BlazBlue:Phase Shift 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Specs: Chapter 4: Edited to make more sene in English.

2015-08-26T18:38:24Z

Chapter 4: Edited to make more sene in English.

Spesialo at 12:23, 10 July 2014

2014-07-10T12:23:00Z

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	As Trinity talked with a strained smile, Celica nodded repeatedly like she understood about it. Then, her expression suddenly went cheerful.		As Trinity talked with a strained smile, Celica nodded repeatedly like she understood about it. Then, her expression suddenly went cheerful.

	"Ah, even so, I'm considerably skilled in ~~floating magic~~. I can't leap high, but I'm the best in class in flying long distance."		"Ah, even so, I'm considerably skilled in levitation. I can't leap high, but I'm the best in class in flying long distance."

	"The thought of you using ~~floating magic~~... somehow disturbs me. It's not just flying slowly like you think, you know."		"The thought of you using levitation... somehow disturbs me. It's not just flying slowly like you think, you know."

	In response to Celica, the cloudy looking Nine put the coffee-like substance to her mouth.		In response to Celica, the cloudy looking Nine put the coffee-like substance to her mouth.
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	Despite the appalled older sister, Celica suddenly changed the topic while putting her index finger to her chin.		Despite the appalled older sister, Celica suddenly changed the topic while putting her index finger to her chin.

	"It's no good if ~~floating magic~~ doesn't use broom. ~~Weird~~."		"It's no good if levitation doesn't use broom. It's weird."

	"But isn't it romantic to get on a broom to fly in the sky~?"		"But isn't it romantic to get on a broom to fly in the sky~?"

Spesialo at 06:07, 1 July 2014

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Spesialo: /* Part 5 */

2014-01-02T14:28:47Z

Part 5

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	A method to keep Nine at a distance.		A method to keep Nine at a distance.

	"...Isn't it ~~simple~~?"		"...Isn't it easy?"

	Kazuma chuckled and hurriedly left behind the rocky area.		Kazuma chuckled and hurriedly left behind the rocky area.

Spesialo at 14:47, 1 January 2014

2014-01-01T14:47:27Z

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Spesialo: /* Part 3 */

2013-12-12T03:09:59Z

Part 3

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Spesialo: /* Part 2 */

2013-12-12T03:09:46Z

Part 2

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2013-12-09T02:19:23Z

Part 2

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	Terumi's words resounded in his mind.		Terumi's words resounded in his mind.

	''——That woman is monitoring you, ain't it?''		''——That woman is monitoring you, ain't she?''

	(Trinity-san is monitoring... me...?)		(Trinity-san is monitoring... me...?)

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2013-12-09T02:16:38Z

Part 2

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	Today, Ishana was blessed again with fine weather.		Today, Ishana was blessed again with fine weather.

	It was ~~the~~ after school as ~~the class~~ had ended. While holding his bag on his hand as he had finished the preparations for returning home, Kazuma looked out of the window in the hallway.		It was after school as classes had ended. While holding his bag in his hand as he had finished the preparations for returning home, Kazuma looked out of the window in the hallway.

	From there the academy's courtyard could be seen clearly. What Kazuma was looking was a small building peeking from the opposite side of the thick bushes and large trees, the Cathedral.		From there the academy's courtyard could be seen clearly. What Kazuma was looking at was a small building peeking from the opposite side of the thick bushes and large trees, the Cathedral.

	There, the Magic Guild's highly classified information was stored. Among them, there was information related to the ''Azure''.		There, the Magic Guild's highly classified information was stored. Among them, there was information related to the ''Azure''.

	The more he thought about it, the thought ~~toward~~ the Azure ~~inside Kazuma~~ grew ~~stronger~~.		The more he thought about it, the stronger his thought about the Azure grew.

