BlazBlue:Phase 0 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Spesialo at 14:03, 16 November 2013

2013-11-16T14:03:55Z

Spesialo: /* Part 2 */

2013-07-05T18:15:44Z

Part 2

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	Celica looked up at Ragna, smiling and narrowing her eyes as if crying.		Celica looked up at Ragna, smiling and narrowing her eyes as if crying.

	"I knew that I was being naïve. However, I often see something hurt before my eyes and have the power to heal them. If I don't use it, they may die. If I use it, they can live for at least a little more."		"I knew that I was being naïve. However, I often see something hurt before my eyes and I have the power to heal them. If I don't use it, they may die. If I use it, they can live for at least a little more."

	"You're hopeless."		"You're hopeless."

Spesialo: /* Part 3 */

2013-06-30T15:36:15Z

Part 3

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	"Only a traveler passin' by."		"Only a traveler passin' by."

	The small intruder replied using a male voice which clearly didn't fit with his appearance at all.		The small intruder replied using a male voice which clearly didn't fit with his appearance at all. Though the voice intonation sounded young, his composed way of speaking and the unwavering point of his sword suggested his capability.

	~~Though the voice intonation sounded young, his composed way of speaking and the still point of his sword suggested his capability.~~		Ragna grabbed the handle of the sword that he had returned to his waist not too long ago. His heart beat faster.

	Ragna grabbed the handle of the sword he had returned to his waist not too long ago. His heart beat faster.

	"I ain't the type to meddle in someone's problem. But I can't just shut my mouth an' walk away when I see a frail woman got attacked by a bastard deep in the mountain."		"I ain't the type to meddle in someone's problem. But I can't just shut my mouth an' walk away when I see a frail woman got attacked by a bastard deep in the mountain."

Spesialo: /* Part 2 */

2013-06-30T15:28:36Z

Part 2

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	The bone hadn't even been crushed, but the beast fainted and collapsed to the ground. Four left.		The bone hadn't even been crushed, but the beast fainted and collapsed to the ground. Four left.

	Ragna took the chance to thrust his sword when the beasts were howling ~~and used~~ its bulky side to hit one of them on the nose.		Ragna took the chance to thrust the tip of his sword when the beasts were howling to each other, using its bulky side to hit one of them on the nose.

	Instead of feeding it meat, Ragna gagged another beast with the sword's blade. He proceeded to bash the beast as if he was swinging a hammer.		Instead of feeding it meat, Ragna gagged another beast with the sword's blade. He proceeded to bash the beast as if he was swinging a hammer.

Spesialo: /* Part 2 */

2013-06-30T15:25:16Z

Part 2

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	"Just get behind me for now."		"Just get behind me for now."

	Guarding the confused Celica behind his back, Ragna directed the bulky ~~edge~~ of his sword toward their surroundings.		Guarding the confused Celica behind his back, Ragna directed the bulky tip of his sword toward their surroundings.

	As if awaiting them, black silhouettes jumped out from within the surrounding forest near the abandoned village.		As if awaiting them, black silhouettes jumped out from within the surrounding forest near the abandoned village.

Emma: /* Part 4 */

2013-05-28T02:12:23Z

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Emma: /* Part 3 */

2013-05-28T01:30:44Z

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Emma: /* Part 2 */

2013-05-27T06:22:26Z

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Emma: /* Part 1 */

2013-05-27T05:53:12Z

Part 1

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Emma: /* Chapter 1: Lost White */

2013-05-26T21:51:57Z

Chapter 1: Lost White

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	The collaborative research with him went ~~favorable~~ so far.		The collaborative research with him went favorably so far.

	His knowledge and skills proved to be greatly useful to my personal research task. I'm looking forward ~~for~~ the development from here on after.		His knowledge and skills proved to be greatly useful to my personal research task. I'm looking forward to the development from here on after.

