Anohana:Part 1 Chapter 8 - Revision history

Pudding321 at 04:40, 15 March 2014

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	“Wu…Yeah. At last, I caught it!!”		“Wu…Yeah. At last, I caught it!!”

	The room was still as dark and quiet as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed ~~already~~.		The room was still as dark and quiet as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had already passed.

	I ~~hadn’t~~ eaten anything ~~since morning till night—twenty-three hours had passed~~.		For twenty-three hours, from morning to night, I hadn't eaten anything.

	I had finally caught Dialga<ref>pokemon</ref>. With all my strength, the intelligence of an adult, and the help of rare books and technology, I had finally caught it.		I had finally caught Dialga<ref>pokemon</ref>. With all my strength, the intelligence of an adult, and the help of rare books and technology, I had finally caught it.

	But of course I ~~didn’t~~ feel bad for playing games all day long, for recently I got through every day the same way or other. Speaking on this ~~point~~, Matsuyuki was witty about letting me to ~~be responsible for~~ playing Nokemon.		But of course I didn't feel bad for playing games all day long, for recently I got through every day the same way or the other. Speaking of this, Matsuyuki was witty about letting me to take up this job of playing Nokemon.

	In short, I mailed Hisakawa message about this. I ~~hadn’t any obligation~~ to report to Matsuyuki. ~~After all, he wasn’t~~ the captain.		In short, I mailed Hisakawa a message about this. I have no need to report to Matsuyuki. He wasn't the captain anyway.

	‘Dialga Capture: Success’		‘Dialga Capture: Success’

	That was all I wrote and sent. Let me eat something…I think there was still some round bread in the fridge…I ~~slightly pondered~~ about it.		That was all I wrote and sent. Let me eat something…I think there was still some round bread in the fridge…I thought about it.

	“Mmm?”		“Mmm?”
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	My phone rang: it was a message.		My phone rang: it was a message.

	I hadn’t ever contacted with my dad over mailing, let alone friends. So for that moment I ~~couldn’t~~ figure out who ~~sent it~~.		I hadn’t ever contacted with my dad over mailing, let alone friends. So for that moment I couldn't figure out who the sender was.

	It was Hisakawa. I opened it and looked…		It was Hisakawa. I opened it and looked…
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	“Menma Found. Catching Failed.”		“Menma Found. Catching Failed.”

	My mind went ~~absent~~ for a moment: I couldn’t ~~understand~~.		My mind went black for a moment: I couldn’t comprehend.

	Inhaling deeply, I looked at the mail again. Then, I couldn't help but cry out in alarm.		Inhaling deeply, I looked at the mail again. Then, I couldn't help but cry out in alarm.
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	“Menma…found?!”		“Menma…found?!”

	No sooner had I finished speaking, my neck was hooked all of a sudden. My upper body ~~shaked all of my sudden~~, my breathing difficult.		No sooner had I finished speaking than my neck was hooked all of a sudden. My upper body shook, my breathing difficult.

	“What? Did you call for Menma?!”		“What? Did you call for Menma?!”
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	“!!”		“!!”

	It was a honey-sweet voice. I slowly called upon all the ~~sense of~~ my body to confirm the situation I was in.		It was a honey-sweet voice. I slowly called upon all the senses in my body to confirm the situation I was in.

	Clinging on my neck was a white small wrist. My ears could feel a warm and milky breathing sensation…		Clinging on my neck was a white small wrist. My ears could feel a warm and milky breathing sensation…
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	“Ah…ah. Ah…”		“Ah…ah. Ah…”

	I ~~couldn’t~~ move.		I couldn't move.

	Compared to feeling surprised, I felt gladder; compared to feeling glad, I felt…what was it? My nose was bloated. If I were to turn my head now I was sure I would cry.		Compared to feeling surprised, I felt gladder; compared to feeling glad, I felt…what was it? My nose was bloated. If I were to turn my head now I was sure I would cry.

	Yesterday, we met so sudden I ~~couldn’t~~ fix in my mind what had happened. But after some time now, I had time to think and clear things up…even if it ~~was an abbrant situation~~, I could accept it in some sense.		Yesterday we met so sudden I couldn't fix in my mind on what had happened. But after some time now, I had time to think and clear things up…even if it all happened out the blue, I could accept it in some sense.

	This is another chance that I met Menma…I-am-here-.		This is another chance that I met Menma…I-am-here-.
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	“Hey. Jintan?”		“Hey. Jintan?”

	I could sense Menma’s ~~seeing~~ me at my ~~right~~ face. She hung her head on my shoulders, looking at me with her aqua-blue eyes. I could even feel the colour of her eyes.		I could sense Menma’s glare me at my face. She hung her head on my shoulders, looking at me with her aqua-blue eyes. I could even feel the colour of her eyes.

