Asobi ni Iku yo! Volume 1 prologue - Revision history

Rohan123: Minor grammar fix, references made cleaner.

2013-08-30T08:19:11Z

Minor grammar fix, references made cleaner.

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	Gold-like sunshine pierced the pores, while the feelings were blown off by a nice breeze from the sea.		Gold-like sunshine pierced the pores, while the feelings were blown off by a nice breeze from the sea.

	On a hill overlooking the sea, sat the Kakazu family tomb, the kind of turtle tomb typical of Okinawa. <ref>http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Okinawa_turtle_back_tomb.JPG</ref>		On a hill overlooking the sea, sat the Kakazu family tomb, the kind of turtle tomb typical of Okinawa. <ref>[http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Okinawa_turtle_back_tomb.JPG Turtle tomb]</ref>

	While literally a tortoise shell, it kind of looked like an abstract figure of a woman's uterus too... The tortoise shell tomb sat in a vast courtyard with a small elementary school-type playground at its center.		While literally a tortoise shell, it kind of looked like an abstract figure of a woman's uterus too... The tortoise shell tomb sat in a vast courtyard with a small elementary school-type playground at its center.
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	From somewhere came the smell of burning meat. Some of the relatives had apparently set up an elaborate barbecue set.		From somewhere came the smell of burning meat. Some of the relatives had apparently set up an elaborate barbecue set.

	Somebody started strumming the three line<ref>http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%95%E3%82%A1%E3%82%A4%E3%83%AB:Shitahaku_kejo.jpg</ref>, opening their throat to begin singing a quiet island song to match it.		Somebody started strumming the three line<ref>It is a stringed musical instrument of Okinawa - [http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%95%E3%82%A1%E3%82%A4%E3%83%AB:Shitahaku_kejo.jpg Shitahaku Kejo]</ref>, opening their throat to begin singing a quiet island song to match it.

	In these parts, languages flew about, seeming to become even more varied. They ranged from Japanese, Okinawan dialect, English, Spanish, Tagalog, Finnish, and more.		In these parts, languages flew about, seeming to become even more varied. They ranged from Japanese, Okinawan dialect, English, Spanish, Tagalog, Finnish, and more.
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	''A tail?		''A tail?

	''Well, maybe a toy like that ~~had~~ become the rage lately?		''Well, maybe a toy like that has become the rage lately?

	There was a scratching sound as Kio scratched his head and suddenly noticed.		There was a scratching sound as Kio scratched his head and suddenly noticed.

Rohan123: Italicized Kio's monologues.

2013-08-30T08:13:40Z

Italicized Kio's monologues.

Rohan123: Edited.

2013-08-30T08:09:06Z

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Rohan123: Edited ~50%

2013-08-29T19:01:10Z

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黒曜石ペガサス: clearing up the tl.

2013-08-22T18:18:27Z

clearing up the tl.

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	His surroundings were bustling with men and women, having all different faces and ages.		His surroundings were bustling with men and women, having all different faces and ages.

	The anniversary group could be said to have a solemn air about it nowhere ~~crying~~, just focused and busy mingling.		The anniversary group could be said to have a solemn air about it, nowhere could you find tears, just focused and busy social mingling.

	After all, the funeral vigil seat also, “Our skill at being sad won’t go over to the other world with our dead ones” it is said, so laughter remains with a slight Okinawan tone from three people lined up where you could slightly hear them.		After all, the funeral vigil seat also, “Our skill at being sad won’t go over to the other world with our dead ones” it is said, so laughter remains with a slight Okinawan tone from three people lined up where you could slightly hear them.

神 at 20:35, 19 August 2013

2013-08-19T20:35:00Z

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2013-08-18T05:52:11Z

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	==A cat you meet at a funeral==		==A cat you meet at a funeral==

	Year 200x July 18th America		'''Year 200x July 18th, America'''

	One ~~Unknown-----Lost~~ on ~~radar-----~~		One Unknown———Lost on radar———

	“Infer possible point of ~~annihilation”~~.		“Infer possible point of annihilation.”

	“Above the skies of Japan.”		“Above the skies of Japan.”

	“What kind of ~~thing……~~. its magnitude and velocity, is this data correct?”		“What kind of thing... its magnitude and velocity, is this data correct?”

	“Yes. Clearly this aircraft does not fall under any type of data that our country ~~possesses”~~		“Yes. Clearly, this aircraft does not fall under any type of data that our country possesses.”

