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	==Chapter 7 : The Night of ~~Menma~~==		==Chapter 7 : The Night of Meiko==

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	==Chapter 7 : The Night of Meiko==		==Chapter 7 : The Night of Meiko==

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	This was the second night Meiko had come back.		This was the second night Meiko had come back.
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	However, she failed to even put this into words and speak them out.		However, she failed to even put this into words and speak them out.

	She could only let others to decide what kind of girl she was. She ~~couldn’t~~ enforce her own wishes on others.		She could only let others to decide what kind of girl she was. She couldn't enforce her own wishes on others.

	For she was this kind of a girl…		For she was this kind of a girl…

	So until now, she was still here, not yet disappeared, and ~~contiued~~ to stare at a distance. And with the flow of time, her contours became even clearer.		So until now, she was still here, not yet disappeared, and continued to stare at a distance. And with the flow of time, her contours became even clearer.

	And thus Meiko continued to grow.		And thus Meiko continued to grow.
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	(It’s so tiring…)		(It’s so tiring…)

	She only wanted to say it, even though she ~~wasn’t~~ clear whether she was really tired.		She only wanted to say it, even though she wasn't clear whether she was really tired.

	Menma had been strolling everywhere today, walking here and there. She seemed to be hungry, yet she ~~wasn’t~~ clear of this fact.		Menma had been strolling everywhere today, walking here and there. She seemed to be hungry, yet she wasn't clear of this fact.

	Time flew past in such a slow pace.		Time flew past in such a slow pace.
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	Menma saw this change of colours by gazing head high to the sky at different places.		Menma saw this change of colours by gazing head high to the sky at different places.

	There were a lot of things Menma knew in these places; however, there ~~wasn’t~~ anything she was very clear. Every single thing changed here or there.		There were a lot of things Menma knew in these places; however, there wasn't anything she was very clear. Every single thing changed here or there.

	“I really want to ~~see~~ everyone.”		“I really want to meet everyone.”

	Menma mumbled, trying to stop the tears that welled in her eyes ~~to overflow~~.		Menma mumbled, trying to stop the tears that welled in her eyes from overflowing.

	I ~~couldn’t go see~~ my family. I was so scared I could only look ~~at a~~ distance, not daring to get any closer. ~~It was undoubtedly~~ I ~~wasn’t a bit~~ scared when I saw Jintan and the others.		I couldn't face my family. I was so scared I could only look into the distance, not daring to get any closer. I must admit I wasn't in any case scared when I saw Jintan and the others.

	I hope my family could forget me, but I hope everyone in the Super Peace Busters ~~won’t~~.		I hope my family could forget me, but I hope everyone in the Super Peace Busters wouldn't.

	This feeling I ~~have~~ is the same—be it Menma or Meiko.		This feeling I dwell on is the same—be it Menma or Meiko.

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