Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Chapter 1 - Revision history

Jokoril: /* Part 1 */

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	The people in this town believe that the goddess Nymphs blesses them with bountiful harvests and the lush forests that encircle the town, and because of this, Sellion is renowned as the City of Gardens that has been given blessings by the Goddess of Nature.		The people in this town believe that the goddess Nymphs blesses them with bountiful harvests and the lush forests that encircle the town, and because of this, Sellion is renowned as the City of Gardens that has been given blessings by the Goddess of Nature.

	They say that this fountain was not only built as a token of gratitude by the people of this city towards the goddess, but also as a place for people to wish for a romantic partner in life. Although, I think that last part is just a rumor, one that has been spurred on by the students of Sellion ~~magic academy~~.		They say that this fountain was not only built as a token of gratitude by the people of this city towards the goddess, but also as a place for people to wish for a romantic partner in life. Although, I think that last part is just a rumor, one that has been spurred on by the students of Sellion Magic Academy.

	From here, it does not take long to arrive at the school. By now, I start to see some of the students of Sellion academy walking to school with their friends, some of which have formed teams or partnerships with each other.		From here, it does not take long to arrive at the school. By now, I start to see some of the students of Sellion academy walking to school with their friends, some of which have formed teams or partnerships with each other.

Jokoril: /* Chapter 1: It's Time for Training */

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Chapter 1: It's Time for Training

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	"I'm happy with your spirit, but as I've said, the things that we taught you in these 3 years have not had that much of a result. What can you do in only 2 weeks?"		"I'm happy with your spirit, but as I've said, the things that we taught you in these 3 years have not had that much of a result. What can you do in only 2 weeks?"

	"Hmmm.......... I'll do hellish training by myself!"		"Hmmm......... I'll do hellish training by myself!"

	After thinking for a bit, I steeled my resolve and declared that. However, the teachers didn't look to convinced. After staring at me for several minutes, he pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed.		After thinking for a bit, I steeled my resolve and declared that. However, the teachers didn't look to convinced. After staring at me for several minutes, he pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed.

Jokoril: /* Chapter 1: It's Time for Training */

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	"You're the first case we've ever encountered. You’re the first student who's magic capacity cannot increase by much, and the process by which your magic capacity goes up normally is very slow, almost as if your magic capacity refuses to grow. To be blunt, I don't believe you can grow as a magician much higher than this. All of us teachers feel that it would be impossible for you to pass the test."		"You're the first case we've ever encountered. You’re the first student who's magic capacity cannot increase by much, and the process by which your magic capacity goes up normally is very slow, almost as if your magic capacity refuses to grow. To be blunt, I don't believe you can grow as a magician much higher than this. All of us teachers feel that it would be impossible for you to pass the test."

	He looked at me quite glumly. So they are going to kick me out after all, huh? Well I can't blame them, I probably won't pass this test. But still.......... I would still like to try. However, as I was thinking that, he said something that surprised me.		He looked at me quite glumly. So they are going to kick me out after all, huh? Well I can't blame them, I probably won't pass this test. But still......... I would still like to try. However, as I was thinking that, he said something that surprised me.

	"That's why all of us teachers decided to put you on the same team as the top student at our school. This will give you a small chance to pass the test, allowing you to graduate as a middle rank magician."		"That's why all of us teachers decided to put you on the same team as the top student at our school. This will give you a small chance to pass the test, allowing you to graduate as a middle rank magician."

Jokoril: /* Chapter 1: It's Time for Training */

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	At the West side of Sellion there is a big mansion, this is the estate of the Lesage the rulers of Sellion. In one of the rooms, the light of the morning sun came in where someone is still fast asleep in the bed. In front of the bed there is a closet and on top of it there is a photo of a little boy and girl holding hands and smiling innocently.		At the West side of Sellion there is a big mansion, this is the estate of the Lesage the rulers of Sellion. In one of the rooms, the light of the morning sun came in where someone is still fast asleep in the bed. In front of the bed there is a closet and on top of it there is a photo of a little boy and girl holding hands and smiling innocently.

	"~~Shhhshhshhhh~~"		"Shhhshhshhh"

	The sound of a person was heard beneath the blanket, there is a young beautiful girl, with her lavish lengthy pink hair and her half closed eyes which shined emerald as she woke from her pleasant slumber. If someone had seen her, her half asleep appearance would have made her look like a very cute innocent child; her name is Erina Lesage.		The sound of a person was heard beneath the blanket, there is a young beautiful girl, with her lavish lengthy pink hair and her half closed eyes which shined emerald as she woke from her pleasant slumber. If someone had seen her, her half asleep appearance would have made her look like a very cute innocent child; her name is Erina Lesage.