	(Cathedral... Cathedral...)		(Cathedral... Cathedral...)
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	It was like there was another face underneath his face. While showing a smile that appeared on the surface of his face, underneath it was a face that kept attention to Trinity's every movement like he mustn't overlook even a slight fault.		It was like there was another face underneath his face. While showing a smile that appeared on the surface of his face, underneath it was a face that kept attention to Trinity's every movement like he mustn't overlook even a slight fault.

	"It seems so. The weather is nice that it brightens the mood~."		"It seems so. The weather is so nice that it brightens the mood~."

	"Yes, exactly."		"Yes, exactly."
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	Not showing any sign of doubt toward Kazuma's distrust, Trinity pulled her chin a bit and straightened herself again.		Not showing any sign of doubt toward Kazuma's distrust, Trinity pulled her chin a bit and straightened herself again.

	"Umm, Kazuma-san. Today, after this, do you have any ~~plan~~?"		"Umm, Kazuma-san. Today, after this, do you have any plans?"

	"~~Plan~~?"		"Plans?"

	While putting a casual voice, Kazuma secretly frowned beneath his bangs.		While putting a casual voice, Kazuma secretly frowned beneath his bangs.

	Why was Trinity ~~minding~~ about his ~~plan~~? The snake of suspicion, which had been coiling on the bottom of his stomach, raised its head.		Why was Trinity asking about his plans? The snake of suspicion, which had been coiling on the bottom of his stomach, raised its head.

	"No, I don't have any particular ~~plan~~. I'm just going to return to the dorm."		"No, I don't have any particular plans. I'm just going to return to the dorm."

	He didn't actually have any ~~plan~~, but he answered carefully to not give even a slight chance.		He didn't actually have any plans, but he answered carefully to not give even a slight chance.

	But Trinity turned shy while looking delighted, and then she narrowed her clear green eyes.		But Trinity turned shy while looking delighted, and then she narrowed her clear green eyes.
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	"...Huh?"		"...Huh?"

	~~It was~~ unexpected words. Kazuma couldn't keep up in understanding it and asked again in dull tone of voice.		They were unexpected words. Kazuma couldn't keep up in understanding them and asked again in dull tone of voice.

	Trinity's shoulders shook as she chuckled. Even now, her soft laughing voice was like fragrance of sugar and flowers drifting about.		Trinity's shoulders shook as she chuckled. Even now, her soft laughing voice was like fragrance of sugar and flowers drifting about.

	"Like I said, it's an invitation. If you don’t mind, Can we have a tea together?"		"Like I said, it's an invitation. If you don’t mind, Can we have tea together?"

	"By tea... Are you inviting me to drink tea?"		"By tea... Are you inviting me to drink tea?"
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	As for Kazuma, he couldn't give a reply while his eyes wandered around.		As for Kazuma, he couldn't give a reply while his eyes wandered around.

	He couldn't ~~make~~ sure of Trinity's true intention. He could follow as much as listening for the plans of the monitoring target. But as for the extent after that, there shouldn't be any significance unless she restricted the target's freedom. If she didn't do so, then she wouldn't be able to investigate where the monitoring target was going and what he did.		He couldn't be sure of Trinity's true intention. He could follow as much as listening for the plans of the monitoring target. But as for the extent after that, there shouldn't be any significance unless she restricted the target's freedom. If she didn't do so, then she wouldn't be able to investigate where the monitoring target was going and what he did.

	No. Trinity's monitoring was probably not to investigate Kazuma's action, but might be to restrain Kazuma's action. If that was the case...		No. Trinity's monitoring was probably not to investigate Kazuma's action, but might be to restrain Kazuma's action. If that was the case...
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	"Fufu. Actually, me too."		"Fufu. Actually, me too."

	With the hand that wasn't holding her bag, Trinity touched her cheek which was ~~like~~ dyed in light pink color.		With the hand that wasn't holding her bag, Trinity touched her cheek which was lightly dyed in light pink color.

	"I felt a little nervous to invite a man, even if he's a friend."		"I felt a little nervous to invite a man, even if he's a friend."

