Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume16 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 5 - Lost Child of Fate===		===Chapter 5: Lost Child of Fate===

	He had a dream about the orphanage.		He had a dream about the orphanage.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 5 - Lost Child of Fate */

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Chapter 5 - Lost Child of Fate

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	"If she can't suppress that level of enemies before this old man goes over there, then I can't hold any higher expectations of her."		"If she can't suppress that level of enemies before this old man goes over there, then I can't hold any higher expectations of her."

	"Expectations?'		"Expectations?"

	Why did this old man hold expectations of Nina?		Why did this old man hold expectations of Nina?
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	However, this limit occurred at this moment.		However, this limit occurred at this moment.

	No only the Haikizoku, but her body was also this way.		Not only the Haikizoku, but her body was also this way.

	"Damn, move!"		"Damn, move!"

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	What he had to do now was confirm with his own eyes what had happened, and see through its true nature.		What he had to do now was confirm with his own eyes what had happened, and see through its true nature.

	At this juncture, if Felli were here...... Layfon couldn't bear that kind of thought. Felli was a ~~psychokinesist~~, and Layfon didn't think there was a good place to protect her here, even though Felli could help with things other than ~~psychokinesis~~, and perhaps could see oddities that Layfon couldn't. Layfon always missed many things, and Felli could perhaps notice crucial matters that Layfon would be unable to find by himself.		At this juncture, if Felli were here...... Layfon couldn't bear that kind of thought. Felli was a Psychokinesist, and Layfon didn't think there was a good place to protect her here, even though Felli could help with things other than Psychokinesis, and perhaps could see oddities that Layfon couldn't. Layfon always missed many things, and Felli could perhaps notice crucial matters that Layfon would be unable to find by himself.

	However, Felli was not here right now. In this unknown situation, Felli and the others returning here was definitely not a good thing. Layfon couldn't make that decision.		However, Felli was not here right now. In this unknown situation, Felli and the others returning here was definitely not a good thing. Layfon couldn't make that decision.
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	Then, the thing above was an aged phase.		Then, the thing above was an aged phase.

	Why would there be an aged phase in this kind of place? Then didn't that mean the information about filth monsters in this place was incorrect? Assuming he had stayed in this city for a whole day, at this distance, could Felli's ~~psychokinesis~~ be unable to find an aged phase?		Why would there be an aged phase in this kind of place? Then didn't that mean the information about filth monsters in this place was incorrect? Assuming he had stayed in this city for a whole day, at this distance, could Felli's Psychokinesis be unable to find an aged phase?

	However, the response from above could only be produced by an aged phase.		However, the response from above could only be produced by an aged phase.
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	This voice allowed the two of them to let out a breath. Even if they knew they couldn't be careless, their faces showed a happy expression.		This voice allowed the two of them to let out a breath. Even if they knew they couldn't be careless, their faces showed a happy expression.

	It was Felli's ~~psychokinetic~~ flake.		It was Felli's Psychokinetic flake.

	(Just now there was unexplained ~~psychokinetic~~ interference, but it's already stopped now.)		(Just now there was unexplained Psychokinetic interference, but it's already stopped now.)

	"Where are you now? No, what about the enemies? Felli, do you have any way to confirm?"		"Where are you now? No, what about the enemies? Felli, do you have any way to confirm?"

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	Layfon shook off his sweat, assuming the next posture with the Adamantium Dite, cutting the blade across the space above his head.		Layfon shook off his sweat, assuming the next posture with the Adamantium Dite, cutting the blade across the space above his head.

	External-type ~~burst~~ Kei, Composite Blast variant - Kasane Sendan.		External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Kasane Sendan.

	After Composite Blast had filled the blade, Layfon mixed them and wildly released the energy.		After Composite Blast had filled the blade, Layfon mixed them and wildly released the energy.
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	"Even so, I can still add power!"		"Even so, I can still add power!"

	External-type ~~burst~~ Kei, Composite Blast variant - Hunter's Pursuit.		External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Hunter's Pursuit.

	In the process of unending training, Layfon had understood something. When he made changes to his Composite Blast skill, the edge of his Kei energy would become viscous. With a different Kei skill, it could be possible to add the power of Composite Blast to a move he had already released.		In the process of unending training, Layfon had understood something. When he made changes to his Composite Blast skill, the edge of his Kei energy would become viscous. With a different Kei skill, it could be possible to add the power of Composite Blast to a move he had already released.
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	Layfon shouted in his heart, and at the same time released his blade.		Layfon shouted in his heart, and at the same time released his blade.

