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	Seven adjusted his glasses using a finger.		Seven adjusted his glasses using a finger.

	"Both of us will prepare the required arrangements. All of you should make no mistakes. Proceed without fail."		"Both of us will prepare the required arrangements. All of you should be careful to make no mistakes. Proceed without fail."

	"Take care... the people of ''Orbis Librarius Norma''."		"Take care... the people of ''Orbis Librarius Norma''."
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	The sun sank further in the west. As the twilight sky burned an even deeper shade of red, the shadows gradually grew denser and longer as they were etched on the ground.		The sun sank further in the west. As the twilight sky burned an even deeper shade of red, the shadows gradually grew denser and longer as they were etched on the ground.

	As if putting on ~~the~~ shadow, Eight waved her long mantle and turned her back from the alley where ~~several figure people~~ had vanished. As ~~her~~ folded her arms ~~lifted up her~~ chest, she brought her cheek ~~near the flashy~~ fur.		As if putting on a shadow, Eight waved her long mantle and turned her back from the alley where the figures had vanished. As she folded her arms beneath chest, she brought her cheek to rest on her mantle's fur trim.

	"I ~~thought~~ about what to be done for a moment, but looks like everything ~~works~~ out in the end. It's fortunate that we have personal connection to Orbis Librarius Norma."		"I was worried about what had to be done there for a moment, but looks like everything will work out in the end. It's fortunate that we have a personal connection to Orbis Librarius Norma."

	"Fortunate, huh."		"Fortunate, huh."

	As if pouring cold water to Eight's good mood, Seven simply dropped a sigh.		As if pouring cold water over Eight's good mood, Seven simply dropped a sigh.

	His voice was ~~small~~, but Eight could hear ~~his nervousness~~. She ~~strongly churned up~~ the eyebrows that had been carefully groomed.		His voice was quiet, but Eight could hear how nervous he was. She furrowed the eyebrows that had been so carefully groomed.

	"What's wrong? I know that you want to say it was all thanks to that man. It's good that we listened to his story."		"What's wrong? I know that you want to say it was all thanks to that man. It's good that we listened to his story."

	"I wonder. I have no faith ~~for~~ that man. Once a traitor ~~will~~ always be a traitor. You need to pay attention, too."		"I wonder. I have no faith in that man. Once a traitor, always a traitor. You need to pay attention, too."

	"Is that so? Thanks for the warning."		"Is that so? Thanks for the warning."

	~~Because~~ Seven's scolding ~~didn’t seem that amusing~~ at all, Eight waved her hand over her shoulder. ~~As the~~ high heels ~~that supported~~ her slender legs ~~hit~~ the ~~stone~~ pavements, her ~~thighs, freely exposed from the dress' slit, left the place~~.		Seven's scolding clearly didn't amuse her at all, Eight waved her hand over her shoulder. Her high heels, supporting her slender legs could be heard striking the pavements, long after she had left her field of view.

	"Hmph, what a detestable man."		"Hmph, what a detestable man."

	After ~~the distance~~ was ~~far enough~~, Eight ~~spitted~~ out those words. As if trampling ~~those~~ words as it fell to her feet, her ~~heels made loud noises~~.		After she was sure that she was out of earshot, Eight spat out those words. As if trampling the words as they fell to her feet, her feet began to move faster.

	Similarly, while gazing at the retreating figure of his extravagant associate as she headed toward the ~~Mage~~'s Guild, Seven ~~slightly opened his mouth~~.		Similarly, while gazing at the retreating figure of his extravagant associate as she headed toward the Mages' Guild, Seven muttered to himself.

	"...What a loud-mouthed woman."		"...What a loud-mouthed woman."
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	The sun sank into the western sky.		The sun sank into the western sky.

	The color of the sky that looked burning ~~also~~ ran after its master and rushed to the west. As the city of Ishana gradually began to insinuate the presence of the night, Seven also began to walk to the ~~Mage~~'s Guild.		The color of the sky that looked burning ran after its master and rushed to the west. As the city of Ishana gradually began to insinuate the presence of the night, Seven also began to walk towards the Mages' Guild.

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	Spontaneously, a surprised voice leaked from Celica's lips.		Spontaneously, a surprised voice leaked from Celica's lips.