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2013-12-09T01:48:29Z

Part 2

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Today, Ishana was blessed again with fine ~~wheather~~.		Today, Ishana was blessed again with fine weather.

	It was the after school as the class had ended. While holding his bag on his hand as he had finished the preparations for returning home, Kazuma looked out of the window in the hallway.		It was the after school as the class had ended. While holding his bag on his hand as he had finished the preparations for returning home, Kazuma looked out of the window in the hallway.

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	From there the academy's courtyard could be seen clearly. What Kazuma was looking was a small building peeking from the opposite side of the thick bushes and large trees, the Cathedral.		From there the academy's courtyard could be seen clearly. What Kazuma was looking was a small building peeking from the opposite side of the thick bushes and large trees, the Cathedral.

	There, the ~~Magic~~ Guild's highly classified information was stored. Among them, there was information related to the ''Azure''.		There, the Mage’s Guild's highly classified information was stored. Among them, there was information related to the ''Azure''.

	The more he thought about it, the thought toward the Azure inside Kazuma grew stronger.		The more he thought about it, the thought toward the Azure inside Kazuma grew stronger.
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	Kazuma quickly shook his head.		Kazuma quickly shook his head.

	"No, absolutely not. I was just a bit surprised. It's because I never considered receiving tea invitation from someone like Trinity ~~Glassfield~~-san."		"No, absolutely not. I was just a bit surprised. It's because I never considered receiving tea invitation from someone like Trinity Glassfille-san."

	"Fufu. Actually, me too."		"Fufu. Actually, me too."
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	Celica giggled in girlish voice.		Celica giggled in girlish voice.

	"Oh no, Onee-chan. Since there's the ~~Magic~~ Guild's barrier, I can't get out from the island no matter how high I fly."		"Oh no, Onee-chan. Since there's the Mage’s Guild's barrier, I can't get out from the island no matter how high I fly."

	"Don't talk like that..."		"Don't talk like that..."
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	How did she know about that? The simplest way of thinking would be that she had heard about it from Trinity who had especially greeted him back then.		How did she know about that? The simplest way of thinking would be that she had heard about it from Trinity who had especially greeted him back then.

	Trinity informed Nine. Probably also about the matter Kazuma was investigating... Perhaps also about when he said he wanted to look at the ~~Magic~~ Guild's highly classified information.		Trinity informed Nine. Probably also about the matter Kazuma was investigating... Perhaps also about when he said he wanted to look at the Mage’s Guild's highly classified information.

	There was a noise of something shut tight within Kazuma's chest.		There was a noise of something shut tight within Kazuma's chest.
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	"The barrier... is neutralizing seithr?"		"The barrier... is neutralizing seithr?"

	It was the first time for him to hear the ~~Magic~~ Guild's barrier had such a power.		It was the first time for him to hear the Mage’s Guild's barrier had such a power.

	Terumi laughed with a face like he knew all about it.		Terumi laughed with a face like he knew all about it.
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	While maintaining the barrier, this spot alone had to be fixed. It also had to be done quickly.		While maintaining the barrier, this spot alone had to be fixed. It also had to be done quickly.

	For someone to be able to do such advanced things, it would be limited to people who excelled in magical ability by far in ~~Magic~~ Guild.		For someone to be able to do such advanced things, it would be limited to people who excelled in magical ability by far in Mage’s Guild.

	For example... Ten ~~Saints~~.		For example... Ten Sages.

	"Ten ~~Saints~~..."		"Ten Sages..."

	Kazuma's muttering leaked out as if spilling.		Kazuma's muttering leaked out as if spilling.
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	His lips moved like it was by reflex.		His lips moved like it was by reflex.

	"In case seithr got into Ishana... The Ten ~~Saints~~ would eliminate it and try to restore the barrier."		"In case seithr got into Ishana... The Ten Sages would eliminate it and try to restore the barrier."

