Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 2: Life as a ~~student~~===		===Chapter 2: Life as a Student===

	''How are you? I'm quite good here.''		''How are you? I'm quite good here.''

Royaloyalz at 13:18, 2 September 2013

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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist questioning, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.		The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist in questioning him, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.

	The two of them fell silent.		The two of them fell silent.
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	Silent.		Silent.

	Losing to the silence in the room, Layfon said, "I still don't know your name. Can you tell me?"		Losing to the silence in the room, Layfon said, "I still don't know your name. Can you tell me your name?"

	"Oh, yes. I haven't introduced myself yet. I'm Felli Loss, second year in Military Arts."		"Oh, yes. I haven't introduced myself yet. I'm Felli Loss, second year in Military Arts."
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	It wasn't easy to forget that she'd seen him rolling and moaning on the floor. His face reddened again.		It wasn't easy to forget that she'd seen him rolling and moaning on the floor. His face reddened again.

	"Do you hate my brother forcing you to transfer into Military Arts?"		"Do you hate my brother for forcing you to transfer into Military Arts?"

	Felli returned back to the previous topic, indifferent to Layfon's current expression.		Felli returned back to the previous topic, indifferent to Layfon's current expression.
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	Just when Layfon was about to escape, not knowing where Harley's classroom lay, Harley himself appeared in the same oil-stained working suit that he wore yesterday.		Just when Layfon was about to escape, not knowing where Harley's classroom lay, Harley himself appeared in the same oil-stained working suit that he wore yesterday.

	"After watching the fight yesterday, I don't feel that the sword fits you. Nina holds heavy weapons that don't suit her either, but she knows how to handle the weight and has been fighting through in her own way," he said to Layfon, who was following behind with a fed-up expression in his eyes.		"After watching the fight yesterday, I don't feel that the sword fits you. Nina holds heavy weapons that don't suit her either, but she knows how to handle the weight and has been fighting through in her own way," he said to Layfon, who was following behind him with a fed-up expression in his eyes.

	Harley never once noticed it.		Harley never once noticed it.
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	This was Layfon's first work day.		This was Layfon's first work day.

	Holding the map in one hand, Layfon arrived at an underground entrance outside the residential district. He handed his work permit to the police student for check up and entered the interior. Right before him was a lift. Layfon sat inside the simple lift that was encircled with metal fence, and headed down into the depths of the city.		Holding the map in one hand, Layfon arrived at an underground entrance outside the residential district. He handed his work permit to the police student for check up and entered the interior. Right before him was a lift. Layfon sat inside the simple lift that was encircled with a metal fence, and headed down into the depths of the city.

	Just when the indescribable smell of oil and liquid became stronger and stronger, the lift stopped, sending a great jolt up Layfon's body.		Just when the indescribable smell of oil and liquid became stronger and stronger, the lift stopped, sending a great jolt up Layfon's body.
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	"Thanks."		"Thanks."

	It didn't seem he was dreaming. Nina was looking at the wide-mouthed Layfon disapprovingly. Both of his hands were occupied with the buckets.		It didn't seem like he was dreaming. Nina was looking at the wide-mouthed Layfon disapprovingly. Both of his hands were occupied with the buckets.

	"How do you plan to eat? Put down the buckets. You should rest when it's time to rest."		"How do you plan to eat? Put down the buckets. You should rest when it's time to rest."
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	Just when he was searching for words to confuse the topic......		Just when he was searching for words to confuse the topic......

	Gla, Gla, Gla. Footsteps of someone running in the corridor sounded, then that someone appeared, coming close to place where Layfon and Nina were resting.		Gla, Gla, Gla. Footsteps of someone running in the corridor sounded, then that someone appeared, coming close to the place where Layfon and Nina were resting.

	It was an older man wearing the same clothes as them. A beard adorned his chin. Machine oil filled his fingernails. Layfon guessed he must be a senpai in the Mechanical Engineering course.		It was an older man wearing the same clothes as them. A beard adorned his chin. Machine oil filled his fingernails. Layfon guessed he must be a senpai in the Mechanical Engineering course.
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	Hearing that explanation, Layfon wasn't sure what to say. He couldn't believe such a cute little girl would harm humans.		Hearing that explanation, Layfon wasn't sure what to say. He couldn't believe such a cute little girl would harm humans.

