BlazBlue:Phase Shift 2 Chapter 5 - Revision history

141.101.99.158: /* Chapter 5: Black Beast, Reappears */ made irt read better

2018-10-30T19:01:30Z

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	(This is… the Black Beast…)		(This is… the Black Beast…)

	Her throat was stuck. ~~Voice wouldn't come out~~.		Her throat was stuck. Her scream strangled and unable to escape.

	She was afraid. It was different from the vague fear she had a while ago as it made Celica wither in pain.		She was afraid. It was different from the vague fear she had a while ago as it made Celica wither in pain.
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	"…!?"		"…!?"

	Celica stopped moving ~~in her surprise~~.		Celica stopped moving, startled.

	It threw its whole body towards the black giant without any hesitation.		It threw its whole body towards the black giant without any hesitation.

	For an instant, that figure was overlapped ~~with~~ a nostalgic silhouette.		For an instant, that figure was overlapped by a nostalgic silhouette.

	(No, that's wrong. It's not Ragna.)		(No, that's wrong. It's not Ragna.)
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	The distance was no longer mattered. The seithr would blow around violently whenever the Black Beast was near. The following rampage of wind toyed with her hair and mantle annoyingly.		The distance was no longer mattered. The seithr would blow around violently whenever the Black Beast was near. The following rampage of wind toyed with her hair and mantle annoyingly.

	Even while squinting her eyes from the head wind, Celica couldn't take off her eyes from the approaching black mass that ~~caused~~ the quake.		Even while squinting her eyes to protect from from the head wind, Celica couldn't take off her eyes from the approaching black mass that was causing the quake.

	It wasn't because she was terrified. She was searching for a presence inside this dreadful and grotesque of a giant.		It wasn't because she was terrified. She was searching for a presence inside this dreadful and grotesque figure of a giant.

	Celica had a thought. The monster kept walking to Celica's direction even while withstanding the fierce attack. There might be a part within it that remembered the promise to 'return'.		Celica had a thought. The monster kept walking in Celica's direction even while withstanding the fierce attack. There might be a part within it that remembered the promise to 'return'.

	A foolishly optimistic thought that ~~might get laughed at by~~ anyone else if they had heard ~~about~~ it. But once she gave it a thought, Celica couldn't stop ~~her~~ feeling.		A foolishly optimistic thought that be laughable to anyone else if they had heard it. But once she gave it a thought, Celica couldn't stop feeling like it was the truth.

	"I must go!"		"I must go!"

	~~With~~ this ~~much~~ distance, Celica~~'s legs~~ could ~~run until she got close~~. ~~Taking a~~ resolve, Celica dashed off of the ocher soil. …However, someone suddenly caught her arm.		At this short distance, Celica could reach the beast with a short sprint. Steeling her resolve, Celica dashed off over the ocher soil. …However, someone suddenly caught her arm.

	"Wha… Nirvana?"		"Wha… Nirvana?"

	When she turned ~~around~~, Nirvana, who had been standing motionlessly beside Celica, used her large, weaponized hand to grab Celica's wrist.		When she turned to look, Nirvana, who had been standing motionlessly beside Celica, used her large, weaponized hand to grab Celica's wrist.

	The beautiful artificial eyes were staring at Celica silently.		The beautiful artificial eyes were staring at Celica silently.

	She had judged that it would be dangerous for Celica to go any further. Celica struggled, shaking her arm to loosen Nirvana's hand, but she was undaunted ~~as if she was a~~ tough restraint.		She had judged that it would be dangerous for Celica to go any further. Celica struggled, shaking her arm to loosen Nirvana's hand, but she was undaunted and continued her tough restraint.

	"Let me go, Nirvana! I want to go there. I might be able to meet Ragna. So ple…"		"Let me go, Nirvana! I want to go there. I might be able to meet Ragna. So ple…"
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	Under Celica's feet, veins of light were appearing.		Under Celica's feet, veins of light were appearing.

	As if in the middle of drawing a pattern, it crawled on the ground ~~with constant~~ speed ~~and adding complexity to~~ the ~~line~~.		As if in the middle of drawing a pattern, it crawled along the ground at a great speed, the pattern becoming more complex every moment.

	She didn't know its purpose, but Celica soon realized what the light was drawing.		She didn't know its purpose, but Celica soon realized what the light was drawing.

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2018-08-27T21:22:56Z

Chapter 5: Black Beast, Reappears: englishness

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	The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.		The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.

	Hakumen's ~~body~~ was knocked and ~~struck~~ the ground. The ~~shock hollowed~~ the earth. But before the soaring cloud of dust ~~even settled~~, the white warrior was already standing up.		Hakumen's was knocked away and he hit the ground hard. The impact dented the earth. But before the soaring cloud of dust had a chance to settle, the white warrior was already standing up.

	~~In response to~~ the gallant figure of Hakumen, white lightning was ~~casted from one part of the battlefield~~ like a rain.		Highlighting the gallant figure of Hakumen against the battlefield, white lightning was cast about as if falling like rain.

	It was the Armagus unit led by Nine.		It was the Armagus unit led by Nine.