	~~Its height~~ was even ~~taller~~ than Hakumen, the tallest person Celica knew. But if Celica had to say something, the doll had slender limbs. Its metallic face was ~~modelled~~ after a lady ~~that looked a little old~~.		It was taller even than Hakumen, the tallest person Celica knew. But if Celica had to say something, the doll had slender limbs. Its metallic face was modeled after a lady in her middle age.

	Judging from something like a dress with long skirt ~~that was worn~~, the doll must be a female type.		Judging from the face, as well as the clothes it was modeled with, something like a dress with long skirt, the doll must be a female type.

	But its body was a bit large for a doll. The body ~~proportion was~~ also strange as its arms were big and long.		But its body was a bit large for a doll. The body proportions were also strange as its arms were big and long.

	"You wanted to show me this?"		"You wanted to show me this?"

	~~While still~~ wide-eyed, Celica ~~compared~~ Nine and the doll ~~many times over~~.		Still wide-eyed, Celica's gaze repeatedly darted back and forth between Nine and the doll.

	Nine gazed at Celica with warm look. She assured her by nodding and then moved her gaze to the doll.		Nine gazed at Celica with a warm look. She assured her by nodding and then moved her gaze to the doll.

	"You see, this doll would act with the purpose of 'guarding' a predetermined person. It'd protect them from danger and then lead them to escape. Depending on the situation, it would chase away the attackers."		"You see, this doll would act with the purpose of 'guarding' a predetermined person. It'd protect them from danger and then lead them to escape. Depending on the situation, it would chase away the attackers."
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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	Unable to grasp ~~the sudden topic that~~ had ~~been~~ calmly said, Celica asked again with her mouth half-opened.		Unable to grasp what Nine had just so calmly said, Celica asked again with her mouth half-opened.

	Wondering if it sounded odd, Nine ~~put~~ a light smile.		Wondering if it sounded odd, Nine gave her a light smile.

	"From here onward, the state of things in the world will get worse. My time ~~to remain~~ in Ishana keeps decreasing. Even when I'm staying in the island, my time with you is quite limited. That's why I ~~have~~ a bodyguard for you to prevent any unexpected occurrence while I'm not on your side."		"From here onward, the state of things in the world will get worse. My remaining time in Ishana keeps decreasing. Even when I'm staying on the island, my time with you is quite limited. That's why I made a bodyguard for you, to prevent any unexpected occurrence while I'm not at your side."

	"Aha... But whatever the circumstances is, don't you think it's too exaggerated?"		"Aha... But whatever the circumstances is, don't you think it's too exaggerated?"

	Celica ~~put~~ a wry smile.		Celica gave her a wry smile.

	Nine worried too much ~~for~~ Celica~~'s daily life~~. She was thankful of the thought, but Celica didn't expect Nine ~~doing~~ as far as ~~making~~ a bodyguard.		Nine worried too much about Celica. She was thankful for the thought, but Celica didn't expect Nine to go as far as to make a bodyguard.

	"I'm not really in that much ~~of a~~ danger. And in the ~~first place~~, I won't ~~leave~~ the island ~~like Onee-chan~~ and the others. I think there's ~~nothing~~ here that ~~makes me~~ need to be protected."		"I'm not really in that much danger. And in the any case, I won't be leaving the island with you and the others. I don't think there's anything here that I need to be protected from."

	Ishana was referred as ''the world's safest island''.		Ishana was referred to as ''the world's safest island''.

	The island was guarded by an invisible barrier ~~made from magic~~. It could even handle ~~something more~~ physical, like stopping missile barrage for example. Anything ~~that was going~~ to enter the island ~~would get~~ examined to see if ~~they~~ contained any risk related to organic ~~and~~ inorganic matter. Even leaving the island required a number of procedures.		The island was guarded by an invisible magical barrier. It could even handle physical attacks, like stopping a missile barrage for example. Anything trying to enter the island was examined by the barrier to see if it contained any risk related to organic or inorganic matter. Even leaving the island required a number of procedures.

	Naturally, the possibility for seithr and seithr-induced mad creatures to get inside and ~~harming~~ the people in Ishana was equal to zero.		Naturally, the possibility for seithr and seithr-induced mad creatures to get inside and harm the people in Ishana was equal to zero.