	There was something I had always wanted to do and that I had practiced it for numerous times. That was right…First, I would have to start from here.		There was something I had always wanted to do and that I had practiced for numerous times. That was right…First, I would have to start from here.

	“Jin-tan? Are you hearing what I’m saying…Ah!”		“Jin-tan? Are you hearing what I’m saying…Ah!”

	I loosened off Menma’s hand, and ~~sited~~ uprightly, facing directly to her.		I loosened off Menma’s hand, and sat uprightly, facing directly to her.

	Then, I gradually straightened my right arm.		Then, I gradually straightened my right arm.

	“Heh?” Astonished, Menma’s adorable expression reflected upon my retina, inducing the vigorous thumping of my heart. Nevertheless, I had to do this and ~~wouldn~~'t stop. I put my right hand on my forehead. <!-- I’m not sure if it’s his forehead or her forehead, as there is no ~~possesive~~ in the sentence. Maybe watching the anime might help…but I don’t seem to remember this scene in the anime. -->		“Heh?” Astonished, Menma’s adorable expression reflected upon my retina, inducing the vigorous thumping of my heart. Nevertheless, I had to do this and I couldn't stop. I put my right hand on my forehead. <!-- I’m not sure if it’s his forehead or her forehead, as there is no possessive in the sentence. Maybe watching the anime might help…but I don’t seem to remember this scene in the anime. -->

	That was the pose ‘my dear Menma’ that I had repeated many times!		That was the pose ‘my dear Menma’ that I had repeated many times!
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	I froze. The ‘my dear Menma’ I wanted to say for years was interrupted just like that. Menma laughed out loud.		I froze. The ‘my dear Menma’ I wanted to say for years was interrupted just like that. Menma laughed out loud.

	“That line yo, ~~wasn’t~~ wrong yo—it was wrong, yo!<ref>yo is a trademark line</ref> You have to say it like this: say it with your hand curled like a cone and place it in front of your mouth!”		“That line yo, wasn't wrong yo—it was wrong, yo!<ref>yo is a trademark line</ref> You have to say it like this: say it with your hand curled like a cone and place it in front of your mouth!”

	Menma started to repeatedly perform that yo line. I had always thought that my ‘my dear Menma’ could win that yo thing…		Menma started to repeatedly perform that yo line. I had always thought that my ‘my dear Menma’ could win that yo thing…

	“Indeed…I ~~couldn’t~~ win over it.”		“Indeed…I couldn't win over it.”

	“Eheh?”		“Eheh?”
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	It seemed I had messed up her wish. Nevertheless, it was a wish that I thought so myself, not what Menma had actually meant.		It seemed I had messed up her wish. Nevertheless, it was a wish that I thought so myself, not what Menma had actually meant.

	Menma glared at the Nokemon ~~concentratedly~~. “Here. This shoulder place that is ~~buldged~~ is so cool!” She said to herself on and on, overflowing with joy.		Menma glared at the Nokemon with concentration. “Here. This shoulder place that is bulged is so cool!” She said to herself on and on, overflowing with joy.

	Perhaps it was only a hallucination. Nevertheless, the Menma in front of me was truly the Menma I knew. It was the Menma that would be ~~ecstasized~~ by a Dialga.		Perhaps it was only a hallucination. Nevertheless, the Menma in front of me was truly the Menma I knew. It was the Menma that would be threw off in ecstasy by a Dialga.

	So, I made a promise quietly.		So, I made a promise quietly.

Pudding321: typo

2013-05-03T09:42:13Z

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	“Wu…Yeah. At last, I caught it!!”		“Wu…Yeah. At last, I caught it!!”

	The room was still as dark and ~~quit~~ as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.		The room was still as dark and quiet as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.

	I hadn’t eaten anything since morning till night—twenty-three hours had passed.		I hadn’t eaten anything since morning till night—twenty-three hours had passed.

Pudding321: finally --> at last...yes, they are different in usage

2013-01-14T01:05:41Z

finally --> at last...yes, they are different in usage

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	==Chapter 8 : My Dear Menma==		==Chapter 8 : My Dear Menma==

	“Wu…Yeah. I ~~finally~~ caught it!!”		“Wu…Yeah. At last, I caught it!!”

	The room was still as dark and quit as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.		The room was still as dark and quit as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.

Pudding321 at 15:55, 12 January 2013

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	==Chapter 7 : ~~The Night of~~ Menma==		==Chapter 8 : My Dear Menma==

	“Wu…Yeah. I finally caught it!!”		“Wu…Yeah. I finally caught it!!”

Pudding321 at 15:54, 12 January 2013

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	The room was still as dark and quit as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.		The room was still as dark and quit as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.

	I hadn’t ~~eatn~~ anything since morning till night—twenty-three hours had passed.		I hadn’t eaten anything since morning till night—twenty-three hours had passed.