	There ~~was~~ numerous lightning ~~bolt~~ as it was ~~casted~~ repeatedly. ~~It made explosions while at the time resounded~~ thunderous roar that ~~wasn't inferior to~~ the Black Beast's howl.		There were numerous lightning bolts as the spell was cast repeatedly. Explosions of electricity were punctuated by a thunderous roar that matched the intensity of the Black Beast's howl.

	Subsequently, Jubei's unit approached with great speed from behind the Black Beast. ~~They were aiming for the~~ its feet. The ~~alchemistical~~ weapons that Trinity had ~~prepared disturbed its movement occasionally by repelling~~ the giant's feet ~~from the ground~~.		Subsequently, Jubei's unit approached with great speed from behind the Black Beast. Their target was its feet. The alchemical weapons that Trinity had provided helped to trip the giant's feet and obstruct its movement.

	Various offensive ~~magic~~ were fired off from the ~~dotted~~ magician unit. The military forces from ~~many~~ nations also commenced their attack simultaneously.		Various offensive magics were fired off from the magician unit who had positioned themselves to surround the beast. The military forces from the assorted nations also commenced their attack simultaneously.

	Celica ~~was watching~~ on ~~how~~ the battlefield ~~had become intensive~~ in a blink of an eye ~~from the hill of the mountain side~~.		Celica watched on from the mountainside as the battlefield became intense in a blink of an eye.

	It was a ghastly spectacle.		It was a ghastly spectacle.

	It couldn't be more obvious that it was a struggle which humanity had concentrated the power they had at.		It couldn't be more obvious that it was a struggle in which humanity had concentrated all of the power they had at their disposal.

	The ~~one which had superior accomplishment among them was~~ Armagus.		The Armagus squad's attacks were proving to be the most effective.

	The number of ~~users~~ that had been assembled spanned several times of Ishana's inhabitants. The average offensive ability from the Armagus couldn't be compared with the ~~magician~~ unit.		The number of armagus weilders that had been assembled spanned several times the number of Ishana's inhabitants. The average offensive ability from the Armagus couldn't be compared with that of the smaller magicians' unit.

	Because Nine was giving the ~~command~~, the raining ~~impact~~ of the Armagus ~~didn~~'t ~~get jumbled~~. ~~It clinched~~ the ~~legs which were the means for~~ the Black Beast ~~to advance. It even reacted like~~ it ~~was taken aback~~.		Because Nine was giving commands to the armagus squad, the raining spears of the Armagus's light weren't fired wildly. The combined force of the lightning worked to stagger the Black Beast as it struck at its ankles.

	It was effective. ~~That conviction felt~~ like humanity was drawing a victory for the first time.		It was effective. The faltering steps of the beast made it feel like humanity was drawing a victory for the first time.

	…But when the hands that were used to attack repeatedly stopped for a moment, the Black Beast cried its ferocious voice and swung its eight necks.		…But when the hands that were used to attack repeatedly stopped for a moment, the Black Beast cried out with its ferocious voice and swung its eight necks.

	When the long necks brushed off the sky, the thick fog roared and gouged the earth like a whip. Along with a howl, the descending mass of seithr crushed the earth and living beings like a lump of iron.		When the long necks brushed off the sky, the thick fog roared and gouged the earth like a whip. Along with a howl, the descending mass of seithr crushed the earth and living beings like a lump of iron.

141.101.107.171: /* Chapter 5: Black Beast, Reappears */ Englishification

2018-05-28T23:00:37Z

Chapter 5: Black Beast, Reappears: Englishification

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	After he landed on top of the cleaved snake head, Hakumen flipped his sword and without any unnecessary movement pierced the crown of the head, drawing a vertical line.		After he landed on top of the cleaved snake head, Hakumen flipped his sword and without any unnecessary movement pierced the crown of the head, drawing a vertical line.

	The head took almost all of the long blade, and then it violently struggled. But before it did, Hakumen pulled the sword and leaped ~~to a dodge~~. Next, he gave a slash to the neck part.		The head took almost all of the long blade, and then it violently struggled. But before it did, Hakumen pulled out the sword and leaped away. Next, he gave another slash to the neck part.

	The sharp noise of the slash was vividly audible. It sliced the part under the jaw in a straight line.		The sharp noise from the slash was vividly audible. It sliced the part under the jaw in a straight line.

	Nonetheless, there was a drastic ~~mass~~ difference between Black Beast and Hakumen.		Nonetheless, there was a drastic size difference between Black Beast and Hakumen.

	Even the eye-snatching white gleam of the long sword was unable to completely chop ~~off~~ the demon's neck. Perhaps the wounds of the squirming neck had ~~finally~~ healed since it calmly began to brush Hakumen away.		Even the eye-snatching white gleam of the long sword was unable to completely chop through the demon's neck. Perhaps the wounds of the squirming neck had healed since it calmly began to brush Hakumen away.

	~~But still~~ not ~~minding it~~, Hakumen jumped high and didn’t ~~even stop his hands from moving~~ the sword.		Still not paying any heed to its counterattack, Hakumen jumped high and didn’t hesitate to swing the sword.