	Relius Clover. He is truly a genius.		Relius Clover. He is truly a genius.
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	However, according to that man's words, we might have the chance to come in contact with the Original Unit. If that is what would be happening, then I would consider it as a sufficient payoff.		However, according to that man's words, we might have the chance to come in contact with the Original Unit. If that is what would be happening, then I would consider it as a sufficient payoff.

	That man certainly had the knowledge in the areas we were lacking ~~off~~. It didn't take long for Relius to cooperate with him on a whim.		That man certainly had the knowledge in the areas we were lacking in. It didn't take long for Relius to cooperate with him on a whim.

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	It was similar to a squall.		It was similar to a squall.

	Ragna barely caught his breath as he reflexively drew his sword. Immediately, ~~a sword and a katana~~ clashed in front of his eyes, scattering red sparks.		Ragna barely caught his breath as he reflexively drew his sword. Immediately, swords clashed in front of his eyes, scattering red sparks.

	"It's shameful to make cheap excuses. Ye written yer sins, scoundrel!?"		"It's shameful to make cheap excuses. Ye written yer sins, scoundrel!?"
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	His symmetrical eyes were large and their pupils stretched vertically. His sneering lips were slim, and within the gap, short but sharp fangs peeked.		His symmetrical eyes were large and their pupils stretched vertically. His sneering lips were slim, and within the gap, short but sharp fangs peeked.

	On closer look, there were a set of triangular ears on the hood. If his back was to be observed, you could find the ~~katana~~'s scabbard attached and two split long tails swaying around.		On closer look, there were a set of triangular ears on the hood. If his back was to be observed, you could find the sword's scabbard attached and two split long tails swaying around.

	The cat-faced man revealed his amused laughter		The cat-faced man revealed his amused laughter
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	His clothes got torn, and along with it pain ran across Ragna's shoulder.		His clothes got torn, and along with it pain ran across Ragna's shoulder.

	Barely able to block the huge swing from the ~~katana~~, Ragna's left hand trembled because of the big impact.		Barely able to block the huge swing from the sword, Ragna's left hand trembled because of the big impact.

	The impact also made his mind shake.		The impact also made his mind shake.
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	Jubei. A cat-type beastkin that once had taught Ragna how to wield a blade.		Jubei. A cat-type beastkin that once had taught Ragna how to wield a blade.

	Two-toned dark brown and white fur, tan pupils, and two parts of a branching tail. The voice also matched. Ragna, who had a ~~katana~~ pointed at him, thought that the beastkin had too many resemblances to his master.		Two-toned dark brown and white fur, tan pupils, and two parts of a branching tail. The voice also matched. Ragna, who had a sword pointed at him, thought that the beastkin had too many resemblances to his master.

	But there was one thing definitely wrong. His master had an eye patch covering his right eye, while the beastkin before him didn't.		But there was one thing definitely wrong. His master had an eye patch covering his right eye, while the beastkin before him didn't.
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	"Dunno. Also, the name's Mitsuyoshi. Ye speak like me, but I never met whatever guy yer spoutin' as someone who beat the Black Beast!"		"Dunno. Also, the name's Mitsuyoshi. Ye speak like me, but I never met whatever guy yer spoutin' as someone who beat the Black Beast!"

	The man who called himself Mitsuyoshi became more cautious and abruptly narrowed his cat eyes. He was preparing his sharp claws and ~~katana~~.		The man who called himself Mitsuyoshi became more cautious and abruptly narrowed his cat eyes. He was preparing his sharp claws and sword.

	"Tryin' to confuse me and escape will get ye nowhere! Prepare yerself, scoundrel!"		"Tryin' to confuse me and escape will get ye nowhere! Prepare yerself, scoundrel!"
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	"Stooooooooooop!"		"Stooooooooooop!"

	The moment the girl's scream was heard, Mitsuyoshi's ~~katana~~ stopped.		The moment the girl's scream was heard, Mitsuyoshi's sword stopped.

	Between Ragna and Mitsuyoshi, there was a slight gap where a person might be able to slip into. Celica had leaped into the gap.		Between Ragna and Mitsuyoshi, there was a slight gap where a person might be able to slip into. Celica had leaped into the gap.