Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume18 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 2 - The Abandoned City and the Lost Child's Labyrinth===		===Chapter 2: The Abandoned City and the Lost Child's Labyrinth===

	When they arrived at their destination, it was noon on the second day.		When they arrived at their destination, it was noon on the second day.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 2 - The Abandoned City and the Lost Child's Labyrinth */

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Chapter 2 - The Abandoned City and the Lost Child's Labyrinth

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	(Umm......)		(Umm......)

	When he ~~though~~ of how he had been totally seen through, Layfon felt shamed to death.		When he thought of how he had been totally seen through, Layfon felt shamed to death.

	(No......)		(No......)
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	"Um, well......"		"Um, well......"

	Layfon was very troubled. Though he was ~~trouble~~, what Felli said was correct, so he had to make the decision.		Layfon was very troubled. Though he was troubled, what Felli said was correct, so he had to make the decision.

	"Then, today we'll first watch the situation, and if it doesn't improve we'll set out again for the central district, how's that?"		"Then, today we'll first watch the situation, and if it doesn't improve we'll set out again for the central district, how's that?"
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	Just as Vati was speaking vaguely, Meishen's gaze moved. Something outside the store captured her attention, so she prepared to move her gaze to chase after it, but she again noticed that she had seen wrongly and felt disappointed. That was exactly the expression that Meishen showed.		Just as Vati was speaking vaguely, Meishen's gaze moved. Something outside the store captured her attention, so she prepared to move her gaze to chase after it, but she again noticed that she had seen wrongly and felt disappointed. That was exactly the expression that Meishen showed.

	Vati didn't have any reason to turn around, since there was nothing there. But, the shadows from the faraway sun on the city's legs had moved quickly, so she had wrongly ~~though~~ that there was someone entering from the front.		Vati didn't have any reason to turn around, since there was nothing there. But, the shadows from the faraway sun on the city's legs had moved quickly, so she had wrongly thought that there was someone entering from the front.

	Meishen sighed, and showed an expression on her face that was first lonely and then mixed with a pained smile. Vati felt sorry for what she saw from Meishen's body, so although she knew there was nothing there, Vati still turned her head.		Meishen sighed, and showed an expression on her face that was first lonely and then mixed with a pained smile. Vati felt sorry for what she saw from Meishen's body, so although she knew there was nothing there, Vati still turned her head.
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	A solid white suddenly appeared, rushing upwards.		A solid white suddenly appeared, rushing upwards.

	"Ugh!		"Ugh!"

	The wind was pushed up by the large floor that rushed upwards, becoming a tempest raging in all directions. Layfon's body was pushed back by the wind, and he was sent flying along with Felli.		The wind was pushed up by the large floor that rushed upwards, becoming a tempest raging in all directions. Layfon's body was pushed back by the wind, and he was sent flying along with Felli.
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	"Only now......"		"Only now......"

	"The opponent should be able to use their substance to cover one hundred percent of this city. That they had not done so either means that they can't, or they want to maintain the original condition without changing, these two possibilities.		"The opponent should be able to use their substance to cover one hundred percent of this city. That they had not done so either means that they can't, or they want to maintain the original condition without changing, these two possibilities."

	"Um......"		"Um......"
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	"What's happened?"		"What's happened?"

	"High energies are trading blows. Though there is something in the sky, the other party is using this heatstorm to make it difficult for me to manipulate the flakes. Though I managed to use Psychokinesis to carry out an investigation from a distance, still......		"High energies are trading blows. Though there is something in the sky, the other party is using this heatstorm to make it difficult for me to manipulate the flakes. Though I managed to use Psychokinesis to carry out an investigation from a distance, still......"

	Only speaking part of her sentence, Felli once again stopped speaking. Moreover, Layfon observed that she had obtained significant information.		Only speaking part of her sentence, Felli once again stopped speaking. Moreover, Layfon observed that she had obtained significant information.
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	The sounds of explosions also reached this place, and the noise made the reinforcements that Layfon was leaning on vibrate.		The sounds of explosions also reached this place, and the noise made the reinforcements that Layfon was leaning on vibrate.

	"What do we do?'		"What do we do?"

	"We can't do anything."		"We can't do anything."
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	Layfon had a feeling as if a cold air that made his spine tingle seemed to linger around his arm.		Layfon had a feeling as if a cold air that made his spine tingle seemed to linger around his arm.

	The hole that Layfon had passed through had already begun to be covered. He released Sendan to maintain the ~~whole~~, squeezing out.		The hole that Layfon had passed through had already begun to be covered. He released Sendan to maintain the hole, squeezing out.

	"Felli!"		"Felli!"
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	Was it because it looked very similar to a neighbor of his apartment building?		Was it because it looked very similar to a neighbor of his apartment building?

	"Just now, my original body gave me the temporary name of 'Vati B'".		"Just now, my original body gave me the temporary name of 'Vati B'."