	External-type ~~burst~~ Kei Composite Blast variant - Compound Flame Cut.		External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Compound Flame Cut.

	In a breath, Layfon swung the huge blade that the Adamantium Dite had become upwards. The sword drew a line cutting through the center of the iron whips' cross. But, he had not yet completed his goal, only locking against the two iron whips.		In a breath, Layfon swung the huge blade that the Adamantium Dite had become upwards. The sword drew a line cutting through the center of the iron whips' cross. But, he had not yet completed his goal, only locking against the two iron whips.

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	The movement of the old man seemed as if his onrush had braked. The old man changed the direction of his charge and again closed in on Layfon.		The movement of the old man seemed as if his onrush had braked. The old man changed the direction of his charge and again closed in on Layfon.

	Layfon used external Kei to change his landing spot, but the old man completely ~~didn't have~~ that kind of Kei ~~in his eyes<!-- what does this mean? -->~~, and charged forward.		Layfon used external Kei to change his landing spot, but the old man completely ignored that kind of Kei, and charged forward.

	"Ku!"		"Ku!"
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	"............"		"............"

	The old man said this as he was being received into the ~~cone<!-- looks like the wrong word, but I'm not sure which one is meant -->~~ formed by the tubes.		The old man said this as he was being received into the cave formed by the tubes.

	Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.		Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.
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	Because she was paralyzed, Nina landed on the ground defeated. She tumbled on the ground, and her face also hit the earth.		Because she was paralyzed, Nina landed on the ground defeated. She tumbled on the ground, and her face also hit the earth.

	"Damn~~, hey~~, Melnisc!"		"Damn! Hey, Melnisc!"

	(~~Yea~~, understood)		(Yes, understood)

	Melnisc's voice was unfazed. However, the strength that returned to her body was not like the Herculean strength it had been previously. Did that mean the Haikizoku didn't have endless strength? Every organism had its limits. After perceiving this obvious truth, Nina only felt stunned.		Melnisc's voice was unfazed. However, the strength that returned to her body was not like the Herculean strength it had been previously. Did that mean the Haikizoku didn't have endless strength? Every organism had its limits. After perceiving this obvious truth, Nina only felt stunned.

201.229.76.177: /* Chapter 5 - Lost Child of Fate */

2013-08-14T18:34:18Z

Chapter 5 - Lost Child of Fate

80.223.220.209 at 12:51, 14 August 2013

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	"Damn, hey, Melnisc!"		"Damn, hey, Melnisc!"

	(Yea, ~~I understand.~~)		(Yea, understood)

	Melnisc's voice was unfazed. However, the strength that returned to her body was not like the Herculean strength it had been previously. Did that mean the Haikizoku didn't have endless strength? Every organism had its limits. After perceiving this obvious truth, Nina only felt stunned.		Melnisc's voice was unfazed. However, the strength that returned to her body was not like the Herculean strength it had been previously. Did that mean the Haikizoku didn't have endless strength? Every organism had its limits. After perceiving this obvious truth, Nina only felt stunned.

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	The space here was sufficient. Layfon returned the steel threads to Dite form, and replaced the simpler Dite with the Adamantium Dite. Having replaced his weapon with the Dite that could best support his Kei, Layfon tightly grasped the large sword in his hand.		The space here was sufficient. Layfon returned the steel threads to Dite form, and replaced the simpler Dite with the Adamantium Dite. Having replaced his weapon with the Dite that could best support his Kei, Layfon tightly grasped the large sword in his hand.

	~~He used his~~ Kei.		His Kei flowed.

	Layfon confirmed the feeling of the Adamantium Dite in his hand, while interpreting its thresholds, converting energy into a Kei technique. He released his move, storing the energy.		Layfon confirmed the feeling of the Adamantium Dite in his hand, while interpreting its thresholds, converting energy into a Kei technique. He released his move, storing the energy.

	"~~Huah!~~"		"Ugh"

	The pressure covering Layfon's entire body made him clench his teeth.		The pressure covering Layfon's entire body made him clench his teeth.

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	At this juncture, if Felli were here...... Layfon couldn't bear that kind of thought. Felli was a psychokinesist, and Layfon didn't think there was a good place to protect her here, even though Felli could help with things other than psychokinesis, and perhaps could see oddities that Layfon couldn't. Layfon always missed many things, and Felli could perhaps notice crucial matters that Layfon would be unable to find by himself.		At this juncture, if Felli were here...... Layfon couldn't bear that kind of thought. Felli was a psychokinesist, and Layfon didn't think there was a good place to protect her here, even though Felli could help with things other than psychokinesis, and perhaps could see oddities that Layfon couldn't. Layfon always missed many things, and Felli could perhaps notice crucial matters that Layfon would be unable to find by himself.