	“It began slowing down rapidly on its own, what kind ~~of…~~?		“It began slowing down rapidly on its own, what kind of...?"

	“Yes, that is all, Lieutenant Commander-dono”		“Yes, that is all, Lieutenant Commander-dono”

	“Lieutenant Commander-dono, I’m pretty sure that between ourselves and those red polar bears, no country has any ~~space craft~~ that ~~exceed~~ our ~~countries capabilities…right~~?		“Lieutenant Commander-dono, I’m pretty sure that between ourselves and those red polar bears, no country has any spacecraft that exceeds our country's capabilities...right?"

	“That’s how is, by itself America is on top in space.”		“That’s how it is, by itself, America is on top in space.”

	“Then, what ~~is…~~.”		“Then, what is...?”

	“Have you radioed it in?”		“Have you radioed it in?”

	A voice cracked like a whip ~~through~~ the radar room.		A voice cracked like a whip throughout the radar room.

	“THIS IS A CODE 7 SITUATION ~~WERE IN”~~		“THIS IS A CODE 7 SITUATION WE'RE IN!”

	“Yes sir!”		“Yes sir!”
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	“Hot!!!......”		“Hot!!!......”

	Originally a U.S. Military equipment headquarters was here, which had been moved to Haraisage. A large tent originally for fieldwork remained with a plastic tarp like the kind you ~~can~~ find at the store underneath it. On this tarp a person carelessly and slowly brought a can of coke to their mouth.		Originally, a U.S. Military equipment headquarters was situated here, which had been moved to Haraisage. A large tent, originally for fieldwork, remained with a plastic tarp like the kind you could find at the store underneath it. On this tarp, a person carelessly and slowly brought a can of coke to their mouth.

	~~It’s~~ summer in Okinawa.		It was summer in Okinawa.


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	Blue sea, the heat of the concrete below baked everything above it, coming even through the sheet of plastic.		Blue sea, the heat of the concrete below baked everything above it, coming even through the sheet of plastic.

	The day before, having been a little too addicted to a game, a man with a ~~slight~~ frame, was dazedly surprised about the heat.		The day before, having been a little too addicted to a game, a man with a small frame was dazedly surprised about the heat.

	On the bright ~~side…~~ the heat helped him to forget the edgy feeling of frustration that had been dogging him recently.		On the bright side... the heat helped him to forget the edgy feeling of frustration that had been dogging him recently.

	Vaguely feeling anxiety about the future, the true colors of ~~this~~ feeling were indeed similar to frustration.		Vaguely feeling anxiety about the future, the true colors of that feeling were indeed similar to frustration.

	That said, just because you ~~know~~ the ~~feelings~~ identity, its not like you ~~can’t~~ do anything about it.		That said, just because you knew the feeling's identity, its not like you could do anything about it.

	~~“HOT”~~		“HOT!”

	Kio murmured, having had too much of this and not wanting to think about those ~~problem~~ feelings too much.		Kio murmured, having had too much of this and not wanting to think about those problematic feelings too much.

	Gold like sunshine pierced the pores, while the feelings were blown off by a nice breeze from the sea.		Gold-like sunshine pierced the pores, while the feelings were blown off by a nice breeze from the sea.

	On a hill overlooking the sea sat the Kakazu family tomb, the kind of turtle tomb typical of Okinawa. <ref>http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Okinawa_turtle_back_tomb.JPG</ref>		On a hill overlooking the sea, sat the Kakazu family tomb, the kind of turtle tomb typical of Okinawa. <ref>http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Okinawa_turtle_back_tomb.JPG</ref>

	While literally a ~~toroise~~ shell, it kind of looked like an abstract of a ~~womans Uterus too…~~ The tortoise shell tomb sat in a vast courtyard with a small elementary school type playground in its center.		While literally a tortoise shell, it kind of looked like an abstract figure of a woman's uterus too... The tortoise shell tomb sat in a vast courtyard with a small elementary school-type playground at its center.

	There ~~are~~ many people in the Kakazu clan, so many that even after World War ~~two~~ with people moving over the pacific, this much land is still needed to gather together at the same time.		There were many people in the Kakazu clan, so many that even after World War Two, with people moving over the pacific, this much land was still needed to gather together at the same time.

	Today is the fifth elder of the Kakazu family’s one year death anniversary.		Today was the fifth elder of the Kakazu family’s one year death anniversary.

	My surroundings were bustling~~. Men~~ and women ~~with~~ all different faces and ages.		His surroundings were bustling with men and women, having all different faces and ages.