	"'Vati B'......"		"'Vati B'......"
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	"The problem is, the situation is no longer something where I can decide everything on my own. There are enemies here. They exist only to defeat me whether I exist as a human or as a machine. Ignoring those people and staying in this world is an impossible thing. They have already grasped my position. If I don't move, the opponents will attack sooner or later."		"The problem is, the situation is no longer something where I can decide everything on my own. There are enemies here. They exist only to defeat me whether I exist as a human or as a machine. Ignoring those people and staying in this world is an impossible thing. They have already grasped my position. If I don't move, the opponents will attack sooner or later."

	Lævateinn didn't have a concept of longevity. Though she had spoken of it, she and humans were still ~~words~~ apart. Humans would give in before the time became an obstacle and take action.		Lævateinn didn't have a concept of longevity. Though she had spoken of it, she and humans were still worlds apart. Humans would give in before the time became an obstacle and take action.

	"Other than acting, we have no other choice. Maintaining the safety of the city is the same."		"Other than acting, we have no other choice. Maintaining the safety of the city is the same."
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	Layfon felt that it was hard to form words, but Felli who had arrived here first was unexpectedly able to speak calmly.		Layfon felt that it was hard to form words, but Felli who had arrived here first was unexpectedly able to speak calmly.

	"This is......?'		"This is......?"

	Layfon didn't need to look around him to be able to quickly confirm what was in the surroundings. In other words, there was nothing here at all. This place only had had a space for Layfon and Felli to sit on their knees, nothing more.		Layfon didn't need to look around him to be able to quickly confirm what was in the surroundings. In other words, there was nothing here at all. This place only had had a space for Layfon and Felli to sit on their knees, nothing more.

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	For a safeguard, Layfon scattered steel threads throughout the surroundings, creating a defensive formation for contingencies.		For a safeguard, Layfon scattered steel threads throughout the surroundings, creating a defensive formation for contingencies.

	Afterwards, Layfon didn't have anything to do. Felli was focusing her mind to carry out her search, giving off an atmosphere that said not to talk to her. But, Layfon had already grown tired of the thoughts circling<!-- Changed from "processing" in translation, which was wrong because it's a transitive verb - at least it'd need to be "being processed", but that sounds bad to me. There might be something better than "circling". --> inside him. Layfon already knew the answer. He had to witness what was in the destination he would advance towards. It was for this that he was here. He could only repeat this. So, he planned to think about it as little as possible, but when he had nothing to do, he involuntarily pondered about it.		Afterwards, Layfon didn't have anything to do. Felli was focusing her mind to carry out her search, giving off an atmosphere that said not to talk to her. But, Layfon had already grown tired of the thoughts circling inside him. Layfon already knew the answer. He had to witness what was in the destination he would advance towards. It was for this that he was here. He could only repeat this. So, he planned to think about it as little as possible, but when he had nothing to do, he involuntarily pondered about it.

	Layfon's tense feeling hadn't subsided. But, even if he was in a tense state, he could still think about things. After all, if he maintained his tense state for a long time, his mood would have to relax to some degree, and the tense feeling would have no way of continuing on.		Layfon's tense feeling hadn't subsided. But, even if he was in a tense state, he could still think about things. After all, if he maintained his tense state for a long time, his mood would have to relax to some degree, and the tense feeling would have no way of continuing on.
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	The wind was pushed up by the large floor that rushed upwards, becoming a tempest raging in all directions. Layfon's body was pushed back by the wind, and he was sent flying along with Felli.		The wind was pushed up by the large floor that rushed upwards, becoming a tempest raging in all directions. Layfon's body was pushed back by the wind, and he was sent flying along with Felli.

	He had been blown away like this...... He couldn't let things become like this. ~~Since their~~ voices were drowned out by the wind, Layfon scattered steel threads to ~~fix~~ himself and Felli.~~<!-- Is this correct? The reason for scattering the steel threads is not "because their voices were drowned out", is it? -->~~		He had been blown away like this...... He couldn't let things become like this. Their voices were drowned out by the wind, and Layfon scattered steel threads to hold himself and Felli down.

	The raging wind mercilessly wrapped up the giants, sending them flying.		The raging wind mercilessly wrapped up the giants, sending them flying.
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	Layfon didn't need to look around him to be able to quickly confirm what was in the surroundings. In other words, there was nothing here at all. This place only had had a space for Layfon and Felli to sit on their knees, nothing more.		Layfon didn't need to look around him to be able to quickly confirm what was in the surroundings. In other words, there was nothing here at all. This place only had had a space for Layfon and Felli to sit on their knees, nothing more.

	"This place, it......"~~<!-- Changed from "Thus place it" in original translation. This is just a guess at what could be meant, but the original didn't make sense. -->~~		"This place, it......"

