~ river.		After 20 minutes, Tooru and the gang were no longer on the sea and were ascending a river.

	The boat reached the dock for aquatic ~~busses~~ located at the riverside, which was among one of the several spots including the dummy place scheduled for us to dock as a pre-caution for surprise attacks.		The boat reached the dock for aquatic buses located at the riverside, which was among one of the several spots including the dummy place scheduled for us to dock as a pre-caution for surprise attacks.

	We met up with the Etharch, and switch to a car.		We met up with the Etharch, and switch to a car.

	While taking caution of an attack from <<{{Furigana\|God’s Destruction Team\|Libel}}>>, the car shook around for 30 minutes and curtains for night time fell-------nothing particular happened and the moment Tooru was told that he could see their destination, he made a relieved sigh.		While taking caution for an attack from <<{{Furigana\|God’s Destruction Team\|Libel}}>>, the car shook around for 30 minutes and the curtains for night time fell-------nothing particular happened and the moment Tooru was told that he could see their destination, he made a relieved sigh.

	However, Tooru opened his eyes wide immediately when he saw their destination.		However, Tooru opened his eyes wide immediately when he saw their destination.

	The area was surrounded with tall fences and after we passed through the door guard, the area was so wide that it was unbelievable that the premise was inside a metropolitan area and there was a western garden filled with properly organized flowers and shrubs.		The area was surrounded with tall fences and after we passed through the door guard, the area was so wide that it was unbelievable that the premise was inside a metropolitan area, and there was a western garden filled with properly organized flowers and shrubs.

	After a while of loitering into the garden, we reached the dazzling mansion that looked like a palace.		After a while of loitering into the garden, we reached the dazzling mansion that looked like a palace.
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	Even though she’s the <<Exception>>, she was powerless in this place controlled by the Dawn organization and could only see her off.		Even though she’s the <<Exception>>, she was powerless in this place controlled by the Dawn organization and could only see her off.

	After the two of them disappeared into the door which was twice as tall, the gold girl looked up at the building.		After the two of them disappeared into (pass) the door which was twice as tall, the gold girl looked up at the building.

	It looked like a carefree action at first glance but, it wasn’t peaceful inside her.		It looked like a carefree action at first glance but, it wasn’t peaceful inside her.
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	There was a wide atrium hall after passing through the door and there was a huge staircase leading to the 2nd floor inside.		There was a wide atrium hall after passing through the door and there was a huge staircase leading to the 2nd floor inside.

	Sakuya and Mikuni followed the guide up the ~~stair~~, and eventually stopped in front a big door.		Sakuya and Mikuni followed the guide up the stairs, and eventually stopped in front of a big door.

	“Over here please”		“Over here please”
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	After the guide pushed open the heavy door, Sakuya and Mikuni entered the luxurious room.		After the guide pushed open the heavy door, Sakuya and Mikuni entered the luxurious room.

	A dazzling chandelier was on the roof illuminating the room, a mat with a beautiful pattern was spread out on the floor and a luxurious round table was ~~place~~ in the middle.		A dazzling chandelier was on the roof (ceiling) illuminating the room, a mat with a beautiful pattern was spread out on the floor and a luxurious round table was placed in the middle.

	There were 7 chairs placed around the table and 4 of it were filled.		There were 7 chairs placed around the table and 4 of them were filled.

	Which means leaving aside Sakuya, who has just arrived, 2 people ~~has~~ not come yet.		Which means leaving aside Sakuya, who has just arrived, 2 people have not come yet.

	“You’re here, the <<Blaze>> Ojou-chan”		“You’re here, the <<Blaze>> Ojou-chan”
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	After the door behind Sakuya and Mikuni closed, a rude man putting his legs on the table talked to her.		After the door behind Sakuya and Mikuni closed, a rude man putting his legs on the table talked to her.

	The 40 year old man’s cheeks were a little red and it could be guessed that it was from drinking alcohol. When he stood up, his body crossed over 190cm and a normal person would be frightened if they ~~contront~~ him. However the man smiled and his teeth could be seen, making him feel friendly.		The 40 year old man’s cheeks were a little red and it could be guessed that it was from drinking alcohol. When he stood up, his body crossed over 190cm and a normal person would be frightened if they confront him. However the man smiled and his teeth could be seen, making him feel friendly.

	Sakuya pinched her gothic dress and lowered her head.		Sakuya pinched her gothic dress and lowered her head.

