Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume15 Chapter5 - Revision history

Lygophile at 01:26, 17 August 2013

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	Though this was just the problem of the Ronsmier family, which should have no impact on the next Heaven's Blade successor. However, as Claribel was a Military Artist and was expected to inherit a Heaven's Blade, yet she had left Grendan, this had become an issue.		Though this was just the problem of the Ronsmier family, which should have no impact on the next Heaven's Blade successor. However, as Claribel was a Military Artist and was expected to inherit a Heaven's Blade, yet she had left Grendan, this had become an issue.

	Fermaus was the clear inheritor of Delbone's position. It was rumored that she had already built up a vast net of ~~psychokinesis~~. This piece of news was reassuring.		Fermaus was the clear inheritor of Delbone's position. It was rumored that she had already built up a vast net of Psychokinesis. This piece of news was reassuring.

	Two Heaven's Blade vacancies were still a problem.		Two Heaven's Blade vacancies were still a problem.
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	"Yes. The third mother form has finished its job."		"Yes. The third mother form has finished its job."

	The girl nodded. Like the nod of a robot. Their doubt vanished in the face of her ~~psychokinesist~~-like manner of speaking.		The girl nodded. Like the nod of a robot. Their doubt vanished in the face of her Psychokinesist-like manner of speaking.

	"That's why I'm here. What's not appropriate?"		"That's why I'm here. What's not appropriate?"

Lygophile at 22:28, 6 August 2013

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Xstar at 19:23, 19 August 2012

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	"Oh, what is your name?"		"Oh, what is your name?"

	"I'm ~~Vatei Lenly~~."		"I'm Vati Len."

	"I see. I'm Claribel Ronsmier."		"I see. I'm Claribel Ronsmier."
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	It was fear.		It was fear.

	~~Vatei Lenly~~?		Vati Len?

	Something ominous filled this name.		Something ominous filled this name.
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	"You............" Nina repeated like a broken toy.		"You............" Nina repeated like a broken toy.

	"I'm ~~Vatei Lenly~~. I'll be studying in Zuellni in the next term."		"I'm Vati Len. I'll be studying in Zuellni in the next term."

	"It..........."		"It..........."

	It shouldn't be like this. She wanted to say it but she couldn't. What should she do after denying her. To fight this girl named ~~Vatei Lenly~~?		It shouldn't be like this. She wanted to say it but she couldn't. What should she do after denying her. To fight this girl named Vati Len?

	She didn't know why calling this girl's name gave her sense a strong ominous feeling. But this wasn't the time.		She didn't know why calling this girl's name gave her sense a strong ominous feeling. But this wasn't the time.
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	(Ro......... Reu...........) Melnisc said.		(Ro......... Reu...........) Melnisc said.

	"~~Levatinn~~...........?"		"Lævateinn...........?"

	"How do you know its name?"		"How do you know its name?"

	~~Vatei~~'s expression remained unchanged, but Nina's feet moved because of that question.		Vati's expression remained unchanged, but Nina's feet moved because of that question.

	She had stepped back to gain some distance.		She had stepped back to gain some distance.
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	"Never mind. I won't get to the depth of it. But forget about doing something to me."		"Never mind. I won't get to the depth of it. But forget about doing something to me."

	~~Vatei~~ moved.		Vati moved.

	"Tsk!"		"Tsk!"
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	"..............."		"..............."

	~~Vatei~~ was silent. She moved past Nina and entered the building.		Vati was silent. She moved past Nina and entered the building.

	"At that time I just wanted to destroy this city, but I'll reach that goal in the next city."		"At that time I just wanted to destroy this city, but I'll reach that goal in the next city."
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	Nina didn't even get to ask that question as she stood there.		Nina didn't even get to ask that question as she stood there.

	~~Vatei~~ disappeared into Layfon's building. And next Nina's consciousness entered a false world as if she was dragged by the Haikizoku.		Vati disappeared into Layfon's building. And next Nina's consciousness entered a false world as if she was dragged by the Haikizoku.

	This was a dream.		This was a dream.
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	"Who are you?"		"Who are you?"

	"I'm ~~Levatinn~~. Nano-Celluloid Interface 1 ~~Levateinn~~. I'm the commander of Durindana, who was now fighting outside."		"I'm Lævateinn. Nano-Celluloid Interface 1 Lævateinn. I'm the commander of Durindana, who was now fighting outside."