	The anniversary group could be said to have a solemn air about it nowhere cry, just focused and busy mingling.		The anniversary group could be said to have a solemn air about it nowhere cry, just focused and busy mingling.

黒狐: /* A cat you meet at a funeral */ prologue complete!

2013-08-17T17:39:10Z

A cat you meet at a funeral: prologue complete!

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	(Is she Russian……?)		(Is she Russian……?)

			After all, because it’s the family of Kakazu which is said to have over one thousand members whren gathered together, when that is taken into account, it wouldn’t be a strange thing to have one or two people from the soviet Union.

			“U-m…my name is Eris”

			The girl came and stood in front of Kio and, with her self introduction, stiffly lowered her head.
			When the girl stood up, she turned out to be a tall and pretty girl. With a sweet smell, she had two heavy watertight peaches swaying in front of his eyes.

			“A, he, hello, I’m called Kio”

			Standing up straight, Kio quickly lowered his head.

			(Ah, I knew it, she’s foreign after all)

			Is what he thought,

			“Well, I rushed about that drink after all, sorry”

			Taking advantage of the huge gap in the conversation, the girl tried to incline the contents of the bottle into hand into the cup he was holding.

			“Oh, thank you”

			He drank the contents of the paper cup in a hurry.

			It was only after he drank it he realized two things.

			The first one, in the girls hand was a bottle of beer.

			Two he was told,, after all night and the next day, he was extremely weak to alcohol.


			The moment he realized what he’d done, heaven and earth seemed to blur and Kio yelped while falling in place.

			(oh, cra……..I’m gonna have a great hangover tomorrow)

			Kio managed to think in that short moment when his brain and the landscape started spinning.

			(My head feels like a tooth just broke….)

			Not knowing whether or not they were watching him,

			“I...my....I....”

			His voice sounded in the distance somewhere, and he managed to recognize the moment when his face touched the ground and he instantaneously lost consciousness.

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

黒狐: one more page to go!

2013-08-14T06:36:58Z

one more page to go!

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	“Oh yeah, that dengaku is also delicious, so is kelp wound Rafute…… and those three meats.”		“Oh yeah, that dengaku is also delicious, so is kelp wound Rafute…… and those three meats.”

			The girl made a sudden loud noise by clapping both hands in front of her ample bosom, her eyes shining and seeming to emit stars.

			“So soft and tender, and this soups purrrrfect color! I haven’t had meat in such a long time, I’m so glad I get some!"

			Her words and her face showed how good a mood she was in, the girls eyes narrowed…..no, her big eyes changed, becoming vertically thread like.

			Sheesh, anyone watching her smiling, couldn’t help themselves smiling back.

			Kio, of course, was smiling back at her,

			(……where did this girl come from?)

			He thought inwardly while at the same time tilting his head.

			Outwardly she looked like a foreigner, but her words in Japanese were flawless, if you consider the way she split the pronunciation of, “haven’t had meat in such a long time”, one or two months can’t give you that compelling sound no matter how you look at it.

			(Is she Russian……?)

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

黒狐: 80% of prologue now complete.(done tomorrow/next day)

2013-08-12T03:34:45Z

80% of prologue now complete.(done tomorrow/next day)

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	A bright red ‘Aloha’ on a white Bermuda style outfit presented itself on a forty year old man with very brown skin and an even more cheerful smile.		A bright red ‘Aloha’ on a white Bermuda style outfit presented itself on a forty year old man with very brown skin and an even more cheerful smile.

			Kio said to his uncle who had hit him, Miyaki Yuichi. His last name was different because his mother married outside the family name, but he was still a man of the Kakazu’s. He worked in some obscure business, though nobody knew what that was, but was wealthy and strangely enough, good at caring for those he cared about.

			“Year after year, no one gets tired of getting together.”

			Soft spoken, Kio replied.

			“Ah, well, its not for the old man”

			Yuichi laughed one hand on a disposable thin plastic cup full of beer.

			“So, High School, going good?”

			“yeah, somehow”

			That said, even though High school exams feel like something that happened a long time ago the nervousness and struggling….still felt that kind of thing.

			“Then, how is the girlfriend front? How about, that girl next door…..Minami-chan was it?

			“Tha, that’s still impossible.”

			Finding himself blundering into a vivid story suddenly, Kio drank from his coke.

			“Besides, Manami-chan and I didn’t have that kind of relationship from the beginning.”