	"The workers are all so worked up about Zuellni missing because of that too, on top of the gears not moving properly; but I don't think this gentle girl can harm others."		"The workers are all so worked up about Zuellni being missing because of that too, on top of the gears not moving properly; but I don't think this gentle girl can harm others."

	Nina patted Zuellni's head. Zuellni squinted.		Nina patted Zuellni's head. Zuellni squinted.

Imwaski: /* Chapter 2: Life as a student */

2013-08-16T20:03:20Z

Chapter 2: Life as a student

Lygophile at 00:48, 27 June 2013

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	"For victory," Felli concluded without hesitating.		"For victory," Felli concluded without hesitating.

	"He'd do all he could to reach his goal, no matter the means. Our ~~will means~~ nothing to him."		"He'd do all he could to reach his goal, no matter the means. Our wills mean nothing to him."

	"No, but......"		"No, but......"
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	He continued with enthusiasm. "But your situation is different. Your body movements with the sword just weren't smooth. Your fighting style is more focused on speed, right? That's how you were trained, isn't it?"		He continued with enthusiasm. "But your situation is different. Your body movements with the sword just weren't smooth. Your fighting style is more focused on speed, right? That's how you were trained, isn't it?"

	"No. I only learned little at the Dojo. I don't know the details that well. The weapon I used was about the same as yesterday's practice sword."		"No. I only learned a little at the Dojo. I don't know the details that well. The weapon I used was about the same as yesterday's practice sword."

	"Really?" Harley said, looking confused.		"Really?" Harley said, looking confused.
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	"Well, how should I put it? I haven't fought much with others, so I'm not sure."		"Well, how should I put it? I haven't fought much with others, so I'm not sure."

	"Whatever it is, you still have some confidence ~~with~~ your real strength?"		"Whatever it is, you must still have some confidence in your real strength?"

	"Not at all."		"Not at all."
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	This place was underneath the city – the Central Mechanism Chamber.		This place was underneath the city – the Central Mechanism Chamber.
	The scene of ~~Regio~~'s heart lay open before Layfon.		The scene of a Regios' heart lay open before Layfon.

	"How shocking......"		"How shocking......"
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	It was true that he was surprised about it.		It was true that he was surprised about it.

	When he first met Nina, he felt an elegant higher-class bearing from her on top of the ~~standing straight and centre way~~ that passionate Military Arts people preferred.		When he first met Nina, he felt an elegant higher-class bearing from her on top of the disciplined demeanor that passionate Military Arts people preferred.

	"Frankly, my family isn't poor."		"Frankly, my family isn't poor."
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	Nina patted Zuellni's head. Zuellni squinted.		Nina patted Zuellni's head. Zuellni squinted.

	But even Layfon himself didn't know how he'd have reacted when he first ~~knew~~ of this. Nina's easy and ~~relaxing~~ manner enabled him to hug Zuellni so naturally.		But even Layfon himself didn't know how he'd have reacted when he first learned of this. Nina's easy and relaxed manner enabled him to hug Zuellni so naturally.

	"Senpai is incredible."		"Senpai is incredible."

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	Smiling, Harley handed a rod to Layfon.		Smiling, Harley handed a rod to Layfon.

	It seemed he'd spend a lot time here.		It seemed he'd spend a lot of time here.

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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist in questioning, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.		The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist questioning, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.

	The two of them fell silent.		The two of them fell silent.

Veritatis cupitor at 02:18, 6 June 2012

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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist questioning, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.		The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist in questioning, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.

	The two of them fell silent.		The two of them fell silent.

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	"I couldn't become a traveler, but I still wanted to see the outside world, so I was determined to come to the Academy City. I found that a reasonable choice, but my parents were very against it."		"I couldn't become a traveler, but I still wanted to see the outside world, so I was determined to come to the Academy City. I found that a reasonable choice, but my parents were very against it."

	Nina's eyes ~~narrow~~ in enjoyment. Perhaps she was recalling the scene of her defying her parents.		Nina's eyes narrowed in enjoyment. Perhaps she was recalling the scene of her defying her parents.

	"That was my first time arguing with dad to such an extreme end. I didn't know what he was thinking, but I was happy."		"That was my first time arguing with dad to such an extreme end. I didn't know what he was thinking, but I was happy."

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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist in questioning in, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.		The girl seemed to understand more from his repeated request. Layfon didn't know what she had understood, but she didn't persist questioning, and she didn't force him to stand up. He could feel the tip of her toes beside his head, staying there, immobile.