	"....... Why are you here?"		"....... Why are you here?"
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	He was terrified. But he had nothing to gain by showing his weak side here. An iron will defeated his weakness as he continued to speak.		He was terrified. But he had nothing to gain by showing his weak side here. An iron will defeated his weakness as he continued to speak.

	~~Levatinn~~ was here without doing anything. It must have another goal. Anyway, Zuellni's reaction didn't feel like she was reacting to an enemy. In that case he must find out ~~Levatinn~~'s goal.		Lævateinn was here without doing anything. It must have another goal. Anyway, Zuellni's reaction didn't feel like she was reacting to an enemy. In that case he must find out Lævateinn's goal.

	"If I'm to declare it I'd say please allow me to destroy this world in the near future."		"If I'm to declare it I'd say please allow me to destroy this world in the near future."
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	"..................."		"..................."

	Karian didn't quite understand the meaning of it. But he understood the cause and reason. This world was interfering with ~~Levatinn~~ and its master's movement, and so it wanted to destroy this world. It was better than not knowing the reason.		Karian didn't quite understand the meaning of it. But he understood the cause and reason. This world was interfering with Lævateinn and its master's movement, and so it wanted to destroy this world. It was better than not knowing the reason.

	"But there is something we must do before that."		"But there is something we must do before that."
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	"That is.............."		"That is.............."

	Didn't that woman – ~~Levatinn~~ say something at that time?		Didn't that woman – Lævateinn say something at that time?

	He woke from his dream. His body didn't move but his eyes were opened. He realised he was in his own room. He was so busy this year that he barely had time to visit his home. But recently he had made time to return.		He woke from his dream. His body didn't move but his eyes were opened. He realised he was in his own room. He was so busy this year that he barely had time to visit his home. But recently he had made time to return.
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	She immediately realised something had changed.		She immediately realised something had changed.

	~~Vatei Lenly~~. The woman exuding a sense of danger, one that Nina couldn't do anything about. The woman whom Melnisc called ~~Levatinn~~. For that, the two had met in this dimension.		Vati Len. The woman exuding a sense of danger, one that Nina couldn't do anything about. The woman whom Melnisc called Lævateinn. For that, the two had met in this dimension.

	When Nina realised the situation, Schneibel had stopped speaking.		When Nina realised the situation, Schneibel had stopped speaking.
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	Zuellni didn't reply.		Zuellni didn't reply.

	"Concentrating on Durindana's attack, you haven't realised ~~Levantinn~~'s presence. Starting from me, every Electronic Fairy had missed her. I can't scold you for that."		"Concentrating on Durindana's attack, you haven't realised Lævateinn's presence. Starting from me, every Electronic Fairy had missed her. I can't scold you for that."

	"................"		"................"
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	In Schneibel's expression was disapproval that Nina couldn't understand.		In Schneibel's expression was disapproval that Nina couldn't understand.

	Schneibel couldn't guess the scope of meaning behind Zuellni's silence. Not that Zuellni couldn't speak of it. Schneibel had done a thorough research in Zuellni's situation before initiating communication through En. She didn't notice anything strange caused by ~~Levatinn~~'s presence.		Schneibel couldn't guess the scope of meaning behind Zuellni's silence. Not that Zuellni couldn't speak of it. Schneibel had done a thorough research in Zuellni's situation before initiating communication through En. She didn't notice anything strange caused by Lævateinn's presence.

	And if Zuellni was too exhausted that she couldn't contact Schneibel, how did it explain her being able to communicate from the beginning through En?		And if Zuellni was too exhausted that she couldn't contact Schneibel, how did it explain her being able to communicate from the beginning through En?
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	In her, all emotions were eliminated.		In her, all emotions were eliminated.

	"I won't ask again of your issue. But as one who bears the responsibility of the structure of this world, we must destroy ~~Levatinn~~."		"I won't ask again of your issue. But as one who bears the responsibility of the structure of this world, we must destroy Lævateinn."

	".................."		".................."

Blewin: /* Chapter 5: Ones in Discord */

2012-08-14T13:27:24Z

Chapter 5: Ones in Discord

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	"Oh, what is your name?"		"Oh, what is your name?"

	"I'm Vatei ~~Lenlee~~."		"I'm Vatei Lenly."

	"I see. I'm Claribel Ronsmier."		"I see. I'm Claribel Ronsmier."
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	It was fear.		It was fear.

	Vatei ~~Lenlee~~?		Vatei Lenly?