	“It has been a while, <<Grave Phantom>>-sama. And also, it’s nice meeting all the other <<Rein>> members. I am the one that inherited the <<Blaze>>----<<Diabolica>>. Nice to be your acquaintance”		“It has been a while, <<Grave Phantom>>-sama. And also, it’s nice meeting all the other <<Rein>> members. I am the one that inherited the <<Blaze>>----<<Diabolica>>. Nice to be (meet) your acquaintance”

	“Ouu, nice to meet you….ah, Jou-chan your seat is there so go ahead. The Onii-chan you brought has none so sorry”		“Ouu, nice to meet you….ah, Jou-chan your seat is there so go ahead. The Onii-chan you brought has none so sorry”

	“I will take you up ~~for~~ your words”		“I will take you up on your words”

	“No, I don’t mind”		“No, I don’t mind”
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	“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is he?”		“…………by the way Jou-chan, how is he?”

	“I brought that him here. You can go check if you ~~are~~ curious you know?”		“I brought that for him here. You can go check if you're curious you know?”

	“Hnnn, it’s not to that extent but I’ll pass”		“Hnnn, it’s not to that extent but I’ll pass”
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	“Okay then. Before we start, let’s introduce ourselves for the new face <<Diabolica>> here. First off, I am <<Grave Phantom>>. Nice to meet ya, Ojou-chan…………alright, next you, <<Disaster>>”		“Okay then. Before we start, let’s introduce ourselves for the new face <<Diabolica>> here. First off, I am <<Grave Phantom>>. Nice to meet ya, Ojou-chan…………alright, next you, <<Disaster>>”

	<<Phantom>> ~~Looked~~ towards the young man sitting at his left side.		<<Phantom>> looked towards the young man sitting at his left side.

	“…………<<Dark ~~ray~~ Disaster>>”		“…………<<Dark Ray Disaster>>”

	Not caring that it was in the summer, after the man slightly lifted his face which was half ~~ocvered~~ with a muffler, he took a glance at Sakuya before telling her his <<Sepher Name>>. He then lowered his sights to show that he had nothing more to say.		Not caring that it was in the summer, after the man slightly lifted his face which was half covered with a muffler, he took a glance at Sakuya before telling her his <<Sepher Name>>. He then lowered his sights to show that he had nothing more to say.

	But, hearing his <<Sepher name>> was more than enough for Sakuya.		But, hearing his <<Sepher name>> was more than enough for Sakuya.
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	Even though it wasn’t much, <<Rien>> written inside Dawn organization’s secret data’s.		Even though it wasn’t much, <<Rien>> written inside Dawn organization’s secret data’s.

	(A <<Holy knight>> affiliated to <<Holy>>)		(A <<Holy knight>> affiliated with <<Holy>>)

	A <<Holy knight>> is a title given to someone who is affiliated to the Anti-heretic organization <<Holy>>, which is a bureau that won’t see sunlight even within historical giant sects based in Western Europe. Above judging heretics in the name of god as a <<Holy Knight>>, he is rumored to have high battle abilities.		A <<Holy knight>> is a title given to someone who is affiliated with the Anti-heretic organization <<Holy>>, which is a bureau that won’t see sunlight even within historical giant sects based in Western Europe. Above judging heretics in the name of god as a <<Holy Knight>>, he is rumored to have high battle abilities.

	Also, since the Dawn organization’s biological enhancement nano-machines-<<Lucifer>> was a research ~~stray~~ from the path of god, they weren’t in good terms with <<Holy>>. Sakuya felt that the reason for <<Disaster>>’s unsociability was probably related to that.		Also, since the Dawn organization’s biological enhancement nano-machines-<<Lucifer>> was a research that strays from the path of god, they weren’t on good terms with <<Holy>>. Sakuya felt that the reason for <<Disaster>>’s unsociability was probably related to that.

	“Okay next goes to you, <<Diva>>”		“Okay next goes to you, <<Diva>>”

	<<Phantom>> moved his sights ~~and moved it~~ to the beauty with a tidy air around her, who was sitting beside Sakuya.		<<Phantom>> moved his sights to the beauty with a tidy air around her, who was sitting beside Sakuya.

	“It’s <<Silent Diva>>. We are both females so let’s be friends, <<Blaze Diabolica>>”		“It’s <<Silent Diva>>. We are both females so let’s be friends, <<Blaze Diabolica>>”