	Same with restoring the barrier, there was also nobody who could eliminate seithr.		Same with restoring the barrier, there was also nobody who could eliminate seithr.
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	Suppose a magic that could neutralize and erase seithr existed, there would only be a handful of people who could do it as handling it was beyond ordinary man. Even if ignoring it, dealing with seithr required knowledge of advanced magic.		Suppose a magic that could neutralize and erase seithr existed, there would only be a handful of people who could do it as handling it was beyond ordinary man. Even if ignoring it, dealing with seithr required knowledge of advanced magic.

	Currently, Kazuma didn't know the exact number of people in Ten ~~Saints~~. But most of the students in the academy were aware that there were less people than the fixed number of ten people.		Currently, Kazuma didn't know the exact number of people in Ten Sages. But most of the students in the academy were aware that there were less people than the fixed number of ten people.

	Driving away seithr, possibly by neutralizing it, and restoring the barrier had to be done simultaneously.		Driving away seithr, possibly by neutralizing it, and restoring the barrier had to be done simultaneously.
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	Even if the seithr was driven out first, if the hole was open, then new seithr would just get inside again. If restoring the barrier came first, since there would be no outlet for seithr, they would have to increase the neutralizing to the inner part of the island.		Even if the seithr was driven out first, if the hole was open, then new seithr would just get inside again. If restoring the barrier came first, since there would be no outlet for seithr, they would have to increase the neutralizing to the inner part of the island.

	If such situation happened, even at the best of times, the small number of Ten ~~Saints~~ should all get gathered.		If such situation happened, even at the best of times, the small number of Ten Sages should all get gathered.

	With everyone spending their time and energy on it, perhaps they would be shorthanded about other things.		With everyone spending their time and energy on it, perhaps they would be shorthanded about other things.
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	Was that an indication that she had guessed it? Or did it go unnoticed under the cover of night? After Nine stopped once more a little in front of Trinity, she looked over her shoulder to see Kazuma with a testing way of speaking.		Was that an indication that she had guessed it? Or did it go unnoticed under the cover of night? After Nine stopped once more a little in front of Trinity, she looked over her shoulder to see Kazuma with a testing way of speaking.

	"It seems there was a huge idiot making a hole in ~~Magic~~ Guild's barrier. I have to hurry getting in touch with Ten ~~Saints~~ and prepare for restoration arrangement. That's why..."		"It seems there was a huge idiot making a hole in Mage’s Guild's barrier. I have to hurry getting in touch with Ten Sages and prepare for restoration arrangement. That's why..."

	Nine smiled provocatively.		Nine smiled provocatively.
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	The hole in the barrier. There was still no indication of seithr coming in from there.		The hole in the barrier. There was still no indication of seithr coming in from there.

	That hole had a role. Connecting the exterior of the island with the inside; a role of giving a huge task for Ten ~~Saints~~ so that they had to get all their members.		That hole had a role. Connecting the exterior of the island with the inside; a role of giving a huge task for Ten Sages so that they had to get all their members.

	(Even if this hole got closed, there is a mean to open it, so it'd be good to find it. However...)		(Even if this hole got closed, there is a mean to open it, so it'd be good to find it. However...)

	Nine of the Ten ~~Saints~~. She alone seemed to continue being cautious of Kazuma even just now.		Nine of the Ten Sages. She alone seemed to continue being cautious of Kazuma even just now.

	It was preferred for this hole to draw in seithr to an extent so that Nine forgot about the torn barrier; and from hereafter, Nine would absolutely pay no attention about Kazuma.		It was preferred for this hole to draw in seithr to an extent so that Nine forgot about the torn barrier; and from hereafter, Nine would absolutely pay no attention about Kazuma.

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Today, Ishana was blessed again with fine ~~weather~~.		Today, Ishana was blessed again with fine wheather.

	It was after school as ~~classes~~ had ended. While holding his bag in his hand as he had finished the preparations for returning home, Kazuma looked out of the window in the hallway.		It was the after school as the class had ended. While holding his bag on his hand as he had finished the preparations for returning home, Kazuma looked out of the window in the hallway.