	In response to Celica who was comfortably laughing, Nine on the contrary knitted her eyebrows to stress her concern.		In response to Celica who was comfortably laughing, Nine on the contrary knitted her eyebrows to stress her concern.

	"You leaving the island or not is a different story. I ~~will use all my power to~~ reject ~~your~~ opinion ~~about~~ not ~~being~~ in danger."		"You leaving the island or not is a different story. I wholeheartedly reject the opinion that you are not in danger."

	"Eeh, why!? I'm not particularly in risk or ~~something~~."		"Eeh, why!? I'm not particularly at risk or anything."

	~~Getting~~ slightly sullen, Celica argued her. When she did that, Nine severely sharpened the glint in her eyes and frowned.		Growing slightly more sullen, Celica argued with her. When she did that, Nine severely sharpened the glint in her eyes and frowned.

	"Who was it again that slipped away from the island unauthorized without ~~doing~~ procedures? Who was it that could ~~no longer~~ be contacted for a month because of it, before finally getting stranded in the middle of a mountain? Hmm, I wonder who~?"		"Who was it again that slipped away from the island unauthorized without going through the proper procedures? Who was it that could not be contacted for a month because of it, before finally getting stranded in the middle of a mountain? Hmm, I wonder who~?"

	"T-That was, umm, a ~~coincident~~. It's because there were unclear circumstances..."		"T-That was, umm, a coincidence. It's because there were unclear circumstances..."

	Still fresh in memories, the incident that had developed into a quite dangerous experience was being ~~dug~~ up. Celica blatantly averted her eyes and ~~awkwardly smiling~~.		Still fresh in their memories, the incident that had developed into a quite a dangerous experience was being brought up. Celica blatantly averted her eyes and her awkward smile.

	Since she had ~~been able to meet a man named~~ Ragna, the incident was a trigger that led to a very profound memories for Celica herself... But in Nine's case, it must be a matter that shortened her life span considerably.		Since that was when she had met Ragna, the incident was a trigger that led to very profound memories for Celica herself... But in Nine's case, it must be a matter that had shortened her life span considerably.

	Nine brazenly let out an astonished sigh.		Nine brazenly let out an astonished sigh.

	"It's not just that. Tomorrow morning, the threat in your daily life we spoke of will about to begin."		"It's not just that. Tomorrow morning, the threat to your daily life we spoke of will be about to begin."

	"Aha... I get it. Are you worried?"		"Aha... I get it. Are you worried?"

	"~~Now that's a good penchant.~~ By all means, please be aware ~~of it~~."		"By all means, please be aware that I am."

	Celica scratched her cheeks since she absolutely couldn't declare that she didn't remember. With pompous manner, Nine displayed a composed smile to her.		Celica scratched her cheeks since she absolutely couldn't declare that she didn't remember. With a pompous manner, Nine displayed a composed smile to her.

	After that, anxiety ~~showed on~~ her eyes just for a ~~bit~~.		After that, anxiety flashed across her eyes, just for a moment.

	"...It's fine if you~~'re thinking~~ I'm worrying too much. But in four months ~~to come~~, it's hard to predict what ~~would~~ happen to Ishana. Don't you agree?"		"...It's fine for you to think I'm worrying too much. But four months time, it's hard to predict what will happen to Ishana. Don't you agree?"

	"I see... Only four months left."		"I see... Only four months left."

	Black Beast was ~~ceasing its activities~~ for a year. ~~Then four~~ months ~~later~~, ~~the silence~~ would be over.		The Black Beast was being stalled for a year. Four months from now, that peace would be over.

	It was something Celica ~~had known, too~~. ~~To face~~ that day, Nine, Trinity, and the others were giving their all to work hard every day.		It was something Celica was fully aware of. In preparation for that day, Nine, Trinity, and the others were giving their all to work hard every day.

	But the thing was, Nine had always been prone to worry to the point that it astonished the people on her surroundings. It was easy to imagine her worrying about Celica even though she was being occupied.		But the thing was, Nine had always been prone to worry to the point that it astonished the people on her surroundings. It was easy to imagine her worrying about Celica even though she was being occupied.