	The strokes of the sword were many and the blows ~~were~~ deep.		The strokes of the sword were many and the blows cuts deep.

	While keeping the jaw that had received blows in check with his brute strength, he slashed it from bottom up.		While keeping the monster's jaw, that had received blows to keep it in check with his brute strength, he slashed it from the bottom up.

	~~Altering the recoil with a jump~~, he ~~kept going around just~~ below the jaw and stabbed the sword to the monster's throat. Then he ~~sliced it by falling~~ down~~, leaving it~~ to ~~gravity~~.		Jumping up to follow his cut, he rose up below the jaw and stabbed the sword to the monster's throat. Then allowed gravity to assist his cut as he slip down the long neck to the ground.

	The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.		The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.

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	At Ishana's magician unit, Terumi looked up at the silhouette whose frame was now blocking out the horizon. He laughed. ~~It was~~ not ~~because of~~ joy ~~nor composure. It~~ was ~~a laugh that happened~~ because he couldn't ~~hold it~~.		At Ishana's magician unit, Terumi looked up at the silhouette whose frame was now blocking out the horizon. He laughed. Laughter escaped from the man's mouth, but not due to joy, it was because he couldn't think of any better response.

	He softly muttered under ~~the~~ hood.		He softly muttered under his hood.

	"This guy's nasty... He's even bigger than the last time…"		"This guy's nasty... He's even bigger than the last time…"
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	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

	The Black Beast loudly ~~roared~~. Its paralyzing howls combined into one and would ~~give~~ terror to animal ~~instinct~~.		The Black Beast roared loudly. Its paralyzing howls combined into one and would inspire terror instinctively within any animal.

	The destructive voice ~~struck and~~ was enough to shake the ground. It was giving ~~the~~ vibes of despair to the world.		The destructive voice was enough to shake the ground. It was giving off vibes of despair to the world.

	The black mass ~~which trampled the common sense within people and couldn't just be treated as phenomenon~~. The shadow monster. The Black Beast.		The black mass went beyond normal human comprehension. The shadow monster. The Black Beast.

	Its eight heads were raised and the ominous red eyes were lit up. It moved around like it was searching for something.		Its eight heads were raised and the ominous red eyes were lit up. It moved around like it was searching for something.

	~~Several red~~ lines of its veins were running on its ~~large~~ body. It looked like the wiring of an ~~artificial~~ device ~~and also the blood vessels that~~ were ~~spread out in the whole body of living things. It was~~ pulsing ~~lights~~ as if ~~it was~~ beating. It went beyond fear as to being repulsive.		Red lines marking its veins were running over its entire body. It looked almost like the wiring of an electrical device. The veins were pulsing light as if they were beating. It went beyond fear as to being repulsive.

	The eight heads roamed about until they made a discovery all at once. A young girl standing alone in the wasteland… Celica.		The eight heads roamed about until they made a discovery all at once. A young girl standing alone in the wasteland… Celica.

	Its red eyes were glaring as if some kind of emotion ~~passed by~~.		Its red eyes were glaring as if some kind of emotion was crossing his features.

	However, the color was nothing but sinister. The sensation was far from ~~the~~ emotion a human could have.		However, the color was nothing but sinister. The sensation was far from any emotion a human could have.

	Her eyes met the Black Beast's. ~~She realized about that, but~~ Celica wasn't able to ~~take off~~ her gaze ~~nor stared back~~.		Her eyes met the Black Beast's. Celica wasn't able to tear her gaze away from its many heads.

	Her body was frozen in place from the ~~beginning~~ of her head to the ~~end~~ of her feet. With ~~even~~ her gaze ~~solidified~~, Celica was at her wit's end as she trembled in fear.		Her body was frozen in place from the top of her head to the soles of her feet. With her gaze frozen in place, Celica was at her wit's end as she trembled in fear.

	(This is… the Black Beast…)		(This is… the Black Beast…)
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	Her throat was stuck. Voice wouldn't come out.		Her throat was stuck. Voice wouldn't come out.

	She was afraid. It was different from the vague fear she had a while ago as it made Celica ~~withered~~ in pain.		She was afraid. It was different from the vague fear she had a while ago as it made Celica wither in pain.

	The eight crooked necks bent like ~~a whip and~~ moved. ~~Fitting~~ its large size, the black giant moved ahead in grandiose manner.		The eight crooked necks bent like whips as they moved. Befitting its large size, the black giant moved ahead in grandiose manner.

	Several steps more, the eight snakes would reach Celica. She might get eaten. Or else, she might get crushed. Either way, that moment would be the end for her.		Several steps more and the eight snakes would reach Celica. She might get eaten. Or else, she might get crushed. Either way, that moment would be the end for her.

	Although that thought ~~constantly came to~~ her mind, there was nothing that ~~would tell her what to do~~. She could only tremble and stood petrified unable to do anything, like a baby…		Although that thought permeated her mind, there was nothing she could do to move from that point. She could only tremble and stood there, petrified, unable to do anything, like a baby…

	(…But Ragna…)		(…But Ragna…)

	For an instant, the precious color of an ~~eye went past~~ her terrified~~, shivering mind~~.		For an instant, the precious color of an cut through her other terrified thoughts.