			“Whats this? A neighbor and childhood friend who still comes over to play, and your just accustomed to it? The high road, that’s the moral high road. Have you been playing games recently that talk about that sort of thing? The next step is life in University, you can decide then to be a winner or loser with the moral high road. Yeah…”

			“What are you talking about?”

			There appeared on Yuichi’s face a luxurious grin that was far to overkill.

			“If only just, it is possible to say you are an adult. In that time you have a limited three year window to do fun echhi stuff with your heart pounding, just from holding hands.

			“O, Oji-san-!”

			With that said, being a young boy’s uncle who’s ‘growing up’, I especially noticed.

			“Reality and pure hearted love as well go for it now while you can.”

			Nodding at something while muttering yeah, yeah, oji-san laughed.

			“Hey, how about that girl over there, how is she?”

			A glance in the direction he was pointing showed something strange sitting there.

			“Wha?”

			The first surprise was their outfit.

			A body suit of vinyl, or was it leather, even though it was mid-summer, winding to her waist connected to a belt of some material that was connected to a bursting chest. Plate metal was lightly wound down her long limbs to her waist from her chest and….. could it be, red hair and bangs that entered a woven light mesh on her head.

			All her features were in the right place. As hard as you look at her, all you’re going to see is something straight out of a model magazine……

			“Well then, how about the copper over there?”

			As Yuichi offered the girl a paper cup while scratching his head, smiling at the girl who is likely to look good in school uniform or anything, Kio realized they weren’t that far apart in age.

			Then again, there was still that, ‘something strange’, rather, ‘the girl was strange looking’.

			Golden foaming liquid pouring down, the body suited girl drank it all at once.

			At her throat, a gold colored bell you couldn’t really see shook.

			“Puhaaa, Delicious!”

			The girl said with a big smile on her face, the perfectly angular body of the girl moved with a “Hiko Hiko”.

			If you look, it’s the ear of a cat. Thick red hair reminiscent of wool ran down her back to her hip, “Hiko, Hiko” rang the bell, as she elaborately sat down.

			A tail?

			(well, maybe a toy like that had become the rage lately?)

			There was a scratching sound as Kio scratched his head and suddenly noticed.

			“O-, Superb!”

			Covering the plastic tarp the girl was seated on, she was surrounded by empty plastic bottles of beer……

			“Oji-san, what are you doing!?”

			“Oh, Kio-ka, whats wrong?”

			Not far behind her was Oji-san finishing his drink, the man stepping in as Kio’s parent.

			The middle aged man who had come from mother’s family to watch him because he was said to be, “ good, similar to your mother in fact”, with his fat eyebrows sat there all laughing, “cheep cheep”, and giddy on the tarp.

			“Letting all the minor’s drink isn’t that the matter!?”

			“Maa, that’s all right, you drink, you drink too”.

			“Ahh, I had to yell at mother for this as well.”

			“Its all right, but the anniversary of the old man-chan means putting aside rank and binging today.”

			Usually his own party headquarters, you can’t use words when he’s like this, and if unrestricted binging is what he wants, that’s recognized as correct, that’s just the way it is in Okinawa.

			“Geez, its not that often I can get together with the family.”

			Kio, while sighing, turned to the girl with the body suit and red hair, “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to, did I trouble you?”

			She replied with an earsplitting grin,

			“No, no, that’s not true at all”.

			I shook my head from side to side, her Japanese was fluent.

			“This drink is delicious and well……This, what do I call this food?”

			The girl pointed with chopsticks she grasped clumsily at the masses of plump meat piled on top of the paper plates piled at her feet.

			“Oh, that’s Tanmo Dengaku”.

			Yuichi supplied.

			“Oh yeah, that dengaku is also delicious, so is kelp wound Rafute…… and those three meats.”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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	If you looked, she had the ears of a cat. Thick red hair reminiscent of wool ran down her back to her hips, 'Hiko, Hiko' rang the bell, as she elaborately sat down.		If you looked, she had the ears of a cat. Thick red hair reminiscent of wool ran down her back to her hips, 'Hiko, Hiko' rang the bell, as she elaborately sat down.

	A tail?		''A tail?

	Well, maybe a toy like that had become the rage lately?		''Well, maybe a toy like that had become the rage lately?

	There was a scratching sound as Kio scratched his head and suddenly noticed.		There was a scratching sound as Kio scratched his head and suddenly noticed.
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	“No, no, that’s not true at all.”		“No, no, that’s not true at all.”