	However, Felli was not here right now. In this unknown situation, Felli and the others returning here was ~~definitly~~ not a good thing. Layfon couldn't make that decision.		However, Felli was not here right now. In this unknown situation, Felli and the others returning here was definitely not a good thing. Layfon couldn't make that decision.

	More importantly, even if he did make the decision, the fact that Felli wasn't here couldn't be changed.		More importantly, even if he did make the decision, the fact that Felli wasn't here couldn't be changed.
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	Layfon couldn't understand the situation. When had the battle started? Judging from the strength of that attacker, if the enemy was an ordinary mature phase, regardless of its stage he should be able to relaxedly defeat it.		Layfon couldn't understand the situation. When had the battle started? Judging from the strength of that attacker, if the enemy was an ordinary mature phase, regardless of its stage he should be able to relaxedly defeat it.

	However, after he felt a strong ripple of Kei, the vibration of the giant ~~thing's~~ quick movement would be sent through the steel thread.		However, after he felt a strong ripple of Kei, the vibration of the giant things quick movement would be sent through the steel thread.

	Then, the thing above was an aged phase.		Then, the thing above was an aged phase.
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	Compared to Layfon who totally ~~could~~ find no clues and could only search for Nina under the circumstances, Nina had no time to watch the fight between her great-grandfather and the giant.		Compared to Layfon who totally couldn't find any clues and could only search for Nina under the circumstances, Nina had no time to watch the fight between her great-grandfather and the giant.

	"I didn't expect anything like that."		"I didn't expect anything like that."
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	Not to mention that it was originally an autonomous mobile city meant to carry countless people and buildings while walking. Perhaps this degree of weight was nothing after all.		Not to mention that it was originally an autonomous mobile city meant to carry countless people and buildings while walking. Perhaps this degree of weight was nothing after all.

	Even so, to Nina, the added threat still ~~had~~ not ~~changed~~.		Even so, to Nina, the added threat still did not change.

	"Could it be......"		"Could it be......"
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	Nina's heart did not hold the thought that it would be fine if she herself were saved, but she also could not deny her speculation of Vati, making her hair stand on end.		Nina's heart did not hold the thought that it would be fine if she herself were saved, but she also could not deny her speculation of Vati, making her hair stand on end.

	More importantly, confronting these sudden additional giants, she couldn't produce the thought<!-- XXX awkward --> that 'as long as I defeat them everything will be over' at all.		More importantly, confronting these sudden additional giants, she couldn't produce the thought<!-- XXX awkward --> that 'as long as she could defeat them everything will be over' at all.

	The enemy's fighting power was unlimited.		The enemy's fighting power was unlimited.
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	"............"		"............"

	The old man said this as he was being received into the ~~come~~<!-- looks like the wrong word, but I'm not sure which one is meant --> formed by the tubes.		The old man said this as he was being received into the cone<!-- looks like the wrong word, but I'm not sure which one is meant --> formed by the tubes.

	Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.		Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.

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	Their adoptive father came to sit at the table, and the others began sitting down. Leerin sat next to Layfon, a slight smile on her face.		Their adoptive father came to sit at the table, and the others began sitting down. Leerin sat next to Layfon, a slight smile on her face.

	Leerin's young, smiling face made Layfon very sad, but also let him feel a slight comforting feeling. Just then, the ~~surrounding~~ suddenly darkened.		Leerin's young, smiling face made Layfon very sad, but also let him feel a slight comforting feeling. Just then, the surroundings suddenly darkened.

	Everything became calm.		Everything became calm.
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	Even if he searched his surroundings, it didn't seem like there were any people other than himself in this space. Layfon repressed his anxious emotions, and used the Sapphire Dite to send steel threads in every direction.		Even if he searched his surroundings, it didn't seem like there were any people other than himself in this space. Layfon repressed his anxious emotions, and used the Sapphire Dite to send steel threads in every direction.

	The touch of the steel threads told Layfon of the surrounding conditions, this was a reasonably wide spherical space.		The touch of the steel threads told Layfon of the surrounding conditions: this was a reasonably wide spherical space.

	"Have I been caught?"		"Have I been caught?"
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	Nina's heart did not hold the thought that it would be fine if she herself were saved, but she also could not deny her speculation of Vati, making her hair stand on end.		Nina's heart did not hold the thought that it would be fine if she herself were saved, but she also could not deny her speculation of Vati, making her hair stand on end.