	The two of them fell silent.		The two of them fell silent.

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	"What?"		"What?"

	"Zuellni won't let anyone she hates ~~touches~~ her. If I explain it in Harley's words, Zuellni is the Electronic Fairy, the consolidated form of the city's particles. Once the form loosens, the electronic particles will shoot through the other's body, just like a lightning strike."		"Zuellni won't let anyone she hates touch her. If I explain it in Harley's words, Zuellni is the Electronic Fairy, the consolidated form of the city's particles. Once the form loosens, the electronic particles will shoot through the other's body, just like a lightning strike."

	Hearing that explanation, Layfon wasn't sure what to say. He couldn't believe such a cute little girl would harm humans.		Hearing that explanation, Layfon wasn't sure what to say. He couldn't believe such a cute little girl would harm humans.

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	''Reading up to here, you must be throwing a tantrum. But I'm not telling. Are you angry? If you want to know, wait till we meet again.''		''Reading up to here, you must be throwing a tantrum. But I'm not telling. Are you angry? If you want to know, wait till we meet again.''


	''May we meet somewhere other than Grendan.''		''May we meet somewhere other than Grendan.''
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	"Haha! This is my first time seeing someone stop Nina's first move," Sharnid said.		"Haha! This is my first time seeing someone stop Nina's first move," Sharnid said.

	To Layfon, Nina didn't care ~~anything for~~ Sharnid's comment. Her sharp gaze, so like that of a beast pinning its prey, never moved away from Layfon's body.		To Layfon, Nina didn't care about Sharnid's comment. Her sharp gaze, so like that of a beast pinning its prey, never moved away from Layfon's body.

	This time, Nina cautiously weighed their distance. Layfon's stance changed in response to Nina's, who was slowly changing her position.		This time, Nina cautiously weighed their distance. Layfon's stance changed in response to Nina's, who was slowly changing her position.
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	The two of them circled each other.		The two of them circled each other.

	Tension built up in the room. The air felt thick, and on Layfon's forehead were ~~more~~ beads of sweat.		Tension built up in the room. The air felt thick, and on Layfon's forehead were beads of sweat.

	Again, Nina was the one to close the gap. She rushed over as Layfon's foot left the floor, moving in reaction to her. Layfon tried to avoid the sudden and straightforward attack by pulling back and opening more distance between them, but she kept closing in. He had no choice but to use his sword. He dipped the sword point low to bring it up in an attack, but it was knocked aside by Nina's whip. In ~~lightning~~ seconds, he flicked his wrist to adjust the track of his sword.		Again, Nina was the one to close the gap. She rushed over as Layfon's foot left the floor, moving in reaction to her. Layfon tried to avoid the sudden and straightforward attack by pulling back and opening more distance between them, but she kept closing in. He had no choice but to use his sword. He dipped the sword point low to bring it up in an attack, but it was knocked aside by Nina's whip. In seconds, he flicked his wrist to adjust the track of his sword.

	Layfon's attack changed from low to high, chopping down towards Nina. She blocked it with her right iron whip and counterattacked from the left with her other iron whip. Layfon quickly stepped to her right and once again, pulled open the distance between them.		Layfon's attack changed from low to high, chopping down towards Nina. She blocked it with her right iron whip and counterattacked from the left with her other iron whip. Layfon quickly stepped to her right and once again, pulled open the distance between them.
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	Having quickly told him that, Felli nodded lightly and left the clinic.		Having quickly told him that, Felli nodded lightly and left the clinic.

	He had lost his conversation partner. Layfon's words ~~lolled~~ in his mouth. His outstretched hand had lost its purpose, and could only wave weakly in the air.		He had lost his conversation partner. Layfon's words rolled in his mouth. His outstretched hand had lost its purpose, and could only wave weakly in the air.

	What came through first was a sense of debilitation, then a long sigh.		What came through first was a sense of debilitation, then a long sigh.
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	Nina's eyes narrowed in enjoyment. Perhaps she was recalling the scene of her defying her parents.		Nina's eyes narrowed in enjoyment. Perhaps she was recalling the scene of her defying her parents.

	"That was my first time arguing with dad to such an extreme end. I didn't know what he was thinking, but I was happy."		"That was my first time arguing with my dad to such an extreme end. I didn't know what he was thinking, but I was happy."

	"Is that why you don't get any allowance?"		"Is that why you don't get any allowance?"