BlazBlue:Phase Shift 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Specs: /* Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation */ Editing to make it read better in english. Too literal.

2015-08-23T00:23:01Z

Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation: Editing to make it read better in english. Too literal.

Specs: /* Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation */ Edited to make more sense in English. I'm now under the impression that this was originally just machine translation.

2015-08-22T23:59:16Z

Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation: Edited to make more sense in English. I'm now under the impression that this was originally just machine translation.

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Specs: /* Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation */ Edited to make more sense in English. Was originally quite a literal translation.

2015-08-22T01:46:08Z

Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation: Edited to make more sense in English. Was originally quite a literal translation.

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Specs: /* Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation */ Edited to make more sense in English. Was originally quite a literal translation.

2015-08-21T17:38:14Z

Chapter 3: Mind of Azure Deviation: Edited to make more sense in English. Was originally quite a literal translation.

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Spesialo at 06:06, 1 July 2014

2014-07-01T06:06:01Z

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Spesialo: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-24T09:04:32Z

Part 3

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	He clicked his tongue in annoyance.		He clicked his tongue in annoyance.

	Whatever. It ~~had~~ already begun anyway.		Whatever. It has already begun anyway.

	The gears have engaged and started to move. It can't be stopped anymore even if they struggle.		The gears have engaged and started to move. It can't be stopped anymore even if they struggle.

Spesialo at 09:02, 24 November 2013

2013-11-24T09:02:45Z

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Spesialo: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-16T23:45:16Z

Part 3

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	As soon as he turned away, the sound of blade grazed his ear. The terror gave him goose bumps.		As soon as he turned away, the sound of blade grazed his ear. The terror gave him goose bumps.

	"Hii... ~~Uwaa~~... Hah... Hah..."		"Hii... Uwaah... Hah... Hah..."

	Standing with his back against the thick wood as if knocking his body to it, Kazuma's disordered breath made his shoulders went up and down furiously.		Standing with his back against the thick wood as if knocking his body to it, Kazuma's disordered breath made his shoulders went up and down furiously.

Spesialo: /* Part 3 */

2013-11-16T23:44:13Z

Part 3

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	As soon as he turned away, the sound of blade grazed his ear. The terror gave him goose bumps.		As soon as he turned away, the sound of blade grazed his ear. The terror gave him goose bumps.

	"Hi... Uwaa... Hah... Hah..."		"Hii... Uwaa... Hah... Hah..."

	Standing with his back against the thick wood as if knocking his body to it, Kazuma's disordered breath made his shoulders went up and down furiously.		Standing with his back against the thick wood as if knocking his body to it, Kazuma's disordered breath made his shoulders went up and down furiously.

Spesialo at 13:58, 16 November 2013

2013-11-16T13:58:35Z

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	Usually, Kazuma returned to the dormitory by taking a detour from this park. It was because he disliked the merry laughing voices of the children.		Usually, Kazuma returned to the dormitory by taking a detour from this park. It was because he disliked the merry laughing voices of the children.

	But now this annoying laughs gave him relief. Since the children wandered aimlessly in the park like he expected, there shouldn't be anyone brandishing ~~katana~~ swooping down on him.		But now this annoying laughs gave him relief. Since the children wandered aimlessly in the park like he expected, there shouldn't be anyone brandishing sword swooping down on him.

	From the other day's situation, it seemed that beastkin had been avoiding for someone to witness the attack.		From the other day's situation, it seemed that beastkin had been avoiding for someone to witness the attack.