Category:ClannadCleanup - Revision history

Polarem: /* Consistency questions */ Resolve -- "Fuko" variants, "Fortune-telling", "Gramps"/"Pops", "Choir Club"

2011-06-09T16:27:56Z

Consistency questions: Resolve -- "Fuko" variants, "Fortune-telling", "Gramps"/"Pops", "Choir Club"

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	**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-		**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-
	***We should probably do a mass Find+Replace for "Fuuko"-->"Fuko", as this translation project is the only place where "Fuko" is used. --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 11:16, 18 February 2011 (UTC)		***We should probably do a mass Find+Replace for "Fuuko"-->"Fuko", as this translation project is the only place where "Fuko" is used. --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 11:16, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

			*Tomoya's nickname for Akio: "Gramps"/"gramps"/"Pops"/"pops"?
			**Actually, he calls Koumura "Gramps" and Akio "Pops". Capitalize both. --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 16:27, 9 June 2011 (UCT)

			*For Ryou: "fortune-telling" (62 occurrences), "fortune telling" (134 occurrences) or "fortunetelling" (2 occurences)?
			** "Fortune-telling" locked in --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 16:27, 9 June 2011 (UCT)

	=== Unresolved ===		=== Unresolved ===
	*For Fuko, are we going with "wood carving" or "wooden carving"?		*For Fuko, are we going with "wood carving" or "wooden carving"?

	*Remnants of "Fuuko" variants still exist, after conversion to "Fuko" (e.g. Fuutarou, Fuu-chan)

	*Are we using '?!' or '!?' ? A lot of the SEEN files I've gone through use '?!', so I'm assuming that's what we should use.		*Are we using '?!' or '!?' ? A lot of the SEEN files I've gone through use '?!', so I'm assuming that's what we should use.
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	*"Dad"/"dad", "Mom"/"Mum/"mom"/"mum"?		*"Dad"/"dad", "Mom"/"Mum/"mom"/"mum"?

	*Tomoya's nickname for Akio: "Gramps"/"gramps"/"Pops"/"pops"?

	*Akio, after he's caught dissing Sanae's bread. In Japanese, the words are all the same; only the amount of dragging is different (SVN version below. One of them is different in the Wiki)		*Akio, after he's caught dissing Sanae's bread. In Japanese, the words are all the same; only the amount of dragging is different (SVN version below. One of them is different in the Wiki)
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	::SEEN6800		::SEEN6800
	:::<0103> \{Akio} "I love it----!"		:::<0103> \{Akio} "I love it----!"

	*For Ryou: "fortune-telling" (62 occurrences), "fortune telling" (134 occurrences) or "fortunetelling" (2 occurences)?

	*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?		*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?
	** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428		** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428
	** The official TL from anime is "Choir Club". It sounds better than "Chorus Club" (even though both are technically correct).		** The official TL from anime is "Choir Club". It sounds better than "Chorus Club" (even though both are technically correct).
			** "Choir Club" locked in. Does it need to be capitalized? Always? --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 16:27, 9 June 2011 (UCT)

	*"University" or "College"?		*"University" or "College"?

Polarem: /* Unresolved */ Mark "souka" and "aa" for attention

2011-05-21T02:38:20Z

Unresolved: Mark "souka" and "aa" for attention

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	*Punctuation for flashbacks: It seems like the established convention for recalling a previous dialog is by prepending the line with double hyphens. However, some flashback lines are formatted without any way to differentiate them from the surrounding lines.		*Punctuation for flashbacks: It seems like the established convention for recalling a previous dialog is by prepending the line with double hyphens. However, some flashback lines are formatted without any way to differentiate them from the surrounding lines.
	**It also looks like the Japanese flashbacks are quoted using 『...』, as opposed to the regular 「...」. That makes searching a bit easier.		**It also looks like the Japanese flashbacks are quoted using 『...』, as opposed to the regular 「...」. That makes searching a bit easier.

			* Tomoyo says 「そうか」 ("Souka") a lot, which is a rhetorical "Is that so?", or often translated to "I see". Like 「ああ」 ("Aah", often translated "Yeah"), we should see if we can/should provide the explicit meaning in English

Polarem: /* Consistency questions */ Resolve - "Fuuko" vs. "Fuko"

2011-05-08T09:28:19Z

Consistency questions: Resolve - "Fuuko" vs. "Fuko"

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	*The piglet is sometimes referred to as "Botan" and sometimes as "Button"... which is the better choice?		*The piglet is sometimes referred to as "Botan" and sometimes as "Button"... which is the better choice?
	**It should be "Botan"		**It should be "Botan"

			*What about Fuuko? Are we changing her name to Fuko for consistency? The opening movie uses that instead of Fuko (in English text, even), and it's not like we can edit the video.
			**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-
			***We should probably do a mass Find+Replace for "Fuuko"-->"Fuko", as this translation project is the only place where "Fuko" is used. --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 11:16, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

	=== Unresolved ===		=== Unresolved ===
	*For ~~Fuuko~~, are we going with "wood carving" or "wooden carving"?		*For Fuko, are we going with "wood carving" or "wooden carving"?