	Seeing the walls surrounding them, Layfon felt that this scene was quite familiar.		Seeing the walls surrounding them, Layfon felt that this scene was quite familiar.

80.223.220.209 at 00:52, 6 October 2013

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	An incredible battle was happening that made one doubt whether it was real or not.		An incredible battle was happening that made one doubt whether it was real or not.

	Moreover, this battle would definitely happen again on the road that Layfon and Felli were following. ~~Jus~~ like the incredible battle that Delbone had experienced here and then crossed hands with again in Grendan where she had died. The battle that happened here would definitely play out again in Grendan.		Moreover, this battle would definitely happen again on the road that Layfon and Felli were following. Just like the incredible battle that Delbone had experienced here and then crossed hands with again in Grendan where she had died. The battle that happened here would definitely play out again in Grendan.

	And the next time, Nina and Leerin would definitely fight.		And the next time, Nina and Leerin would definitely fight.

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	Still, both sides didn't plan on stopping the situation.		Still, both sides didn't plan on stopping the situation.

	This was a battle after a very long rest, and Harpe wasn't confused. The meaning for its existence was to fight with the enemies of humans, and to Harpe, the enemy of humans was ~~sIgnasis~~ and the Nano-Celluloids that he had created.		This was a battle after a very long rest, and Harpe wasn't confused. The meaning for its existence was to fight with the enemies of humans, and to Harpe, the enemy of humans was Ignasis and the Nano-Celluloids that he had created.

	When he fought with them, Harpe didn't have the option of retreating. Also, it wasn't as if he hadn't used any tactics.		When he fought with them, Harpe didn't have the option of retreating. Also, it wasn't as if he hadn't used any tactics.

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	The muffled voice that came from behind the door was Meishen's voice.		The muffled voice that came from behind the door was Meishen's voice.

	"~~Is something them~~ matter?"		"What's the matter?"

	Before opening the door, Vati already knew what Meishen had in her hands. However, she still asked while pretending not to know.		Before opening the door, Vati already knew what Meishen had in her hands. However, she still asked while pretending not to know.

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	"I don't want a commotion to break out in this place......"		"I don't want a commotion to break out in this place......"

	He was already no longer useful. Not letting him live to return would ~~wok~~, but......		He was already no longer useful. Not letting him live to return would work, but......

	"That would resolve everything, that kind of method is rather ideal."		"That would resolve everything, that kind of method is rather ideal."

Xstar at 08:15, 23 September 2013

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	The razor-sharp blade took form in front of the giant's abdomen, tearing its flesh.		The razor-sharp blade took form in front of the giant's abdomen, tearing its flesh.

	Psyharden Technique - ~~Void~~ Scorpion Strike.		Psyharden Technique - Impromptu Scorpion Strike.

	This was a move to cut apart the enemy's weapon by pouring a consistent flow of Kei into the unrestored Dite and having it maintain the form of a razor-thin blade. Though it was only momentary, for a split-second the blade would take a transcendent form, and the cut paths would become complex and chaotic because of this.		This was a move to cut apart the enemy's weapon by pouring a consistent flow of Kei into the unrestored Dite and having it maintain the form of a razor-thin blade. Though it was only momentary, for a split-second the blade would take a transcendent form, and the cut paths would become complex and chaotic because of this.
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	Layfon grasped the Dite tightly, streaming Kei in without hesitation.		Layfon grasped the Dite tightly, streaming Kei in without hesitation.

	Sougenkyouku - ~~Tengumo~~.		Sougenkyouku - Amanosouchishu.

	This was a trap that Layfon had woven while running to and fro in the air.		This was a trap that Layfon had woven while running to and fro in the air.
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	Something like an explosion burst out from there in all directions, great quantities of steel threads. After they opened, the balls of thread scattered steel threads like an explosion, knocking down the giants one by one.		Something like an explosion burst out from there in all directions, great quantities of steel threads. After they opened, the balls of thread scattered steel threads like an explosion, knocking down the giants one by one.

	When the same giants had brutally ravaged Zuellni, Lintence who had appeared in Zuellni had used Kei techniques to defeat those monsters, and that Kei move had the same ~~Tengumo~~ as now.		When the same giants had brutally ravaged Zuellni, Lintence who had appeared in Zuellni had used Kei techniques to defeat those monsters, and that Kei move had the same Amanosouchishu as now.

	Incidentally, the same scene from back then replayed again here.		Incidentally, the same scene from back then replayed again here.
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	"I'll take care."		"I'll take care."

	It would be alright as long as he said something...... Layfon thought this while he looked below his feet. ~~Tengumo~~ was still running even now, destroying giants one after another.		It would be alright as long as he said something...... Layfon thought this while he looked below his feet. Amanosouchishu was still running even now, destroying giants one after another.

	So, an empty area appeared in this central district.		So, an empty area appeared in this central district.

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