	Something ominous filled this name.		Something ominous filled this name.
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	"You............" Nina repeated like a broken toy.		"You............" Nina repeated like a broken toy.

	"I'm Vatei ~~Lenlee~~. I'll be studying in Zuellni in the next term."		"I'm Vatei Lenly. I'll be studying in Zuellni in the next term."

	"It..........."		"It..........."

	It shouldn't be like this. She wanted to say it but she couldn't. What should she do after denying her. To fight this girl named Vatei ~~Lenlee~~?		It shouldn't be like this. She wanted to say it but she couldn't. What should she do after denying her. To fight this girl named Vatei Lenly?

	She didn't know why calling this girl's name gave her sense a strong ominous feeling. But this wasn't the time.		She didn't know why calling this girl's name gave her sense a strong ominous feeling. But this wasn't the time.
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	She immediately realised something had changed.		She immediately realised something had changed.

	Vatei ~~Lenlee~~. The woman exuding a sense of danger, one that Nina couldn't do anything about. The woman whom Melnisc called Levatinn. For that, the two had met in this dimension.		Vatei Lenly. The woman exuding a sense of danger, one that Nina couldn't do anything about. The woman whom Melnisc called Levatinn. For that, the two had met in this dimension.

	When Nina realised the situation, Schneibel had stopped speaking.		When Nina realised the situation, Schneibel had stopped speaking.

Blewin at 11:10, 15 June 2012

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	"Oh, what is your name?"		"Oh, what is your name?"

	"I'm Vatei ~~Ren~~."		"I'm Vatei Lenlee."

	"I see. I'm Claribel Ronsmier."		"I see. I'm Claribel Ronsmier."
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	It was fear.		It was fear.

	Vatei ~~Ren~~?		Vatei Lenlee?

	Something ominous filled this name.		Something ominous filled this name.
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	"You............" Nina repeated like a broken toy.		"You............" Nina repeated like a broken toy.

	"I'm Vatei ~~Ren~~. I'll be studying in Zuellni in the next term."		"I'm Vatei Lenlee. I'll be studying in Zuellni in the next term."

	"It..........."		"It..........."

	It shouldn't be like this. She wanted to say it but she couldn't. What should she do after denying her. To fight this girl named Vatei ~~Ren~~?		It shouldn't be like this. She wanted to say it but she couldn't. What should she do after denying her. To fight this girl named Vatei Lenlee?

	She didn't know why calling this girl's name gave her sense a strong ominous feeling. But this wasn't the time.		She didn't know why calling this girl's name gave her sense a strong ominous feeling. But this wasn't the time.
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	She immediately realised something had changed.		She immediately realised something had changed.

	Vatei ~~Ren~~. The woman exuding a sense of danger, one that Nina couldn't do anything about. The woman whom Melnisc called Levatinn. For that, the two had met in this dimension.		Vatei Lenlee. The woman exuding a sense of danger, one that Nina couldn't do anything about. The woman whom Melnisc called Levatinn. For that, the two had met in this dimension.

	When Nina realised the situation, Schneibel had stopped speaking.		When Nina realised the situation, Schneibel had stopped speaking.

Zero2001: Translation of Denka. I chose fitting translations.

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Translation of Denka. I chose fitting translations.

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	Leerin poured water from the simple hot water dispenser in a corner and started making tea. The maids had said she could call them anytime she needed, but Leerin had finally managed to get them to leave this dispenser here.		Leerin poured water from the simple hot water dispenser in a corner and started making tea. The maids had said she could call them anytime she needed, but Leerin had finally managed to get them to leave this dispenser here.

	The tense young man standing in the balcony was called Eldein Riven. He was older than Leerin. Feeling tense, he said weakly, "I.......... I'm thankful for worrying about me. But it's my job to protect ~~Denka~~."		The tense young man standing in the balcony was called Eldein Riven. He was older than Leerin. Feeling tense, he said weakly, "I.......... I'm thankful for worrying about me. But it's my job to protect your Highness."

	~~Denka~~.		Your Highness.

	This was how Leerin was called now.		This was how Leerin was called now.
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	She drank too. She had added lots of sugar to the red tea. Ah, her brain would turn slow without sugar.		She drank too. She had added lots of sugar to the red tea. Ah, her brain would turn slow without sugar.

	"Because it seems a ~~Denka~~ is someone who must have lived longer than me."		"Because it seems a Royal Personage is someone who must have lived longer than me."