	More importantly, confronting these sudden additional giants, she couldn't produce the thought that 'as long as I defeat them everything will be over' ~~whatsoever~~.		More importantly, confronting these sudden additional giants, she couldn't produce the thought<!-- XXX awkward --> that 'as long as I defeat them everything will be over' at all.

	The enemy's fighting power was unlimited.		The enemy's fighting power was unlimited.
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	He repeated continuously.		He repeated continuously.

	As he repeated, the weight covering his body multiplied alongside. It was like Kirik had said before, cumulatively increasing an the energy of an explosion that already had nowhere to go was quite unreasonable.		As he repeated, the weight covering his body multiplied alongside. It was like Kirik had said before, cumulatively increasing the energy of an explosion that already had nowhere to go was quite unreasonable.

	However, Layfon still repeated the move, continuously carrying it out. To Layfon, this was just because he hadn't become skillful at the technique, and he was confident that soon enough he would be able to use it flexibly.		However, Layfon still repeated the move, continuously carrying it out. To Layfon, this was just because he hadn't become skillful at the technique, and he was confident that soon enough he would be able to use it flexibly.
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	External-type burst Kei, Composite Blast variant - Hunter's Pursuit.		External-type burst Kei, Composite Blast variant - Hunter's Pursuit.

	In the process of unending training, Layfon understood something. When he made changes to his Composite Blast skill, the edge of his Kei energy would become viscous. With a different Kei skill, it could be possible to add the power of Composite Blast to a move he had already released.		In the process of unending training, Layfon had understood something. When he made changes to his Composite Blast skill, the edge of his Kei energy would become viscous. With a different Kei skill, it could be possible to add the power of Composite Blast to a move he had already released.

	The flash ahead and the flash of him chasing it to add additional power superimposed with each other. After adding the power, the speed at which the flash destroyed the machinery rose.		The flash ahead and the flash of him chasing it to add additional power superimposed with each other. After adding the power, the speed at which the flash destroyed the machinery rose.
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	Not to mention that if they traded blows with their weapons, his own Dite wouldn't be able to handle it.		Not to mention that if they traded blows with their weapons, his own Dite wouldn't be able to handle it.

	"~~You~~ don't have weapons that can exert your power means that fate has rejected you, kid!"		"That you don't have weapons that can exert your power means that fate has rejected you, kid!"

	The movement of the old man seemed as if his onrush had braked. The old man changed the direction of his charge and again closed in on Layfon.		The movement of the old man seemed as if his onrush had braked. The old man changed the direction of his charge and again closed in on Layfon.

	Layfon used external Kei to change his landing spot, but the old man completely didn't have that kind of Kei in his eyes, and charged forward.		Layfon used external Kei to change his landing spot, but the old man completely didn't have that kind of Kei in his eyes<!-- what does this mean? -->, and charged forward.

	"Ku!"		"Ku!"
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	"You don't have to worry about that side. To that girl, this is a necessary trial."		"You don't have to worry about that side. To that girl, this is a necessary trial."

	Layfon's gaze stayed on the old man's body, but the other party had seen through his attempt.		Layfon's gaze had stayed on the old man's body, but the other party had seen through his attempt.

	"Every person has something called fate, youngster. Ah, I'm not saying that you don't have any fate at all. No, you don't have the fate to be entangled with us. You and us won't become comrades, but also shouldn't become enemies."		"Every person has something called fate, youngster. Ah, I'm not saying that you don't have any fate at all. No, you don't have the fate to be entangled with us. You and us won't become comrades, but also shouldn't become enemies."
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	Very fast, and moreover so quickly. Layfon repressed his restlessness, taking the moment to split his Kei into countless pieces and form them together into Composite Blast.		Very fast, and moreover so quickly. Layfon repressed his restlessness, taking the moment to split his Kei into countless pieces and form them together into Composite Blast.

	When Gildred had ~~charge~~ into attacking range, the strong Kei pressure almost scraped Layfon.		When Gildred had charged into attacking range, the strong Kei pressure almost scraped Layfon.

	Layfon was patient. However, the pressure continuously pushed Layfon back. He absolutely could not be swallowed by this pressure. But, if he continued to wait, his stance would become stiff.		Layfon was patient. However, the pressure continuously pushed Layfon back. He absolutely could not be swallowed by this pressure. But, if he continued to wait, his stance would become stiff.
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	"Ugh!"		"Ugh!"