	It was clear green. A warm and gentle color of green, like a summer ~~that was~~ full ~~of leaf~~. But probably because of his wound, only the left side of his eyes was fine. He was always astonished, angry, and laughing with only one ~~part~~ of his eyes.		It was clear green. A warm and gentle color of green, like a tree in summer, full with leaves. But probably because of his wound, only the left side of his eyes was fine. He was always astonished, angry, and laughing with only one half of his eyes.

	A transparent wind blew through Celica's chest. Her panic disappeared like it ~~was~~ a lie.		A transparent wind blew through Celica's chest. Her panic disappeared like it had all been a lie.

	(Ragna… faced this alone.)		(Ragna… faced this alone.)

	Thanks to it, Celica ~~didn~~'t ~~lose~~ her life.		Thanks to it, Celica hadn't lost her life.

	Humanity obtained one year of time that ~~was~~ both short and long.		Humanity obtained one year of time that to her felt both short and long.

	And Ragna had not yet to come back.		And Ragna had not yet come back.


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	"…na."		"…na."

	As if the feeling ~~pushed~~ her back, Celica took a step forward.		As if the feeling was pushing her back, Celica took a step forward.


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	Ragna had promised to return. To take back the red coat he had entrusted to Celica.		Ragna had promised to return. To take back the red coat he had entrusted to Celica.

	Celica held onto it, awaiting for Ragna to return... She promised.		Celica had held onto it, awaiting for Ragna to return... She promised.

	Then if Ragna was somewhere inside the black mass in front of her eyes…		Then if Ragna was somewhere inside the black mass in front of her eyes…
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	(I want to meet him——!)		(I want to meet him——!)

	~~The previously stepping~~ foot ~~immediately sent out~~ the ~~next foot~~. Celica ran ~~off~~ toward the Black Beast. While running, she ~~let~~ all of her ~~voice out~~.		One foot fell in front of the other. Celica ran toward the Black Beast. While running, she shouted with all her breath.

	"RAGNA——————————————————!"		"RAGNA——————————————————!"
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	"…!?"		"…!?"

	Celica ~~halted her feet~~ in her surprise.		Celica stopped moving in her surprise.

	It threw its whole body to the black giant without ~~a slight~~ hesitation.		It threw its whole body towards the black giant without any hesitation.

	For an instant, that figure was overlapped with a nostalgic silhouette.		For an instant, that figure was overlapped with a nostalgic silhouette.
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	It was Hakumen.		It was Hakumen.

	After he landed on top of the cleaved ~~snakehead~~, Hakumen flipped his sword without unnecessary movement ~~and ruthlessly~~ pierced the head, ~~making~~ a vertical line.		After he landed on top of the cleaved snake head, Hakumen flipped his sword and without any unnecessary movement pierced the crown of the head, drawing a vertical line.

	The head took almost all of the long blade, and then it violently struggled. But before it did, Hakumen pulled the sword and leaped to a dodge. Next, he gave a slash to the neck part.		The head took almost all of the long blade, and then it violently struggled. But before it did, Hakumen pulled the sword and leaped to a dodge. Next, he gave a slash to the neck part.

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	Meanwhile with the Armagus unit near the ~~headquarters~~, Nine~~'s chest~~ was ~~gasping~~ for breath ~~as her breath had gone ragged unconsciously~~. She stared at it with hostility floating in her eyes.		Meanwhile with the Armagus unit near the operations base, Nine was struggling for breath. She stared at the creature which had appeared with hostility floating in her eyes.

	"This is… the real deal…"		"This is… the real deal…"

	~~What made her breathing went unnoticed~~ was ~~not because of~~ the seithr that ~~went thick all~~ of ~~a sudden~~.		It was more than just the thick seithr that set her breathing out of control.

	She ~~held~~ down ~~her body with her judgment. That sensation made her stayed obediently while still trembling a little~~.		She mustered her willpower, in order to calm herself down.



	At the main unit, Trinity fell to her knees. ~~Strength was sapped from the waist to her~~ legs. Soon, she wasn't able to stand anymore.		At the main unit, Trinity fell to her knees. Her entire legs felt weak. Soon, she wasn't able to stand anymore.

	Her brain couldn't accept what her eyes were seeing. It felt like the insides of her skull were firing off warnings as they couldn't comprehend anything. …She could only ~~stay in~~ blank ~~with eyes opened wide~~.		Her brain couldn't accept what her eyes were seeing. It felt like the insides of her skull were firing off warnings as they couldn't comprehend anything. …She could only stare wide eyed with a blank expression on her face.



	At the assault unit leading various demi-~~human that was~~ pioneered by ~~the~~ beastkins, Jubei ~~tormented his~~ body ~~and~~ desperately ~~resisted~~ the ~~rejection in~~ his mind. It has begun, he thought. At the same time, he felt it was ~~also~~ strangely the end of things.		At the assault unit leading various demi-humans, pioneered by beastkins, was Jubei. His body was resisting him as he desperately tried to reject the fear that was gripping his mind. It has begun, he thought. At the same time, he felt it was strangely close to the end of things.