Jokoril: /* Chapter 1: It's Time for Training */

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	"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."		"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."

	"~~Haiii~~......"		"Haiiii......"

	After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.		After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.

Jokoril: /* Chapter 1: It's Time for Training */

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	"Hooo!!!"		"Hooo!!!"

	"Kyaaa!!!!"		"Kyaaa!!!"

	Another big scream from the students brings me back from my daydreaming. As I look around, there is no path for me to walk into school, so I have to wait until the crowd dies down.		Another big scream from the students brings me back from my daydreaming. As I look around, there is no path for me to walk into school, so I have to wait until the crowd dies down.

Jokoril: /* Part 1 */

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	"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."		"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."

	"~~Haiiii~~......"		"Haiii......"

	After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.		After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.

Jokoril: /* Part 1 */

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	"Hooo!!!"		"Hooo!!!"

	"Kyaaa!!!!"		"Kyaaa!!!"

	Not long after I arrived at the school gate I could hear the scream of students from Sellion academy, not only the girls but even the boys.		Not long after I arrived at the school gate I could hear the scream of students from Sellion academy, not only the girls but even the boys.

Jokoril: /* Chapter 1: It's Time for Training */

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Chapter 1: It's Time for Training

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	"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."		"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."

	"~~Haiii~~......"		"Haiiii......"

	After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.		After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.

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	"I don't have the position to speak with the princess."		"I don't have the position to speak with the princess."

	She felt anger bubbling up inside her. Everyone had always avoided her because she was the princess, but him.......... he always made her feel like she was a normal child, it was probably the biggest reason she fell in love with him. But now.......... he was going to avoid her for the same reasons everybody else had? She couldn't help it, she lost control~~, the tears started pouring out of her eyes as~~ she ~~shouted at him.~~		She felt anger bubbling up inside her. Everyone had always avoided her because she was the princess, but him.......... he always made her feel like she was a normal child, it was probably the biggest reason she fell in love with him. But now.......... he was going to avoid her for the same reasons everybody else had? She couldn't help it, she lost control. She felt...... She felt..... What was it that she felt?

	"Why Toma!? It has been 6 years since we last spoke or met with each other! Why did you always avoid me for 6 whole years!? Do you even care about me anymore!?"		"Why Toma!? It has been 6 years since we last spoke or met with each other! Why did you always avoid me for 6 whole years!? Do you even care about me anymore!?"
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	"I'm such an idiot."		"I'm such an idiot."

	I whisper to myself, as I sat against this wall, allowing my tears to flow down my face. It's been a while since I cried like this. I thought my heart was already hard enough that I didn't feel this kind of ~~intense~~ pain anymore. Yet, somewhere deep down I was relieved I was still capable of feeling it.		I whisper to myself, as I sat against this wall, allowing my tears to flow down my face. It's been a while since I cried like this. I thought my heart was already hard enough that I didn't feel this kind of pain anymore. Yet, somewhere deep down I was relieved I was still capable of feeling it.

	After a while, I heard someone else heading to the door. Before the person could catch me there, I ran off and started heading home.		After a while, I heard someone else heading to the door. Before the person could catch me there, I ran off and started heading home.
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	I shake my head and begin to remember our time as children.		I shake my head and begin to remember our time as children.

	"Those times were really fun. We played a lot together, but when afternoon came went our separate ways."		"Those times were really fun. We played a lot together, but when afternoon came we went our separate ways."

	Even if I didn't know much about him then, I didn't care. He was always so kind to me, he always played whatever I wanted with me. However, as the years went by, he slowly started to spend less time with me. 6 years ago is when he finally stopped altogether. He stopped talking to me and whenever I would try to approach him he would start to avoid me.		Even if I didn't know much about him then, I didn't care. He was always so kind to me, he always played whatever I wanted with me. However, as the years went by, he slowly started to spend less time with me. 6 years ago is when he finally stopped altogether. He stopped talking to me and whenever I would try to approach him he would start to avoid me.
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	"How can you even say something like that! How could you just throw away a friendship like that!? Did it really mean so little to you!? Did I really mean so little to you!?"		"How can you even say something like that! How could you just throw away a friendship like that!? Did it really mean so little to you!? Did I really mean so little to you!?"

	He stayed silent, staring at the ground. Seeing that, she felt all kinds of intense emotions fighting in her heart~~. Due to these emotions, tears, once again, slowly rolled down her face~~.		He stayed silent, staring at the ground. Seeing that, she felt all kinds of intense emotions fighting in her heart.

	"Do you hate me that much!?"		"Do you hate me that much!?"