	"Uh, ahah, ah."		"Uh, ahah, ah."
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	But Leerin hadn't really thought about it.		But Leerin hadn't really thought about it.

	"Anyway. It's my job to protect ~~Denka~~.......... Ah!"		"Anyway. It's my job to protect your Highness.......... Ah!"

	He cut himself off and realised it was poor manner to do so.		He cut himself off and realised it was poor manner to do so.
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	"Is your current conversational partner your uncle? Senpai? Or me?"		"Is your current conversational partner your uncle? Senpai? Or me?"

	"Of course it's Leerin Euthnol ~~Denka~~."		"Of course it's her Highness<!--Zero2001: This is correct.-->, Leerin Euthnol."

	Leerin nodded in satisfaction at Eldein, who had immediately turned rigid.		Leerin nodded in satisfaction at Eldein, who had immediately turned rigid.
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	Leerin laughed, finding his deferential attitude funny. He also found it funny and smiled bitterly.		Leerin laughed, finding his deferential attitude funny. He also found it funny and smiled bitterly.

	"But ~~Denka~~, how did you know I would be here at this time?"		"But your Highness, how did you know I would be here at this time?"

	He hadn't been here all the time. He was stationed somewhere not too far from Leerin's residence and he went on patrol in case of intruders. Back then, he had just returned to the balcony and was caught off-guard by Leerin's voice.		He hadn't been here all the time. He was stationed somewhere not too far from Leerin's residence and he went on patrol in case of intruders. Back then, he had just returned to the balcony and was caught off-guard by Leerin's voice.

	"~~Denka~~......."		"Your Highness......."

	"That's a girl's secret."		"That's a girl's secret."

Zero2001: Optimizing punctuation for web, And how hard is it to add a simple heading and navbar?

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User753 at 11:21, 10 June 2012

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	That dimension didn’t exist.		That dimension didn’t exist.

	IT was called En.		It was called En.

	A network between Regios that people couldn’t see. An information network.		A network between Regios that people couldn’t see. An information network.
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	But Zuellni kept her silence.		But Zuellni kept her silence.

	~~Zulleni~~ herself felt Schneibel’s irritation. But she remained silent. The crisp, bell-like voice that Nina had heard before didn’t defend itself.		Zuellni herself felt Schneibel’s irritation. But she remained silent. The crisp, bell-like voice that Nina had heard before didn’t defend itself.

	“Why didn’t you contact us? Or is it because it is the Academy City?”		“Why didn’t you contact us? Or is it because it is the Academy City?”

User753 at 11:08, 10 June 2012

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	No.		No.

	She just hadn’t gotten used to it. She had seen that sunroof many times already. This was the feeling she had. She opened her eyes, lying on the richly decorated, luxurious bed. ~~Leeirn~~ knew she was awake.		She just hadn’t gotten used to it. She had seen that sunroof many times already. This was the feeling she had. She opened her eyes, lying on the richly decorated, luxurious bed. Leerin knew she was awake.

	“…………….. Uh.”		“…………….. Uh.”
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	That wasn’t because the family of Eutnohl was one of the three royal families. The current head of Eutnohl, Minse Eutnohl wasn’t a Heaven’s Blade successor, but Leerin knew from the Head Maid that he was active in commanding the Military Artists in the battles against filth monsters.		That wasn’t because the family of Eutnohl was one of the three royal families. The current head of Eutnohl, Minse Eutnohl wasn’t a Heaven’s Blade successor, but Leerin knew from the Head Maid that he was active in commanding the Military Artists in the battles against filth monsters.

	Ordinary people wouldn’t be able to see a fight against filth monsters. Ordinary people would talk and compare Military Artists with music, movie or the heroes in magazines. For example, who was the most active in the last battle? The battle between the aged ~~phrase~~ filth monster and Heaven’s Blade successors.		Ordinary people wouldn’t be able to see a fight against filth monsters. Ordinary people would talk and compare Military Artists with music, movie or the heroes in magazines. For example, who was the most active in the last battle? The battle between the aged phase filth monster and Heaven’s Blade successors.

	Not that Leerin held no interests in those topics, but she wouldn’t actively seek them out, and so she hadn’t heard of Minse’s name there.		Not that Leerin held no interests in those topics, but she wouldn’t actively seek them out, and so she hadn’t heard of Minse’s name there.
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	What should be done?		What should be done?

	Just to wait? To keep believing that the next Heaven’s Blade successor would appear?		Just wait? To keep believing that the next Heaven’s Blade successor would appear?