	Once, there ~~was~~ a time when he was near to it. That moment was also dreadful. He was unable to move as his feet had frozen.		Once, there had been a time when he was near to it. That moment was also dreadful. He was unable to move and his feet had frozen.

	But it was even bigger now that its ~~shadow couldn't grow anymore~~.		But that fear was even bigger now that he saw the beast at its full potential.



	Meanwhile at the ~~massive~~ assault unit, Valkenhayn ~~spontaneously~~ averted his eyes from the figure that appeared from the ground. It was like he had witnessed the world's demise itself.		Meanwhile at the largest assault unit, Valkenhayn averted his eyes from the figure that had appeared from the ground. It was like he had witnessed the world's demise itself.

	He had the courage to bear it within his field of vision again~~. While speaking~~ the name of the ~~person~~ he ~~gave~~ his loyalty to, he encouraged himself up.		Once he had the courage to bear it within his field of vision again, while whispering the name of the lord he had sworn his loyalty to, he encouraged himself to move.

	However, his body was already frozen in fright.		However, his body was already frozen in fright.
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	At Ishana's magician unit, Terumi looked up at the ~~soaring~~ silhouette ~~high in~~ the ~~sky~~. ~~His throat vibrated as he~~ laughed. It was not because of joy nor composure. It was a laugh that happened because he couldn't hold it.		At Ishana's magician unit, Terumi looked up at the silhouette whose frame was now blocking out the horizon. He laughed. It was not because of joy nor composure. It was a laugh that happened because he couldn't hold it.

	He softly muttered under the hood.		He softly muttered under the hood.

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2018-05-08T20:58:55Z

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	A strong breeze blew in from their front. Celica turned around to brush off the wind. Even that small movement felt sluggish and she found it really hard to move.		A strong breeze blew in from their front. Celica turned around to brush off the wind. Even that small movement felt sluggish and she found it really hard to move.

	~~Immediately~~, a thick fog sprouted out like a geyser in front of Celica's eyes. Celica screamed a little and ~~sprung~~ to ~~a jump. From~~ her side, Nirvana ~~used~~ her arms ~~to hold Celica~~ and stepped back ~~while carrying her~~.		Suddenly, a thick fog sprouted out like a geyser in front of Celica's eyes. Celica screamed a little and sprang backwards. Moving to her side, Nirvana scooped Celica into her arms and quickly stepped back out of the range of immediate danger.

	~~In the meantime, the~~ gushing mist from the ground ~~distinctly~~ multiplied to two, three bursts. As if aiming at a ~~spot~~, the ~~eruption~~ drew a dotted line ~~on its own~~.		The gushing mist from the ground multiplied to two and then three bursts. As if aiming for a specific location, the eruptions drew a dotted line across the terrain.

	It was the direction ~~where~~ Celica and Hakumen were staring at. ~~The location of a~~ barren and uncovered wasteland.		It was heading in the direction that Celica and Hakumen were staring at. Toward the barren and uncovered wasteland.

	After the small ~~openings of the bursts gathered from around there~~, ~~it was~~ followed by a vast amount of black mist that began to overflow from the ground. A tremor violently shook the ground as if something was pushing up.		After the small geysers had burst forth, completely surrounding that area, followed by a vast amount of black mist that began to overflow from the ground. A tremor violently shook the ground as if something was pushing up against it.

	~~Conspicuously,~~ the ~~large opening of the burst eventually made~~ a ~~crooked neck and created cracks everywhere. It ripped~~ the ~~dry~~ wasteland ~~as it pleased~~.		Cracks erupted across the dry earth as a dark form emerged, tearing the previously unbroken wasteland in two.

	"MOVE!"		"MOVE!"

	Hakumen shouted an order.		Hakumen shouted the order.

	But Celica couldn't separate her eyes from the scene. ~~Rather than~~ the scenery, ~~all~~ of her senses ~~couldn't~~ run from the ~~sensation~~ she felt on her skin.		But Celica couldn't separate her eyes from the scene. It wasn't just the scenery that she couldn't escape from, none of her senses could run from the crawling she felt in her skin.

	It was the same as that time. The atmosphere she had felt just before she parted with Ragna one year ago.		It was the same as that time. The atmosphere she had felt just before she parted with Ragna one year ago.

	The wind ~~that was polluted~~ with seithr advanced and surrounded Celica's whole body. The earthquake was so violent ~~it pushed~~ her ~~feet off the ground~~.		The wind, thick with seithr, advanced and surrounded Celica's whole body. The earthquake was so violent that she lost her footing and stumbled.

	Nirvana supported Celica as she was staggering.		Nirvana supported Celica as she was staggering.

	Celica raised her face ~~up toward~~ while trying to oppose the devastating wind.		Celica raised her face upward while trying to oppose the devastating wind.