	This move was a technique used to destroy filth monsters from the inside, but the old man's body had not become that way. This was because Layfon who was at his limit was unable to fully pour his Kei. More importantly, even if it were Gildred who had been pierced by the steel threads, his body's defense could not permit this kind of happening.		This move was a technique used to destroy filth monsters from the inside, but the old man's body had not become that way. This was because Layfon who was at his limit was unable to fully pour his Kei. More importantly, even if it were Gildred who had been pierced by the steel threads, his body's defense could not permit this kind of thing happening.

	Gildred fell to his knees.		Gildred fell to his knees.
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	"......Are you serious?"		"......Are you serious?"

	The old man's rapid loss of power surprised Layfon instead. Using only that degree of Kei, even if he couldn't instantly heal the wound, he could at least stop the bleeding, and allow the damaged tendon tissue ~~healing~~, to where his body would be able to move. The steel threads had not pierced his Kei vein, and had not destroyed it.		The old man's rapid loss of power surprised Layfon instead. Using only that degree of Kei, even if he couldn't instantly heal the wound, he could at least stop the bleeding, and allow the damaged tendon tissue to heal, to where his body would be able to move. The steel threads had not pierced his Kei vein, and had not destroyed it.

	In fact, it should be Layfon who had suffered more severe wounds from that initial trading of blows.		In fact, it should be Layfon who had suffered more severe wounds from that initial trading of blows.
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	But, Layfon didn't want to admit his powerlessness. Perhaps it was willfulness, perhaps selfishness. If the situation turned towards a bad direction because of this......? Layfon felt afraid just by thinking that way.		But, Layfon didn't want to admit his powerlessness. Perhaps it was willfulness, perhaps selfishness. If the situation turned towards a bad direction because of this......? Layfon felt afraid just by thinking that way.

	"But, if you tell me not to do anything just because of that, I still can't agree. There should be a place ~~that~~ even I can help."		"But, if you tell me not to do anything just because of that, I still can't agree. There should be a place where even I can help."

	Layfon didn't want to be rejected by the people next to him again.		Layfon didn't want to be rejected by the people next to him again.
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	"............"		"............"

	The old man said this as he was being received into the come formed by the tubes.		The old man said this as he was being received into the come<!-- looks like the wrong word, but I'm not sure which one is meant --> formed by the tubes.

	Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.		Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.
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	"Ku!"		"Ku!"

	One of the giants raised its ~~first~~, and Nina leaped high up the moment before the fist caught her. The ~~first~~ crashed into the ground, shaking the city. Nina was by the elbow of the giant that was near the ground, and in a breath she ran up the arm charging upwards.		One of the giants raised its fist, and Nina leaped high up the moment before the fist caught her. The fist crashed into the ground, shaking the city. Nina was by the elbow of the giant that was near the ground, and in a breath she ran up the arm charging upwards.

	Her target was the giant's shoulder.		Her target was the giant's shoulder.

	Nina dodged the hands that the other giants extended out, ~~and~~ this giant also raised its arm at the same time. This movement almost made Nina lose her ~~balanced~~ because her body shook, but in the end she still reached the shoulder, and once again jumped.		Nina dodged the hands that the other giants extended out, while this giant also raised its arm at the same time. This movement almost made Nina lose her balance because her body shook, but in the end she still reached the shoulder, and once again jumped.

	"Haaaa!"		"Haaaa!"
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	However, that wasn't all of it.		However, that wasn't all of it.

	Perhaps the giants were waiting for the balance of the battle to collapse. Nina's midair battle, with the ~~Giants~~ unable to catch her, and Nina unable to completely defeat the giants. Could it be that from the point where they had judged that this would be a protracted battle, the giants had been waiting for this change? If Nina kept repeating the same actions, her reaction time would decrease at some point.		Perhaps the giants were waiting for the balance of the battle to collapse. Nina's midair battle, with the giants unable to catch her, and Nina unable to completely defeat the giants. Could it be that from the point where they had judged that this would be a protracted battle, the giants had been waiting for this change? If Nina kept repeating the same actions, her reaction time would decrease at some point.

	Moreover, Nina already had no time to notice the situation behind her.		Moreover, Nina already had no time to notice the situation behind her.
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	Was this group of giants the same after all?		Was this group of giants the same after all?

	Right now that kind of thing didn't need to be said. Though Layfon ~~though~~ this way, he still pondered involuntarily.		Right now that kind of thing didn't need to be said. Though Layfon thought this way, he still pondered involuntarily.

	If they didn't defeat them they would have nothing. What he was thinking now could wait for after they managed to survive.		If they didn't defeat them they would have nothing. What he was thinking now could wait for after they managed to survive.