BlazBlue:Phase Shift 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Specs: Chapter 2: Edited to make more sense to English readers, get rid of spelling and grammatical errors, etc. It seemed like a very literal translation previously.

2015-08-21T16:16:51Z

Chapter 2: Edited to make more sense to English readers, get rid of spelling and grammatical errors, etc. It seemed like a very literal translation previously.

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Spesialo at 04:34, 12 January 2015

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	==Chapter 2: Cat of ~~Scarlet~~ Sunset==		==Chapter 2: Cat of Crimson Sunset==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	(...I somehow got a bad feeling.)		(...I somehow got a bad feeling.)

	~~Magic~~ Guild had a surprisingly large number of people as its members. There was quite a population in Ishana. As the majority of them were students, although they mostly were doing club activities during this time of day, it was still unusual even for the alley to not have a single soul sighted during this still bright time.		Mage’s Guild had a surprisingly large number of people as its members. There was quite a population in Ishana. As the majority of them were students, although they mostly were doing club activities during this time of day, it was still unusual even for the alley to not have a single soul sighted during this still bright time.

	To begin with, there was no presence of human.		To begin with, there was no presence of human.
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	It was a strange race located at a point exactly between beast and human. Like magic, their figure never showed up in the front side of the history and only existed in the dark.		It was a strange race located at a point exactly between beast and human. Like magic, their figure never showed up in the front side of the history and only existed in the dark.

	But why did they appear in ~~Magic~~ Guild and attacked Kazuma? Nine's question was also Kazuma's question.		But why did they appear in Mage’s Guild and attacked Kazuma? Nine's question was also Kazuma's question.

	"Onee-chan. For the time being, let's take Kazuma-san back to his room. He might get attacked again."		"Onee-chan. For the time being, let's take Kazuma-san back to his room. He might get attacked again."
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	Hearing small groan he let out himself, Kazuma woke up.		Hearing small groan he let out himself, Kazuma woke up.

	Opening his thin eyes, there was scenery of room he used to see beyond the troublesome bangs. It was a room of the ~~Magic~~ Guild's school dormitory, his own room.		Opening his thin eyes, there was scenery of room he used to see beyond the troublesome bangs. It was a room of the Mage’s Guild's school dormitory, his own room.

	The room was dark and only faint orange light of the bedside lamp was lit. He didn't know the exact time, but it seemed to be night.		The room was dark and only faint orange light of the bedside lamp was lit. He didn't know the exact time, but it seemed to be night.

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Part 4

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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	"T-e-r-u-m-i. That's my name."		"T-E-R-U-M-I. That's my name."

	Kazuma felt like there was a strange air about the name. As if there was a special meaning about it...		Kazuma felt like there was a strange air about the name. As if there was a special meaning about it...

Spesialo at 13:59, 16 November 2013

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Spesialo at 18:48, 8 October 2013

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	During such afterschool, Kazuma walked toward the dormitory alone, without a friend accompanying him.		During such afterschool, Kazuma walked toward the dormitory alone, without a friend accompanying him.

	His feet were heavy. Sometimes he staggered. He still hadn't recovered from the sudden bad condition he got during the end of the ~~lunch break~~. Even now the light dizziness still lasted. There was still listless pain inside his head.		His feet were heavy. Sometimes he staggered. He still hadn't recovered from the sudden bad condition he got during the end of the noon recess. Even now the light dizziness still lasted. There was still listless pain inside his head.

	Sometime before, Kazuma escaped to the infirmary's bed. But after he gradually calmed down enough, he participated during the middle of the afternoon class.		Sometime before, Kazuma escaped to the infirmary's bed. But after he gradually calmed down enough, he participated during the middle of the afternoon class.
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	Previously, there were times when headache and dizziness tortured him every now and then. Mostly, it occurred when he tried hard to remember the past he had forgotten.		Previously, there were times when headache and dizziness tortured him every now and then. Mostly, it occurred when he tried hard to remember the past he had forgotten.

	(Still, what happened during the ~~lunch break~~ wasn't like that...)		(Still, what happened during the noon recess wasn't like that...)