	I shook my head from side to side, her Japanese was fluent.		Kio shook his head from side to side, her Japanese was fluent.

	“This drink is delicious and well...this, what do I call this food?”		“This drink is delicious and well...this, what do I call this food?”
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	Kio, of course, was smiling back at her.		Kio, of course, was smiling back at her.

	...Where did this girl come from?		''...Where did this girl come from?

	He thought inwardly while at the same time tilting his head.		He thought inwardly while at the same time tilting his head.
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	Outwardly she looked like a foreigner, but her words in Japanese were flawless. If you considered the way she split the pronunciation of, “haven’t had meat in such a long time,” one or two months couldn’t give you that compelling sound no matter how you looked at it.		Outwardly she looked like a foreigner, but her words in Japanese were flawless. If you considered the way she split the pronunciation of, “haven’t had meat in such a long time,” one or two months couldn’t give you that compelling sound no matter how you looked at it.

	Is she Russian...?		''Is she Russian...?

	After all, because it was the family of Kakazu which was said to have over one thousand members when gathered together, when that was taken into account, it wouldn’t be a strange thing to have one or two people from the Soviet Union.		After all, because it was the family of Kakazu which was said to have over one thousand members when gathered together, when that was taken into account, it wouldn’t be a strange thing to have one or two people from the Soviet Union.
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	Standing up straight, Kio quickly lowered his head.		Standing up straight, Kio quickly lowered his head.

	Ah, I knew it, she’s a foreigner after all.		''Ah, I knew it, she’s a foreigner after all.

	Is what he thought,		Is what he thought,
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	The moment he realized what he’d done, heaven and earth seemed to blur and Kio yelped while falling in place.		The moment he realized what he’d done, heaven and earth seemed to blur and Kio yelped while falling in place.

	Oh, cra...I’m going to have a great hangover tomorrow.		''Oh, cra...I’m going to have a great hangover tomorrow.

	Kio managed to think in that short moment when his brain and the landscape started spinning.		Kio managed to think in that short moment when his brain and the landscape started spinning.

	My head feels like a tooth just broke...		''My head feels like a tooth just broke...

	Not knowing whether or not they were watching him,		Not knowing whether or not they were watching him,

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	His surroundings were bustling with men and women, having all different faces and ages.		His surroundings were bustling with men and women, having all different faces and ages.

	The anniversary group could be said to have a solemn air about it~~, nowhere~~ could you find tears, just focused and busy social mingling.		The anniversary group could be said to have a solemn air about it. Nowhere could you find tears, just focused and busy social mingling.

	After all, the funeral vigil seat also, “Our skill at being sad won’t go over to the other world with our dead ~~ones” it is said~~, so laughter ~~remains~~ with a slight Okinawan tone from three people lined up where you could slightly hear them.		After all, the funeral vigil seat also said, “Our skill at being sad won’t go over to the other world with our dead ones,” so laughter with a slight Okinawan tone remained from three people, who were lined up where you could slightly hear them.

	“It’s summer, all right.”		“It’s summer, all right.”
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	Kio muttered, poker faced. The sun, passing high overhead caused everyone to constantly sweat, though an ocean breeze cooled everyone off, making it less offensive as long as you sat still in the shade of a tree.		Kio muttered, poker faced. The sun, passing high overhead caused everyone to constantly sweat, though an ocean breeze cooled everyone off, making it less offensive as long as you sat still in the shade of a tree.

	From somewhere came the smell of burning meat. Some of the relatives had apparently set up an elaborate barbecue set.		From somewhere came the smell of burning meat. Some of the relatives had apparently set up an elaborate barbecue set.

	Somebody started strumming the three line<ref>http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%95%E3%82%A1%E3%82%A4%E3%83%AB:Shitahaku_kejo.jpg</ref>, opening their throat to begin singing an quiet ~~Island~~ song to match it.		Somebody started strumming the three line<ref>http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%95%E3%82%A1%E3%82%A4%E3%83%AB:Shitahaku_kejo.jpg</ref>, opening their throat to begin singing a quiet island song to match it.

	In these parts languages flew about, seeming to become even more varied. They ranged from Japanese, Okinawan dialect, English, Spanish, Tagalog, Finnish, and more.		In these parts, languages flew about, seeming to become even more varied. They ranged from Japanese, Okinawan dialect, English, Spanish, Tagalog, Finnish, and more.