	Toward something enormous which tore the cracked earth and raised the ground level.		Toward something enormous which tore the cracked earth and raised the ground level.

	It was as black as a solidified darkness, had many red veins running on its figure, and had the shape of serpent ~~head~~. ~~The number of simple ways to speak of its~~ size ~~and potential limit were unimaginable~~.		It was as black as solidified darkness, had many red veins running along its figure, and had a head the shape of serpent's. Its immense size was beyond words.

	~~But Celica immediately realized~~.		Slowly, one by one, more heads crept from the depths of the earth. Each one matching the mammoth size of the first.

	~~The number of the creeping head was just one.~~		A total of eight necks dragged themselves from within the crater. Following them, a large torso, which surpassed even the size of the heads, appeared on the desolated ground.

	~~Instantly, another head of the same scale crawled out one by one.~~

	~~With a~~ total of eight necks dragged ~~out~~, a large torso which ~~far~~ surpassed the heads appeared on the desolated ground.

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	"Hmm? Perhaps you're getting embarrassed?"		"Hmm? Perhaps you're getting embarrassed?"

	~~Every single part of her upper body peeked at~~ Hakumen, but his white mask ~~still kept silence~~ without a slight movement.		She leaned towards Hakumen, moving her face close to his but his white mask remained silent without even a slight movement.

	It ~~was~~ hard to imagine, but he might be getting embarrassed for real, Celica thought. The childish emotion within Celica's mind was ~~getting ticklish~~. She was thinking to push him a little more. But that thought only lasted for a moment.		"It's hard to imagine, but he might be getting embarrassed for real", Celica thought. The childish emotion within Celica's mind was growing. She was thinking whether she should push him a little more. But that thought only lasted for a moment.

	~~Somehow,~~ Celica ~~realized~~ that Hakumen's appearance ~~gave~~ her ~~uncomfortable feelings~~. ~~This time,~~ a circumstance ~~was glanced from~~ his ~~straight~~ face.		Celica realised that Hakumen's appearance was suddenly making her uneasy. Perhaps she had subconsciously noticed a change in circumstance in his blank face.

	"Hakumen~~-san? What~~'s wrong?"		"Hakumen, what's wrong?"

	He didn't move even when ~~he got~~ addressed. Hakumen ~~kept focusing at his front~~ while holding his breath.		He didn't move even when addressed. Hakumen continued to face forward while holding his breath.

	As she thought, the situation was strange~~. It happened when she thought about it~~.		Just as she had thought, the situation was strange.

	As if enshrouded with thick heat, the air around Hakumen changed.		As if enshrouded with thick heat, the air around Hakumen changed.
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	Killing intent.		Killing intent.

	The dangerous sensation ~~even~~ made Celica, who was still ~~far~~ inexperienced, ~~instantly frozen~~ and ~~stopped~~ breathing.		The dangerous sensation made Celica, who was still inexperienced in combat, freeze on the spot and stop breathing.

	At the same time, Celica had a thought. What kind of opponent could make Hakumen ~~take out~~ so much killing intent?		At the same time, Celica had a thought. What kind of opponent could make Hakumen express so much killing intent?

	A strong breeze blew from ~~the~~ front. Celica turned around to brush off the wind. ~~She only did~~ that~~, yet it~~ felt sluggish and really hard to move.		A strong breeze blew in from their front. Celica turned around to brush off the wind. Even that small movement felt sluggish and she found it really hard to move.

	Immediately, a thick fog sprouted out like a geyser in front of Celica's eyes. Celica screamed a little and sprung to a jump. From her side, Nirvana used her arms to hold Celica and stepped back while carrying her.		Immediately, a thick fog sprouted out like a geyser in front of Celica's eyes. Celica screamed a little and sprung to a jump. From her side, Nirvana used her arms to hold Celica and stepped back while carrying her.

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	"Ragna…"		"Ragna…"

	Hearing the name she unintentionally ~~spoke~~, Hakumen turned his head toward her.		Hearing the name she had unintentionally whispered, Hakumen turned his head toward her.

	When he did, Celica finally noticed that she had been muttering. She quickly waved both hands in front of her face.		When he did, Celica finally noticed that she had been muttering. She quickly waved both hands in front of her face.

	"Ah, no, excuse me. I just ~~thought that you look like~~ someone ~~right now~~."		"Ah, no, excuse me. You just reminded me of someone for a moment."

	While speaking, Celica wondered ~~in her mind about~~ what made her ~~did~~ that.		While speaking, Celica wondered what made her think that.

	She shouldn't be recalling Ragna when she looked at Hakumen ~~somehow~~. It was ~~okay if~~ it ~~only happened~~ once or twice, but continuing to remember somebody else's image like this was really impolite. Even if Celica was a ~~dull~~ in etiquette, she could sympathize in that.		She shouldn't be recalling Ragna when she looked at Hakumen. It was understandable for it to happen once or twice, but continuing to remember somebody else's image like this was really impolite. Even if Celica was a dunse in etiquette, she could sympathize with that.