	With the area between his eyebrows furrowed, Kazuma unsteadily made his feet to advance.		With the area between his eyebrows furrowed, Kazuma unsteadily made his feet to advance.

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	"You insolent. Who do you think you're facing...!"		"You insolent. Who do you think you're facing...!"

	"~~Enough~~, Valkenhayn."		"That is enough, Valkenhayn."

	The skinny hand took control of the enraged Valkenhayn.		The skinny hand took control of the enraged Valkenhayn.

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	The presence of the amassed killing intent disappeared. It was the same for the pressure which had been strangling his neck with tremendous force, and also the piercing feeling of tension.		The presence of the amassed killing intent disappeared. It was the same for the pressure which had been strangling his neck with tremendous force, and also the piercing feeling of tension.

	In the same way when he appeared, the cat man disappeared like a passing wind.		In the same way as when he had appeared, the cat man disappeared like a passing wind.

	The every day's atmosphere came back bursting out. Having his hips completely given out, Kazuma could only sit still at the spot while being dumbfounded.		The every day's atmosphere came back bursting out. Having his hips completely given out, Kazuma could only sit still at the spot while being dumbfounded.

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	Nearby the hollowed ground, a mysterious figure stood up. A tiny child-like body, triangular ears protruding on top of the head, long and thin tail branched into two. It was like a cat standing on two legs.		Nearby the hollowed ground, a mysterious figure stood up. A tiny child-like body, triangular ears protruding on top of the head, long and thin tail branched into two. It was like a cat standing on two legs.

	Was it a human? Or was it a monster? Both of that inexplicable being's large forelegs... hands, tightly gripping dully shining ~~small katanas~~ on each of them.		Was it a human? Or was it a monster? Both of that inexplicable being's large forelegs... hands, tightly gripping dully shining short swords on each of them.

	"W-wait. Give me a break already."		"W-wait. Give me a break already."
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	There was nothing to be amused about, but Kazuma's mouth was reflexively pulled and made a smile.		There was nothing to be amused about, but Kazuma's mouth was reflexively pulled and made a smile.

	Judging from this situation, there was no mistaking that the one who gouged and slashed that ground was the small being there. Perhaps it was done by using the pair of short ~~katanas~~ gripped on both of its hands.		Judging from this situation, there was no mistaking that the one who gouged and slashed that ground was the small being there. Perhaps it was done by using the pair of short swords gripped on both of its hands.

	But as long as there was no remarkable difference between Kazuma's and the world's knowledge, hollowing out a stone paving using a pair of short ~~katanas~~ in such a short time that the sun was still out was nothing short of an impossible feat. It's definitely incorrect for the cat-like being to have a disposition of needing to destroy stone paving no matter what.		But as long as there was no remarkable difference between Kazuma's and the world's knowledge, hollowing out a stone paving using a pair of short swords in such a short time that the sun was still out was nothing short of an impossible feat. It's definitely incorrect for the cat-like being to have a disposition of needing to destroy stone paving no matter what.

	What those ~~katanas~~ supposed to cut was not the hard ground... it's Kazuma.		What those swords supposed to cut was not the hard ground... it's Kazuma.

	Cold sweat oozed on his back.		Cold sweat oozed on his back.

	When Kazuma clumsily retreated, the cat he encountered once again prepared to reversely grip the short ~~katanas~~ inside a gloomy shadow. Along with the cold points of those ~~katanas~~, the cat's large eyes sharply seized Kazuma.		When Kazuma clumsily retreated, the cat he encountered once again prepared to reversely grip the short swords inside a gloomy shadow. Along with the cold points of those swords, the cat's large eyes sharply seized Kazuma.

	"...Kazuma Kuvaru."		"...Kazuma Kuvaru."
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	Even for him, it was an idiotic response. But if he didn't do so, the balance of his spirit would crumble.		Even for him, it was an idiotic response. But if he didn't do so, the balance of his spirit would crumble.

	It was bizarre no matter how he thought. A cat walked with two feet while thrusting his ~~katanas~~. It was ridiculous for it to exist in reality...		It was bizarre no matter how he thought. A cat walked with two feet while thrusting his swords. It was ridiculous for it to exist in reality...