	From there the academy's courtyard could be seen clearly. What Kazuma was looking at was a small building peeking from the opposite side of the thick bushes and large trees, the Cathedral.		From there the academy's courtyard could be seen clearly. What Kazuma was looking was a small building peeking from the opposite side of the thick bushes and large trees, the Cathedral.

	There, the Magic Guild's highly classified information was stored. Among them, there was information related to the ''Azure''.		There, the Magic Guild's highly classified information was stored. Among them, there was information related to the ''Azure''.

	The more he thought about it, the ~~stronger his~~ thought ~~about~~ the Azure grew.		The more he thought about it, the thought toward the Azure inside Kazuma grew stronger.

	(Cathedral... Cathedral...)		(Cathedral... Cathedral...)
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	Terumi's words resounded in his mind.		Terumi's words resounded in his mind.

	''——That woman is monitoring you, ain't ~~she~~?''		''——That woman is monitoring you, ain't it?''

	(Trinity-san is monitoring... me...?)		(Trinity-san is monitoring... me...?)
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	It was like there was another face underneath his face. While showing a smile that appeared on the surface of his face, underneath it was a face that kept attention to Trinity's every movement like he mustn't overlook even a slight fault.		It was like there was another face underneath his face. While showing a smile that appeared on the surface of his face, underneath it was a face that kept attention to Trinity's every movement like he mustn't overlook even a slight fault.

	"It seems so. The weather is so nice that it brightens the mood~."		"It seems so. The weather is nice that it brightens the mood~."

	"Yes, exactly."		"Yes, exactly."
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	Not showing any sign of doubt toward Kazuma's distrust, Trinity pulled her chin a bit and straightened herself again.		Not showing any sign of doubt toward Kazuma's distrust, Trinity pulled her chin a bit and straightened herself again.

	"Umm, Kazuma-san. Today, after this, do you have any ~~plans~~?"		"Umm, Kazuma-san. Today, after this, do you have any plan?"

	"~~Plans~~?"		"Plan?"

	While putting a casual voice, Kazuma secretly frowned beneath his bangs.		While putting a casual voice, Kazuma secretly frowned beneath his bangs.

	Why was Trinity ~~asking~~ about his ~~plans~~? The snake of suspicion, which had been coiling on the bottom of his stomach, raised its head.		Why was Trinity minding about his plan? The snake of suspicion, which had been coiling on the bottom of his stomach, raised its head.

	"No, I don't have any particular ~~plans~~. I'm just going to return to the dorm."		"No, I don't have any particular plan. I'm just going to return to the dorm."

	He didn't actually have any ~~plans~~, but he answered carefully to not give even a slight chance.		He didn't actually have any plan, but he answered carefully to not give even a slight chance.

	But Trinity turned shy while looking delighted, and then she narrowed her clear green eyes.		But Trinity turned shy while looking delighted, and then she narrowed her clear green eyes.
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	"...Huh?"		"...Huh?"

	~~They were~~ unexpected words. Kazuma couldn't keep up in understanding ~~them~~ and asked again in dull tone of voice.		It was unexpected words. Kazuma couldn't keep up in understanding it and asked again in dull tone of voice.

	Trinity's shoulders shook as she chuckled. Even now, her soft laughing voice was like fragrance of sugar and flowers drifting about.		Trinity's shoulders shook as she chuckled. Even now, her soft laughing voice was like fragrance of sugar and flowers drifting about.

	"Like I said, it's an invitation. If you don’t mind, Can we have tea together?"		"Like I said, it's an invitation. If you don’t mind, Can we have a tea together?"

	"By tea... Are you inviting me to drink tea?"		"By tea... Are you inviting me to drink tea?"
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	As for Kazuma, he couldn't give a reply while his eyes wandered around.		As for Kazuma, he couldn't give a reply while his eyes wandered around.