	She had to be careful. While staring at Celica as she was ~~controlling~~ herself, Hakumen leisurely asked a question a moment later.		She had to be careful. While staring at Celica as she was trying to compose herself, Hakumen leisurely asked a question a moment later.

	"…Do I have any resemblance to him?"		"…Do I have any resemblance to him?"
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	This time, Celica gasped in surprise.		This time, Celica gasped in surprise.

	She had never considered that she ~~was getting~~ questioned ~~for~~ it. He usually would have averted his face without speaking a word. She thought he would stay silent ~~while~~ looking ~~at a~~ distance with his white face.		She had never considered that she would be questioned about it. He usually would have averted his face without speaking a word. She thought he would stay silent, looking into the distance with his white face.

	Celica nodded twice afterward.		Celica nodded twice afterward.

	"I'm sure I told you about this before. ~~That~~ time, I was searching ~~for~~ his resemblance ~~with~~ you… but now I ~~found various~~ clear similarities."		"I'm sure I told you about this before. Last time, I was searching to find his resemblance in you… but now I can see there are clear similarities."

	"Hm."		"Hm."

	His ~~groan~~ urged her to continue. She might have misunderstood it, but Celica went along with her intuition.		His grunt urged her to continue. She might have misunderstood it, but Celica went along with her intuition.

	"He's blunt and has bad ~~manner~~. He also tends to get ~~in a fight~~ with ~~Onee-chan~~. But somehow, he's good at taking care of people. And… I didn't know where he ~~was coming~~ from or anything about ~~himself~~ at all."		"He's blunt and has a bad attitude. He also tends to get into arguments with my sister. But somehow, he's good at taking care of people. And… I didn't know where he came from or anything about his history at all."

	With good ~~mood~~, Celica spoke about ~~him~~ one by one while counting on her fingers. But her hands ~~immediately~~ opened up and she smiled while squinting ~~her eyes in~~ happiness.		With good cheer, Celica spoke about their similarities one by one while counting on her fingers. But her hands eventually opened up and she smiled while squinting with happiness.

	She pressed her chest ~~with both hands~~ as if a warm light had been lit inside.		She pressed her hands to her chest as if a warm light had been lit inside.

	"But I guess it's your air that's similar to his. When I look at you, ~~I recall~~ Ragna."		"But I guess it's your air that's similar to his. When I look at you, It just makes me think about Ragna."

	In no way that ~~was~~ a painful feeling. ~~Her feeling toward~~ Ragna ~~was more~~ like ~~the same feeling when she was~~ basked with sunlight filtering through trees, back in the academy's courtyard.		In no way was that a painful feeling. When she thought about Ragna it felt like being basked with sunlight filtering through the trees, back in the academy's courtyard.

	"…Do you wish to meet him?"		"…Do you wish to meet him?"

	It was a miracle for a day to come when Celica was given a question filled with such emotion from Hakumen. Still spontaneously smiling looking for answer, Celica lifted her eyelids and looked at Hakumen.		It was a miracle for a day to come when Celica was given a question filled with such emotion from Hakumen. Still spontaneously smiling while looking for an answer, Celica lifted her eyelids and looked at Hakumen.

	She didn't know where ~~was~~ the location of his eyes and mouth on that white ~~and~~ flat ~~face~~. He might not have ~~one~~ in the first place. It was unclear whether Hakumen ~~was living while relying on five~~ senses ~~like~~ a human ~~would~~.		She didn't know where the location of his eyes and mouth were on that white, flat mask. He might not have a face in the first place. It was unclear whether Hakumen had the same 5 senses as a human.

	However, Celica ~~followed~~ the ~~feelings from~~ Hakumen's gaze and stared back at him.		However, Celica read the feeling in Hakumen's gaze and stared back at him.

	"Yup, I want to."		"Yup, I want to."

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	There was no squadron posted near Celica. During the strategy meeting, she had emphasized the possibility that the Black Beast might not be able to find her if she was included in a unit.		There was no squadron posted near Celica. During the strategy meeting, she had emphasized the possibility that the Black Beast might not be able to find her if she was included in a unit.

	Of course, Nine was opposed to it. But she was eventually outmatched by Celica's unyielding spirit once she had decided on her plan. Then she arranged for Celica to be stationed in the middle of the wasteland. Yet she would allow it only if Nirvana and Hakumen were with her~~. It all led to now~~.		Of course, Nine was opposed to it. But she was eventually outmatched by Celica's unyielding spirit once she had decided on her plan. Then she arranged for Celica to be stationed in the middle of the wasteland. Yet she would allow it only if Nirvana and Hakumen were with her.

	After Celica calmly called out to her, Nirvana ~~ceased her cautious attitude~~.		After Celica calmly called out to her that nothing was the matter, Nirvana relaxed.

	Hakumen stood beside Celica. His white mask turned toward the air as if gazing at the wasteland.		Hakumen stood beside Celica. His white mask turned toward the air as if gazing at the wasteland.
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	A low, muffled voice questioned.		A low, muffled voice questioned.