	The languages were not unusual. People who had left the limited home of the Kakazu family and moved overseas to buy property for whatever reason had still come to represent their seat in the family.		The languages were not unusual. People who had left the limited home of the Kakazu family and moved overseas to buy property for whatever reason had still come to represent their seat in the family.

	Whatever shape or form they came in, the fact was they had come to honor ~~that~~ one who passed in Okinawa.		Whatever shape or form they came in, the fact was that they had come to honor the one who had passed away in Okinawa.

	“Yo~, having fun?”		“Yo~, having fun?”
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	A bright red ‘Aloha’ on a white Bermuda style outfit presented itself on a forty year old man with very brown skin and an even more cheerful smile.		A bright red ‘Aloha’ on a white Bermuda style outfit presented itself on a forty year old man with very brown skin and an even more cheerful smile.

	Kio said to his uncle who had hit him, Miyaki Yuichi. His last name was different because his mother married outside the family name, but he was still a man of the Kakazus. He worked in some obscure business, though nobody knew what that was, but was wealthy and strangely enough, good at caring for those he cared about.		Kio said to his uncle who had hit him, Miyaki Yuichi. His last name was different because his mother married outside the family name, but he was still a man of the Kakazus. He worked in some obscure business, though nobody knew what that was, but was wealthy, and strangely enough, good at caring for those he cared about.

	“Year after year, no one gets tired of getting together.”		“Year after year, no one gets tired of getting together.”
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	“Yeah, somehow.”		“Yeah, somehow.”

	That said, even though high school exams felt like something that happened a long time ago, the nervousness and ~~struggling…~~.still felt that kind of thing.		That said, even though high school exams felt like something that happened a long time ago, the nervousness and struggling...he still felt that kind of thing.

	“Then, how is the girlfriend front? How about, that girl next ~~door…~~..Minami-chan, was it?		“Then, how is the girlfriend front? How about, that girl next door...Minami-chan, was it?

	“Tha, that’s still impossible.”		“Tha, that’s still impossible.”
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	“Besides, Manami-chan and I didn’t have that kind of relationship from the beginning.”		“Besides, Manami-chan and I didn’t have that kind of relationship from the beginning.”

	“What's this? A neighbor and childhood friend who still comes over to play, and you're just accustomed to it? The high road, that’s the moral high road. Have you been playing games recently that talk about that sort of thing? The next step in life is university, you can decide then to be a winner or loser with the moral high road. ~~Yeah…”~~		“What's this? A neighbor and childhood friend who still comes over to play, and you're just accustomed to it? The high road, that’s the moral high road. Have you been playing games recently that talk about that sort of thing? The next step in life is university, you can decide then to be a winner or loser with the moral high road. Yeah...”

	“What are you talking about?”		“What are you talking about?”
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	There appeared on Yuichi’s face a luxurious grin that was far too overkill.		There appeared on Yuichi’s face a luxurious grin that was far too overkill.

	“If only just, it ~~was~~ possible to say you are an adult. In that time you have a limited three-year window to do fun ecchi stuff with your heart pounding, just from holding hands."		“If only just, it were possible to say that you are an adult. In that time, you have a limited three-year window to do fun ecchi stuff with your heart pounding, just from holding hands."

	“O, Oji-~~san-~~!”		“O, Oji-san—!”

	With that said, being a young boy’s uncle ~~who’s~~ ‘growing up’, I especially noticed.		With that said, being a young boy’s uncle who was ‘growing up’, I especially noticed.

	“Reality and pure-hearted love as well...go for it now while you can.”		“Reality and pure-hearted love as well...go for it now while you can.”
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	The first surprise was her outfit.		The first surprise was her outfit.

	A body suit of vinyl, or was it leather, even though it was mid-summer, winding to her waist connected to a belt of some material that was connected to a bursting chest. Plate metal was lightly wound down her long limbs to her waist from her chest ~~and…~~..could it be, red hair and bangs that entered a woven light mesh on her head.		A body suit of vinyl, or was it leather, even though it was mid-summer, winding to her waist connected to a belt of some material that was connected to a bursting chest. Plate metal was lightly wound down her long limbs to her waist from her chest and...could it be, red hair and bangs that entered a woven light mesh on her head.

	All her features were in the right place. As hard as you ~~look~~ at her, all ~~you’re~~ going to see is something straight out of a model ~~magazine……~~		All her features were in the right place. As hard as you looked at her, all you were going to see was something straight out of a model magazine...

	“Well then, how about the copper over there?”		“Well then, how about the copper over there?”