			*Remnants of "Fuuko" variants still exist, after conversion to "Fuko" (e.g. Fuutarou, Fuu-chan)

	*Are we using '?!' or '!?' ? A lot of the SEEN files I've gone through use '?!', so I'm assuming that's what we should use.		*Are we using '?!' or '!?' ? A lot of the SEEN files I've gone through use '?!', so I'm assuming that's what we should use.
	**On an English level, the interrobang (?!)comes in both forms. It works as a tone modifier when making an explicative sentence. If it's more of a question, the question mark comes first. If it's more of a shout, the exclamation leads. Though, the writers of the ''Chicago Manual of Style'' would kill me for stating this. [[User:M\|M]] 14:41, 13 June 2008 (PDT)		**On an English level, the interrobang (?!)comes in both forms. It works as a tone modifier when making an explicative sentence. If it's more of a question, the question mark comes first. If it's more of a shout, the exclamation leads. Though, the writers of the ''Chicago Manual of Style'' would kill me for stating this. [[User:M\|M]] 14:41, 13 June 2008 (PDT)

	*What about Fuuko? Are we changing her name to Fuko for consistency? The opening movie uses that instead of Fuuko (in English text, even), and it's not like we can edit the video.
	**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-
	***We should probably do a mass Find+Replace for "Fuuko"-->"Fuko", as this translation project is the only place where "Fuuko" is used. --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 11:16, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

	*"Okay" or "Ok"?		*"Okay" or "Ok"?

Polarem: /* Files to be reviewed */ Clear -- Addressed all SEEN0416 comments

2011-05-05T14:07:10Z

Files to be reviewed: Clear -- Addressed all SEEN0416 comments

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 **Line 0597, <Sentence doesn't agree with discussion.  Discussion places it as recent but sentence says, "Just a while ago".> --[[User:OceanBlue|OceanBlue]] 14:23, 17 June 2008 (PDT)
 **Line 0864, <Uses present tense, but he isn't asking right now.  Should be, "You'll ask", but I'm not completely sure.> --[[User:OceanBlue|OceanBlue]] 14:23, 17 June 2008 (PDT)
 *[[Clannad:SEEN0417]]
 **Line 0142, <"Nobody" is singular, and "they" is plural.> --[[User:OceanBlue|OceanBlue]] 10:54, 23 June 2008 (PDT)

Polarem: /* Files to be reviewed */ Reviewed -- SEEN2415

2011-02-24T12:36:15Z

Files to be reviewed: Reviewed -- SEEN2415

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	*[[Clannad:SEEN2415]]		*[[Clannad:SEEN2415]]
	**Line 0075, <Sounds weird; is the double negation needed?>		**<del>Line 0075, <Sounds weird; is the double negation needed?></del>
	*[[Clannad:SEEN2417]]		*[[Clannad:SEEN2417]]
	**Line 0062, <"The 'I' you said just now!" and then "That means that you have a shaver with you. Therefore..." Is he just being silly or how can he deduce that from the 'I'?>		**Line 0062, <"The 'I' you said just now!" and then "That means that you have a shaver with you. Therefore..." Is he just being silly or how can he deduce that from the 'I'?>

Xcandescent: /* Unresolved */

2011-02-20T02:11:10Z

Unresolved

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	*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?		*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?
	** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428		** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428
			** The official TL from anime is "Choir Club". It sounds better than "Chorus Club" (even though both are technically correct).

	*"University" or "College"?		*"University" or "College"?

Polarem: /* Unresolved */ University vs. College

2011-02-18T13:15:55Z

Unresolved: University vs. College

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	*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?		*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?
	** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428		** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428

			*"University" or "College"?

	*There are several instances of Tomoya rigging a game such that Sunohara is bound to end up the loser; those should be unified.		*There are several instances of Tomoya rigging a game such that Sunohara is bound to end up the loser; those should be unified.

Polarem: /* Unresolved */ Flashback punctuation

2011-02-18T12:53:17Z

Unresolved: Flashback punctuation

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	*There are several instances of Tomoya rigging a game such that Sunohara is bound to end up the loser; those should be unified.		*There are several instances of Tomoya rigging a game such that Sunohara is bound to end up the loser; those should be unified.

			*Punctuation for flashbacks: It seems like the established convention for recalling a previous dialog is by prepending the line with double hyphens. However, some flashback lines are formatted without any way to differentiate them from the surrounding lines.
			**It also looks like the Japanese flashbacks are quoted using 『...』, as opposed to the regular 「...」. That makes searching a bit easier.

Polarem: /* Unresolved */ Fuuko-->Fuko; Sunohara losing games

2011-02-18T11:16:11Z

Unresolved: Fuuko-->Fuko; Sunohara losing games

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	*What about Fuuko? Are we changing her name to Fuko for consistency? The opening movie uses that instead of Fuuko (in English text, even), and it's not like we can edit the video.		*What about Fuuko? Are we changing her name to Fuko for consistency? The opening movie uses that instead of Fuuko (in English text, even), and it's not like we can edit the video.
	**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-		**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-
			***We should probably do a mass Find+Replace for "Fuuko"-->"Fuko", as this translation project is the only place where "Fuuko" is used. --[[User:Polarem\|Polarem]] 11:16, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

	*"Okay" or "Ok"?		*"Okay" or "Ok"?
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	*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?		*"Chorus Club" or "Choir Club"?
	** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428		** It's either "Chorus Club" or plain "Choir", since it's just a new and small club, the former sounds more appropriate. Some prestigious school choirs operate independently from the Student Council or whoever runs the extra-curricular clubs, making them insanely powerful. Those can be called "School Choir". Er, yeah, I was using my own high school as an example. And no, I was not a member. - Kinny Riddle, SEEN4428

			*There are several instances of Tomoya rigging a game such that Sunohara is bound to end up the loser; those should be unified.

Xcandescent: /* Unresolved */

2011-02-15T01:54:32Z

Unresolved

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	*What about Fuuko? Are we changing her name to Fuko for consistency? The opening movie uses that instead of Fuuko (in English text, even), and it's not like we can edit the video.		*What about Fuuko? Are we changing her name to Fuko for consistency? The opening movie uses that instead of Fuuko (in English text, even), and it's not like we can edit the video.
			**This occurs in the titles of the anime as well, and the offical subs use "Fuko". That said, I have no personal preference. -XCN-

	*"Okay" or "Ok"?		*"Okay" or "Ok"?