	Celica looked up and stared at Hakumen's face. ~~His words were unexpected~~. Shrugging her shoulders, she broke down her expression with a bashful smile.		Celica looked up and stared at Hakumen's face. She wasn't expecting his question. Shrugging her shoulders, she broke down her expression with a bashful smile.

	"Aha... A little."		"Aha... A little."

	While ~~giving a reply~~, Celica ~~got~~ surprised by something other than Hakumen's remark. For the first time, she noticed that she was trembling a bit when she heard her own answer.		While replying, Celica was surprised by something other than Hakumen's remark. For the first time, she noticed that she was trembling a bit when she heard her own answer.

	She had never expected to be so terrified. But now that she had ~~realized it~~, she ~~found out~~ that there was a fear laying deep inside. ~~Comparing~~ it ~~like~~ a ~~small~~ pebble sinking ~~to the bottom of~~ a lake ~~was accurate.~~		She had never expected to be so terrified. But now that she had been asked, she realised that there was a fear laying deep inside. She would compare it to the feeling a pebble would have while sinking into a vast lake

	Celica drew her knees close and hugged herself tightly. She felt a bit relief from ~~getting enveloped by~~ her own body heat.		Celica drew her knees close and hugged herself tightly. She felt a bit of relief from the radiation of her own body heat.

	"But I'm not so sure what could be so terrifying. Because I feel safe as much as I feel scared. ~~This one~~ year, ~~Onee-chan~~ and the others ~~has~~ really done their best. It should be fine when the Black Beast ~~come~~."		"But I'm not so sure what could be so terrifying. Because I feel safe as much as I feel scared. For a whole year, my sister and the others have really done their best. It should be fine when the Black Beast comes."

	It ~~weren~~'t just Nine and Hakumen. Everyone around the world had done what they could.		It wasn't just Nine and Hakumen. Everyone around the world had done what they could.

	There were some quarrels among fellow countries, a reorganization that had to be done to the collapsing economy, and insufficient goods. The world had to go forward while burdened by loads of problem, but plenty of people had worked hard from each of their ~~place~~. And it finally ~~came~~ to today.		There were some quarrels among fellow countries, a reorganization that had to be done to the collapsing economy, and insufficient goods. The world had to go forward while burdened by loads of problem, but plenty of people had worked hard from each of their positions. And it had finally come to today.

	Celica believed that there wasn't any ~~pointless part within there~~.		Celica believed that there wasn't any wasted effort through that entire year.

	~~While staying in small posture~~, Celica straightened her back and raised her face up straight. Her big eyes reflected a distant scene.		Still hugging her knees, Celica straightened her back and raised her face up straight. Her big eyes reflected a distant scene.

	"~~Onee-chan with~~ everyone will surely win the battle. A world where everybody lives in peace without conflict is coming. And I'm glad I can lend my hand to achieve it. That's why right now I don't have any ~~regret~~ nor a single thought to ~~stop~~. But you know, it's just… "		"My sister and everyone else will surely win the battle. A world where everybody lives in peace without conflict is coming. And I'm glad I can lend my hand to achieve it. That's why right now I don't have any regrets nor a single thought to give up. But you know, it's just… "

	As she thought, being in the middle of an empty wasteland alone was frightening. A terribly simple reason that made her ~~shivering~~.		As she thought, being in the middle of an empty wasteland alone was frightening. A terribly simple reason that made her shiver.

	"…A world where everybody lives in peace. Without conflict…"		"…A world where everybody lives in peace. Without conflict…"

	Hakumen muttered in deep voice ~~and slightly made the parched sky vibrated~~. It was like he was thinking of a distant wish that was vanishing. Faint and weak, swept away by the rough wind.		Hakumen muttered in a deep voice. It was like he was thinking of a distant wish that was vanishing. Faint and weak, swept away by the rough wind.

	Hearing his voice which seemed like he was pondering of fleeting thoughts, Celica ~~pulled her head~~ and made a wry smile. When she heard Hakumen repeating her words, she became embarrassed. Because it felt like her naivety and inexperience were exposed.		Hearing his voice which seemed like he was pondering on fleeting thoughts, Celica looked up and made a wry smile. When she heard Hakumen repeating her words, she became embarrassed. Because it felt like her naivety and inexperience were exposed.

	"A-Ahaha. It's weird, isn’t it? I got scared despite thinking about all that. It seems I'm more confused than I thought."		"A-Ahaha. It's weird, isn’t it? I got scared despite thinking about all that. It seems I'm more confused than I thought."
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	"…There is nothing to fear."		"…There is nothing to fear."

	Hakumen looked straight forward and spoke, ~~looking like he didn’t~~ even ~~have a slight~~ hesitation. Clenching the dangling hands beside his body, his feet which were previously spread shoulder-wide stepped firmly on the hard ground without a hint of retreating.		Hakumen looked straight forward and spoke, showing not even the slightest hesitation. Clenching the dangling hands beside his body, his feet which were previously spread shoulder-wide stepped firmly on the hard ground without a hint of retreating.

	"I will slay the Dark One. Your only task is to see it with your eyes from here."		"I will slay the Dark One. Your only task is to see it with your eyes from here."