	I had finally caught Dialga<ref>pokemon</ref>. With all my strength, the intelligence of an adult, and the help of rare books and technology, I had finally caught it.		I had finally caught Dialga<ref>pokemon</ref>. With all my strength, the intelligence of an adult, and the help of rare books and technology, I had finally caught it.

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==Chapter 7 : The Night of Menma==

“Wu…Yeah. I finally caught it!!”

The room was still as dark and quit as ever, so quiet I could hear the ticking sounds of the clock…a day had passed already.

I hadn’t eatn anything since morning till night—twenty-three hours had passed.

I had finally caught Dialga<ref>pokemon</ref>. With all my strength, the intelligence of an adult, and the help of rare books and technology, I had finally caught it.

But of course I didn’t feel bad for playing games all day long, for recently I got through every day the same way or other. Speaking on this point, Matsuyuki was witty about letting me to be responsible for playing Nokemon.

In short, I mailed Hisakawa message about this. I hadn’t any obligation to report to Matsuyuki. After all, he wasn’t the captain.

‘Dialga Capture: Success’

That was all I wrote and sent. Let me eat something…I think there was still some round bread in the fridge…I slightly pondered about it.

“Mmm?”

My phone rang: it was a message.

I hadn’t ever contacted with my dad over mailing, let alone friends. So for that moment I couldn’t figure out who sent it.

It was Hisakawa. I opened it and looked…

“Menma Found. Catching Failed.”

My mind went absent for a moment: I couldn’t understand.

Inhaling deeply, I looked at the mail again. Then, I couldn't help but cry out in alarm.

“Menma…found?!”

No sooner had I finished speaking, my neck was hooked all of a sudden. My upper body shaked all of my sudden, my breathing difficult.

“What? Did you call for Menma?!”

“!!”

It was a honey-sweet voice. I slowly called upon all the sense of my body to confirm the situation I was in.

Clinging on my neck was a white small wrist. My ears could feel a warm and milky breathing sensation…

“Ah…ah. Ah…”

I couldn’t move.

Compared to feeling surprised, I felt gladder; compared to feeling glad, I felt…what was it? My nose was bloated. If I were to turn my head now I was sure I would cry.

Yesterday, we met so sudden I couldn’t fix in my mind what had happened. But after some time now, I had time to think and clear things up…even if it was an abbrant situation, I could accept it in some sense.

This is another chance that I met Menma…I-am-here-.

“Hey. Jintan?”

I could sense Menma’s seeing me at my right face. She hung her head on my shoulders, looking at me with her aqua-blue eyes. I could even feel the colour of her eyes.

There was something I had always wanted to do and that I had practiced it for numerous times. That was right…First, I would have to start from here.

“Jin-tan? Are you hearing what I’m saying…Ah!”

I loosened off Menma’s hand, and sited uprightly, facing directly to her.

Then, I gradually straightened my right arm.

“Heh?” Astonished, Menma’s adorable expression reflected upon my retina, inducing the vigorous thumping of my heart. Nevertheless, I had to do this and wouldn't stop. I put my right hand on my forehead. 

That was the pose ‘my dear Menma’ that I had repeated many times!

“M…my. M…my dear!!”

This was the best moment I could unveil the ‘my dear Menma’ after all these years!

“Yooh, ayoo, thank you for waiting everybody!”

“…eh?”

I froze. The ‘my dear Menma’ I wanted to say for years was interrupted just like that. Menma laughed out loud.

“That line yo, wasn’t wrong yo—it was wrong, yo!<ref>yo is a trademark line</ref> You have to say it like this: say it with your hand curled like a cone and place it in front of your mouth!”

Menma started to repeatedly perform that yo line. I had always thought that my ‘my dear Menma’ could win that yo thing…

“Indeed…I couldn’t win over it.”

“Eheh?”

My apology failed. However, Menma’s smiling face warmed my heart bit by bit.

“Ahahahah?!”

Menma suddenly spotted the Nokemon on the quilt.

“That’s Dialga! That’s brilliant! When did you start playing that, Jintan?!”

Menma was ranting out loud, her eyes flashing with beam.

I had captured the Dialga, yet Menma was still here.

It seemed I had messed up her wish. Nevertheless, it was a wish that I thought so myself, not what Menma had actually meant.

Menma glared at the Nokemon concentratedly. “Here. This shoulder place that is buldged is so cool!” She said to herself on and on, overflowing with joy.

Perhaps it was only a hallucination. Nevertheless, the Menma in front of me was truly the Menma I knew. It was the Menma that would be ecstasized by a Dialga.

So, I made a promise quietly.

“I would certainly help you fulfill your wish.”

“Yeah? That’s too soft. What did you say? Can you say it again?”

“…No. Yo.”

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