	Leerin shivered unconsciously as she thought of this. She knew what she had to do and what she could do, so she wasn’t confused.		Leerin shivered unconsciously as she thought of this. She knew what she had to do and what she could do, so she wasn’t confused.
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	This must be his reflexes as a guard.		This must be his reflexes as a guard.

	Leerin had learnt most of the knowledge about the royal families and the politics of Grendan at ~~Amonise’s~~ home. If one had become a successor, then one’s guards belonged to Riven’s Military School with people that had gathered together to work for the royal families………. This should have been the case, but Minse had brought ~~Erudein~~ to his house.		Leerin had learnt most of the knowledge about the royal families and the politics of Grendan at Almonise’s home. If one had become a successor, then one’s guards belonged to Riven’s Military School with people that had gathered together to work for the royal families………. This should have been the case, but Minse had brought Eldein to his house.

	Perhaps he had another meaning behind his action.		Perhaps he had another meaning behind his action.
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	“It’s enough that my uncle trusts you enough to place you beside me.”		“It’s enough that my uncle trusts you enough to place you beside me.”

	Her uncle was ~~MInse~~.		Her uncle was Minse.

	“But, senpai……….”		“But, senpai……….”
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	He hadn’t been here all the time. He was stationed somewhere not too far from Leerin’s residence and he went on patrol in case of intruders. Back then, he had just returned to the balcony and was caught off-guard by Leerin’s voice.		He hadn’t been here all the time. He was stationed somewhere not too far from Leerin’s residence and he went on patrol in case of intruders. Back then, he had just returned to the balcony and was caught off-guard by Leerin’s voice.

	~~“Debka……~~.”		“Denka…….”

	“That’s a girl’s secret.”		“That’s a girl’s secret.”
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	If just one person had enough of a strong will, then the Wolf Faces wasn’t a group of people who loved the safety offered by a group. The person whom Leerin and Nina met in the other Acadmey City had become a Wolf Face.		If just one person had enough of a strong will, then the Wolf Faces wasn’t a group of people who loved the safety offered by a group. The person whom Leerin and Nina met in the other Acadmey City had become a Wolf Face.

	But the Wolf Faces didn’t continue to conversation.		But the Wolf Faces didn’t continue the conversation.

	They couldn’t communicate.		They couldn’t communicate.
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	There was no injury on her body. Not a drop of blood. Even her clothes was undamaged. She just stood there.		There was no injury on her body. Not a drop of blood. Even her clothes was undamaged. She just stood there.

	“I’ve confirmed the evidence of your ~~betrayer~~. Now I’ll annihilate you,” she said without any expression.		“I’ve confirmed the evidence of your betrayal. Now I’ll annihilate you,” she said without any expression.

	“Ssss.”		“Ssss.”
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	How to renovate the room? That must be the topic. But she couldn’t understand him if she didn’t pay close attention because of the jargons he kept using. She had already given up listening to him.		How to renovate the room? That must be the topic. But she couldn’t understand him if she didn’t pay close attention because of the jargons he kept using. She had already given up listening to him.

	Her concentration was on elsewhere.		Her concentration was elsewhere.

	Worried. This sense of worry was making her heart beat faster. She felt that something needed to be done. This was the feeling she had.		Worried. This sense of worry was making her heart beat faster. She felt that something needed to be done. This was the feeling she had.
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	“Damn.”		“Damn.”

	She didn’t understand the situation. Her heart was like it was curled into a ball as she ~~scoled~~ herself.		She didn’t understand the situation. Her heart was like it was curled into a ball as she scolded herself.

	At this time, her body reacted to her sensation.		At this time, her body reacted to her sensation.
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	He felt that someone was calling him. This happened when he finished talking with the person with the burden, while he was coming back to himself.		He felt that someone was calling him. This happened when he finished talking with the person with the burden, while he was coming back to himself.

	The machines were here, their noise seemingly more intense than usual, but it was gently pushed away by the sound of bells. Perhaps Zuellni was calling. As if captured b that voice in the passing of time, Karian changed the direction of his feet.		The machines were here, their noise seemingly more intense than usual, but it was gently pushed away by the sound of bells. Perhaps Zuellni was calling. As if captured by that voice in the passing of time, Karian changed the direction of his feet.

	And he arrived in the central area of the Mechanical Department.		And he arrived in the central area of the Mechanical Department.

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