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	"Ouchie~. You don't have to hit me. I wasn't particularly showing my undies or anything."		"Ouchie~. You don't have to hit me. I wasn't particularly showing my undies or anything."

	"Undies!? ...Excuse me, every living man in the world is just a creature obsessed with indecent fantasies from the time they were a brat. They’re a lump of wild lust and perverted thoughts. Because your fair skin robs the eyes of those near you, you're surrounded by many shameless fantasies... Aah, it's disgusting to even think about it. Listen, watch out the next time you do something thoughtless. I'll make sure none of the passing men are able to feel ~~desire~~ any more!"		"Undies!? ...Excuse me, every living man in the world is just a creature obsessed with indecent fantasies from the time they were a brat. They’re a lump of wild lust and perverted thoughts. Because your fair skin robs the eyes of those near you, you're surrounded by many shameless fantasies... Aah, it's disgusting to even think about it. Listen, watch out the next time you do something thoughtless. I'll make sure none of the passing men are able to feel lust any more!"

	"...Ain't your head itself got quite a few of those shameless fantasies?"		"...Ain't your head itself got quite a few of those shameless fantasies?"
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	"Oh, already?"		"Oh, already?"

	"I've been requested to investigate more of ~~the~~ Eastern Europe. Incidentally, there seems to be some information circulatin' in Ishana. I'm goin' for it."		"I've been requested to investigate more of Eastern Europe. Incidentally, there seems to be some information circulatin' in Ishana. I'm goin' lookin' for it."

	"I see. Get in touch if something happens."		"I see. Get in touch if something happens."

	With the face of the commander of operation against Black Beast, ~~and~~ also the face of a young lady, Nine sent off Jubei with a smile.		With the face of the commander of operation against the Black Beast, but also the face of a young lady, Nine sent off Jubei with a smile.

	"Later," said Jubei as he turned back. Celica also frantically waved ~~her hand at~~ him.		"Later," said Jubei as he turned back. Celica also frantically waved him off.

	"Take care!"		"Take care!"

	~~On the small back which was walking away,~~ two tails ~~greatly~~ swayed as if ~~responding to her~~.		His two tails swayed at his back as if returning the gesture.

	As Jubei vanished ~~into~~ the street corner, the presence of the surrounding night became even more intense. When Celica looked up at the sky, distant stars started to blink.		As Jubei vanished around the street corner, the presence of the surrounding night became even more intense. When Celica looked up at the sky, distant stars started to blink.

	"I should return home soon. Are you and the others still ~~have~~ a meeting later, Onee-chan?"		"I should return home soon. Are you and the others still having a meeting later, Onee-chan?"

	~~Asking while tilting her head,~~ Celica linked her hands behind her back.		Celica linked her hands behind her back as she asked the question.

	Trinity, who was lending a hand to Terumi as he ~~was getting~~ up, gently shook her head.		Trinity, who was lending a hand to Terumi as he got up, gently shook her head.

	"The meeting is already over. And since I have ~~heap amount~~ of documents to write, I'll be taking a leave for tonight."		"The meeting is already over. And since I have heaps of documents to write, I'll be taking my leave for tonight."

	"I'm gonna ~~return,~~ too. ~~Got a work~~ given by that hysterical woman."		"I'm gonna go home too. I have an assignment given by that hysterical woman."

	No sooner after he spoke, the hem of his long coat ~~turned over~~. ~~The rough~~ footsteps hit the stone pavement as Terumi walked away. He was heading to a housing complex managed by Mage's Guild. Because of ~~magic~~, the scope of Terumi's ability to act alone was limited. The complex was also where he spent most of his time by himself.		No sooner after he spoke, the hem of his long coat swept past. Rough footsteps hit the stone pavement as Terumi walked away. He was heading to a housing complex managed by the Mage's Guild. Because of the Mind Eater, the scope of Terumi's ability to act alone was limited. The complex was also where he spent most of his time by himself.

	While pinning down her hood so it wouldn't get blown by the strong wind, Trinity gracefully smiled and went on her way after exchanging farewells.		While pinning down her hood so it wouldn't get blown by the strong wind, Trinity gracefully smiled and went on her way after exchanging farewells.