	"I am Tomonori. ...I have come to kill you."		"I am Tomonori. ...I have come to kill you."
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	"Hii... Uwaaah!?"		"Hii... Uwaaah!?"

	It was like approaching wind. Losing himself, Kazuma started to run away. His body was lowered as if falling to the ground, then a ~~katana~~ grazed the tip of his hair.		It was like approaching wind. Losing himself, Kazuma started to run away. His body was lowered as if falling to the ground, then a sword grazed the tip of his hair.

	Couldn't stay still in that spot, Kazuma crawled. Then he placed his back to the wall of a building and tried to turn his face around.		Couldn't stay still in that spot, Kazuma crawled. Then he placed his back to the wall of a building and tried to turn his face around.
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	"I-isn't it natural!? Wouldn't I die if I didn't dodge!?"		"I-isn't it natural!? Wouldn't I die if I didn't dodge!?"

	Although he retorted with a loud voice, it seemed Kazuma himself didn't even understand how he had been able to dodge. He did it despite that he thought that he would surely die when he sensed the ~~katanas~~ were being swung.		Although he retorted with a loud voice, it seemed Kazuma himself didn't even understand how he had been able to dodge. He did it despite that he thought that he would surely die when he sensed the swords were being swung.

	This time, the cat silently approached to cut him.		This time, the cat silently approached to cut him.
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	As his chin trembled, his teeth made a grinding noise. The beast looked down on him while inside the shadow of a building which had been deeply colored by the evening. When Kazuma raised his face to the faint footsteps, his eyes met the beast's gaze.		As his chin trembled, his teeth made a grinding noise. The beast looked down on him while inside the shadow of a building which had been deeply colored by the evening. When Kazuma raised his face to the faint footsteps, his eyes met the beast's gaze.

	The reversely gripped ~~katanas~~ were coldly lifted. The tip of a blade was slightly wet in red.		The reversely gripped swords were coldly lifted. The tip of a blade was slightly wet in red.

	It was wet with Kazuma's blood. The blades' cold silver color appeared similar to a beast's fangs that wanted much more blood and flesh than that.		It was wet with Kazuma's blood. The blades' cold silver color appeared similar to a beast's fangs that wanted much more blood and flesh than that.
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	He prepared himself for the sensation of the cold blades.		He prepared himself for the sensation of the cold blades.

	...However, the cat's ~~katanas~~ stopped just before cutting Kazuma's flesh.		...However, the cat's swords stopped just before cutting Kazuma's flesh.

	(H... Huh?)		(H... Huh?)
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	The cat dropped the blades, which should have been raised overhead, and faced toward the end of a gentle curve. Its huge ears were raised.		The cat dropped the blades, which should have been raised overhead, and faced toward the end of a gentle curve. Its huge ears were raised.

	Before long, the cat sheathed the two ~~katanas~~ into their scabbards, gave Kazuma a glance, and abruptly vanished as it leaped.		Before long, the cat sheathed the two swords into their scabbards, gave Kazuma a glance, and abruptly vanished as it leaped.

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	He was weak against Celica's gaze, but he wanted to be pardoned from Nine's glare even more. He heard that she was the most genius person in the academy with offensive magic as her specialty. That fact made it seemed like he was being threatened.		He was weak against Celica's gaze, but he wanted to be pardoned from Nine's glare even more. He heard that she was the most genius person in the academy with offensive magic as her specialty. That fact made it seemed like he was being threatened.

	"Even if you say I saw it or got involved... A strange creature suddenly appeared and slashed around using ~~katana~~. The absurd thing there is also its doing."		"Even if you say I saw it or got involved... A strange creature suddenly appeared and slashed around using sword. The absurd thing there is also its doing."

	Wanting to get away from the concentrated gaze, Kazuma directed his line of sight at the ground, looking for sword cuts. The more he looked at it, the more splendid the slashing scars were which made them didn't feel like they belong in reality.		Wanting to get away from the concentrated gaze, Kazuma directed his line of sight at the ground, looking for sword cuts. The more he looked at it, the more splendid the slashing scars were which made them didn't feel like they belong in reality.