	He couldn't be sure of Trinity's true intention. He could follow as much as listening for the plans of the monitoring target. But as for the extent after that, there shouldn't be any significance unless she restricted the target's freedom. If she didn't do so, then she wouldn't be able to investigate where the monitoring target was going and what he did.		He couldn't make sure of Trinity's true intention. He could follow as much as listening for the plans of the monitoring target. But as for the extent after that, there shouldn't be any significance unless she restricted the target's freedom. If she didn't do so, then she wouldn't be able to investigate where the monitoring target was going and what he did.

	No. Trinity's monitoring was probably not to investigate Kazuma's action, but might be to restrain Kazuma's action. If that was the case...		No. Trinity's monitoring was probably not to investigate Kazuma's action, but might be to restrain Kazuma's action. If that was the case...
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	"Fufu. Actually, me too."		"Fufu. Actually, me too."

	With the hand that wasn't holding her bag, Trinity touched her cheek which was ~~lightly~~ dyed in light pink color.		With the hand that wasn't holding her bag, Trinity touched her cheek which was like dyed in light pink color.

	"I felt a little nervous to invite a man, even if he's a friend."		"I felt a little nervous to invite a man, even if he's a friend."
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	Not noticing Kazuma's bad shape, Celica pierced a fork to her cake and stuff her cheek with a mouthful bite. Firmly closing her eyes and grasped the fork tightly, she groaned happily.		Not noticing Kazuma's bad shape, Celica pierced a fork to her cake and stuff her cheek with a mouthful bite. Firmly closing her eyes and grasped the fork tightly, she groaned happily.

	"Mmm~, delicious. Kazuma-san should also eat it, c'mon. The cake and ~~black~~ tea is reaaaaally tasty."		"Mmm~, delicious. Kazuma-san should also eat it, c'mon. The cake and tea is reaaaaally tasty."

	Toward Kazuma who wasn't having his ~~black~~ tea or cake, Celica urged him with sparkling eyes.		Toward Kazuma who wasn't having his tea or cake, Celica urged him with sparkling eyes.

	Beside her, Trinity wrapped her cheeks with both of her hands and was taken aback as she looked at Kazuma.		Beside her, Trinity wrapped her cheeks with both of her hands and was taken aback as she looked at Kazuma.
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	"No, not at all. I like it. I was just puzzled by the situation just now... I'll eat now, then."		"No, not at all. I like it. I was just puzzled by the situation just now... I'll eat now, then."

	Kazuma smiled while controlling the feeling of exhaustion that would make him collapse. Hooking his fingers to his cup, he drank the ~~black~~ tea that had its refined aroma rising.		Kazuma smiled while controlling the feeling of exhaustion that would make him collapse. Hooking his fingers to his cup, he drank the tea that had its refined aroma rising.

	It surely must have tasted good.		It surely must have tasted good.
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	But on Kazuma's surroundings, there were three people. Nine who held a drink that he wasn't sure if it's okay to call it coffee anymore while looking at his direction with sharp eyes. Celica who strangely made him felt sick just by being near her. And Trinity who was possibly monitoring him.		But on Kazuma's surroundings, there were three people. Nine who held a drink that he wasn't sure if it's okay to call it coffee anymore while looking at his direction with sharp eyes. Celica who strangely made him felt sick just by being near her. And Trinity who was possibly monitoring him.

	As he was 'having tea' while being surrounded by them, it was like he didn't have the proper feeling to enjoy the ~~black~~ tea's taste. The poor quality ~~black~~ tea he drank in his room was very much more relaxing.		As he was 'having tea' while being surrounded by them, it was like he didn't have the proper feeling to enjoy the tea's taste. The poor quality tea he drank in his room was very much more relaxing.

	(Really, how did this come to happen...)		(Really, how did this come to happen...)

	~~In the present time of~~ this baffling situation, Kazuma didn't even know what kind of expression would be good to make.		Presently in this baffling situation, Kazuma didn't even know what kind of expression would be good to make.

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